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blueRose98

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 6:30 pm


i know i few of you know i write poetry but i just want a place to put it in here so i get the word around.

ill try to post my most recent poems in here, and if you want them all click the link in my sig.


here's a few of my newer ones.




let you mind run free

Anyone can make a rhyme,
all it takes is a little time.
To free your mind of what you know,
so take a breath and let it go,
to worlds beyond you thinking mind.
No thoughts of rhymes are left behind,
where lyrics and poems are free to run
now go out there and have some fun. 3nodding





first pocket


In the first pocket you will find
a paper tha will blow your mind
for on it has all the words
that to some and most, sound so absurd.
In the pocket with a velcro strap
lies a note inside a flap
to keep hidden from others eyes
espcially from those of whom i despise...
Dig deep within to find whats hidden
for my eyes only
from yours forbidden.
First pocket in the accordion,
the note is kept from those who shun.
for reasons i have yet to say,
you'll soon find out anyway.
PostPosted: Tue Apr 07, 2009 7:22 pm


Cool stuff there.

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 11, 2009 5:26 pm


thanks ammit 3nodding
PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 9:57 am


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PostPosted: Mon Apr 13, 2009 7:51 pm


lol, i never thought someone would find that one blaugh
PostPosted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 10:35 am


heart WOW YOUR POEMS WERE REALLY COOL !! KEEP WRITING !!! ~BUMP~ heart

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 4:14 pm


thanks , i will, as long as i have the teenaged angst 3nodding confused
PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 3:32 pm


I like the first poem the best 3nodding

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PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 3:51 pm


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I like your stuff, it's kind of cute and bouncy. (:
PostPosted: Sat Apr 25, 2009 8:50 pm


i wouldn't use bouncey to describe the ones on the 2nd page, but thanks for your opinions guys 3nodding

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 28, 2009 11:06 am


I solemnly swear I am up to no good. heart

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 29, 2009 3:21 pm


blaugh

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 9:26 am


cool love the poems! im a writer as well, here is one of my old ones


All of You

Don't say hello to me
When you see me on the corner.
Don't call me on the phone
And don't invite yourself over.
I don't wanna have any part of you
If you only want part of me.
You told me you want all of me,
But you wont give me all of you.
If you only gave me your eyes
How would you hold me?
If you only gave me your hand
How would you tell me you love me?
And if you only gave me your heart
How would you embrace me in your gentle arms?
If you don't want part of me
Don't give part of you.
I don't want to love part of you but
All of you.
I can only love as much as I'm loved,
I can only give what you give me.
If you only give me a part
That's all I can return.
I don't want to love part of you
I want all of you.


Here is another one


Free To Dream


I dream a dream to one day fly
And leave my worries behind,
To ride a cloud up in the sky
With no doubt of any kind.
To freely soar with my own wings
Not the wings I'm told to use.
To choose the song I want to sing.
Where my life is mine to choose.
I sing a song about a day
When I can follow my dreams,
To travel somewhere far away
To places I haven't seen,
Places where the sun never sets
On all of my hopes and dreams.
I dream a dream I won't forget
As long as my heart is free
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 26, 2009 8:49 pm


I love the first poem! That was so good! My poems kind of stink. I haven't written one in awhile. xD blaugh blaugh

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