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 Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 7:03 pm
Insane:
1. You know a few bloodline techniques, don't you? Go ahead and fill those in.
...other then that,YOU ARE APPROVED!
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:25 pm
Kingu:
1. Go ahead and update that back story whenever you like.
2. I reduced your kunai count to 15. (30 is a bit much)
Everything else is all set.YOU ARE APPROVED!
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:32 pm
Zane Hajime Cobra_X Zane:
1. I linked your picture directly.
2. I fixed your Strengths/Weaknesses/Shinobi Skills.
3. Please figure out how many total chakra points your character has.
4. You know WAY too many jutsu. Assassins only get 30 jutsu TOTAL... you need to trim the fat. (And remember your second element can only learn up to A-rank techniques...and 1 S-rank)
5. Instead of pasting your weapon in, just add a link to your custom weapon in the profile. It looks neater and saves space.
6. Feel free to fill out the 'Body Type' prompt. Sorry, it's been kinda hectic in rl and I never saw this post when I posted my profile again, which is why i wrote editing. I just wanted to ask you something about my elemental vulnerability to fire. I assumed my elemental vunerability would be earth, since my main element is water and i have immunity to katon and raiton
However, your elemental vulnerability should be Katon, but since you are immune to that, we'll make it Doton. Otherwise, it'd just plain be unfair.
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Posted: Mon Mar 08, 2010 9:53 pm
actually, there is a major downfall to my bloodline, it's already been exploited twice by two different people. Don't reallly feel like writing it out loud but yeah, it sucks because it affects my rpc greatly
And yeah I know, that's why i proposed doton in the first place. Oh and it wasn't me that created the bloodline so...yeah
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Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:47 pm
 Full Name: Zane Hajime
Nicknames: The Ghost of the Mist
Age: 21
Birthdate: 12/17
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Hispanic
Nindo: Nothing is true...everything is permitted
Behavior: Those who meet Zane for the first time see him as a sadistic and ruthless assasin, which for the most part he is. This is merely a front in order to hide the fact that he feels the emotions of others and depending on their behavior, Zane acts the same way.
Personality: Zane is a cold blooded assasin through and through. He will put the mission at hand first and refuses to work with others. His loner demeanor comes from the years of training that he underwent as a hunter nin. Though through the interactions with his students, Zane has become much more open and values the lives of his students before his own.
Backstory: At the age of 6, Zane displayed the unique abilities to be able to speak to ghosts. Just like his little brother, Zane too was special as well. He would often wander to the graveyard and speak to the restless ghosts there. That's when he met Ezio Auditore. Ezio was a hunter nin of Kirigakure, who died trying to fullfil a mission for the Mizukage. Not being able to rest for the shame he wrought for making a rookie mistake, Zane decided to help Ezio complete the mission. Submitting himself to Ezio, Zane spent the next two years training under him in the ways of the hunter nin. By the age of 8, Zane had achieved the strength of an upper ranked chuunin.
Thanks to the weapons that Ezio taught him how to make, Zane used his gauntlets to assasinate the shinobi that killed Ezio. Returning to Kiri, Ezio decided to be Zane's partner for the rest of Zane's life. Upon hearing the exploits of Zane, the Mizukage had Zane's little brother taken as a bargaining chip: "Become the leader of the hunter nins and your brother will be safe." Wanting to protect his brother, Zane went deep underground in order to hone his skills as an assasin.
It wasn't until Zane was 20 in which he fully resurfaced from the underground. There would be stores of silent assasinations coming from the Mist village, as if a ghost would seek justice with a sword. It was how Zane got his name: The Ghost of the Mist. Zane continued fighting and serving the Mizukage while his little brother was being experimented on deep underground.
After killing the Akatsuki member named Blue, Zane reported back to the Mizukage, given command of a squad of his own despite his refusal to take any students. But it was thanks to his students that Zane was able to save his little brother and find humanity. Due to his strong urge to protect his students and his brother, Zane has taken the mantle of Mizukage after the deaths of the previous two.
Village: Hidden Mist
Rank: Mizukage________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformation Summoning: N/A
Bloodline: Supekutoru Annaiyaku (Stage 3)
Weapon of Choice: Hidden Blades
Ninja Class: Assassin
Strengths:
• Stealth
• Speed
• Cunning
Weaknesses:
• Weak Body
• Elemental Vulnerability: Doton
• Sensitive to others emotions
Shinobi Skills:
• Ability to communicate with ghosts
• Near Immunity to Katon and Raiton elements
• Can activate [Stealth]. When in Stealth, ninja of the same rank will be unable to detect you (though certain doujutsu and clan abilities can tell exactly where you are). Ninja of higher rank can sense you, but will not know exactly where you are. You can only hide from Doujutsu and clan abilities (e.g. Sharingan and Inuzuka) when you are a Sannin/Kage.
• Can coat weapons with poison. (Must be approved in Custom Weapons thread)
• Cannot learn Medical jutsu
Chakra Element(s): 2
--> Primary: Water
--> Secondary: Wind
Chakra Color: Silver Mist
Total Chakra Points: 160 ________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformation Sensei: N/A
Team Mate: N/A
Team Mate: N/A ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformation Non-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
→Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (shadow Clone Technique)
Wind - Fuuton
→ Kaze Fuuchuufuyuu (Wind Levitation)
→ Yadama Furooseigyo (Projectile Control Skill)
→ Okuridashi Kaze (Propelling Winds)
→ Shinkuutai Naihatsu (Air Pocket Bursts)
→ Fuuton: Tei Hakusha (Wind Release: Air Riding)
→ Hikui Tenkuu Assaku no Jutsu (Low Air Pressure Technique)
→ Kaze no Yaiba (Wind Sword)
→ Tatsumaki Wana (Tornado Trap)
→ Kyoushu no Tosshin (Assassin’s Rush)
→ Boufuu Bakuhatsu Bunshin no Jutsu (Wind Explosion Clone)
→ Renkuudan (Steroid Blanks)
→ Akki Boufuu (Demon Gale)
→ Kaze Taihou (Air Cannon)
→ Currents
→ Light Info
→ Kaze no Yoroi (Armor of Wind)
Water - Suiton
→ Mizu Soujuu (Water Manipulation)
→ Kirigakure no Jutsu (Hidden Mist Technique)
→ Kiri Shikaku no Jutsu (Mist Vision Technique)
→ Mizuhada Bunshin No Jutsu (Water Body Clone Technique)
→ Suijinheki (Water Barrier)
→ Gekiryuu Chikara (Raging River Force)
→ Suirou no Jutsu (Prison Technique)
→ Suijouki no Jutsu (Steam Technique)
Kekkai Genkai - Bloodline
→ Bourei Choryuu (Apparition Accumulation)
→ Bakemon Kodachi (Phantom Shortsword)
→ Dogimo Tate (Spirit Buckler
→ Ekutopurazumu Boruto (Ectoplasm Bolt)
→ Amano Chariotto (Divine Chariot)
→ Biimu no Imi Ranpu (Beam of Holy Light)
________________________________________|A|pparel + |W|eapon |I|nformation
Weapon Type: Hidden Blade
Weapon Range: 10 inches
Special Properties: dipped in poison
Weapon Location: beneath the sleeves
http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=17485785&page=1
Headband Location | Style | Color:
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Flack Jacket Style | Color: N/A
Kunai Holster Location | Color: Left thigh / black
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: Right thigh / black
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: Back hip / black
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 3
Makibishi: 5
Shuriken: 10
Flash Bombs: 3 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformation Height: 5'8
Weight: 160
Body Build: (dont fill out yet)
Eye Color: Brown
Hair Color: Black
Family: None
Theme song: ________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformation S Rank: 2
A Rank: 5
B Rank: 12
C Rank: 4
D Rank: 20
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:53 pm
{Hey Zane, just thought I mention that you haven't filled out anything for your total chakra points which can be found here. Also, Cobra posted a new profile format in case you didn't know. I don't know if you have to follow it or not since this profile was created before the update but just so you know.}
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 6:57 pm
(Where do I put my chakra points? Cause I just found out I have 160 mrgreen )
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:00 pm
{Under the chakra color part of your profile. You already have the heading there, you just needed to add in a number...Congrates, that's like triple what my RPC has atm...}
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:02 pm
(Lol, duh...right in front of me. And lol, sorry, my bloodline gave me 40 extra points because of my ghost)
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:06 pm
{No problem, was just being sarcastic, couldn't help myself. mrgreen }
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:15 pm
Zane:You can fill out the 'Body Build' part... and I would suggest using the new format's jutsu layouts, but its not required.YOU ARE APPROVED!
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:20 pm
About that...what do I put exactly...cause I have an athletic build. Im' not exactly buff, or is there a link explaining this?
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 7:23 pm
It's totally whatever you want it to be, it's just character flavor.
...it's merely descriptive.
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:07 pm
 Full Name: Kaizen Minoru Uchiha
Nicknames: Kai
Age: 14
Birthdate: April 25
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Yes
Nindo: Only through struggle can we grow
Personality: Kaizen is a bit aloof around people he doesn't know, but once he has become friends with someone he is extremely loyal.
Behavior: Usually Kaizen will challenge people when he first meets them, believing that only during battle is one's true self revealed.
History: Kaizen was born in Kirigakure to Kyousou Masurao Uchiha, an influential member of the Kiri branch of the Uchiha clan. Kaizen's mother became very ill after giving birth to Kai, becoming bed-ridden for much of his child-hood. Kai was looked after mostly by his elder sister, Sosay Uchiha, who took the role of both sister and mother.
When Kai was five his mother finally succumbed to her illness, leaving Kai and Sosay under the sole care of their father. Kyousou sent Sosay away to live with their aunt and uncle, while he kept Kai in hopes that he could mold him into a tool to better the reputation of Kirigakure, and more importantly himself. Kaizen was forced to endure training that most Chunin shy away from, and when he failed he was punished, severely. But despite this Kai never complained, seeing each struggle as a chance to grow.
At the age of twelve Kai was sent to the academy of Kirigakure, where he soon rose to the top of his class. He proved himself time and again when it came to working alone, but he had trouble working in groups do to his lack of social skills. Kai finally graduated from the academy in record time, a feat that did not go unnoticed by some of the stronger shinobi of Kirigakure, namely Kiri's master assassin Zane Hajime.
Soon after graduating from the academy Kaizen was sent to the Sakubatsu dojo to train under Zane Hajime. Zane explained that he had been watching Kai's progress and was impressed, deciding to take Kaizen under his wind to teach him to walk the path of the assassin.
During his training under Zane, Kai met Axel Hajime, the younger brother of Zane, and it was an encounter to remember. Almost immediately upon arriving at the dojo, Axel and Kai began fighting, in accordance with Zane's will. Before the fight could be finished Zane was forced to step in, ending the fight before it truly ended. After the fight Kai was reunited with Sosay after years apart. It was a happy reunion and for the first time in a long time, Kai dropped his cold mask. But the reunion was a short one as Kai returned to his training.
After returning from a mission, Kai's sensei Zane went mad, losing himself to the power of his blood. In a fit of rage Zane attacked Axel in front of Kai. In an attempt to save Axel Kai attacked Zane, and was nearly killed in the process. But as he attacked his enraged sensei, Kai tapped into the power of his blood, activating the sharingan, and in so doing gaining the power to save Axel.
After Zane had regained control of himself, he took Kai and Axel on a mission to assassinate an enemy of kirigakure. After they had tracked down their target, they were interrupted by the oinin captain of Konoha, a member of the Uchiha clan. Before they could kill the leaf Uchiha however, he managed to escape. But they still had a mission to accomplish, and so Kai, Zane, and Axel worked together to take down their target. Kai killed his first target that day, proving himself as a true shinobi of Kirigakure.
A few months after the assassination mission Kai found himself in the Chunin Exams. He scored well on the written portion of the test, though his poor social skills became a factor in the second portion of the exam where the genin were split into teams. Despite this Kai's team was able to pass the second stage and proceed to the final round of the chunin exam. Kai fought a shape-shifting shinobi, but was unable to defeat her, to his disappointment.
Kai returned to Kirigakure, determined to better himself, sure that he had not passed the exam, but to his great surprise he was soon visited by Cobra, the proctor of the exam. He had passed the Chunin exam and was able to proceed along his path of the shinobi.
Village: Kirigakure
Rank: Chuunin ________________________________________|B|attle |I|nformationSummoning: N/A
Bloodline: Uchiha stage 1 (three tomoe)
Weapon of Choice: Daisho (Katana and Wakizashi paired together)
Ninja Class: Assassin
Strengths:
• Speed
• Stealth
• Agility
Weaknesses:
• Weak-Bodied
• Elemental Vulnerability: Wind
• Likes to work alone
• Arrogant
Shinobi Skills:
• Copy Jutsu
• Enhanced Movement Tracking
• Can activate [Stealth]. When in Stealth, ninja of the same rank will be unable to detect you (though certain doujutsu and clan abilities can tell exactly where you are). Ninja of higher rank can sense you, but will not know exactly where you are. You can only hide from Doujutsu and clan abilities (e.g. Sharingan and Inuzuka) when you are a Sannin/Kage.
• Can coat weapons with poison. (Must be approved in Custom Weapons thread)
• Cannot learn Medical jutsu
Chakra Element(s):
- Primary: Raiton
- Secondary:Katon (learned at Chuunin, can only learn up to 1 rank below current rank)
Chakra Color: Crimson________________________________________|S|quad |I|nformationSensei: Zane Hajime
Team Mate: Axel Hajime
Team Mate: ________________________________________|J|utsu |I|nformationNon-Elemental
→Henge no Jutsu (Transformation Technique)
→Bunshin no Jutsu (Clone Technique)
→Kawarimi no Jutsu (Substitution Jutsu)
→Kai - Dispell
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Lightning - Raiton
→Teikou no Kuntou (Electricity Resistance Training)learned
→Raiku Bunshin no Jutsu(Lightning Clone Jutsu)learned
→Nagare Isou no Jutsu(current transfer skill)learned
→Raiton: Yaiba no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Blade Technique) learned
→Raiton: Raikou Kousen no Jutsu (Lightning Release: Lightning Beam) learned
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________________________________________|T|aijutsu - |S|tyles , |M|aneuvers , and |A|bilities Taijutsu Styles Known:The Way of the Silent Blade [Yaiba no Mokumoku] stage 3
Primary Style:
ManeuversOshi-Ten Dageki (Pressure Point Strike): The hunter-nin can no longer look at an opponents body regularly. To their eyes, the opponent's body is riddled with the pin point bullseye's of the pressure point targets used in this stage of training. This technique can run from the chuunin level at twenty strikes, to the satsubatsu level of one-hundred and twenty strikes. The strikes begin at the lower parts of the body. Always. This is to ensure that the hunter works his way quickly up the opponents body, striking pressure points in order to not only paralyze limbs (10 Posts), but to rupture blood vessels, and redirect blood flow to different areas of the body to cause massive heart trauma. The pinacle of this technique is the five point heart strike. Initiated around the heart in a pentagram, this causes an individual's heart to literally cease pumping blood and drown itself with it, causing it to literally burst within five minutes (5 posts).
Abilities
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(Use the format above for Secondary and onward Taijutsu styles)
________________________________________|W|eapons - |C|ustom |W|eapons and associated |W|eapon |S|tyles # Custom Weapons Allowed:
Custom Weapon 1: _________ (attained at Genin/Chuunin/Jounin/Special Jounin/Sannin/Kage)
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon in the Custom Weapon Approval thread)
Weapon Type:
Weapon Range:
Weapon Description:
Special Properties:
Weapon Location:
Associated Weapon Style:
((Provide brief descriptions below. Also, provide a link to your approved weapon style in the Custom Taijutsu Approval thread)
Maneuvers
Techniques
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(Use the format above for any other Custom weapons / Weapon styles)
________________________________________|A|pparel
Headband Location | Style | Color: Waist | Sash | Black
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Flack Jacket Style | Color: Like pic, but black
Kunai Holster Location | Color: Left thigh
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Projectile Holster Location | Color: Right thigh
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Scroll Holster Location | Color: Lower Back
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Exploding Smoke Grenade: 5
Makibishi: 30
Shuriken: 20
Flash Bombs: 5 ________________________________________|C|haracter |I|nformationHeight: 5'4"
Weight: 117 lbs
Body Build: athletic (for an 11 year old anyway)
Eye Color: Black
Hair Color: White
Family: Father is a chunin of the village and has trained Kai since he was five in preparation for the academy. He has an older sister, Sosay Uchiha, but they were separated when they were younger, so they haven't seen each other in a while.
Theme song: 1000 Apologies________________________________________|M|ission |I|nformationS Rank:
A Rank:
B Rank:
C Rank:
D Rank:[imgright]http://i746.photobucket.com/albums/xx105/lancestrife/811619526_l.jpg[/imgright][align=center] [color=red][size=24]K[/size][/color][color=black][size=17]aizen[/size][/color] [color=red][size=24]M[/size][/color] [color=black][size=17]inoru[/size][/color][color=red][size=24]U[/size][/color][color=black][size=17]chiha[/size] [/color]
[color=red]改善 山崎實[/color]
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[align=right][i][color=red]"Only through struggle can we grow."[/color][/i]
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Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 10:01 pm
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