Alright, thanks for the changes, the final verdict should arrive soon but I'm posting now to keep you in the light of recent events.
Chak/Stam are fine Slot numbers should follow as: 6 Nin 2 Taijutsu (+1 from your PA) 1 Buki jutsu
You may start out with 1 basic weapon, rather than two. Your choice which one you keep and you will be able to buy the second later in your playtime!
In regards to your Archery PA, if you could add on how that effects your draw strength on attacks. Descriptive increases and what not. I know little of the Uwame style.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Higashi Hyūga Nickname: Higa, The Hyūga Prodigy Age: 15 Birthdate: August 21 Gender: Male
Height: 5'6" Weight: 104lb
Nindo: "Fate is predetermined~!" Personality: Indoctrinated into manifest destiny; Proud, Confident, perhaps Arrogant? A man of honorable shinobi nature; but plagued by the horrors of being a teenager in a society where failure is not an option.
Village: Konohagakure Title: Genin Rank: D First Class: Taijutsu ____Discipline → Berserker: Your external training and devotion to taijutsu has allowed you to have moderately increased Strength and Fortitude, making attacks overwhelm physical taijutsu techniques of the same rank or lower. Additionally, your hardened body allows you to utilize your physical taijutsu techniques to negate ninjutsu techniques of the same rank or below. Second Class: Taijutsu ____Discipline → Brawler: Your taijutsu is just one side of your skill, as you are also versed in utilizing ninjutsu as well. Your taijutsu body moderately increases your Speed and Reflexes, while at the same time granting you an additional 2 ninjutsu techniques per level, then an extra 4 ninjutsu per rank after jounin.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Hyūga Clan
Chakra Pool: 150 Stamina Pool: 350 Chakra Element: Water, Wind Chakra Color: Turquoise Chakra Materialization: Stock
Passive Status Increases: • Strength ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Speed ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Reflex ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Fortitude ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?}
Strengths: • Kekkei Genkai • Unique Taijutsu Weaknesses: • Bukijutsu • Teamwork Fears: • Failing his father • Being Drown
Reductions: • Learn Taijutsu one (1) post faster • Learn Taijutsu one (1) post faster • All Hyuuga learn taijutsu one [1] post faster. • All Hyuuga learn maruton ninjutsu [1] one post faster.
Personal Attributes: • Ninjutsu Mastery: Gain [1] alteration style • Taijutsu Prodigy: Gain [1] additional locked formless style
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 02 • Alteration Style: : 00/01 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 02
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: {Sword, spear, etc.} Weapon Range: {Its reach. In inches/centimeters please} Weapon Weight: {How heavy it is. In pounds/kilograms please} Weapon Size: {What ar ethe dimensions?} Weapon Location: {Where it is stored} •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Kunai x 5 • Shuriken x 10 • Shinobi Headband
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Fuuton •
Suiton •
Gentle Fist Technique • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u {Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance} •
{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance} • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information} Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬
Born into the prominent Hyuga Clan, Higashi Hyuga was the 11th child of Famed Taijutsu Master Hiroshi Hyuga. After rigorously training for the majority of his life, Higashi is now a young man beginning to make a name for himself as a shinobi, and to further the glory of the Hyuga Clan.
Posted: Thu Oct 05, 2017 12:23 pm
BIG GUCCI EDO
Yea so I am going to go ahead and ask you to write a legitimate personality. Four words is not enough to define a characters state of being. Come on man, you can do better.
Character name:Kanzaki Uchiha Personal Attribute: "Every 10 Shinobi Chef missions completed grants 1 Formless Slot to be used for Hashi no Heisei." WTF is this from?: Recruitment Drive "1 Mission/Job PA" Reward
Hurrak
BlackFruity
Tenshuyami
STAMPED! (means approved) [if you cap it at 60 missions]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Keiko Nara Nickname: Kei Age: 17 Birthdate: October 13th Gender: Female
Height: 5'7" Weight: 158lbs
Nindo: Personality: Taking mostly after her mother, Keiko can be rather stern and sometimes overbearing. Luckily, she also had some father's traits in her. She can become highly passionate of something she loves and motivated to do it but sometimes she needs a nudge or a push off of a cliff to do so. Village: Sunagakure Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank First Class:Bloodline ____Discipline → Blood Knight: Your bloodline techniques possess greater power, allowing them to overwhelm techniques of the same rank, and preventing them from succumbing to elemental weaknesses of techniques the same rank. Can cast bloodline techniques through one-handed seals. Second Class:Ninjutsu ____Discipline → Elemental Dual Wielder: Your maximum chakra pool is increased by {10} points. The ninjutsu limit provided by this class is split among both of your chosen elements. ( At D rank, rather than having a total of [ 06 ] ninjutsu slots for Katon or Suiton techniques, this class provides you with [ 06 ] slots for Katon and and [ 06 ] for Suiton techniques. This is specific to slots gained by the Ninjutsu Class. Any ninjutsu slots received from other sources are filled at your discretion, but are not mirrored between elements. ) Maruton counts as an element, and receives slots the same as each element.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline:Nara
Chakra Pool: 355 Stamina Pool: 145 Chakra Element: Raiton & Fuuton Chakra Color: Black Chakra Materialization: Appears as scales on her skin
Strengths: • Shadows • Ninjutsu Weaknesses: • Genjutsu • Bight Lights Fears: • Silk (She hates the feel of silk fiber stuff...) • Chickens (The alive ones...They are ridiculously aggressive.)
Reductions: • Learn Bloodline 1 post faster • Learn Ninjutsu 2 post faster Personal Attributes: • ShadeArt: Can store a single technique of Nara origin upon the skin or an object, similar to graffiti. This technique can be utilized as a free Activation, but only one can exist at any one time. • Shallow: Kei trained her bloodline so many times, she figured out a way to reduce the cost of her chakra when casting the Nara techniques and anything related to shadow jutsu. [ -10 ] Chakra reduction.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Bo Staff - Made of Cypress Wood Weapon Range: 7 1/2 to 8 ft Weapon Weight: 1lb Weapon Size: An inch diameter, 6ft Weapon Location: • Either holding it or strapped to her back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 5 Kunai • 5 Shurikens • Tan shoulder bag, a ft wide and half foot tall with one fuzzy blanket. Usually carries her bearded dragon or skink or gila monster in it.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Raiton •
Fuuton •
Nara • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u {Your first Type's name} •
{Your second Type's name} • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Keiko had what many call, a decent and normal life. Though what happens at home.. Keiko actually actively avoids taking her friends or classmates into her home. Why would that be? It can be quite a show, but to her, it's embarrassing. Her mother, was loud and boastful woman and worries so much to each and every stranger that had stepped into the home. Even had gone far to baby them right there on the spot. She was also a civilian. Her father on the other hand, was a quiet man and liked to laze about though he does avoid coming home. He loves his wife very deeply but sometimes he needed a break from her worrisome ways. Keiko had picked up both personalities from them, although, luckily she controls her personality to an extent because worrying too much can annoy many people if not few. Recently graduated from the academy, her father had already informed her the horrors of being a shinobi. That wasn't the only way she found out, she found out few things on her own by reading or hearing other shinobi conversations. She knew the life of shinobi would be hard but she was going to do her best. While being a Nara, she has her smart moments however, she's not highly 'out there smart' like few Konoha Naras. Sometimes travelling may be hard for her, she would be found sitting by a tree, drawing a plant or little critter on her sketchbook. In the Nara's household, there's a spare room where she kept her lizards and snakes. Right now, she owns a skink, bearded lizard, gila monster, corn snake, hognose snake, and milk snake.
Posted: Sun Oct 08, 2017 7:59 pm
{resubmitted to change an unused pa. Genjutsu to bukijutsu} ▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Natsumi Himura Nickname: Natsu - From her parents Ao - From the Raikage, Shiro Chosokabe
Age: Eighteen Birthdate: December Gender: Female
Height: 62 Inches Weight: 108 lbs
Nindo: "The beginning and the end are always the same. What truly matters is the journey along the way."
Personality: Natsu is very independent because she knows exactly what she is capable of. She rarely trusts others to finish up on a tasking she started as when she starts something she loves to finish it. Natsu is an amazing friend to have, she will always be there to help, she's sympathetic most of the time, and most of all always willing to help a friend in need. She will help them get back on their feet and make sure they are on a good path. While doing this she expects nothing back in return. She is deep and full of mystery, as well as being full of intrigue, as if something is always going on within her mind. She is driven towards roles of leadership and goals of achievement, she will always want to climb then shinobi ladder when she can. All in an effort to be the very best, like no one ever was. She has an excellent sense of timing and manages it very well while being an exceptional organizer. She is very creative in her own manner as far as executing plans. She will always make good investments that could make her life easier or better down the road.
She might seem boring and stern because she lives by her self-discipline and responsibility. She analyzes each situation before deciding to take a move deciding on whether or not the rewards are worth the risk. Once more she might seem boring a lot of people but its simply her drive that pushes her to make smart decisions to prosper in life. Her self sufficient ways do tend to make others believe she is cold hearted. However the reason why she does everything herself is so that there is never any doubt everything will be done correctly and completely finished. It is all about controlling her surroundings. According to her there is an easy way to do things then the right way to do things. This makes complete sense to her as she's mostly stubborn and rarely agrees with others. This is an ongoing lesson for her as she needs to learn that there is more than one way of doing things even though her way is mostly always right, it doesn't mean that she has to impose upon other individuals ways.
Natsu has a complete necessity for structure and work because deep down she feels as if she is unworthy, as if she constantly needs to prove her worth to the village. Should she ever realize that all she needs to do is love herself... she'll open up and see the world in a new light, one that allows for pleasure and guilt-free fun. What's most important to her is her need for security, not the standard sense of it, but the financial or material security. This is a very important driving force behind her ambition and her raw desire to succeed. She is always concerned with her public standing and prestige within the village. She's a loner but she also needs to feel appreciated, yet she is a master at hiding this fact. She is very self contained and she has many faces that she presents to her peers. She is known as aloof and indifferent towards others yet this is her concealing herself from the world, unfortunately most will never know who she is. This causes many feelings of insecurity and often causes her to question her own worth. She will always make it difficult to get emotionally close to her, because should she want to let them in she would never let them go. Emotional connections make her feel vulnerable yet satisfied at the same time. This is an ongoing internal conflict of contradictions within her mind.
She is a very ambitious person, always having something to pursue as she wants her life to be fulfilled and important. She is extremely patient and will wait a long time for something that she wants, when the opportunity comes her way, she will plan her steps carefully. She might appear hesitant in these situations but its never true. She simply knows that within life you only get one chance to succeed. She will wait until she has all the puzzle pieces before she starts to work and finish the puzzle. She will never accomplish anything with second rate results but rather with flying colors. She has a very active mind and strong powers of concentration. She likes being in control within her life. She's very cautious but this is only to see the whole picture before she takes a single step towards her goals. She'll always accept change but it has to be introduced slowly and incorporate it into her life just as slowly for her to get used to it. She tends to see the world in black or white only the definitive answer will come to her mind. There are never any gray areas as these are areas that she doesn't understand and makes her feel uncomfortable.
Lastly, deep inside, she is romantic and loving but it takes the right person to expose this. On the outside she might seem like she simply doesn't give a s**t. She's perfect for someone who's looking for a challenge. It will take time to get close to her, and one should never make her rush into a relationship. They would need to be patient, because she is extremely patient. She is a very classy woman as one is going to need to woo and court her like a proper lady. She will dominate and control the relationship but in her own subtle way. If one lets her take the lead, she'd never steer them wrong. She will offer nothing but a long lasting, loyal, and real relationship to hopefully get her happily ever after.
Village: Kumogakure Title: Genin Rank: B Rank First Class: Sensor ____Discipline → Resolution Second Class: Bukijutsu ____Discipline → Mystic Hero
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Power: +2 PA, +25 chakra/stamina a rank
Chakra Pool: 545 Stamina Pool: 310 Chakra Element: Unknown at this time Chakra Color: Most of the time her chakra is a cold, ominous, vibrant shade of ice blue. However, when she is really upset, angry, or experiencing any intense negative emotions, her chakra becomes black with the same ice blue outline to it. Chakra Materialization: Unknown at this time.
Strengths: • Long Range Combat • Her Sensory Prowess
Weaknesses: • Being a Lone Wolf • Very Stubborn
Fears: • Coulrophobia • Equinophobia
Reductions: • Learn Bukijutsu techniques one [3] post faster. • Learn ninjutsu one [3] post faster. • Learn genjutsu one [3] post faster.
Personal Attributes: • Talented Ninjutsu User: Gains an additional ten ninjutsu slots • Very Talented Ninjutsu User: Gains an additional ten ninjutsu slots • Deadly Assassin: Gains an additional bukijutsu slot • Chakra Control: All Ninjutsu and Genjutsu S-Rank and below cost twenty [20] chakra less. Down to a minimum of five [5] chakra per jutsu. (consumes a custom jutsu slot)
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両{19000} AC: {15000} Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: An old and worn out heavy long bow Weapon Range: Standard Weapon Weight: Standard Weapon Size: Standard Weapon Location: Upon her back
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • 20 x Arrows •
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ] • Bikou Ninjutsu [Shadowing Stealth Technique] - E X • Kanashibari no Jutsu [Temporary Body Paralysis Technique] - D X • Oboro Bunshin no Jutsu [Haze Clone Technique] - D X • Karasu Bunshin no Jutsu [Crow Clone Technique] - C X • Sazengarasu no Jutsu [Scattering One Thousand Crows Technique] - C X • Hari Jizou [Underworld Guardian Spikes] - B X • Ranji Shigumi no Jutsu [Wild Lion's Man Technique - B X • Dokushinjutsu [Eye Mind reading] - X X • Fukumi Hari [Hidden Needles] - X X • Gyorai Shin [Torpedo Needle] - X X • Water Droplet Reflection Sight - X X • Hari Jigoku [Hell Needles] - X X • Kumomayu [Spider Cocoon] - X X • Kumonendo [Spider Sticky Vomit] - X X • Kumonenkin [Spider Sticky Gold] - X X • Kumoshibari [Spider Bind] - X X • Kumosouka [Spider Cobweb Flower] - X X • Kumosoukai [Spider Cobweb Opening] - X X • Nenkin no Yoroi [Armor of Sticky Gold] - X X
{Sensory} • Kenchiki: Shunshin [Sensor: Body Flicker] - D X • Ryouken [Hunting Dog] - D X • Mitsugo Heki [Whispering Walls] - D X • Monko no Keibou [Door Guard] - D X • Kagura Shingan [Kagura Mind's Eye] - X X • Ukojizai no Jutsu [Fierce Raining at Will] - X X
{Undiscovered} •
{Undiscovered} • ▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u {Illusory} •
{Unknown} •
▬▬┤| C U S T O M S • Kagura no Ishi [Will of Kagura] - B XX
▬▬┤|T R A I N I N G M I S S I O N S • Basic Training: Performance X • Basic Training: Performance X
▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned}
▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Uwame} • {Stage Three / Every technique up to stage three} X
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 01 // 04 Locked Formless - Heavy Bow • {E Ranked Formless - Automatically Learned} • {D Ranked Formless - Automatically Learned} • {C Ranked Formless - Automatically Learned} • {B Ranked Formless - Automatically Learned} ]
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Natsumi hasn't had an eventful life by any means. She's actually considerably lucky compared to the other shinobi of the nations. Her mom and dad are both still alive and doing well. Although they didn't want her to become a shinobi at first they didn't hold her back from following her dreams. Truth is even though they preferred her to not choose this lifestyle, they couldn't be any prouder of their little girl for choosing to defend her country. As she has recently graduated from the academy her family visits her often whenever they get a chance. Never wanting to cease being apart of her life and seeing how her life is as well as giving her home cooked food every once in a while.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: (Senju) Ryōtō Nickname: Ryō, Ryōta, Kyūta (reserved for overfamiliar friends and family) Age: 15 Birthdate: March 21 Gender: Male
Height: 67in Weight: 160lbs
Nindo: n/a Personality: A smart a**, a wise guy, a little punk full of hot air. Honestly a lighthearted kid with some bad ideas.. Just a delinquent from the Senju clan.
Village: Konoha Title: Genin Rank: D-Rank Shinobi First Class: Ninjutsu ____Discipline → Elemental Brandish Second Class: Taijutsu ____Discipline → Berserker
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Senju
Chakra Pool: 380 Stamina Pool: 200 Chakra Element: Water, Earth, Fire Chakra Color: Blood Red Chakra Materialization: Normally, his chakra cannot be seen to the naked eye. However, when excited his chakra will manifest as a bon fire or a liger head.
Passive Status Increases: • Strength ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Speed ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Reflex ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?} • Fortitude ► {Total Bonus} →→ {Where does this come from?}
Strengths: • Hand-to-hand • Evasion Weaknesses: • Genjutsu • Raiton Fears: • Pooping in front of people • Flat-chested girls will never be popular
Reductions: • All Mokuton users are able to learn Doton [ Earth ] and Suiton [ Water ] ninjutsu one [1] post faster. • Learn ninjutsu one (1) post faster. •Learn Taijutsu one (1) post faster. Personal Attributes: •Rocky Shores by the Rough Sea: Learns Ninjutsu (2) posts faster and Genjutsu [1] post slower. •Instinct: Sharp senses decrease descriptive rank of opponent's speed when using Taijutsu/Bukijutsu
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 両0 AC: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Second Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Third Tree Here} || → {Current Title} • {Fourth Tree Here} || → {Current Title}
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Job Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 {All start at zero} C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Limitations: {How many of each technique you can learn. Refer to class info} • Ninjutsu : : 00 / 24 • Genjutsu : : 00 / 05 • Taijutsu Styles: : 00 / 05 • Bukijutsu Styles: : 00 / 00
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: Bokken Weapon Range: 18inches Weapon Weight: About several pounds Weapon Size: No more than 2inches in diameter Weapon Location: At the back of the waist
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • Shuriken x15 • Kunai x15 • Headband
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: {Start with the following six only unless otherwise specified.} • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
Suiton •
Doton •
Katon •
Mokuton •
▬▬┤|G e n j u t s u {Your first Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance} •
{Your second Type's name} {Illusory, Enchantment, Chained, or Instance} • ▬▬┤|T a i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|B u k i j u t s u {Style name here} • {Stage progression / techniques learned} ▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e s Current Slots Available → 00 // 00 {Find in Formless Style and Class information} Locked Formless • {Training Links} Slots Used • _______ → || [X] {Please include links for training}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Born the youngest of three, Ryōtō entered a family focused on leading the Senju into a "New Dawn". He was born with an abnormal amount of cognitive sense and awareness, which meant that he was aware of what went on around him before he could talk. His brother and sister had already become quite known for their ability, leading the family to wait for his natural talent to manifest. It didn't. They thought maybe it was a late bloomer issue, but he was steadily progressing with those in his class at a normal rate. He cared not for the standings his family wished to acquire. Figuring it would be taken care of by his responsible, adoring, endearing sister and calm, cool, collected brother. He was quite popular with the younger girls in the village along with many of their mothers and matured women. He figured it was due to the errands he did for compensation, but never realized he was quite... blessed for his age. He sported quite the physique, and would find himself bare chested or without pants when about the village. He was well endowed for such a youth. However his parents figured Ryōtō tried the least out of their children and sought to force out his potential. Cracking down on his free time outside of the academy and becoming much more stern with his behavior when dealing with other prominent families. But this only annoyed the boy enough to live by his lonesome, only occasionally returning home when needed. Once he achieve Genin, his parents soon mellowed out. This allowed him the freedom to move about without worrying those in his household.
Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2017 7:50 pm
I Cant Talk
I cant talk
Character Respec Post! So, I'm pretty sure I got this done correctly. I'll go ahead and list off all the major changes I've made so you know what to look for. Changes - Medic Class to Second Instance of Taijutsu Class - Added 3 new PAs [Balance, Apprentice Botanist, and Alteration Access] - Changed Katon nature to Fuuton nature - Replaced all learned Katon Jutsu with Fuuton Jutsu of the same rank
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ρ є r ѕ σ η α ℓ • ∂ α т α|├▬ Full Name: Shion Moro Nickname: n/a Age: 15 Birthdate: Aug 5 Gender: Female
Height: 5'0" Weight: 105lbs
Nindo: still searching Personality: Shion likes to pretend she is cool and aloof, thinking herself as having a level head. Despite how she acts, Shion is one of the first to blow a fuse at the simplest of sleights. She does genuinely try to keep her cool through frequent relaxation and meditation.
Description : Shion is of a rather small stature, standing much shorter than her peers. Her petite build is topped with a round baby-face, lightly sprinkled with freckles, and embedded with 2 large hazel eyes, all capped off with a mess of short, auburn hair.
Village: Kumo Title: Genin Rank: D-rank First Class: Taijutsu ____Discipline → Monk Second Class: Taijutsu ____Discipline → Berserker
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c σ м в α т • ∂ α т α|├▬ Bloodline: Courage: +2 PA, 5 jutsu slots
Chakra Pool: 150 Stamina Pool: 350 Chakra Element: Wind Chakra Color: Teal Chakra Materialization: In an almost cartoonish contrast to her easy going outward appearance, Shion's chakra manifests itself as bolts of lightning crackling around her body in an endless path, snaking around her torso and limbs.
Strengths: • Agile • Flexible fighting style Weaknesses: • easily tilted • small framed Fears: • losing any sense of worth • large bodies of water
Reductions: • Taijutsu -2 (-4 for monk styles) • n/a
Personal Attributes: • Balance: through strict meditative practices, Shion has gained better control over her chakra than your average taijutsu specialist. As such, her ninjutsu cost ten [10] chakra less to perform. • Chakra Manifestation - Cloak: Through her study of meditation and energy conversion, Shion has also gained the ability of strengthen her body by circulating chakra throughout herself. This PA grants Shion the following technique. "Chakra Manifestation - Cloak: at the cost of thirty [30] chakra per post, Shion recieves a slight boost to her strength and speed descriptive modifiers. At each subsequent body rank, this bonus' increases by one [1] descriptive rank up to a total of a supreme increase at S rank." • Alteration Access: This PA grants Shion access to one [1] Alteration Style, but loses her second Chakra Nature • Apprentice Botanist: Shion grew up in a small town that specializes in crafting all sorts of explosives, of which one main ingredient is charcoal. Needing such a high yield of charcoal, the town naturally resides deep within a dense forest where they cut down and replant trees. When she was younger, Shion would often help plant said trees and tend to other plants in the area, the byproduct of which was a rudimentary education of the basics of botany. This PA grants Shion an increase to the rank of Apprentice for the Botany Job.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|c α r є є r • ∂ α т α|├▬ Ryo: 0 Advancement Credit: 0
Missions Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
Crafting Trees • {First Tree Here} || → n/a • {Second Tree Here} || → n/a • {Third Tree Here} || → n/a • {Fourth Tree Here} || → n/a
Crafting Jobs Complete: D Rank :: 0 C Rank :: 0 B Rank :: 0 A Rank :: 0 S Rank :: 0
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ω є α ρ σ η • ∂ α т α|├▬ Weapon Type: n/a Weapon Range: n/a Weapon Weight: n/a Weapon Size: n/a Weapon Location: • n/a
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|ι η ν є η т σ r у|├▬ • shurikan x10 • kunai x5 • Current Outfit x1 - Current Dress: Dark blue spring hoodie over a grey tank top with black legging under a pair of shorts. Projectile/scroll pouch on right arm and a sick a** pair of navy blue high tops.
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|т є c н η ι q υ є ѕ|├▬ ▬▬┤|N i n j u t s u Maruton: E - Rank • Henge no Jutsu [ Transformation Technique ] • Kawarimi no Jutsu [ Substitution Technique ] • Bushin no Jutsu [ Clone Technique ] • Suimen Hokou no Waza [ Act of Water Surface Walking ] • Kinobori no Waza [ Act of Tree Climbing ] • Kai [ Release ]
▬▬┤|F o r m l e s s S t y l e Physical • D - rank • {C-rank} + {Training Link} • {B-rank} + {Training Link} • {A-rank} + {Training Link} • {S-rank} + {Training Link} • {S+rank} + {Training Link} {D-rank Slots} • Soft Physical • Hard Physical {C-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} {B-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} {A-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} {S-rank Slots} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link} • {Stage progression / technique learned} + {Training Link}
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬┤|н ι ѕ т σ r у|├▬ Shion's story is nothing special. She didn't come from a noble family or an honored clan, nor does she have any heavy motivations for becoming a ninja. Her family wasn't slain in the dead of night, nor does she owe any sort of life debts. Instead Shion comes from a lowly family in the outskirt village of Hanabari, in the Cloud Country. She simply became a ninja because its what she wanted to do. Her past might not be anything special, but who knows what the future holds?
Should you choose, you may alter your PA (+1 Alteration) to go without sacrificing an element.
Tamer Attributes → 02 // 02 • Storm Calmer: Rather than having the lightning from the Call of Lightning ninjutsu be random targeted, Horus can direct the Lightning toward a target. It requires a D-ranked amount of chakra and no activation to do so. If Horus does not do so then the lightning strikes randomly per the rules of the technique. •
(Hey so with C-rank body, Horus gets a second Tamer Attirbute. I wanted to keep it in the theme of a thunderbird lol.)
Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2017 10:58 pm
Alright, trying to grab a few profiles that didn't seem to have been addressed yet. As always, I defer to judgments made by the approvals mods if I do something wrong.
Lily: Your Shade Art PA is better suited for a custom Jutsu rather than a PA. Everything else looks good.
Xarso: Your instinct PA needs a quantifier, and I'd suggest changing it to an increase in your Reflex. For the quantifier, I'd suggest a "mildly" since it's conditional on something else.
Matty: Tamer attributes aren't supposed to consume Chakra, so gonna have to deny that one. If you want to do something in that vein, you could have it so that Taylor acts as a lightning rod to Horus' Call of Lightning and can redirect it manually. Other options for birds would be jump height, agility, gliding short distances, etc.
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Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2017 11:37 pm
Apologies for the wait! Your profile looks good, but I want to clarify: for one of your PAs, you're getting another locked Formless style, yes? If so, approved.
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