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 Posted: Sun Feb 28, 2021 12:39 pm
Have a concept that you would like critiqued prior to posting for approval? Please post here!
Please note that posting straight to the application approval thread does not mean that you will not also receive a critique before your quest is approved. This thread is simply for feedback on quests for players who have not yet obtained a slot for their characters and you will still need to post for approval when a slot is obtained.The Form:[align=center][size=18][color=steelblue]I'm ready for my close up![/color][/size][/align]
[b]Character:[/b]
[b]Faction:[/b] (Cat/Nega/Senshi)
[b]Looking for feedback on:[/b]
[b]By posting this form I understand that once I obtain a custom slot I will [u]STILL[/u] need to post for approval. I am just seeking critique on my concept as is. [/b]
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2021 2:41 pm
I'm ready for my close up!
Character: Syrma
Faction: Senshi
(Really not sure if the times on the attacks are good or not!)
By posting this form I understand that once I obtain a custom slot I will STILL need to post for approval. I am just seeking critique on my concept as is. - Skye
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Posted: Thu Jul 29, 2021 8:22 pm
I'm ready for my close up!
Character: Sabine, Senshi of Kirin
Faction: Senshi
By posting this form I understand that once I obtain a custom slot I will STILL need to post for approval. I am just seeking critique on my concept as is. Ende
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Posted: Fri Aug 06, 2021 8:40 pm
I'm ready for my close up!
Character: Andromeda
Faction: Cat
Looking for feedback on: just general feedback on if anything needs to be changed before approval
By posting this form I understand that once I obtain a custom slot I will STILL need to post for approval. I am just seeking critique on my concept as is. - Skye
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Posted: Sun Aug 08, 2021 2:52 pm
I'm ready for my close up!
Character: Katarina Maris
Faction: Senshi
Looking for feedback on: Mostly her senshi ability, but I want to make sure the rest also works.
By posting this form I understand that once I obtain a custom slot I will STILL need to post for approval. I am just seeking critique on my concept as is. - Skye
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Posted: Sat Aug 14, 2021 6:53 pm
I'm ready for my close up!
Character: Aphrodite, Senshi of Vanity
Faction: Senshi
Looking for feedback on: Attacks really. I took an old quest from AU and tweaked it a bit so I'm not sure if they're viable the way they are now? Or something. I'll take whatever though, honestly.
By posting this form I understand that once I obtain a custom slot I will STILL need to post for approval. I am just seeking critique on my concept as is. - Skye
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Posted: Sun Aug 15, 2021 2:42 pm
I'm ready for my close up! Character: Pleiades, Senshi of SorrowFaction: Senshi Looking for feedback on: Abilities. I don't know how the combat system works so I used some DnD terminology and general concepts to get things across. By posting this form I understand that once I obtain a custom slot I will STILL need to post for approval. I am just seeking critique on my concept as is.
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Posted: Thu Sep 30, 2021 4:52 pm
I'm ready for my close up! Character: Zachary Calloway Faction: Senshi Looking for feedback on: Attacks! By posting this form I understand that once I obtain a custom slot I will STILL need to post for approval. I am just seeking critique on my concept as is. (After this, I'll just be asking for approval on his civ side. I don't want him awakened just yet! biggrin )
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Posted: Wed Oct 13, 2021 6:10 pm
I'm ready for my close up! Character: Trevor Rose Faction: Senshi Looking for feedback on: Overall info By posting this form I understand that once I obtain a custom slot I will STILL need to post for approval. I am just seeking critique on my concept as is.
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Posted: Fri Nov 05, 2021 4:15 pm
I'm ready for my close up! Character: GenevieveFaction: cat Looking for feedback on: profile By posting this form I understand that once I obtain a custom slot I will STILL need to post for approval. I am just seeking critique on my concept as is.
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