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 Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:27 am
xLieselotte You need a minimum of three flaws so you need to add one more.
But what do you mean she's a braniac? That means she's supposed to be intelligent to an annoying level right? But if she's so intelligent, then why does she fall into traps easily? Can you clarify it for me? good?
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:32 am
jugar conmigo xLieselotte You need a minimum of three flaws so you need to add one more.
But what do you mean she's a braniac? That means she's supposed to be intelligent to an annoying level right? But if she's so intelligent, then why does she fall into traps easily? Can you clarify it for me? good?
Make sure to put the profile in the Accepted character profile subforum. ^^
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 5:39 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Xxknight-of-shadowsxX lol, Like you know, depending on the circumstance beyond his control he becomes unstable, insecure and uncertain of what he should do Okay, that would work. I'm not sure "precarious" is the word you're looking for. but you can put that he easily becomes unstable and insecure in unfamiliar circumstances or situations. I believe that would work. ok i changed the one flaw and the misspelling in the likes
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 6:11 pm
Xxknight-of-shadowsxX StrawberryZ0mbie Xxknight-of-shadowsxX lol, Like you know, depending on the circumstance beyond his control he becomes unstable, insecure and uncertain of what he should do Okay, that would work. I'm not sure "precarious" is the word you're looking for. but you can put that he easily becomes unstable and insecure in unfamiliar circumstances or situations. I believe that would work. ok i changed the one flaw and the misspelling in the likes I'm sorry. >.< I'm really confused by this: -Absent Minded:is distracted easily as he grew up a hunter and is always alert. Are you saying that he's always alert, or that he is NOT always alert. Absent minded and alert are sort of opposites so I really can't figure out which you mean.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 9:40 pm
 Character Information:
Teacher Name: Ian [Easiest fake name he could find XD]
Species: Ghoul
Age: Has existed since Sumerian times, but he’s 35 in this life
Gender: Male
Appearance description: Ian has a lanky humanoid build and is about 6’2”. His skin is leathery and a dark grey color, and he often smells of blood and rotten corpses. His hands (and feet) are shaped like large claws that stretch out to about half a foot long. He always wears suits, ties, and glasses, making him a lot less scary looking.
Personality: Ian is actually extremely kind to others despite his frightening appearance. He is always polite and compliments everyone around him. He often laughs, even at the dumbest things, and when he starts laughing, it’s difficult for him to stop. Though he acts so cheerful all the time, he’s simply hiding his greedy motives. He doesn’t truly care much about others at all, but he sucks up to them so he could eventually take everything they have, be it money, blood, their families, or other such things.
Bio: The only things Ian remembers from his past lives is his name and his business strategies. Since the beginning of his latest life, he had been hanging out in an abandoned hospital on the outskirts of a small town, where a desert opens up. He dealt in underhanded and illegal things, such as selling and trapping various creatures as slaves or for anything valuable on them, such as their horns, wings, or skins. While looking for an easy place to snatch up victims, he found out about a school called Rosentale that accepts all sorts of creatures. Of course, he was drawn there in an instant. Somehow, he managed to worm his way into the school despite his illegal activities.
Skills and Abilities:
- Transformation: His appearance changes depending on whose corpse he eats. He can also turn into a hyena at will.
- Business: After being around for so long, he has become the ultimate corrupt businessman.
- Manipulation: He knows how to get on almost everyone’s good side, and he uses that to his advantage.
- Reincarnation: Every time he dies, he is reborn. The cycle will only end when someone guesses his original name correctly then kills him.
- Curses: DO NOT SIGN HIS CONTRACTS. He has the ability to put severe curses on people that could kill or harm them and others greatly. The only restriction is they have to have signed an agreement, but he is a master at making and taking advantage of loopholes, so beware.
- Regeneration: Can regenerate fairly quickly as long as he’s not decapitated or burned alive.
- Strong Sense of Smell: You don’t need to be dead for him to smell you a mile away.
Character Flaws:
- Greedy as all hell
- Selfish
- Uncaring
- Liar [well, he says he only stretches the truth…]
- Judgmental
- Manipulative
- Physically frail and weak
- Easily distracted
- A total suck-up
Sexual Orientation: I have no clue. He’s a necrophiliac. The gender doesn't matter to him.
Status: Forever Alone
Occupation: Underhanded Business Techniques teacher [Economics to anyone not in the class]
When are the best days for you to be online?: Every. Day. [I have less homework on Tuesdays and Wednesdays though… =D]
Likes:
- Money
- Dead bodies
- Graveyards
- Night
- Deserts
- Things that he finds funny
- Blood
- Documents of all sorts
- Music
- Chewing on things [mostly flesh or gum]
Dislikes:
- Light [doesn’t kill him, but it hurts his eyes]
- The living
- Fire
- Useless creatures [basically anything that won’t fetch him more than 50 bucks on the black market]
- Honesty [Overrated.]
Extra Information:
- His original name from his first life is Gallu. If someone somehow finds out, they will most likely die before they even get the chance to say it.
- He always requires knowing one’s name before dealing with them at all. Names are a very powerful thing.
- If you guess that his name is Rumplestiltskin, he will eat your face.
- His tongue is black. And long.
- Get too close and he may try to eat you. He wants your flesh. XD
- His laugh is high-pitched and very annoying.
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:01 pm
Suzanne's found another crush! 8D It's his teeth.
Now he has a lot of abilities and skills. I'm going to trust you to be responsible with this character since you leveled out the abilities with flaws. =O
But first I would like you to at least give me some of his weaknesses. He won't be able to die, but there should be something that other people can do to protect themselves from him. ^^
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:11 pm
Sorry about that. XD I only put so many abilities because I did a lot of research on ghouls of different mythologies and such to try to make it as accurate as possible... His abilities are mostly useless though. There aren't just corpses lying around for him to eat, his regeneration is easily stopped with a little bit of fire, his curses only work if the other person agrees to them [and who in their right mind would?], and his smell... that doesn't even help anything, really. The only thing he really has going for him is his manipulation, and not everyone is easily manipulated. It's completely their choice if they listen to him or not.
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Posted: Sun Feb 26, 2012 10:19 pm
ChocolateXCheese Sorry about that. XD I only put so many abilities because I did a lot of research on ghouls of different mythologies and such to try to make it as accurate as possible... His abilities are mostly useless though. There aren't just corpses lying around for him to eat, his regeneration is easily stopped with a little bit of fire, his curses only work if the other person agrees to them [and who in their right mind would?], and his smell... that doesn't even help anything, really. The only thing he really has going for him is his manipulation, and not everyone is easily manipulated. It's completely their choice if they listen to him or not. Yup! Just making sure! XD Then he's accepted! He can stay in Monochrome Midnight! =D His class will be on Second Period: Wednesday.
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 12:47 pm
StrawberryZ0mbie Xxknight-of-shadowsxX StrawberryZ0mbie Xxknight-of-shadowsxX lol, Like you know, depending on the circumstance beyond his control he becomes unstable, insecure and uncertain of what he should do Okay, that would work. I'm not sure "precarious" is the word you're looking for. but you can put that he easily becomes unstable and insecure in unfamiliar circumstances or situations. I believe that would work. ok i changed the one flaw and the misspelling in the likes I'm sorry. >.< I'm really confused by this: -Absent Minded:is distracted easily as he grew up a hunter and is always alert. Are you saying that he's always alert, or that he is NOT always alert. Absent minded and alert are sort of opposites so I really can't figure out which you mean. Ah, lol ive fixed it again, really on this flaw thing aren`t you? xD
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 1:01 pm
Xxknight-of-shadowsxX StrawberryZ0mbie Xxknight-of-shadowsxX StrawberryZ0mbie Xxknight-of-shadowsxX lol, Like you know, depending on the circumstance beyond his control he becomes unstable, insecure and uncertain of what he should do Okay, that would work. I'm not sure "precarious" is the word you're looking for. but you can put that he easily becomes unstable and insecure in unfamiliar circumstances or situations. I believe that would work. ok i changed the one flaw and the misspelling in the likes I'm sorry. >.< I'm really confused by this: -Absent Minded:is distracted easily as he grew up a hunter and is always alert. Are you saying that he's always alert, or that he is NOT always alert. Absent minded and alert are sort of opposites so I really can't figure out which you mean. Ah, lol ive fixed it again, really on this flaw thing aren`t you? xD It does say on the profile form that we are. =3 We've just had a lot of people come in and have perfect characters that try to hog the spotlight with their supposed awesomeness. And we try to avoid that by ensuring every character has their flaws and weaknesses. Anyway, he is approved. He will be staying in Malachite Dorm. Please be sure to post a character thread in the appropriate forum. =3 You also need to select a class schedule and check the school system thread to find out what period we are on today. We are on Day 1 of Week 2. Let me know if you have any questions.
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Elen_Gilthoniel Vice Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 27, 2012 1:14 pm
Yes ma'am and i will thank you razz
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 7:49 pm
Character Information:
Student Name: Evalu Fortel
Species: Human
Age: 17
Gender: Female
Appearance description: What portrays on the picture is just fine.
Personality: Evavlu is very affectionate; kind hearted, friendly about everyone's happiness although prefers be lonesome. She can be a little to sensitive about things which is why she loves to hang out by herself around nature instead of people. But when she's around others she'll gladly be nice to them and socialize when someone decides to talk to her otherwise she's quiet. Even though Evalu is obligated to be likeable, she has low confidence, self a steam and is self conscious about almost everything. For example, how she looks, her weight, what's she's wearing mostly small things.
Evavlu isn't perky but a soft spoken sweet heart and has a soft high pitch tone voice
Bio: Evalu was raised in small town although in this small town everyone was at least judged by two or more sassy people. It all starts when your in middle school, introduced to new face new personality. Evalu didn't have that many friends in middle school, she found everyone either jealous of her or thought they wouldn't get along with her. She hated middle school, when reached high school it wasn't as bad, but the same people were still there.
The symptom of being a loner caused Evalu to look into other things like being around nature, and watching the seasonal area change. She found peace and quiet more suitable then being around a crowd although every so often she'd fin people like her around the forest and an area with lots of plants.
Skills and Abilities: Evavlu doesn't have large abilities that's dangerous of the sort, the only thing she can due that's not of the ordinary human is the ability envision glances of the feature and most of the time doesn't realize when her vision come true because their only parts of what's going to happen.
Character Flaws: The first flaw is Evalu can sometimes forget to eat food for days which causes her to have mood swings Another flaw is her lack of honesty, Evalu never expresses her emotions unless she's happy other wise she isolates herself until she feels better. The final flaw is her lack of confidence and self a steam, she finds every talented and beautiful besides her self.
Sexual Orientation: Unsure
Status: single
Likes: (at least 3)
- Forest, nature like things.
- Candy
- Movies
- Drawing
Dislikes: (at least 3)
- Lemonade
- Reading
- Being judged
Extra Information: (optional)
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:13 pm
The first flaw about her forgetting how to eat which causes her to sleep anywhere can't really be considered a flaw. Forgetting to eat causes a lot of complications, but all you really addressed was that it makes her sleep. To make her not eating a valid flaw, you should do something similar to "because she often forgets to eat, she's always hungry which causes her to be cranky."
If you fix that, she can be accepted.
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:18 pm
 Character Information:
Student Name: Louis Caros
Species: Human/Wizard
Age: 17
Gender: Male
Appearance description: (optional) Louis has brown hair, and has heterochromia, his left eye green, and his right eye brown. About 5'9" with a fair build.
Personality: Louis is a very kind, but slightly strange person. He has many verbal tics, such as making up his own words, or speaking in an archaic manner. He values friendship and love, and really despises people who manipulate others. Louis has a fairly happy demeanor most of the time, it isn't very easy to make him sad or depressed.
Bio: Louis was the son of a merchant couple. His parents both had minor magical prowess, and both wanted Louis to become some money making profession, more or less so he could support them afterwards.
However, Louis became more infatuated with his slight magical ability from a young age. While not a genius at using magic, he loved studying it, even if it never really helped him get better. His first magical 'breakthrough' was the creation of a portal to a small pocket dimension, which he used in his teen years as a storage for school, so he didn't need to carry heavy books around and so he would have a place to hide anything he would have to give to his parents. People around the school were already suspicious of Louis, mostly because of his odd speech and behavior. Then later into his school life, he discovered another 'dimension' while in class, and allowed a few mice to go loose into the room. He was subsequently expelled from his school, and, after moving, his parents sent him to Rosentale.
Skills and Abilities: Louis is a wizard, and a self described 'dimensionalist', though he made up the word himself. His primary ability is to open up dimensional holes, about 9 inches in diameter. He currently can only open two different 'dimensions':
An empty dimension, that he uses in place of a locker/backpack and generally keeps his own things in.
An animal dimension, that he discovered while experimenting, tends to let out animals small enough to fit through the hole, such as rabbits, mice, etc.
(Note: There are very very rare occasions where a mythological animal of varying size/danger might come out, but this is a very unlikely occurrence.)
Character Flaws:
- Louis tends to be a bit overbearing when in conversations, and will sometimes overtake others without realizing it.
- Louis tends to act a bit too attached to people at times, which can come across as him being pushy, accentuated by the fact he tends to talk about very personal things with people whom he only met recently.
- Has little sense of social protocol (Even though he does speak in a fancy way, acts in a casual manner around people in a higher position.)
- Is unorganized to the point of being very forgetful of things planned in advance.
- Has a tendency of doing odd things at times they shouldn't be done.
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Status: Single
Likes: (at least 3)
- Theatre/Plays/Stories
- Fancy Clothing
- Conversing
- Music
- Knowing Things
- Gemstones
Dislikes: (at least 3)
- Manipulators
- Arguing
- Bullying
- Close-Mindedness
Extra Information:
- Has an obvious spanish accent.
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Posted: Tue Feb 28, 2012 8:45 pm
xLieselotte The first flaw about her forgetting how to eat which causes her to sleep anywhere can't really be considered a flaw. Forgetting to eat causes a lot of complications, but all you really addressed was that it makes her sleep. To make her not eating a valid flaw, you should do something similar to "because she often forgets to eat, she's always hungry which causes her to be cranky."
If you fix that, she can be accepted. I edited the flaw..
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