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 Posted: Thu Jun 14, 2018 7:28 pm
Character Name: Odin
Technique Name: Too Fat or Too Small?
Description: The user can make themselves lighter or heavier to increase damage out put or speed depending on what they are trying to do. +25 Speed or Strength depending on if the user wishes to be lighter or heavier.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Buff
Range: Self
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 1
Cost 25
Base: Prowess
Ryu: Approved
Attempted a Punnier name
Technique Name: Full Body Blow [ Soru ]
Description: The user kicks off the ground at high speeds and aims to slam into their opponent, using superior strength and weight the user pins their enemy to the ground causing them to be stunned for a single post from the initial impact. The user gains +100 Speed while moving to land the initial attack. The user has to grasp their target while moving within the one hundred foot distance. Impact causes normal damage from a physical attack.
Trait(s): Rokushiki
Effect: Stun | Travel Distance
Range: 100ft
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 4
Cost 100 Stamina
Base: Strength
Ryu: Approved
Took the advice and made the changes
Technique Name: Hammer of Dom
Description: The user swings a blunt weapon or a fist with every ounce of strength in their body and delivers a blow with +50 Strength. This sends the target flying back 50ft in whichever direction the user punches them in.
Trait(s): Primary Weapon: Hammer
Effect: Displacement | Travel Distance
Range: 50ft
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 2
Cost 50 Stamina
Base: Strength
Ryu: Approved
Changed it!
Technique Name: More Muscle Milk!
Description: The user makes themselves extensively heavy causing the muscle's in the body to gain more mass and density. The user must stand still during the technique as they gain +75 defense to all oncoming physical attacks.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Defense
Range: Self
Duration: 2 Posts
Tier: 3
Cost 75 Stamina
Base: Defense
Ryu: If this is just using the fruit to become heavier/denser, it doesn't need to involve rokushiki at all or have the movement restriction.
Fixed
Profile Link: [x]
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Posted: Fri Jun 15, 2018 10:34 pm
Character Name: Ryu
Technique Name: Cellular Detonation
Description: When this form is activated, Ryu's entire body starts to explode. Every single individual cell, molecule, follicle, everything individually starts to detonate over and over, constantly and repeatedly. This results in his body starting to glow red with residual flames and smoke coming off of his body with a soft almost hissing sound. In this state, his body continuously 'obliterates' anything it touches, the billions of mico-explosions destroying what they come into contact with similar to if his body were made of powerful acid, or high intensity flames, but it does not discriminate on the material effected. Any sort of direct contact with Ryu's body will cause the attacker to take damage equal to his Strength, and all attacks against him are actually buffered by this aura of constant, overlapping explosions. Because of this, he also reduces the power of most incoming attacks by his Defense as well. While this form is active, Ryu gains a [+5] bonus to his Strength, Defense, and Speed for every 60 TSP he has and every post spent in this empowered state will cost him [25] Stamina. Once ended, either manually or forcibly due to lack of Stamina, this ability will enter a cool down for as many posts as it was maintained for.
Requirements: Paramecia-Class Devil Fruit | 550 TSP
DC: This needs to do one thing. You're both attacking and defending with this. Also, if this is explosion is JUST an explosion, it would be Prowess based. Not strength. Pending.
Technique Name: Blast Strike
Description: Ryu uses his Devil Fruit to enhance all aspects of his fighting style by causing his body to explode at will. Ant time he makes an attack, he can make that part of his body explode, adding more force and damage to his opponent and burning them as well, wearing them out. This attack still works at his normal Strength for damage, but an opponent without some kind of protection against burns and explosive damage will also lose [25] points from their Stamina Pool due to the burning effect.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage
Range: Personal
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Strength
DC: Why would burning something take stamina away? Pending.
Technique Name: Abs of Steel
Description: Thanks to his training and dense musculature, Ryu can essentially harden his muscles beyond normal levels by flexing them and controlling their density at the same time, resulting in a steel like hardness that can even block or mitigate blades and bullets. With this technique, Ryu will block all incoming damage, reducing it by his [Defense +25] for the post. While similar techniques would normally limit or even restrict the user's movement while in use, Ryu's better control over his body lets him keep his muscles in a higher density state even while moving so as not to lose on his mobility in battle.
Trait(s): Life Return, Rokushiki
Effect: Defense
Range: Self
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Defense
Technique Name: Kick the Sky
Description: Through some superhuman feat, Ryu can actually kick the air itself, creating a small burst of air pressure than lets him propel his own body around. This ability allows him to go skywards, briefly imitating flight as necessary, bouncing in place, or adjusting his own trajectory and positioning midair at will. Ryu's movements immediately after/while using this technique are made with an additional 25 Speed.
Trait(s): Rokushiki
Effect: Movement
Range: Self
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Speed
Technique Name: Suck It Up
Description: By taking control of his own body more actively than normal, Ryu can work the healing process to a minor degree as well as help the muscles and flesh contract around open wounds as needed to keep fighting. Activating this ability will allow Ryu to seal up any and all Minor Wounds, while also reducing the severity of all other wounds by 1 tier. The same wounds can't be mitigated by later uses of this ability, but new ones may be effected instead to let him keep fighting with minimal impediment. He also recovers [Prowess + 25] Hit Points each time this ability is used and it actually seals or reduces an active wound.
Trait(s): Life Return
Effect: Healing/Regeneration
Range: Self
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: N/A
Profile Link: Exploding Fist
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Posted: Mon Jun 18, 2018 10:16 am
Character Name:Eiza Zoldya
Technique Name: A Fighter's Bloodlust, Stand Once More
Description: This technique acts as the Anti-Devil Final Form of Eiza Zoldya. Typically activated when her physical state is below her desired level for it to be. Eiza becomes shrouded in a blood red aura, any blood on her skin or around her seeming to rise as if the thick aura were picking it up and allowing it to float about her person. Her eyes glow a bright red color and the aura seems to create a sort of shadow over the woman's body causing it to appear darker than normal giving her a slightly more intimidating appearance. Her hair also seems to move as though being blown all kinds of way with the wind whether or not wind is present in the area. The aura surrounding her causes her body to adopt a steel like texture to it, causing her to become more durable than she was previously, which is why she typically uses this when her body is in a state of duress. In addition, the aura gives applicable attacks the ability to pierce, akin to turning her body into a living spear.
[+10 Vitality per 60 TSP]
(Note: The "Extra Durability to the Body" is expressed through the +10 Vitality Boost)
Trait(s): Final Form
Effect: Final Form Stat Increases, Damage
Range: Self
Duration: 1+ Posts
Tier: Final Form
Cost 25 Stamina per Post
Base: Strength
Ryu: Final Form had a typo. Should only cost you [25] stamina per post. Otherwise this is approvable.
Technique Name: Bulk Up
Description: Eiza uses life return to increase the size of her muscles and thus her strength by comparison as well as her durability
Trait(s): Life Return, Upcast
Effect: (Buff) +10 Strength and +15 Vitality (Tier 1), +25 Strength and +25 Vitality (Tier 2), +30 Strength and +45 Vitality (Tier 3), +50 Strength and +50 Vitality (Tier 4), +100 Strength and +100 Vitality (Tier 5)
Range: Self
Duration: 3 Posts
Tier: Tier 1-5 (Upcast)
Cost 25-200 Stamina (Upcast)
Base: Supplementary
Ryu: This is numerically fine and a very cool/creative use of your Upcasting custom. Approved.
Technique Name: Shattering Strike
Description: After increasing her muscle size, Eiza strikes a person hard enough to shatter bones and rupture muscles. This causes them to become unable to use associated limbs until fixed. +200 Strength on hit
Trait(s): Unarmed Combat, Life Return
Effect: Damage, Cripple
Range: Touch
Duration: One Attack
Tier: Tier 5
Cost 200 Stamina
Base: Strength
Ryu: Just move the +200 to the description part not effects please. thanks.
Technique Name: Weapon Shattering Strike
Description: After increasing her power via muscle size Eiza strikes an item to shatter it.
Trait(s): Unarmed Combat, Life Return
Effect: Weapon Breaking
Range: Touch
Duration: One Attack
Tier: N/A
Cost Based on Weapon Tier
Base: Strength
Ryu: Approved.
Profile Link: EizaAvedis Angelus Ryu: All have been moved. Congrats. All necessary edits made
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 9:11 am
Character Name: Bijuu Antionette
Technique Name: Shatter
Description: Allows the user to shatter anything made of glass within their vicinity and bring it within twenty feet of their position. Can't affect other's items. Every time the three posts are up the user has to repay the initial 50, can also end the technique at any time.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: AOE | Travel Distance
Range: 50ft
Duration: 3 Posts
Tier: 2
Cost 50
Base: Prowess
Ryu: What's this 30 upkeep? you omly pay the 50 once until the duration ends.
Fixed, changed it so I couldn't control all the glass.
Technique Name: Glass Spear
Description: The user uses shattered glass that they have either become or collected from the surrounding area and create a whirling mass of glass spinning in the air. The spear can be tossed in any direction and twists similar to a drill, if an enemy gets hit by it they take full damage. They gain a +50 to Prowess while using this technique.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage | Travel Distance
Range: 50ft
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 2
Cost 50
Base: Prowess
Ryu: I'd like the controlled thing removed. no Logia has exhibited the ability to 'remote control' their element after releasing it.
Fixed
Technique Name: Ghost Blade
Description: The user shatters as an effect ( generally after being struck ) and passes their opponent causing minor cuts before reappearing behind them to use a counter attack. The user gains +25 Speed when moving.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit | Assassin
Effect: Travel Distance | Phasing
Range: 25ft
Duration: Instant
Tier: 1
Cost 25
Base: Prowess
Ryu: Approved if it causes no real damage then on its own.
Minor surface damage, but not enough to cut hp. I'm alright with paying the cost for phasing through attacks.
Technique Name: The Sacred Swords [ Unleashed ]
Description: The user creates 5 swords from 5 feet around them and is able to toss them in any given direction up to 200 feet away from them. The swords are the size and shape of a normal katana and are intensely capable of cutting off limbs were they to hit their targets. These swords shatter upon impact of solid objects into shards of glass around whatever they hit ( even if it's not their intended target ). The user gets +200 Prowess during the attack, the swords are not completely visible to the eye and seem almost translucent unless a source of light is bouncing off of them which will make them noticeable.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage | Aoe
Range: 200ft
Duration: Instantaneous
Tier: 5
Cost 200
Base: Prowess
Ryu: They must be created near yourself and launched from yourself as per the remote control issue
Fixed!
Profile Link: x
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 3:20 pm
Character Name: Ark Awanha
Technique Name: Hazard Wave
Description: Ark uses his devil fruit ability to create a Tidal Wave that is made up of the ground as well as nearby debris or buildings if he deems it necessary, and send it as an attack towards his opponent. He can adjust the size of this wave on creation to be any size as long as the size of the wave is within the tier paramater maximum, however he can not change it's size after it has begun to travel. The wave has an additional +25-200 Prowess based damage added on to it. The diameter of the wave is based on the middle of the wave itself, and is much like a square or a cube in tidal wave shape.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit, Upcasting
Effect: AOE (10-50 Feet) (Upcast)
Range: 25 - 200 Feet (Upcast)
Duration: Instantaneous (Attack Move)
Tier: 1-5 (Upcast)
Cost 25-200 Stamina (Upcast)
Base: Prowess
Ryu: Mostly approved. I'll assume you wanna use +25-200 Prowess for damage as well? Also the aoe is diameter so since it seems you must start this as a center point, the range is 5-25 ft radius technically.
Profile Link: ArkAdded in the +25-200 Prowess fo damage. Clarified how the technique's AOE works.
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 4:55 pm
Character Name: FMNH PR2081
Technique Name: She can camouflage!
Description: Sue can control the change in color and pattern (including the polarization of the reflected light waves), and the shape of her skin. By doing this, she can render herself cloaked to the naked eye.
Trait(s): [Animal]
Effect: [Utility]
Range: Self
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 1
Cost 25
Base: N/A
Ryu: Pended. Animal traits may only go to cloaking levels because of the invisibility fruit. You can have a duration on this but cloaking can only make you blend in and will make spotting/reacting to you more difficult within roleplay itself.
Technique Name: How would she know to do that?
Description: Sue has learned to move exceptionally quiet, regardless of size and weight. She does this by distributing her weight more evenly and increasing the size of her gait. She does not make a sound when using this technique.
Trait(s): [Assassin]
Effect: [Utility]
Range: Self
Duration: 3 post
Tier: 1
Cost 25
Base: [N/A]
Ryu: Sneaky beaky. Approved. Can make it 2 or 3 posts duration really since this is a niche skill technically.
Technique Name: You didn't ask for reality, you asked for more teeth.
Description: Sue attempts to bite into an opponent with her razor-sharp, serrated teeth. The attack deals damage as normal and if successful causes the opponent to bleed for 25 damage per post over the course of the duration.
Trait(s): [Primary weapon/devilfruit/animal
Effect: [Damage l Dot]
Range: 10 Ft
Duration: 3 posts [Dot]
Tier: 3
Cost 75
Base: [ Strength ]
Ryu: Pending. 25 per post for 3 posts is the wording you'd be looking for. Also the initial bite can deal damage as normal.
Profile Link: x
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 5:47 pm
Character Name:Jurulum Von Adams
Technique Name: Light Beam
Description: Fairly simple. Juru points his finger, palm, leg or a part of his body forward, concentrating the light from his body forward. The light focuses and then shoots out as a beam, aiming to shoot into anyone that it catches. As light can only move in straight lines, the beam can only move straight. Prowess + 10 when used.Fairly simple. Juru points his finger, palm, leg or a part of his body forward, concentrating the light from his body forward. The light focuses and then shoots out as a beam, aiming to shoot into anyone that it catches. The light leaves a burning pain wherever it hits, leaving a burning pain on the person hit by the light. As light can only move in straight lines, the beam can only move straight. Prowess +25 when used. A person hit by this beam takes burning damage equal to Juru's Prowess + Tier 2 damage.
Trait(s): [Devil Fruit
Effect: Dot]
Range: 20 ft
Duration: 1 post.
Tier: 2
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Prowess
Ryu: Pending. You have redundant lines, the old cost for tier 1 (its 25 now), you can use Travel Distance of 25 ft for single target attacks, and 'tier 2 damage' isn't a thing, just say it's power is Prowess +25.
Profile Link: Juru my boy.
Technique Name: Light Manipulation: Weapon Make.
Description:By consuming the light fruit, Juru is able to create weapons out of light. He can create only physical items in this basic state such as swords, spears, clubs and other basic hand weapons. Weapons created add +10 Prowess when used and count as any basic weapon
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Basic Function
Range: 10 feet
Duration: --
Tier: 1
Cost 10 stamina
Base: Prowess
Ryu: Pending. Making melee weapons with this to be solid would swing at your strength so you'd probably want to boost that. also boost is +25 now, not 10. Cost also needs to be higher. And what is the range for?
Technique Name: Kaleidoscope
Description: By consuming the Glint Glint No Mi, Juru has turned into a being of light. Sacred Yata Mirror allows Juru to split into light, shooting into another direction in the shape of a collection of glowing yellow butterflies, or a Kaleidoscope. These butterflies move straight just like light, only allowing for movement in one direction.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Phasing
Range: Self
Duration: 1 Post Per 10 Stamina
Tier: Variable
Cost ---
Base: Prowess
Ryu: Ok so it looks like you sorta ripped the description on Yata no Kagami or something but if this is meant to be your phasing technique, the cost is 25 minimum and rises with enemy attack tier. I noticed that phasing itself still said 10 which was a mistake after the last patch. I've edited that since. Also I'd like a better description for this as a phasing technique please to be clearer. Are you scattering before an attack hits, letting your body sever as light like kizaru does so often, what?
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 5:51 pm
Character Name: Vot'gul
Technique Name: Pamu Pamu no Hinja no Bara
Description: Vot'gul can cause a body part or weapon to swell up before hitting an opponent or inanimate object, causing an explosion in a radius around the point of impact appropriate for the tier. The damage caused is strength [+25 - +200]
Trait(s): [Devil Fruit]
Effect: [Damage l AoE | Upscale ]
Range: 10 ft - 50 ft
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 1 - 5
Cost 25 - 200
Base: [Strength]
Ryu: No translation in parentheses!? Blasphemy. Approved though. This won't let you explode things that arent yourself or your own weapons as written however.
Technique Name: Pamu Pamu no mi Hōga hana Soru
Description: Using Soru, Vot'gul kicks off a surface moving at speed [+50], vanishing from sight. However, at the same time, causing the ground to swell, and explode. The explosion causes prowess damage [+50].
Trait(s): [Devil Fruit | Rokushiki
Effect: [Damage l Vanishing Speed l AoE ]
Range: Up to 100 ft [Travel distance] | 40 ft [Explosion]
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 4
Cost 100
Base: [Prowess]
Ryu: thats 40 diameter so 20 ft radius technically just to be clear. This is still good as is currently. Approved.
Profile Link: x
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 5:56 pm
Character Name: Michelle G. Sonto
Technique Name: Spore Bullet Barrage
Description:By consuming the Noko Noko No Mi, Michelle has turned into a spore human. This makes a force of spores constantly grow in her body. Michelle can release these spores in many way, by forming her fingers into the shape of a gun, whipping her hair, spitting, even by simply opening her pours. Michelle can fire a green bullet storm of spores[10 blasts total] at her opponent. These spores fire like energy bullets [while simply just being concentrated hardened spores] and leave a burning feeling when someone is hit by them for three posts. +20 Prowess when used. Obviously destroys Michelle's own clothing if fired from under them. These spores do half Michelle's prowess in damage per post. Only 10 bullets can be fired at a time.
Trait(s): [Devil Fruit]
Effect: Dot ]
Range: 20 ft
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: 2
Cost 20 Stamina
Base: Prowess
Ryu: Pending. Cost is too low, range can be 50 ft as it is Travel Distance. Also multiple shots aren't going to be free. Each one is an attack that must be paid for.
Profile Link:
Technique Name: Spore Human: The Poison Within
Description: By consuming the Noko Noko No Mi, Michelle has turned into a spore human. This makes a force of spores constantly grow in her body. This poison must be exerted from her body as not to build up and kill her, or become an explosive force. With this being said, Michelle can release poison spores from her body that travel around her like a small powder. The spores must release or they become explosive, and thus cluster together with a small explosive potential. These explosions would be under Michelle's control, while Michelle can also control these spores, using them as an extension of herself. One would consider the spores almost living as they would act to how she commands them with simple flicks of her finger or raises of her hands.
Trait(s): [Devil Fruit]
Effect: Basic Funcion
Range: Self + 10ft
Duration: 1 post.
Tier: 1
Cost 10 Stamina Per post.
Base: Prowess
Ryu: Basic Function is not a thing anymore and you are literally just describing the fruit in more detail. this has no effect and is actually a waste of a custom slot as written so Denied?
Profile Link: Michelle ya Girl
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 10:07 pm
Character Name: Riven / Merlin
Technique Name: Hammerhead Dewgong
Description: Being an Assassin, Riven is capable of swift movement to take down an opponent. That being said, this egregious move allows him to speed up a single limb to near blurring speeds for a single strike. Combining the power of his assassin abilities with those of fishman karate. The heavy blow not only deals damage, but sends shockwave like ripples through the opponents body commanding the water within it to halt. Effectively Stunning the opponent for one [1] post. Riven's limb speed is increased by two hundred [200] for the duration of the strike.
Trait(s): Assassin, Fishman Karate
Effect: Damage, Stun
Range: Self
Duration: Single Action
Tier: 5
Cost 200 Stamina
Base: Strength
Ryu: Approved.
Technique Name: Angelfish Milotic
Description: Any attack that can be seen, can be avoided, as long as Riven is fast enough to get out of the way. Riven leaves behind a water body double as he escapes to draw attention as he avoids in attack. Effectively leaving its range and all damage associated with it, if he can clear the range with thi technique. His ability to reappear is a maximum of fifty [50] feet. Allowing him to move about the battlefield swiftly. His Speed is increased by fifty [50] only during the maneuver. Note:: He can also use this ability without the presence of an attack to move about the battlefield.
Trait(s): Assassin, Fishman Karate
Effect: Movement, Afterimage
Range: Self // 50 feet
Duration: Single Action
Tier: 2
Cost 50
Base: Speed
Ryu: Pending/Denied. This is an Upcasting technique which must start as a Tier 1 and cannot add any higher tier exclusive effects.
Technique Name: Killer Mamoswine
Description: In this state Riven floods the under part of his skin with moisture, expanding it and making it more reflective. This in turn allows him to mimic the colors around him and making him slightly harder to see. When in this form his movement is considered to be Vanishing Speed at all times. He obtains a boost to his speed stat equal to ten [10] per sixty [60] TSP the user has.
Trait(s): Fishman, Anti-Devil
Effect: Movement, Camouflage
Range: Self
Duration: 1+ Posts
Tier: Anti Devil Form
Cost 25 Stamina Per Post
Base: Speed
Ryu: This is Approved as written, but as a note, with speed tiers as they are, Vanishing Speed is something like camouflage in that its mostly a roleplay reliant adjustment since people in your speed tier can still deal with ya. in case anyone else asks d('.'d)
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 10:42 pm
Character Name: Hammond J. Dawson
Technique Name: Elemental Mastery: Goro
Description: The user appears normal, but their body is completely comprised of Lightning. Auto-Phasing is active during this form. As the user is constantly generating lightning through their body, an immense amount of heat surrounds the user and all of his abilities. This form boosts [+05] at 60 TSP, and increases by [05] for every 60 TSP the user has, boosting Stamina + Prowess. Once it wears off or the user forcibly leaves this state and will be unable to reactivate it for however long it was active to a minimum of one post.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Buff, Form
Range: Self
Duration: 1+ Post
Tier: Form
Cost 25 Stamina per post.
Base: N/A
Ryu: Approved
Technique Name: Man of Lightning
Description: The user can turn themselves into lightning at will, allowing them to travel in special ways and to avoid being hit by certain attacks. The user can turn into and travel as a bolt of lightning (Limited by Speed). While in this lightning form the user can also travel through Most mediums, excluding Rubber. In addition to this, the user can turn into lightning to avoid attacks by phasing them.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Phasing
Range: Touch - Self
Duration: 1 post.
Tier: 1
Cost 25 Stamina per movement, Phasing Cost Based on Attack.
Base: Prowess
Ryu: Ok too many things in one technique here. Phasing is it's own thing. And due to the nature of movement as a logia while phasing (especially the second fastest fruit realistically with pseudo teleporting speed), it cannot last more than 1 post for the same use/cost to evade. The last line is redundant as your custom below covers that.
Hax:: Removed final sentence, removed extended duration.
Technique Name: Discharge
Description: A spherical release of lightning that can be used from any point on the users body. The Release can happen at the tip of the finger to affect an area immediately in front of the user, or in all directions as a radius around the user. This technique can also be used while the user is in a lightning form, or moving through mediums. Adds Prowess based on the Tier level used.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage - Upcasting - AoE
Range: 10ft Per Tier
Duration: 1 Attack
Tier: 1-5
Cost 25, 50, 75, 100, 200
Base: Prowess
Ryu: This wouldn't count as a buff, and since AOE is diameter, the range would be half that in radius terms. It's otherwise approved just a heads up on how the aoe works.
Hax:: Thank you for the heads up, removed 'Buff' effect
Technique Name: Shockback
Description: When an opponent touches a medium charged by the Goro's lightning, or the users body, the user can naturally react by sending shocks through the contact to attack or hurt the opponent. This technique can be utilized while traveling through a medium, or while phasing an opponents attack. +25 Prowess.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Damage
Range: Touch
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Prowess
Ryu: You really don't need to label 'buff' on everything unless it's an *actual* buff effect over several posts. this is good though.
Hax::Removed "Buff"
Technique Name: Heated Reforge
Description: By channeling lightning through a Solid Medium, the user can heat up and manipulate the structure of the medium in its liquid state, reshaping it to a desired new form. Can only be used on Metals. If used to make an opponents item/weapon unusable, the user MUST pay the proper Stamina to break the weapon.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Weapon Breaker
Range: Touch
Duration: 1 Action
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Prowess
Ryu: Stone is very much a solid insulator so this won't work on stone. Metals are a go however.
Hax:: Removed Stone.
Profile Link: Hammond J. Dawson
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Posted: Tue Jun 19, 2018 10:55 pm
Character Name: Gran Aegis
Technique Name: Iron Phasing
Description: The user is able to turn his body into iron in order to nullify the damage received. If the attack is higher than the user's Defense, it may break the user's body, but it will be reconstructed as if nothing happened. The user is also able to phase through iron objects, allowing them to go through his body as if it was intangible. The SP cost is equivalent to the attack being phased.
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Effect: Phasing
Range: Self
Duration: 1 post
Tier: 1 - 5
Cost 25 - 200
Base: N/A
Profile Link: Here
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Posted: Wed Jun 20, 2018 9:54 pm
Character Name: Fleet Admiral Luka Scarlet
Technique Name: Geppou
Description: An advanced technique that enables the user to literally kick off of the air itself in order to maneuver in three dimensions. When in use, Luka is able to move about in three dimensions by kicking off of the air itself and can even remain airborne by bouncing in place with this technique. While Luka is using this technique, she will gain +25 Speed when in use for both evasive and offensive purposes.
Trait(s): [Rokushiki]
Effect: [Movement]
Range: Self
Duration: 3 post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Speed
Technique Name: Enhanced Kami-E
Description: This technique involves making the user's body relaxed and go limp in order to avoid attacks, and float like a piece of paper. Flexibility is greatly increased and the user is able to evade in ways and positions that would not ordinarily be physically possible. Luka gains +25 Speed for evasive purposes when Kami-E is in use and may be used to avoid attacks that her body would not normally be able to move around. This same ability can be used to employ general feats of inhuman flexibility as she sees fit during combat, molding her own body and even being able to adjust her own dimensions to some degree as necessary by even compressing herself in some parts or her entire form at will.
Trait(s): [Life Return, Rokushiki]
Effect: [Evasive]
Range: Self
Duration: 1 posts
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Speed
DC: Duration needs to be lower. Each dodge with this would cost stamina.
Ryu: Wasn't sure if we were treating evades the same as defenses, ty. adjusted.
Technique Name: Perfected Tekkai
Description: A defensive technique that greatly hardens the user's body muscles and skin to the level of hardened steel to block incoming attacks, but momentarily prevents them from moving when they do so under normal circumstances. This technique will reduce the power of any and all incoming attacks by Luka's [Defense +25] when in use but Luka is will not suffer any sort of movement restrictions when using this technique. Thanks to her ability to control her body more actively than normal humans, she can maintain and make use of this enhanced, steel like defense while staying in motion and suffering no drawbacks for doing so in combat.
Trait(s): [Life Return, Rokushiki]
Effect: [Defense]
Range: Self
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Defense
Technique Name: Soru Echo
Description: A technique that is performed by rapidly kicking off of the ground no less than ten times in a single instant, Soru grants the user a powerful burst of speed for both evasive and offensive purposes. When Luka uses this technique, she moves at her [Speed +50] and shall leave behind an Afterimage effect where she was prior to using this ability. Any enemy that is slower than her boosted Speed will fall for the illusion and be left vulnerable to her next attack while they are distracted by the false attacker or target, depending on how she used it.
Trait(s): [Rokushiki]
Effect: [Afterimage, Movement]
Range: 50 ft
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 2
Cost 50 Stamina
Base: Speed
DC: Understand that vulnerable is just flavored text. I don't want you thinking you get an autohit when using this. Approved.
Ryu: Indeed.
Technique Name: Sunder
Description: By directing any of her attacks at a piece of equipment instead of her opponent's body, Luka may use her strike to slice apart, smash, or otherwise destroy said item at the cost of an amount of Stamina equal to the Tier of said item. This technique may only be used 3 times per battle however, regardless of Luka's Stamina, however if this attack misses the intended target, then the Stamina cost is not paid and the use limit is not lowered either.
Trait(s): [Primary Weapon: Swords]
Effect: [Weapon Breaking]
Range: Melee
Duration: 1 post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25-200 Stamina
Base: Stamina
DC: You still take the stamina loss. You missed, so your gamble failed.
Ryu: That is not true. Weapon Breaker itself explicitly states that Stamina isn't paid for a miss since you need to hit the weapon to lose stamina based on how much force is needed. Unless we removin that from the system? Cuz tier 5 weapons are hard af to break and the Blacksmith trait doubles breaking costs as well.
Technique Name: Life Return: Wound sealing
Description: The power of Life Return is the ability to take a superhuman level of direct control over one's own body both inside and out. With this technique, Luka can forcibly constrict her muscles, blood vessels, nerves, tendons, and even effect her blood clotting rate and the immediate healing process of her flesh itself. When Luka uses this technique, she will seal any and all open wounds she has before suffering any loss of health from that for the current post. Any new wounds gained while this technique is still active may also be sealed up to prevent any loss of health.
Trait(s): [Life Return]
Effect: [Healing/Regeneration]
Range: Self
Duration: 3 posts
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Stamina
DC: Pending. This needs to be discussed.
Ryu: No HP regained, and only works to seal wounds instead as per the general agreement in the chat?
Profile Link: Luka Scarlet
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2018 10:04 am
Character Name: Goldilocks
Technique Name: Tekkai Systema: Battle Body Blockade
Trait(s): Rokushiki | Life Return
Description: A fully defensive maneuver that's often combined with Busoshoki Haki in which the user hardens their entire body until it becomes as solid as steel without losing any of their flexibility. For a turn the user can fight normally with this hardened body while still being able to use their Defense to overpower attacks that hit them or bounce them off of them if they're weaker. In this hardened state the user's Defense is raised by the boost of whatever Tier is used to activate this ability.
Effect: Defense
Range: Self
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: Upscale
Cost Upscale
Base: Defense
DC: Defense customs can only last one post. Pending.
Yuri: Fixed.
Technique Name: Revenant Supernova: Aura
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Description: The user layers themselves in a malleable veil of blackness that wraps tightly around their form; using their darkness to strike down their foes. For a turn Goldi augments herself with her devil fruit to attack enemies with [+25] her [Prowess]. This ability can be countered by Haki and seastone.
Effect: Buff
Range: Self
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Prowess
DC: Attack and Defense techniques however are both unique cases and both must have their cost paid for every activation/post instead.
Pending.
Yuri: Bah, changed to 1 post.
Technique Name: Revenant Supernova: Star
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Description: [ x ] Goldi's signature long-range attack. Utilizing her power over darkness and subtle gravity manipulation she creates a compressed sphere of orbital black energy that's a foot in size. When fired out it swells to three feet in size and can cause anything weaker than it [objects, terrain, etc] that's within a ten foot radius to be swallowed and crushed by the black hole. The user can then detonate it near a target, causing a ten foot explosion. This ability uses her Prowess [+25].
Effect: Offensive
Range: 25 ft Travel Distance | 10ft. AOE
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: Tier 1
Cost 25 Stamina
Base: Prowess
Technique Name: Revenant Supernova: Whirlpool
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Description: Using the invasive and forceful gravitational powers of her fruit, Goldi will extend her arm out. The darkness will pull in any opposition within a ten foot radius, sweeping them off balance and into Goldi's grasp, allowing her to either slam them or follow up with some other form of assault.
Effect: Displacement | AOE
Range: 10ft
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: Tier 2
Cost 50 Stamina
Base: Prowess
Technique Name: Revenant Supernova: Stitch
Trait(s): Devil Fruit | Life Return
Description: In conjunction with her fruit's masochistic yet self-reparative and her ability to manipulate all aspects of her body via Life Return, Goldi gains regenerative properties. When used, her body can not only revitalize itself by a significant amount [Prowess], but her fruit uses its blackness and its pulling force to stitch up her wounds and reattach limbs. However, this ability cannot fully repair grave injuries such as killing blows to the brain and heart.
Effect: Healing
Range: Self
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: Tier 2
Cost 50 Stamina
Base: Prowess
DC: Pending.
Technique Name: Revenant Supernova: Revoke
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Description: The signature and most basic move of the Darkness fruit. By coming into contact with the opponent directly or with something on their person, Goldilocks can completely cancel out their Devil Fruit abilities no matter what form they're in. It is unlike the effect of a body of water or seastone, in which both just inhibit a person from controlling their powers. This reverts them back to an average state, making it seem as if they never gained their powers at all; be they Paramecia, Zoan, or Logia. Each post they are hold costs [75] Stamina.
Effect: Silence
Range: Contact
Duration: 1 Post
Tier: Tier 3
Cost 75 Stamina per post
Base: Prowess
DC: Each post is 75 Stamina and only as long as your holding them. Pending.
Yuri: Fixed.
Profile Link: [ x ]
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Posted: Thu Jun 21, 2018 6:29 pm
Character Name: Azusa Yumi
Technique Name: Wanosian Wind Arts: Yumi
Trait(s): Airwaves
Description: Threading the wind into compressed form, Azusa creates a quiver of arrows in which he can fire from his bow in place of his regular ones. They are more refined and sharp then regular arrows and can pierce through multiple targets and objects. When fired they deal damage based on his [ Prowess ] +25.
Effect: Damage | Ranged
Range: Upscale
Duration: Up to 3 posts
Tier: Upscale
Base: [ Prowess ]
DC: Denied. You can't just manipulate for no reason.
Technique Name: That Which Is Unseen: Sukētingu
Trait(s): Devil Fruit
Description: Turns the user and anything on their person completely invisible.
Effect: Support
Range: Self
Duration: 3 Posts
Tier: 1
Base: N/A
Profile Link: [ x ]
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