That Tamer PA is entirely too strong for a tamer PA.
Lady Caprinet
That first PA actually breaks the rule about PAs not increasing things by a rank.
Dexterous Prince
Do me a favor and just change these pa's to give you an extra buki slot, then add them into your limitations on your profile. That's functionally what they're doing, and that makes it easier to track things in case it becomes necessary. After that you';re good.
Toryu Naminosaki
Pending, discussion about your PAs have been raised.
Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2018 3:33 pm
So for the first, gonna be a no on the grounds that you can't increase something supremely.
I dont see any rules regarding implants. Perhaps that should be discussed in crew?
Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2018 4:29 pm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Isla Nickname: Isla de Muerta Age: 18 Birthdate: 8/31 Gender: Female
Height: 5'2 Weight: 110 lbs
Nindo: "I am who I need to be" Personality: Isla is a girl of many faces. As she does her best to blend in, she can be the most bubbly girl or, inversely, grave and serious. She acts like she does to make those around her more at ease and trusting. In reality, her true personality is one of little expression. She feels, it's just that it hides behind her mask of professionalism. Being a shinobi is a job, and acting unprofessional in this job is not something she will be a party too.
Village: Konoha Title: Genin Rank: D Rank First Class: Bloodline ____Discipline → Bloodbender Second Class: Bloodline ____Discipline → Blood Knight
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Kūton
Chakra Pool: 260 Stamina Pool: 240 Chakra Element: Fuuton, Raiton Chakra Color: Dark Purple Chakra Materialization: Purple swirling tendrils
Reductions: • -2 to Bloodline Jutsu • -1 to Fuuton and Raiton • -1 to General Ninjutsu Personal Attributes: • Dexterous Shinobi- Through Slight of Hand, Isla and draw, move and hide multiple knives all over her body without anyone who is not explicitly aware of this fact realizing it. • Master of the Knife- Learning the Sobagai Deba Sentou Style does not count towards Isla's Bukijutsu limit- 1 Extra Buki Style in Practice • 1 Extra Locked Formless • 10 free training (1 post minimum to learn) Gift 2. • Elemental Addition: +1 elemental affinity. [Mirroring limits unavailable. C.K.G.-unusable. Double Nin's Spec bonus unavailable.] (e.g. no innate slots given) Gift 3. • Santa's Library #4: 10 nin • Kiri Halloween PA: Isla's Experience with the spooky fuuin has inspired her to learn some and gives her a -1 reduction to ninjutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両 0 AC: 1,800
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → • {Second Tree Here} || → • {Third Tree Here} || → • {Fourth Tree Here} || →
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Titles • {Job} || → • {Job} || →
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Daggers Weapon Range: 1 foot Weapon Weight: 1 lb Weapon Size: small Weapon Location: Hip/Forearm
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 2 Smoke Bombs • 5 Kunai • 2 Exploding Tags • Feed Bag [ X ] • Pumpkin • Head Donut
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
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Fuuton •
Kūton • Glistening Sword [ Rank B ] X ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u {Your first Type's name} •
{Your second Type's name} • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 02 Locked Formless: Soft Physical • Locked Formless: Knives • Slots Used • _______ → || [X]
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Isla comes from a very traditional household. They recognize and hold true to the old ways of the shinobi; honor, family and tradition was the themes of her household. So, too, were the older ways of the shinobi. Striking out in the shadows while being a lady in the light. She brought this mindset with her to the academy. While her fellows were gawking about the big flashy ninjutsu to their time, she would sit quietly. As her parents were both ANBU agents, she too learned how to operate as an agent. Becoming who she had to be to survive and thrive in unfamiliar environments. Now that she is graduated, she will take this to practice in the land of fire.
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2018 7:53 pm
I edited the PA
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Posted: Thu Jan 25, 2018 11:54 pm
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Approved.
The Wolf of Asgard
Approved twice.
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Approved.
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Approved.
KibitzRajas
Pending: Your character would have 9 ninjutsu and genjutsu slots regardless of your pa, since you're double performer class. Also with your pas, you can make them give five each, rather than two. If you do that, then you will start off with fourteen nin and genjutsu.
Fiitra
Is it alright now? Pending. You can only have two taijutsu slots, since one comes from the class and the second comes from your pa.
Should be fine now. Approved.
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Reapplying because I do not like how my old tai build works now. Switching up my build to something else.
Notable Changes: - Class change: Now Buki/Bloodline - Added Bloodline: Bakuton [Pending Approval] - Changed PAs - Removed 1 tai style to accommodate for new learning restrictions
Here is a link to the original profile if you want to check it out and make sure everything is correct
I expect to have issues with one of my PAs, but please take into consideration my concerns with the inherent issues with the nature of the physical bakuton tree. A passive ninjutsu was passed that performs this task, but as this does not actually utilize chakra, merely changes the nature of a subset of jutsu, I do not feel custom jutsus would be the proper place to apply for this.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Shion Moro Nickname: n/a Age: 15 Birthdate: Aug 5 Gender: Female
Height: 5'2" Weight: 110lbs
Nindo: still searching Personality: Shion is a rather hot-headed individual. She is quick to anger, usually over the smallest of sleights. In addition to her hot streak, she is also petty and really insecure about her faults. Shion will usually make a snippy, immature remark if someone says something she disagrees with, albeit under her breath. Due to recent events, Shion has taken on a bit of a contempt for authority figures. All the negatives aside, Shion is a nice person, once you crack her shell. She's more than willing to talk things out and is actually a pretty good listener once she gets to know you... You just have to get over her many irritating quirks first.
Description : Shion is of a rather small stature, standing much shorter than her peers. Her petite build is topped with a round baby-face, lightly sprinkled with freckles, and embedded with 2 large hazel eyes, all capped off with a mess of short, auburn hair.
Village: Kumogakure Title: Genin Rank: D-rank First Class: Bukijutsu ____Discipline → Mystic Hero Second Class: Bloodline ____Discipline → Blood Knight
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Bakuton [Pending Approval]
Chakra Pool: 305 Stamina Pool: 395 Chakra Element: Fire, Earth, Bakuton Chakra Color: Muddy Orange Chakra Materialization: In situations where tensions are running high, usually in combat, Shion's chakra flares to life as two flame-like bursts from her eyes, reflecting her relentlessly aggressive fighting style. This does nothing to hinder her sight, however. It is entirely cosmetic.
Strengths: • Agile • Flexible fighting style Weaknesses: • easily tilted • small framed Fears: • losing any sense of worth • large bodies of water
Reductions: • Bloodline -1 • Bukijutsu -1
Personal Attributes: • No Time For Tricks: Believing Genjutsu is a cheap trick employed by those who cant handle a real fight, Shion has devoted all her study time to Ninjutsu. This PA converts all her allotted Genjutsu slots into Ninjutsu slots.
• Relentless Assault: Shion's fiery passion fuels her every strike, making her attacks all the more potent. This PA makes all of her Physical Formless techniques count as Complex for collisions.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 1850 Advancement Credit: 5000 Technique Points: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 1 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → n/a • {Second Tree Here} || → n/a • {Third Tree Here} || → n/a • {Fourth Tree Here} || → n/a
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Titles • Medical || → n/a • Botany || → n/a
Job Missions Complete: E Rank :: 5 Medical D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: E - Rank • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e Soft Physical • D - rank • {C-rank} + {Training Link} • {B-rank} + {Training Link} • {A-rank} + {Training Link} • {S-rank} + {Training Link} • {S+rank} + {Training Link}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Shion's story is nothing special. She didn't come from a noble family or an honored clan, nor does she have any heavy motivations for becoming a ninja. Her family wasn't slain in the dead of night, nor does she owe any sort of life debts. Instead Shion comes from a lowly family in the outskirt village of Hanabari, in the Cloud Country. She simply became a ninja because its what she wanted to do. Her past might not be anything special, but who knows what the future holds?
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2018 4:44 am
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So for the first, gonna be a no on the grounds that you can't increase something supremely.
The second is too close to samurai.
Toryu Naminosaki
These new ones ok?
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So for the first, gonna be a no on the grounds that you can't increase something supremely.
The second is too close to samurai.
Toryu Naminosaki
These new ones ok?
+ approved
Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2018 10:08 pm
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Due to changes to the guild system regarding ninjutsu's involvement with DRs I was offered permission by Mattysandwich to resubmit one of my character's PAs.
Previous
• Magnetic Propulsion: Objects that are magnetically manipulated by Ada move moderately faster and have moderately increased impact strength than if used/wielded normally. However, Ada's chakra and stamina reserves each suffer a permanent -50 decrease (after calculating amounts granted by class or other bonuses).
New
• Martial Magnetism: Magnetically manipulated objects within 10yds of Ada may be utilized in known bukijutsu/taijutsu if the object is of appropriate form for the type of technique. Must pay the cost the technique as chakra. Must spend +1 post per rank of the technique to learn to use it through magnetism.
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Lady Caprinet
Pending Spooky ghost time does too many things, and is also really strong in a few of the things it does do. Scale it back pls.
Regalina Kaicho
Pending This is going to be a no. It might be better if you deduct any and all dr attached to using the skills this way, maybe, but as it stands this isn't going to be approved.
Posted: Sat Jan 27, 2018 2:43 pm
I think I fixed it now =w=
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▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Ayame Araki Nickname: - Age: 18 Birthdate: 4-13 Gender: Female
Height: 5'6'' Weight: 118lbs
Nindo: -- Personality: Disciplined through her beliefs and her upbringing, Ayame has a lot of self-control with herself and her habits to do what she must and not what she shouldn't. She's the living opposite of a lazy person, always taking the initiative over her own desires. Expressing interest in different cultures, it's become a guilty pleasure of her's to experience something new in the world.
As someone who is intrigued by the unknown, she is also well interested in knowledge and information no matter how mundane or useless it may seem - for it is that knowledge that keeps history going. She's always interested in the stories of scholars, minstrels and even a religious devout, always seeking to learn new tales of the world and other views opposite of her own. With others she's not afraid to ask another person what they may have seen or heard, be it rumor or an elaborate tale to factual knowledge and topics worthy of study. Sometimes however, it's the factual inaccuracies that irk her the most if she feels confident in knowing what may be true.
She is a proud woman and is not afraid to admit as such, yet this often cuts both ways - not always in the right ways. As a person she holds great pride in knowledge and any feats she may accomplish yet criticism is one thing she remains sensitive to. Ayame is constantly striving for a sense of bettering herself and sometimes when she feels she has done something right it may very well not seem as such to others. For her proud stance, she's quite conscious of other's opinions as well.
Village: Leaf Title: Genin Rank: B-Rank First Class: Bukijutsu X ____Discipline → Mystic Hero Samurai: The user is much like a hybrid warrior, focusing on mixing ninjutsu into their personal arsenal. Through their great devotion to this path the user can cast ninjutsu without hand seals while wielding a weapon, D at D-rank, C at C-rank, B at B-rank, A at A-rank, and S at S-rank. These techniques maintain the same description and criteria to use, as well as require the same amount of time to mold the chakra through the weapon as would be needed to perform hand seals, meaning the techniques are not instantaneously cast. They also cannot be molded during another attack, meaning you cannot be swinging a sword and using this discipline to charge a ninjutsu at the same time. This also gives you extra ninjutsu slots, starting at 2 per rank.
Second Class: Medical ____Discipline → Specialist ~ Offensive Specialist: The user, choosing to specialize in either healing, offensive, or supplementary medical techniques, gains a great boost to their chakra control in that area. At C-rank, they gain a -5 chakra reduction to perform techniques in their specialty. At B-rank, -10, at A-rank, -15, and at S-rank, -20. To clarify, they they gain a -5 chakra reduction every rank, to a maximum of -20 at S-rank. All medical jutsu can still be learned by both sides, but the chakra control only applies to the chosen side.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: The Raigyo Clan, the Kihakugan XXXXSource: X
Chakra Pool: 420 | +50 [470] Stamina Pool: 245 | +100 | +50 --> [395] Chakra Element: Wind, Fire, Floral, Eisei Chakra Color: White (Base) | Pink, Red, Purple to Violet Chakra Materialization: Ayame's Chakra fluctuates when used in jutsu of any sort, it takes a visual appearance of a white fog when released outside of any specialized technique. The chakra fog is harmless when released and only proves to be a visual effect. Yet, when she uses her Kekkei Genkai to influence it, it acts as a medium for her Emotives and follows the PA: Enchanting Aura. Her chakra visibly ebbs and flows with her usual movement when she chooses to create a visual flair with a translucent trail flowing with her shifting between blue, red, violet and pink. Ayame's eyes also change slightly when exerting her chakra relating to her bloodline or elemental techniques with hues of violet and pink.
Strengths: • Adaptable and diverse combat -- from blade to jutsu and illusions. • Potent manipulation techniques, emotives and illusions to those in eyesight. Weaknesses: • Overspecialized opponents, her strengths can be offset by a more focused opponent. • While her element is Fire, her Flowers are still naturally weak to Flames (both chakra and mundane). Fears: • Arachnophobia & Other similar creatures. (Scorpions, Bugs, Etc) • Achievemephobia. (Fear of Failure)
Reductions: • Learn Ninjutsu & Genjutsu [1] post faster. (Bloodline) • Learn Medical techniques three (3) posts faster. • Learn Bukijutsu one [3] post faster. (Bukijutsu)
Personal Attributes: • Natural Flexibility -> Ayame can utilize the simpler arts of illusions due to her clan's natural tendency to them. Gains [10] Genjutsu slots.
• Enchanting Aura -> In addition to the Pheromones and Scents of the Raigyo Clan, Ayame's chakra nature is intoxicating to others even without a medium. When manifesting chakra, the aura can be used as a catalyst for Raigyo Emotives that would otherwise require a medium of flowers. Using it in this matter becomes a Complex cost, taking Stamina as well as Chakra. It cannot affect further than Fifty feet, beyond this range the aura lacks any effect. Use of Emotives and Floral jutsu outside of the Chakra Manifestation's effect are independent of one another. This doesn't create or utilize any floral jutsu on its own, only acting as a medium for Emotives.
• Dojutsu usage allows for Eyesight based Ninjutsu for 50% extra the cost, additionally the user's sight's unable to be picked up by another Dojutsu such as the Sharingan. (Bloodline Perk)
Halloween Event 2017 Gained 1 Buki Style +50 chakra & stamina 1 x Useless KeyUsed
15,000 points & 5,000 Ryo -> AC Conversion [15,000]
Thanksgiving -10 Free Training Posts [0/10] -1 Crafting Title [Unused]
Christmas 2017 • Variable Technique [1x]: Allows a rank-stated technique to be turned into an x-rank technique. • 1 extra Locked Formless Style (max 2 locked styles; in that case, 2 extra Formless slots are gained instead) • The Good Host PA: 1/2 off all implant chakra requirements. (multiplicative with duplicates) • Santa's Library #4: 1 Buki style • +100 Stamina
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 5,000両 AC: 15,000
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Katana Weapon Range: 63 cm Weapon Weight: 1.2 kg Weapon Size: Medium Weapon Location: Hip • Generic & Basic Katana
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Basic Clothing & Personal Jewelry • 15 Shuriken • Utility Knife
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u ✺ Null ✦ Maruton [
➣ E Rank
▹ Kawarimi no Jutsu [Substitution Technique] ▹ Kai [Release] ▹
➣ D Rank
▹ Shunshin no Jutsu [Body Flicker Technique] ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
➣ C Rank
▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
➣ B Rank
▹ Kage Bunshin no Jutsu [Shadow Clone Technique] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
➣ A Rank
▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
➣ S Rank
▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
✺ Wind ✦ Fuuton
➣ E Rank
▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
➣ D Rank
▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
➣ C Rank
▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
➣ B Rank
▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
➣ A Rank
▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
➣ S Rank
▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
✺ Fire ✦ Katon
➣ E Rank
▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
➣ D Rank
▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X ▹ Japanese Name [English Name] X
▹Advance of Steel ~ B [Simple] ▹Brush Stroke ~ B [Spirit] ▹Disarming ~ X [Simple] ▹Hydra Strike ~ B [Spirit] ▹Illusory Double ~ B [Complex] ▹Swordslinger ~ B [Simple]
➣ Stage 5
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➣ Stage 6
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▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s XXXXXXSlots Total: 00 // 02
Locked Formless ° Katana
• D Rank - Base - Body Rank • C Rank - Trained/Pre-Level X • B Rank - Trained/Pre-LevelX • A Rank - Not Trained • S Rank - Not Trained
Locked Formless ° Yumi - Long Bow
• D Rank - Base - Body Rank • C Rank - Body-Rank • B Rank - Body-Rank • A Rank - Not Trained • S Rank - Not Trained
Formless Slots
° Style Here
• D Rank - Not Trained • C Rank - Not Trained • B Rank - Not Trained • A Rank - Not Trained • S Rank - Not Trained
° Style Here
• D Rank - Not Trained • C Rank - Not Trained • B Rank - Not Trained • A Rank - Not Trained • S Rank - Not Trained
° Style Here
• D Rank - Not Trained • C Rank - Not Trained • B Rank - Not Trained • A Rank - Not Trained • S Rank - Not Trained
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The history of Ayame is one with the Araki family, a once apart of the Raigyo clan from the Tea Country. The Araki name instead has settled and has more roots in the Land of Fire than it does the home country of the bloodline. Few in the family have the lineage, often it skipping a generation as it had with Ayame's parents while her power awakened with its fullest. A family of medics, merchants and craftsmen, the Araki are a peculiar mix of all walks of life for the civilian while few become shinobi -- usually those who have the kekkei genkai in their blood. Much of the family were botanists and religious devout with the minority actually trained soldiers and shinobi.
Ayame had lived an austere lifestyle for much of her childhood all the way up to her early admission to the academy to become a full fledged genin. She recieved the basic classes for education, tactics and ninjutsu arts while later in the years she learned more specialized knowledge such as illusionary arts, her bloodline and basic swordsmanship. After graduation from the academy, Ayame had gone on her way to become an official genin of the Leaf Village.
Notable Changes -Used Respec from Buki-Rework to change to Mystic Hero. -Changed Performer to Medical. -Adjusted Slots, Reductions and Limitations as Necessary -No Jutsu lost from change, didn't have any trained. -PA #1 Changed to acquire 10 Genjutsu slots in lieu of 1 Bukijutsu Style -Chakra and Stamina adjustments.
