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Sabra Knight

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 14, 2016 5:47 pm


Name: Kian (Was previously known as Ciarán)
Stage: Second Stage (mage)
Path -> Mystic (runes)
Race: Shifter/Ice Hybrid
Gender: Male
3 Base Traits: Shrewd, Graceful, Fearless
Personality: Kian was raised in a cold household where he was always on his toes due to his mother's tight control. Because of that he learned that in order to have some freedom he had to use his cunning in order to manipulate the events and people around him. Servants were taught to help hide his tracks from his mother due to the fact that his kindness gained their trust (it also helps when he helps them cover any mistakes before his mother finds them… such as broken vases, ruined food, and etc.). He kept on top of his studies as well in order to prove himself as capable in his mother’s eyes. In such a world it was often easy to fall into traps of kindness and so Kian has learned to be more perceptive of other's true motives.In its own way, however, Kian does sometimes appear too distant when lost in thought.

[An older Kian, after the abuse of his mother, often used his shrewd intellect and cunning in order to best others. Always one step ahead of the game, he often will weasel any who are in his way into their own traps. It is then that they see the cold eyes full of darkness...later as an apprentice learning magic it was not rare for him to find chances to "practice" his gift on unsuspecting others.]

Music and grace were born into his soul. Not only did Kian take after his father in appearances but also gained his musical abilities. This includes the grace of a dancer which is seen in Kian’s movements. Everything about him is graceful even his walk or the way he falls when he slips. It is a double edged sword for him, however, as he unnaturally attracts more attention than wanted just by how he moves. Like a cobra he can dance anyone into his coils while on the other hand he can slip away unnoticed. Such grace helps him chose his words carefully as he has learned to become a fine manipulator. Often such skills reveal a slight dark side to the hybrid as he tends to keep others at bay, rarely trusting while preparing to back stab any who may oppose him. So beware, behind his kind smile is a much cold heart...especially when it comes to protecting those few that he does cherish. For them he is willing to do anything.

He has no fear. Kian's life has toughened his heart and made him unshakable. While his bold spirit may keep him on top of things and give him the courage to play the dangerous games that he does in life it also lets him to fall into trouble easier than most. This is included when he jumped in the way of his mother in order to protect his twin sister the night she was banished from home. Because of that he sports a lovely scar going from his neck all the way down past his collar bone.

Realizing his freedom has only fed his reckless spirit. After finally gaining this courage that allowed him to shatter the chains (mental and somewhat physical) his mother placed around him, what was Ciaran has changed into Kian who feels at times feels invincible. While before his actions were due to caring nothing for his life, he now has a confidence in his ability to face any challenge. His recklessness often results in trouble and presents a hazardous approach to life as he doesn't mind picking fights. In fact the more challenging a conquest then the better. How else can he grow stronger?

Description: He has a very feminine body type, slender with lean muscles, and is taller than most earthlings (around 5'5-5'7). His skin tone is dark (darkest/day) from his shifter blood while the gems that decorate his skin show more of a purple/blue hue from his ice heritage. His ears are also long and pointed from his ice heritage while his hair is mostly black with a purple sheen, highlighting the tip of his hair an indigo color.

Hairstyle: Long and can be wavy. (often tied back with a few braids here and there)[x1], [x2], [x3]

Like Talisia, Kian also has bi-colored eyes from his mixed heritage. (left is silver, right is gold).

* if possible I would love for him to have a gem on the back of both hands and also in a pattern in the center of his forehead with another smaller one mimicking a tear along the corner of both eyes just like his sister does.
Talisia

*Also he has a long scar going down from his neck to his chest. Other scars decorate his back and more faded ones can be visible along his body, just not on his face.
Clothing: Can be a mix or whatever. Just take these for inspiration. [1] [2] [3]
Accessories: Around his neck is usually some form of choker and if possible he has beads/feathers in his hair and several piercings in his long ears *even a dangling one with a gem would be nice for his ears. The main piece that he always will wear is a necklace that he also inherited from his father. This necklace is long and hangs down from his neck while sporting a moon/sun pendant. *it's nearly identical to the one Talisia wears

Talisia

[x1] [x2] [x3] - all of these are just ideas, feel free to do as you please with him. c:

History: Kian's story is shared with his twin Talisia .


Both twins came from the union of a gypsy shifter and the ice woman who had caught him in her trap. However, while Talisia was often rejected by their mother Ciarán found himself kept close to Nivedita. After all, unlike his sister who took after their mother, Ciarán was basically a replica of their father. While he once sought to play with his father and sister the boy quickly learned that it was only with his intervention that Talisia would be spared. While Kaleo spent more time with his daughter, Ciarán found himself constantly playing music to distract their mother from her jealous rage.

Every day held a new story for them, depending on their mother’s mood. While Nivedita was away on business the trio would be happy and play together without fear. While their father was away with their mother it was then that both Ciarán and Talisia took the time to bond. He learned to teach her then the things he had been taught while away from her and to also wipe the tears that fell onto her cheeks without their mother’s love.

In those moments that he did share with his father and sister Ciarán was always happy. His father taught him to love music and dance, a rare light in his childhood of strict rulings and darkness. Music quickly became his passion and he found himself sneaking off night after night to practice or to show his sad and tired sister a new melody to cheer her spirits. It was during such times that Ciarán even managed to make a friend with a merchant’s son that lived in the area. From him Ciarán even learned about magic and how the world was much different outside of his home. Eresin had been his name, but Ciarán’s time with him had been short due to the tragedy looming over the horizon.

Kaleo was dead.

When Kaleo died Ciarán found his freedom completely ripped away. His mother found that his similar looks to their father could soften the blow of losing the shifter she had loved and obsessed over. Often he would spend many nights taming her anger so that his sister could be spared from his mother's rampant jealous and despair.So while he appeared pampered and cherished, the secrets of his troubled world started to reflect in the scars on his back.

His twin sister, though, was his secret fuel to get him through every day. Seeing the rare smiles he gave her and the few fleeting moments he could hold her in his arms was enough to keep him going. After all without him who would stop their mother from hurting his dear twin? It was only Talisia's presence which tamed the darkness growing inside of his heart.

Months passed and Ciarán's watchful eye never left his sister's side. His studying increased and he found that he could begin to outmaneuver his mother's actions. For every step she made to secure him to her side the boy would obey while secretly gaining more freedom. The less she doubted his ability and desire to contest her will, the more she lowered her guard. He was her ideal son, but on the inside he despised her. He wanted nothing more than to take Talisia and flee into the hills.

Still he never could find the perfect opportunity to escape. Instead Ciarán kept practicing his role in the life that Nivedita wanted for him. All he could do was secretly gift Talisia small things and to also give her hope in the shelter he made for her and her animals. As long as he could keep her safe his own personal hell was worth it. He had to take care. Once he was caught in an attempt to leave with his sister and his mother's punishment kept him chained in the darkest rooms of their home for days. Others were told that he was off on a trip, but inside those cold walls the boy was trapped. Even as years blurred those memories, the scars remained. Since then he learned to be extra careful, even harsh towards his sister at times. For both of their sakes...

Life was cruel, but the worst night finally came to life. When their mother found Talisia’s hidden shelter and Silva, the raptrix that his sister had adopted since helping it to recover from injuries, the shield that Ciarán had desperately created for his sister broke. Nivedita was infuriated that her daughter dared to defy her rules. Reaching out she had slashed over and over in the air with the dagger, but it was Ciarán who she dug the blade into instead.

He had pushed Talisia away and told her to run while their mother stood in shock at the damage she had done to her son, her replacement "Kaleo". Yes, before she had tortured him and even chained him...but she never wanted to kill him. She had already lost her lover once, to lose her son would destroy her. Her despair at his severe wounds allowed his sister to escape, but as he recovered and she saw he was no longer near death his punishment resumed. Even more so because of the loss of her daughter due to his foolish actions. How dare he choose Talisia over her! Just as Kaleo had done before him! What did that wretch have that she didn’t? Blood be cursed! She should have just destroyed her a long time ago! Finally Nivedita’s mind, once consumed by grief and rage, had completely snapped at the fear of losing Ciarán.

Eventually something had to change.

Without Talisia to keep him calm, Ciarán started to drift further into the darkness that had been lingering in his own heart. No affection remained for this woman, years of blood and tears had seen to that. And in that darkness, without his sister to give him a reason to live a secret lock inside of him broke. Without it a power started to shine, a power that could destroy many things including himself. Before as a child he had felt it, long ago when he could express himself in music with his father, and now it was back. That natural energy he found in the world around him....that magic which flooded his veins. Music, it seemed, was not his truest calling at all. Once, perhaps it may have been, but desperate times awaken even the most secretive part of men.

It would take time to recover and to learn how to unleash it, but he could learn…

Talisia had been gone for weeks now and his body felt the burdens of it. During this time a great battle was brewing outside in Tendaji as Alkilides fought against the other races, even their own sisters. Yet, a greater battle was being fought inside the walls of Nivedita's own home. Insanity had completely taken over the woman's mind and her abuse of Ciarán was growing. Important business gave him relief from her as she was called away for a few days...and in those few days he gained strength. Even while chained up in the cursed prison of his childhood the male rested. And while his blood dried on the floors and on his back he felt it.

That burning sensation was back. The more he concentrated the more the brilliant blue lights flashed in his sight. What it was, was a mystery to some but his knowledge his extensive studying as a child revealed the magic. For years he had hidden it, kept it suppressed so he could stay with Talisia rather than being sent off to train under some mage. Yet, in secret it was less worry of leaving but more so of destruction. The anger, the darkness inside that made him forget the beauty of life had loomed. While he never cared about himself his fears for Talisia had kept the monster at bay.

But now...she was gone, she was free.

And he was alone and without his sister's love those restrictions fled. And as his mother, no that monster, came back for him she found a surprise. You will not abuse me any longer. Magic, raw and free in its power, flooded out of him. A blind rage, he could barely remember the day if someone asked him, took over and all he knew was that in the next few hours not only was he out of those chains he was far from his childhood home and prison.


Not caring to go back and see what exactly had happened Ciarán took up his belongings and left the home. He was burnt out. Honestly how the boy survived was lost in that fog. He hadn’t cared if he died, he just wanted to end the nightmare. While he prayed for Talisia’s happiness he had cared nothing for himself. As long as she was free he was thankful. Perhaps if his soul could be redeemed then he may find her again in the next life...as he stumbled through the deep snows the boy actually braced himself for death. Finally it was time for that sweet release…

Destiny had other plans for him. A mage, known as Nerio, found the boy half alive in the ice. Without hesitation he took the boy into his home and helped him to recover. Surprised at the scars on his back and the more recent wounds the mage listened to the boy’s tale as he began to recover.

“I can’t stay here.”

“I know. I’m not planning on keeping you here either.”

“Good.”

Nerio had laughed, “I’m taking you out of Zena with me.”

Surprise had flickered across Ciarán’s features, but the boy found himself suddenly apprenticed to this mage. While they traveled he found himself taking on a new name, Kian. It was Kian who posed as the musician, a traveling gypsy who moved through the lands with the caravans. His music slowly began to take on a tune again. Still while promising hope and freedom a darkness still constantly lurks behind...the burden of the past was too harsh on his heart and even Kian still slips into "Ciaran" at times. Even under Nerio's watchful gaze rumors of a destructive mage or an attractive male who causes trouble out on the road began to arise...

While Nerio helped Kian to physically recover the emotional and mental scars remain. Without Talisia to help keep the darkness away, Kian has shrouded his true self in ice while leaving his alter-ego, his mask, on the outside to please others. Violent nightmares still haunt him from his mother's abuse, but he has grown stronger. Magic now floods his veins and he is determined to learn as much as possible so that chains never again will bind him. Even at the cost of others...

Interesting facts
-He can project his voice anywhere and copy accents and tones easily.
-Just like his sister his silver eye will darken from their shifter blood while the other stays golden.
-He feels more alive under the sunlight than his sister, but also loves the moonlight as their father did.
-When irritated he tends to scratch lightly at his temples before moving to play with a strand of hair while thinking.
- His name Ciaran is from "Little Dark One" since he shared the same looks as his father. However, in order to have a new life he had to toss away his old name so he chose Kian since he has endured.
-Even with Nerio's help, Kian still suffers from night terrors which haunt him with memories of his mother and his childhood. Such things make him very wary of others because of such constant reminders of his trauma it is rare for anyone to truly gain his trust anymore.
Intended Class Path
Mystic

Connections (I have permission from all of the following owners for these connections/plots)
He is Talisia's twin brother and also the half-brother of Dris.(Owned by Painted Moose)

The mage who apprentices Kian is also Eresin’s (Sin of Qurupeco [x]) uncle. While the boys were briefly friends as children both are going to meet again when Eresin finds his uncle. Both will be taught under Nerio and trained in magic together.

Also he will encounter both Rhonann [x] (Cornetified) and Mnyiri (Painted Moose [x]) in his travels and be swept into an interesting relationship shared with the two girls.

Details about how these connections will be affected by Kian...

Eresin will be affected by Kian's presence in his life by learning more from the outgoing hybrid about how to reach out to others. (Mostly, this will be because eventually he's going to have Kian's help to try and get into a relationship with Talisia who at first will just push away his feelings, this will be more of side rps/plotting however.) The main plot point is that something will happen to Eresin's uncle Nerio later on (death most likely) and it will be only with Kian's help, as they were both apprenticed to the sorcerer, that Eresin overcomes his grief and despair. Without Kian supporting him/pushing him along Eresin may never take up magic again...

Talisia will be affected by his return because she'll learn that their mother is no more and can finally return home to Zena if she wishes and having Kian in her life will help her to become more open to others again. Currently as she believes he is dead the girl can't really get her life together and refuses to be completely happy. Guilt really is riding her and she feels she cheated him out of his freedom when he risked himself to save her that fateful night.

For Kian to have these others in his life will help him to conquer the growing darkness in his heart. Eresin will show him the more innocent side of life once more (almost as if Kian is watching a reflection of his younger self, before his father passed away). Helping Eresin to recover from his grief/guilt at Nerio's death will also help to patch the holes in Kian's own heart that had formed at the loss of his own father years ago. (Because once more it is like seeing a reflection of himself. Helping Eresin will be like he's saving himself from his own grief that had taken over him long ago...it will help him to understand how much he has come to care for his friend and to finally trust someone other than Talisia again. Even Nerio who had helped him never truly touched his heart as Eresin will.) [Bromance, I know. xD]

Myniri and Rhonnan are going to help Kian to find himself in this new world. While having Talisia is going to bring him hope again, it will still not be enough for him to truly trust others again. Both girls will show him a side of life and dedication that will allow him to blossom once more as a whole human.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2016 4:09 pm


Hey there! Just to let you know a Stage 2 quest character must further along the Connections plot somehow. They must cause a change or be a catalyst to a situation/change.


Romance is the simplest one.. but "an interesting relation ship" or "brothers" or "fellow apprentices" is sadly not a plot nor are they in anyway being changed by him somehow.

An example: Xarity was quested to my Talin with teh plot of her teaching him to trust others and stop his reckless killings. To get a stage 2 quest character you need to have some plot like that~ Something big that will cause a change in the OTHER person.. not your stage 2 :3

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2016 5:07 pm


robot kitten


Oh okay. xD I didn't realize that for connections...let me edit this then a bit...

For example Eresin will be affected by Kian's presence in his life by learning more from the outgoing hybrid about how to reach out to others. (Mostly, this will be because eventually he's going to have Kian's help to try and get into a relationship with Talisia who at first will just push away his feelings, this will be more of side rps/plotting however.) The main plot point is that something will happen to Eresin's uncle Nerio later on (death most likely) and it will be only with Kian's help, as they were both apprenticed to the sorcerer, that Eresin overcomes his grief and despair. Without Kian supporting him/pushing him along Eresin may never take up magic again...

Talisia will be affected by his return because 1) she'll learn that their mother is no more and can finally return home to Zena if she wishes and 2) having Kian in her life will help her to become more open to others again. Currently as she believes he is dead the girl can't really get her life together and refuses to be completely happy. Guilt really is riding her and she feels she cheated him out of his freedom when he risked himself to save her that fateful night.

And the interesting relationship is actually going to be romantic. In a love-triangle, three lover pairing sort of way. xD At least that's how our plots currently align. Mnyiri is going to learn a lot about the world from Kian as well and will help her to travel further out into Tendaji and act as a guide, since he'll have been through many of the countries as a 'gypsy'. He's also the one who will be the reason behind her discovering that she likes guys as well. xD

Besides romance, Kian also is going to play a huge role in helping Rhonann to recover her memories. We're not certain what is going to happen there exactly, but he will be key in this plot point.

Does that work for connections? :3
PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2016 7:42 pm


Sabra Knight
So he's.. .talisias lover (AND TWIN??? Gross if you ask me but then as a twin I do not approve of twincest at all... personal thoughts that.) and has a love triangle with 2 others? Or am I reading that wrong?

Tali love thing I get from this": Mostly, this will be because eventually he's going to have Kian's help to try and get into a relationship with Talisia who at first will just push away his feelings, Please tell me its Eresin trying to win Talis heart and not her twin.


I personally would like to see something negative about Kian. At the moment he seems like a prince with nothing bad about him. Robo likes depth and complicated people XD Its not needed as Tendaji doesn't require bad and good traits.. but it'd be nice and help us understand him a bit better. Not too mention the boy's had quite the dark life! Did that leave any mark upon his personality?

History is awesome~ (willcome back about connections after takling to other staff. Still a bit leery on what counts as plot growth and what doesn't XD I believe you have enough detail with Eresin alone to make it count since this boyo is the only reason Eresin continues to be a mage.)

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2016 8:17 pm


robot kitten
Sabra Knight
So he's.. .talisias lover (AND TWIN??? Gross if you ask me but then as a twin I do not approve of twincest at all... personal thoughts that.) and has a love triangle with 2 others? Or am I reading that wrong?

Tali love thing I get from this": Mostly, this will be because eventually he's going to have Kian's help to try and get into a relationship with Talisia who at first will just push away his feelings, Please tell me its Eresin trying to win Talis heart and not her twin.


I personally would like to see something negative about Kian. At the moment he seems like a prince with nothing bad about him. Robo likes depth and complicated people XD Its not needed as Tendaji doesn't require bad and good traits.. but it'd be nice and help us understand him a bit better. Not too mention the boy's had quite the dark life! Did that leave any mark upon his personality?

History is awesome~ (willcome back about connections after takling to other staff. Still a bit leery on what counts as plot growth and what doesn't XD I believe you have enough detail with Eresin alone to make it count since this boyo is the only reason Eresin continues to be a mage.)


LOL It's Eresin x Talisia, sorry if it's bad wording. I wrote in a hurry. But Eresin is the one who is romantically attracted to Talisia, not her twin. Kian is the one who will help bring them together eventually.

Kian is plotted to be in a love triangle with both Myniri and Rhonann.

Most of his bad traits will probably come out through rp. I should add in some quirks, but his reckless nature means that he's often going to get in trouble. Always picking fights etc...plus, a darker side of his personality comes out in how far he'll go to protect those he cares about. I should edit it in a bit later about how easily his warm smile can hide a cold heart. Too much trauma for him to be truly at ease with others/kind. Manipulation is his forte after all. He has serious trust issues and is always doing his best to be one step ahead in case someone tries to back stab him. Nerio really helped him to keep most of his sanity, but I can see him also troubled by night terrors about his past.

Thanks~ I will await your reply. :3
PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2016 8:38 pm


Sabra Knight
Yeah that might need to be reworded XD

Alright so 2 points for stage 2 character:

Further along someone elses plot (you got this, me and several staff agreed) where he is the reason Erasin continues with magic and helps him overcome his grief and grow.This works since he is helping another person overcome something plot wise. (IS what I think. Another staff may come along later and give you some more help XD)

Part 2: someone furthers HIS plot. (I forgot this one earlier XD)
Romance works.. except we need to have more details. How will this romance change his life? How will it come about? What is the triabgle all about? Vauge is fun but this quest will require more details. We need a bit more info~ And I just want to see more of personal and connection growth.


Bad traits: if he has them now might want make a note of it in his bio XD Revealing things in rps is fine.. but we do like to know about them ahead of time for quests~~~

Another note: you only need 1 real connection (2 if his growth is different than him helping another's plot.) Are the others really necessary? Which one is where he grows the most and where he helps another's plot or another's growth along the most?

Focus on those and then give more detail there. The rest is kinda candy and not something we will be focusing on(they don't need to be mentioned if they do not impact him a lot or he doesn't impact them).
'
Sorry for so many crits! Stage 2 we crit a TON since its special and a one time deal per owner.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2016 8:43 pm


Hi Sabra!

I just wanted to quick chime in with some advice in shaping a Stage 2 character. As robo said, Stage 2 characters generally have a single focus connection with one character. Consider this like a shared path through life, where they both need to overcome things and depend on each other to grow personally.

In your connection, you add four, but really there was one standout. It seems the strongest connection listed is Eresin.

I can see that Kian is going to support Eresin through a death of their shared mentor, but how is Eresin going to support the growth of Kian? I'd like to see their shared plot path moving forward, with key milestones/points and how that will impact both Kian and Eresin. If you can point this out, I think that would really strengthen this application as a stage 2.

We look for above and beyond plot development and a connection because a Stage 2 often is already on their way through plots. Right now your connection is a bit all over the place, so I would strongly recommend focusing and expanding on one single connection. The romances seem a bit uncertain at this point, so that's why I'd suggest focusing on Kian, Eresin, and how their long-term relationship will develop in a very high level way.

Plots and relationships change, so we understand uncertainty, however we do need to see those growth points for each side of the connection relationship.

Feel free to ask away if you have any questions smile
PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:11 pm


Helloooooooo Sabra!
If I need to clarify something for you please let me know.

Kian sounds like an interesting character and I can't wait to see him come into being. His personality seems to be pretty fleshed out and I'm not sure I have anything to add to that point.

I would have to say that the connection portion is a little fuzzy but maybe taking Ely's advice and adding main points, bullets, etc. where it is clearly stated would be helpful for determining if more work is necessary. The character's future endeavors may change but a general idea of where Kian's heading (at the moment) would be awesome. I would also agree that Kian is a bit overshadowed by the bits we do know of his connections (even when considering familial relations). I feel that if you could showcase him more as well that would be great!

Also, I personally see no issue with poly relationships or relationships of any kind so I say a love triangle is a non-issue honestly. I think this also helps with plotting (just imagining the potential there makes me incredibly excited to see him come into Tendaji) and personal growth. Of course, that doesn't mean he'll stick with both or either ladies in the future. c: So if you plan to continue with it in the future I think it would be a fun plot line.

I'm so excited to see him in the world soon!!! 8D


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PostPosted: Fri Jan 15, 2016 10:38 pm


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First of all thank you guys for your input. <3 I really appreciate all the ideas, crits. c: And please forgive me for any mistakes it's late and I'm tired, but dangit I'm determined to fix what I can since I may not be around tomorrow.


Okay so Eresin is the one connection who is affected by Kian. I can settle with that. (My apologies, I honestly thought we needed multiple connections for stage 2 characters so that's why it may seem all over the place as I was just trying to show what ties he will have.)

This is what I have now on his form:

"Eresin will be affected by Kian's presence in his life by learning more from the outgoing hybrid about how to reach out to others. Kian eventually will be roped into helping Eresin to express his feelings towards Kian's twin, Talisia. (This will happen later after the major plot point and once Kian builds a strong bond with Eresin, almost brotherly). Their major plot point together is that something will happen to Eresin's uncle Nerio later on (death most likely) and it will be only with Kian's help, as they were both apprenticed to the sorcerer, that Eresin overcomes his grief and despair. Without Kian supporting him/pushing him along Eresin may never take up magic again...

Talisia will be affected by his return because she'll learn that their mother is no more and can finally return home to Zena if she wishes and having Kian in her life will help her to become more open to others again. Currently as she believes he is dead the girl can't really get her life together and refuses to be completely happy. Guilt really is riding her and she feels she cheated him out of his freedom when he risked himself to save her that fateful night.

For Kian to have these others in his life will help him to conquer the growing darkness in his heart. Eresin will show him the more innocent side of life once more (almost as if Kian is watching a reflection of his younger self, before his father passed away and his mother began her abuse). Helping Eresin to recover from his grief/guilt at Nerio's death will also help to patch the holes in Kian's own heart that had formed at the loss of his own father years ago. This is because he will have to approach Eresin with the same truths that he himself have avoided years ago by always blaming himself rather than seeking the light/the happiness that his father would have wanted for him despite everything. He will fight to help Eresin from falling into the darkness that once consumed his own soul. Because once more it is like seeing a reflection of his younger self in Eresin, helping Eresin will be like he's saving himself from his own grief that had taken over him long ago...it will help him to understand how much he has come to care for his friend and to finally trust someone again." [Bromance, I know. xD]

If Rhonnan and Myniri don't need to be mentioned that's alright, but he is plotted to become romantically involved with them. This will happen after he bonds with Eresin and his encounters with both girls will help him to open up more. Having Talisia and Eresin will be great, but not enough to fully help him to trust in others again. So Rhonnan and Myniri are his chances to "repent" in a way for his past few years living in the darkness. (All the manipulation, trouble, etc that he was involved in on and off throughout Tendaji). Helping Rhonnan find her memories will be his key quest later and during that journey is when he will truly bond with the wind girl. Myniri will most likely be involved in this quest and help as well.

So in particular

Robo:

I edited his form here and there to reflect more of a dark, twist. Just because your crits did remind me that I meant for him to suffer drastic changes. So at first due to his mother's abuse/influence he was often prone to manipulating others and to causing trouble. This will continue to haunt him, until later in the plot with Eresin and the others, as he slips into "Ciaran" on and off while traveling with Nerio. It's like a total shift from the carefree mask to a cold blooded killer/fighter type of deal.

And as I explained above in this post, Eresin's grief will help Kian to realize what he's been doing this whole time and to try and fix things. I mean he won't be fully "healed" in a sense as he still will be a bit cold, hard to touch (which is where the girls will help him out a bit by touching his heart some more). But the main point is that Eresin will be helped by Kian while Kian will be helped by helping Eresin, if that makes sense?

Ely

I hope what I mentioned above helps to plot out how Eresin and Kian helped each other as you suggested. In the event of Nerio's death both of the boys have to rely/depend on each other.

Kiana

Thank you. :3 It will most likely result in a poly relationship after we flesh it out. Mostly, Kian is going to run into the girls and several things will throw them together (helping Myniri find her sister and Rhonnan regain her memories are the major quest goals to eventually be fulfilled). Even if romantically they don't stick together, their journey will leave an impact on him.

Plot Outline

Since the major connection is Eresin let me outline the plot...

Once Eresin finds Nerio and joins Kian as an apprentice under Nerio things will seemingly be alright. However, even with Talisia near (she may travel with them for a bit, but other matters may pull her away - this isn't as important either way so back to the plot outline. xD) Kian will still slip into "Ciaran" and get caught up in trouble throughout the road. Mostly he will be misrepresented because the destruction that his reputation brings as a "mysterious stranger" on the road will be against bandits and the like. Perhaps he will cause fights with an innocent here and there, but that is for his quest of growing stronger. Eresin will eventually catch on and notice that Kian goes missing some nights and once following him will make the connections to the rumors and his friend.

When he follows to try and stop him one night, there will be serious trouble as whatever disaster [details still coming about exactly what happens here that goes horribly wrong] causes Kian's plans to fail since Eresin will be there to accidentally interrupt them. [Honestly, I'm thinking it's just a major fight with outlaws gone wrong] While both of the boys are in trouble it will be Eresin's uncle Nerio who saves Eresin when Kian hesitates [his darker personality will get caught up in the fight/blood lust/etc and almost sacrifice Eresin to win]. This then leads to Nerio's death [most likely] as Kian will have to then approach what he has become while helping Eresin to overcome his grief [as Eresin will blame himself for trying to help Kian on his own and causing the accident]. Together both will have to find their true selves and why they gifted with magic in the first place [Kian to protect those he cherished, not to destroy and Eresin to better understand the world; to find more knowledge].
PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2016 7:39 am


With that I'm fine with it! <3 Thanks for going into more detail! 8D Looking forward to see this play out!

Guessing we need to edit in some info about stage 2 questing to make it a bit clearer~~

robot kitten

Tipsy Pirate


Sabra Knight

Feral Galaxy

PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2016 3:34 pm


robot kitten


Oh great! 8D

I feel like I was running a marathon last night trying to word all these ideas without making it more confusing. XD

Does that mean he's ready to be approved or do I need to do something else? :3


[And the more info may help a lot, but then again I do tend to derp when it comes to these things as well. XD I'm just glad everyone was so nice about helping me out.]
PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2016 6:37 pm


Sabra Knight
All that's left is for Kan to come by and check it then approval :3 She does it often so don't fret the wait too much :3

robot kitten

Tipsy Pirate


Sabra Knight

Feral Galaxy

PostPosted: Sat Jan 16, 2016 7:27 pm


robot kitten


Okay. :3 Thanks so much again!
PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2016 10:11 am


Sin of Qurupeco

Sabra Knight


After reading all of this I think he looks pretty solid. I'm ready to approve him we just need Sin to pop in and give the official ok from their end too since it's their character that you'll be most impacting.

Suhuba
Captain


Mr Glacial

Dedicated Hunter

PostPosted: Sun Jan 17, 2016 10:29 am


Suhuba
Sin of Qurupeco

Sabra Knight


After reading all of this I think he looks pretty solid. I'm ready to approve him we just need Sin to pop in and give the official ok from their end too since it's their character that you'll be most impacting.


Yep, I approve this message. ;D
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