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 Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:41 am
Okay, if you aren't aware of it, a long itme ago, I had a dream that I re-wrote twilight and made it better. The other night, by dear friend Ethan, had the same dream. we laughed and said it was a sign that I should do it, and one thing led to another and actual ideas started to form. I actually really like the devious ideas I have for it right now. Should I write it?
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 11:50 am
Yeah, do it. :3
random thought: I always thought it would be lulzy if someone wrote a book in which a vampire and werewolf were going to hook up but a human kept trying to interfere xd
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 1:21 pm
Oh hai. I fixed your typos.
I've been wanting to rewrite it too...
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 1:40 pm
I also wanted to rewrite it... with Bella as a stronger, more rounded character.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:54 pm
yeah it's gonna be awesome. I'm thinking that Carlisle, the "dad" who's also a doctor, is still blonde and beautiful, but is now a bisexual with suspicious motives who likes to collect beautiful people to add to his little harem. he also licks the bits of liver off of his gloves after surgery.
It goes from there.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 5:56 pm
I too have been also wanting to do a rewrite of the entire series, but asides from making Bella more human, there are other changes. For starters, I would make a more accurate depiction of the Quileute nation, give the series more sense, and the ending would be that Edward would fail.
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 7:06 pm
Oh yeah, please tell me you're doing research on everything...
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 7:23 pm
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Posted: Mon Mar 22, 2010 7:24 pm
Demoness Crystallia Oh yeah, please tell me you're doing research on everything... As a matter of fact, I would do a lot of research, therefore eliminating among other things, Renesmee. Either that, or show in the remade version that it is out of some magical process that Renesmee came into the world. EDIT: Of course, since Edward would fail, then Renesmee would not come into the world in the first place. Take your pick.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 3:02 am
I'd love to read a twist on Twilight, anything that makes it better.
I've posted this before, but I thought it would be cool if she moves to town, and there are grusome murders going on, and when Bella goes to school she asks about the cool pale kids and they tell her those are the Cullens and they are new to town.
It would be predictable when she falls in love with Cullen, and then finds out his whole family are the killers, and she must protect herself, her family, and friends with the help of an old childhood friend who also happens to be a werewolf (his group is also trying to run the vampires out of town because it's their territory and they protect the town and civilians, while having the freedom granted to them to hunt nearby wildlife and have their picks of thugs and lowlifes to feast upon).
It would actually make the vampires out to be the villians they are usually depicted as while making werewolves out as a little more sympathetic yet slightly villianous themselves. Bella would fall in love with Edward, but the breakup would leave her a little heartbroken yet determined to fight him and his family. I'd make her smarter, nicer, and more of a fighter. Her father would actually be seen as a working cop (I don't think much is shown about his job or even talked about it Twilight?), and it would and still could be romance, but with more horror and suspense.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 4:57 am
I haven't so much re-vamped the plot as much I have gone insane totally re-doing the characters. XD oh yeah I'm a history geek and I'm not shying away from it. Lots more genral ******** up-edness sex and insanity.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 6:39 am
I"m a semi-accomplished writer (XD) And I'd love to help this project along. Hell, way back when When I first read twilight and thought it was decent from a certain POV, I started writing an afterstory for that female werewolf. I currently don't remember her name, cuz I haven't picked up the books in a loooonnnngggg time.
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 1:48 pm
Can we not have sex in it? Please.
Can it also just end by the first book with Edward killing Bella...?
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 2:32 pm
Demoness Crystallia Can we not have sex in it? Please. Can it also just end by the first book with Edward killing Bella...? What's wrong with sex? XD I love writing sex!
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Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 2:37 pm
CWnerd12 Demoness Crystallia Can we not have sex in it? Please. Can it also just end by the first book with Edward killing Bella...? What's wrong with sex? XD I love writing sex!
I never would have guessed. rofl
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