Mugetsu Ookamiza
iTsunayoshi Sawada
Damn it, Mu, now I want pickles.
emo And I don't think we have any.
But rofl at the end of the fic. Best ending. I giggled like mad while I was reading through it.
So Yukio was bothered by Shura's pickle eating?
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And thank you for liking my Sasha scribble from earlier. Poor guy just has no luck expressing his feelings towards other people.to be honest, I was giggling like mad part of the time I was writing it myself. it was a lot more fun to write than I had expected (even if I still do kind of feel like a pervy old fangeezer for writing it). I kinda want to do another fic of those two if I can come up with a good idea for it. and if it makes you feel any better I've wanted pickled bologna for almost a week now, and even after putting it on more than one shopping list I still have none (I was pondering trying to do the fic with pickled bologna instead of pickles for added phallic symbolism, but normal pickles just worked better and are phallic enough as is... but thinking about pickled bologna made me really want some).
it was cute, it made me giggle XPI did my share of unclean writing on the weekend as well. However, mine's not for sharing, nor is it AoEx related, so... Yeah.
Nah, I think the pickle itself was fine. It got the point across and still could be taken two ways. Bologna would have been overkill, I think. I could picture it perfectly too. Shura more than Yukio, but that's probably due to me not being able to care any less about Yukio. But it was still amusing, and I enjoyed watching Yukio squirm.
His confession in the actual story didn't go very well either. It was very awkward and it took a long time because he just couldn't find the right words. And just flat out saying "I'm in love with you" to someone he constantly throws things at, well... xD