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 Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 1:30 pm
Once again I'm here asking you to do things for me sweatdrop
Well, this is the feedback thread/forum, please discuss anything related to the comic and the storyline, including story changes, characters design, etc.
I'll be coming here often....well....daily, so please help me in this....
Also...good comments are welcome domokun
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 1:55 pm
so far, so good.. can't think of anything to change now
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 2:30 pm
I adore it. 3nodding
It's full of suspense and keeps yah at the edge of your seat!
What you can change though, is the setting of most of the pics. Like...Make it night when you're walking on the street or whatever.
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 3:33 pm
Nothing I can think that you can change. biggrin
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 5:38 pm
it looks and its going great.
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 6:05 pm
~Hopelessly Addicted~ I adore it. 3nodding It's full of suspense and keeps yah at the edge of your seat! What you can change though, is the setting of most of the pics. Like...Make it night when you're walking on the street or whatever. You wouldn't believe me how many times I thought about changing the setting to a night scene, but since the first frame where the train is was a daylight thing couldn't do much about it and decided to leave it like that, probably next scene will be at night biggrin
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Posted: Thu Apr 19, 2007 7:05 pm
the one thing i'd change is the time you make us wait for the next page xD
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Posted: Fri Apr 20, 2007 6:15 pm
Its great. The only thing I would change is maybe make them a tad longer if possible lol. more to read wink
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 7:37 am
well... simple things to change, nothing! its sweet like this, but i really like chuckles' idea of less wait time, but at the same time, i like how it is now because i know that less wait time means less quality, and i like the quality as high as it is now *nods*
keep it up bro, your doing great
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Posted: Sun Apr 22, 2007 10:01 am
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Posted: Mon Apr 30, 2007 9:07 am
So far you have you, SCaR, the father figure and Tohma... When are you going to add more people?
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Posted: Sat May 05, 2007 10:56 am
[.Potemkin.] ~Hopelessly Addicted~ I adore it. 3nodding It's full of suspense and keeps yah at the edge of your seat! What you can change though, is the setting of most of the pics. Like...Make it night when you're walking on the street or whatever. You wouldn't believe me how many times I thought about changing the setting to a night scene, but since the first frame where the train is was a daylight thing couldn't do much about it and decided to leave it like that, probably next scene will be at night biggrin =)
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 1:50 pm
dude it was great...I envy you....I wish I could make a comic page..... all the ones I did I throw away because they weren't good....
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Posted: Fri May 18, 2007 5:08 pm
You are giving you characters emotions, and that is difficult to do. Your facial features are really good!
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2007 1:28 pm
mamarita You are giving you characters emotions, and that is difficult to do. Your facial features are really good!
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