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 Posted: Sun Dec 19, 2010 8:07 pm
Just a Samus Aran fanart smile  I like her face whee What do you guys think? surprised
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Posted: Tue Dec 21, 2010 12:48 pm
holy crap o-o
that is absolutley amazing!
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 3:24 pm
almost perfect.. a very little more on the head (you know, making it the most beautiful face but it's already dead pretty so..) and it's the best drawing i've ever seen in my life.. so far.
I LOVE IT!! T' HELL WITH THE CRITIQUE.. it's really good.
nice work on the shadings by the way.
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Posted: Wed Dec 22, 2010 3:28 pm
not to mention the BACKGROUND.. i like the space filled with bright stars. usually, it's hard to make a background in outer space since.... it's kinda empty. so gud job on the filling the space with those stars.
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 6:07 pm
This is looking pretty good, but her foot just kinda disappears. It leaves some visual imbalance.
I'm not a big fan of lens flares in general, but they're OK in this.
The texture overlay gives the whole composition some unity, and adds some nice visual interest.
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 6:14 pm
this is awsome ive never seen anything like it(adsept that the armor reminds me of metroid) and i do agree that foot needs to be seen behind the other leg it leaves it hagin
(W.^)>
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 6:18 pm
rikutefox this is awsome ive never seen anything like it(adsept that the armor reminds me of metroid) and i do agree that foot needs to be seen behind the other leg it leaves it hagin (W.^)> That is Metroid, it's Samus the main character o.o Anyway it's absolutely stunning! Besides what the others mentioned with the foot I see no problems.
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Posted: Mon Dec 27, 2010 6:30 pm
oh realy i dont remember much from it (so my bad) and also the fact i didnt play it much
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 3:34 pm
Thank you all for your feedback, I really appreciate it! whee For the foot, I drew it...in the sketch that is, but it wouldn't be proportionally correct to show it unless a certain "position" for it were chosen and as you can see...it wasn't in the end.(also because I was too lazy to show it ._. ) Here's the sketch!:  And yes, she is Samus Aran, protagonist of Metroid games series, in fact, the whole story turns around her. Thanks once again!
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 5:29 pm
Absolutely stunning. The face is amazing, great coloring, awesome background. The right leg does kind of disappear into whatever she's kneeling on, and the giant shoulder thing kind of detracts attention from the face, but again... Absolutely stunning.
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 5:35 pm
Now I understand why the foot's like that ^^ well then, that means everything is perfect!
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Posted: Tue Dec 28, 2010 11:36 pm
I'd be akin to say the lower leg's a bit short. If I'm understanding this pose correctly, the heel bone would be near the same vertical alignment where the femur and pelvis join.
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Posted: Wed Dec 29, 2010 9:18 am
Death T-2 I'd be akin to say the lower leg's a bit short. If I'm understanding this pose correctly, the heel bone would be near the same vertical alignment where the femur and pelvis join. Yeap, it's indeed a bit short, but using a ruler o a line with the same length of the femur, the heel bone would almost be the same size, just a tiny bit smaller but it was something I was well aware of even when sketching it xp
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Posted: Thu Dec 30, 2010 12:20 pm
I don't wholeheartedly recommend using rulers to measure bones for these kind of poses. With pin-ups especially, visual balance can be more important than technical balance (unless it becomes obviously unbelievable). That's where artistic license actually comes into play.
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Posted: Fri Dec 31, 2010 4:27 pm
I'm going to be real honest.
The background looks like a pattern just pasted on, the text in the top corner ... why is it even there? xD and lens flare is eww, lens flare is there to tempt people, it always looks bad, but its shiny and we love it and we use it anyway, but then we regret it ._.
You did a great job on her! I love the shading and the wat you drew her, and nice use of texture biggrin
But imo, most everything else looks pasted on and cheap.. >:"
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