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PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 7:34 pm


Bring on your torture, your bullets, your pains

I Miss You Again

I've waited for so long,
Just to say what's on my mind.
I didn't think much of it,
You're wonderful, by design.

I didn't see this coming,
When we hung up this last time.
I couldn't see myself without you,
Although no longer are you mine.

A call between two friends,
That's all it should have been.
I curled up in tears and dropped the phone,
I miss you once again.

I don't know what I want more,
To run my fingers through your hair,
Or to look into your deep blue eyes.
You show how much you cared.

I want to say I'm sorry,
For everything I do.
I just hope you remember,
The blame is not on you.

I'm looking through your photos,
You're thinking in this one.
I wonder if I was on your mind,
Oh god, what have I done?

And in my heart, things aren't the same.
PostPosted: Sat Jul 24, 2010 8:59 pm


Oh my god... I'm at a loss for words...
Excellent poem though... 6/5

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 7:16 am


Beautiful Desire, just beautiful biggrin
PostPosted: Sun Jul 25, 2010 6:41 pm


Beautifully written, sad in the same
Inspirational, and full of emotion
Recognized and known, always wondering

Just my opinion, good work smile

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 2:58 pm


Thanks, guys. He's a wonderful person, one of my best friends, and I love him. T.T
PostPosted: Mon Jul 26, 2010 6:51 pm


My heart goes out to you, honestly.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 2:27 pm


Thanks guys, it means a lot to me that you like it. Honestly, I threw it together in five minutes then posted it. I sent it to him, and he thought it was beautiful. He also said he didn't know how to respond to it. sweatdrop Oh well.
PostPosted: Tue Jul 27, 2010 7:26 pm


My advise, if you wish to hear it, is that you make sure that he knows where you stand and to be honest with him. That is if you chose to let it be known. I'm not confident that I understand your words, but I'm sure that he would. If you have to be.... be blunt. The male mind can be a little dense at times like this. I hope things turn out well.

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 28, 2010 1:51 pm


Hammalea
My advise, if you wish to hear it, is that you make sure that he knows where you stand and to be honest with him. That is if you chose to let it be known. I'm not confident that I understand your words, but I'm sure that he would. If you have to be.... be blunt. The male mind can be a little dense at times like this. I hope things turn out well.

He and I are very open with each other, it's just that we're thousands of miles apart. He's a really understanding guy; he always knows when something is wrong with me, or if I'm just pissy for some strange reason. I am normally blatant, though, just because most of my friends are males. He's a sweetheart though, and he honestly told me that he's flattered because I feel this way. He then called me the Butter to his Toast. Lol xd
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