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tatterpixie

Tipsy Codger

PostPosted: Thu Jun 23, 2022 7:33 pm


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Yukio Peterson / Spei, Page of the Moon
Reason for Revision: Yukio has been learning parkour since awakening as Spei, so I wanted to add that as a hobby because it's important to him as a character, both powered and civilian.
Revisions Requested:

New Hobby:
Quote:
Runnin' Up That Wall: Since he awakened as Spei, Yukio has been taking parkour lessons at a gym in town. Parkour is to him the graceful art of getting out of the way as quickly and efficiently as possible, and since he's not a fighter, it's his primary form of self-defense. When he's not walking around the city, he's doing parkour to get around, cat-running up walls and doing handstands and wall-running and various other moves, largely in the industrial area so he doesn't alarm others or call attention to himself. This hobby has come in handy in his powered life as well. Besides, it's fun.
PostPosted: Fri Jul 01, 2022 1:50 pm


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Montmartre, Page of Ganymede
Reason for Revision: I came up with a better outfit design XD and I want to get it approved before I get art of him!
Revisions Requested:
Original Outfit:
Quote:
Top -- Slightly oversized pale pink shirt with a loose floppy burgundy ascot covered with the Ganymede symbol in grey tied around the loose open high collar, worn under a maroon narrow-waisted Edwardian coat with the collar turned up
Bottoms -- Loose high waisted dark pink pants, held up by black suspenders
Belt -- A men's corset in black leather, extending from his hips to just around the bottom of his pecs, with the Ganymede symbol carved into it near the top
Shoes -- Low chunky-heeled boots in black leather beneath his trouser hems
Accessories -- A rakish low-crowned grey top hat with a Ganymede symbol in gold on the side of the burgundy hat band, gold Ganymede symbol cufflinks

Revised Outfit:
Quote:
Top -- Slightly oversized pale pink shirt with a loose floppy burgundy ascot covered with the Ganymede symbol in grey tied around the loose open high collar
Bottoms -- Loose high waisted dark pink jodhpurs
Belt -- A men's corset in black leather, extending from his hips to just around the bottom of his pecs and narrow at the waist, with the Ganymede symbol carved into it near the top, held up by black suspenders embossed with the Ganymede symbol
Shoes -- Knee-high chunky-heeled boots in black leather with grey tops
Accessories -- A rakish low-crowned grey top hat with a Ganymede symbol in gold on the front of the burgundy hat band, gold Ganymede symbol cufflinks, burgundy sleeve garters

tatterpixie

Tipsy Codger


Eos Galvus

Shadowy Celebrant

PostPosted: Wed Jul 06, 2022 4:18 pm


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Elpis!
Reason for Revision: Walked through the mirror, found a family along the way.
Link to Old Profile: [yel=https://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=24235727]Old Sad Profile
Link to Revised Profile: "WHY!?"
PostPosted: Mon Jul 18, 2022 9:44 pm


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED (discussed that magic gives double strength and defense for the duration of their magic!)

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Alexander Ortiz/Telesto, Senshi of Pressure
Reason for Revision: I don't like the progression of their powers, so I want the eternal stage to be different. The native Telestians are written by me to be a crystal-organic people, so I'd like to reflect that some.
Revisions Requested:
Current Eternal Sailor Attack:
Eternal Sailor Attack: Compression Point
Telesto summons their magic and anyone within twenty feet of a point of their choosing will find themselves crushed by an intense pressure on all sides, drawn towards the point. Targets will experience crushing pain and may find it difficult to move while under the pressure, may have extreme difficulties breathing or focusing, and may be knocked off balance. Players may choose to take lasting damage in the form of bruises, or even broken bones, if they like. The magic lasts for forty seconds and can be used once per battle.

Requested New Eternal Sailor Attack:
Eternal Sailor Attack: Crystallize
Telesto summons their magic and turns it on themself. Intense pressure squeezes down on to Telesto from all sides, forming a brief sphere of heat and energy around them. As the sphere shatters, Telesto is revealed as their skin has been replaced with dark onyx gemstone, drastically increasing their defense and attack strength. This magic lasts for forty seconds and can be used once per battle.

MercilessMime



SSBrosB


Springtime Noob

PostPosted: Fri Jul 22, 2022 7:31 pm


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Sara Rebmann // Triceratops senshi of Triceratops
Reason for Revision: Adding Mineral Name
Revisions Requested: Mineral name is going to be Triplite
PostPosted: Mon Aug 15, 2022 11:45 pm


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name:Amelia Pennington
Reason for Revision: She's no longer 4 years old. I need to age up her profile to a pre-teen.
Link to Old Profile:Here
Link to Revised Profile:Here

Shanyume

Anxious Friend


Shanyume

Anxious Friend

PostPosted: Tue Aug 16, 2022 12:41 am


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MINOR REVISION
Character Name:Azrael Thane // Cadet Cypher
Reason for Revision:Through RP's and plots available to him over the last year, Cypher's loyalty to the Vanguard and their mission is waning. On the surface, he'll still follow orders but his heart might not be as devoted as it was when they first arrived. He's continued to struggle to find a purpose and has instead devoted his time to developing and building a secure training ground for other Vanguard to practice their upgraded weapons. He is also working on piecing together the self-learning drone AI from the blueprints he received from the Merchant all in hopes of being relevant in some way.
Revisions Requested:
Remove
Loyal Even with the lack of information surrounding events that happened in the past or the plan to remove Cadeus' starseed, Azrael's (Cypher's) loyalty remained with Lyndin and the other Cadets. First and foremost the other Valencians are blood they are family and no matter who they decide to ally themselves with, he will do what he can to protect them and put them before humans or this war between Order and Chaos.

Add
Task Oriented With little else going for him, Cypher has defaulted to devoting his time and energy towards the only task he can think of to remain a relevant member of the Vanguard. From the start of their mission, he had joined to fill the role of a tactician; he was not a student of the natural sciences beyond what was required of him back on Valencya. (He had come along expecting to be a sentry or lookout for those who were looking at gathering samples for their research but turns out he was not needed for this.) His interests and focus had been on weapons, fighting style, scouting, mapping terrains, and strategizing. However, with the orders given as they relate to engaging in fights with White Moon or Negaverse Agents, Cypher has committed himself to building a training ground where the Vanguard can practice and remain diligent. To do this he has taken steps with schooling and finding a job that allows him to work with computer technology, coding, building, welding, etc so that he has moving targets that will not be destroyed after a single shot from a sniper rifle. Everything has to happen in a specific order and he is working on meeting these small goals to achieve something, hopefully, greater. Once Cypher sets his mind to something, he is committed to it. He carefully organizes his plans and does everything in his power to achieve his goals. He is effective and thorough and remains focused on the task at hand.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 28, 2022 2:34 am


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MINOR REVISION
Character Name:Squire Einhornhohle
Reason for Revision:Finally grown her, now's the best time to make adjustments to her magic radius since the effects are kind of mild in that it's an uncomfortable warmth that draws people towards her. As opposed to something that causes the sensation of burns, dehydration, etc...
Revisions Requested:
  • Squire: 8' R to 15'R
  • Knight: 10'R to 20'R
  • Change terms from Chaos to Opponents, and Order to Allies.

Shanyume

Anxious Friend



Amor Remanet


Edgiest Strawberry

14,275 Points
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  • The Sweetest 250
PostPosted: Tue Oct 11, 2022 3:08 pm


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Dunwich, Page of Neptune.
Reason for Revision: Character rehomed from Kaefaux!
Link to Old Profile: here!
Link to Revised Profile: here!
PostPosted: Sun Nov 13, 2022 7:57 am


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Lieutenant Strengite - Shannon Mccord
Reason for Revision: Her current approved second and third stage weapon does not fit with her typical fighting style and as such the change would force her to become more proficient in close combat and sneak attacks.
Revisions Requested: The thought process behind the progression is that if the flyswatter was cut in half, and the plastic removed from one side, both could become good, but short, stabby objects
Current weapon progression: Flyswatter - Rattan Rug Beater - Bladed Staff
Requested weapon progression: Flyswatter - Two small Bodice/Boot Daggers - A Short Sword and Arming Dagger

References:
Bodice/Boot dagger - X, X, X, X
Short sword - X, X, X
Arming dagger - X, X, X

Fiction1119

Original Lunatic


lizbot

No Faun

PostPosted: Sat Feb 11, 2023 8:05 pm


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Emily Moffat / Hestia
Reason for Revision: updating to a more current hobbies/flaws/virtues set and updating attacks to try and be more inline with the current rules
Link to Old Profile: here
Link to Revised Profile: here
PostPosted: Sat Feb 18, 2023 6:26 pm


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MAJOR REVISION
Character Name: Maren Tyndall (Formerly Shiori Taylor)
Reason for Revision: I've had this character for years and years but haven't played her at all and eventually had no idea what I wanted to do with her. She doesn't have a single RP to her name. I've given her a complete overhaul in an attempt to get a better feel for her.
Link to Old Profile: This is her existing journal.
Link to Revised Profile: The revised character.

Sunshine Alouette

Eternal Senshi



Kyuseisha no Hikari

Crew

Dragonslaying Dragon

PostPosted: Wed Apr 19, 2023 10:31 am


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Jett/Remarque
Reason for Revision: I have been saying I would do this for like 8 years [Jett has grown up. This looks like a long revision but a lot of his traits are just slightly reworded and I wanted to include everything to be thorough. Business hobby is new, and his flaws are revisited/reworded/edited the most]
Revisions Requested:

Hobbies:

Boxing - Jett is stressed a lot; he’s delivered a persona that is high maintenance and the easiest way for him to work out his stress is by pulverizing something. For particularly stressful days, he’ll hammer out an hour's worth of a beating on the punching bag he keeps at home. Jett is a competitive person by nature and enjoys a good match in the ring.

Stocks - A successful businessman, Jett keeps his eye on the money. He invests his funds wisely and trusts his gut instinct—which he claims rarely lets him down. All in all, he’s made more money than he’s lost, so he can’t complain. Watching numbers rise and fall isn’t as fun as driving a speedy sports car around, but it has its quirks and through luck or skill, he seems to know what he’s doing.

Appraising – His mother was a collector of the strange and unusual, so Jett grew up with her ramblings of anything antique. It was his mother’s passion that got him interested, and being around aged things brings him a sense of nostalgia. Like stocks, prices can change overnight and investing time, energy and money is always a thrill. He likes to keep informed and know the value of what he’s around, so he keeps up to date with his research so that he’s as accurate and educated as possible.

Business – Jett has always invested everything he has into the things that mean the most to him. He started at a locally owned antique store as a part time worker in high school, and through hard work he earned the favor of the owner. When it was time to sell, Jett took him up on the offer and expanded the already successful antique store into a multi-faceted business venture. Though he still owns the original small storefront, he has since expanded to have his own warehouse, auction house, and an appraisal and restoration studio. He has an office downtown and a staff to help market online as well. He puts his heart into his business and is intent to push its success. He uses his influence and power to ensure he can look after members of the Dark Mirror Court and always has positions open for them.

Virtues:

Clever -- Tactful and quick witted, Jett works to keep everyone on their toes. He’s a quick thinker and can work well under pressure. He’s got a quick tongue and a sharp mind and he’s at his best when he’s annoyed or trying to prove a point. He’s got quick recall and can assess a situation just as fast. It doesn’t take him long to come to a decision since he’s almost always plotting something. His attentiveness to situations and typically crafty ways mixed with his charisma drives him to manipulate both people and situations if need it suits him.

Confident -- Jett can’t be brought down. He’s confident in himself and his skills—and of the company he keeps. He knows what he can do and doesn’t really consider what he can’t do; if he tries hard enough, he’s sure that he can get anything done. He exudes an aura of confidence and never seems to doubt himself. He’s critical of his faults, but never verbalizes them; if he finds something wrong with himself, he’d never let anyone else know, would just work to fix it without drawing attention to it. Not that he thinks there’s anything wrong with himself; in his opinion, he’s practically flawless. On the downside to his belief and trust in himself and his skills, overconfidence and arrogance plague Jett, but so far, so good; he’s yet to make a complete a** of himself.

Charismatic -- He’s handsome, charming and friendly. He’s a professional at sweet talking and no one can tell him otherwise. He’s relatively good at reading people and uses this to his advantage both for his own gain and to establish connections. He knows when to praise and flatter and when to hold his tongue and often uses this skill to win favors or friends. He makes a conscious effort to remember names and faces so he doesn’t insult anyone or embarrass himself. His charisma extends to everyone, though the manner in which he uses it is vital: to those he wishes to impress, he uses his skills to please and praise. It is rare for him to lose his cool; he has a carefully cultivated appearance and persona and he will always do his best to be likable.

Ambitious -- He is aware of his skills and will push himself to achieve all that he can—and more. He’ll do what he has to in order to get what he wants, and will never stop fighting for what he believes in. Jett is determined and knows what he wants, and has the willpower and drive to achieve whatever he’s aiming for. He never gives up, no matter how desperate the situation. He’s willing to go the extra mile and do whatever is necessary to achieve his goals.

Flaws:

Self-serving -- Jett’s priorities always start with himself and his interests. He doesn’t often do a good thing just to do it; there’s usually some ulterior motive. His altruism often has at least some level of performative action about it. He weighs the pros and cons of a decision and if it benefits him, he’ll pursue it. His goals and interests trump that of those around him, and he will pursue what he wants even if the outcome is contrary to those of someone close to him. He is very good at being manipulative and misleading others and while he often keeps his end game well-hidden to avoid detection, those he have stepped over may find him unpredictable or untrustworthy.

Competitive -- Jett likes to win. He doesn’t like anyone to be better than him, and he takes it personally when a new challenger approaches. He will go out of his way to establish dominance if need be. Sometimes he pushes himself and others too hard. He doesn’t like to lose and doesn’t like to back down. He can be confrontational and abrasive and is not against employing sneaky tactics if it ensures a victory.

Unforgiving -- Jett is a resentful being and will not easily forgive. He doesn’t believe in apologies and the only time he’s ever given one is when he’s lying to his teeth. Actions speak louder than words, and you can’t just say you’re sorry to Jett. Chances are, if you’ve pissed him off, you’re staying on his s**t list—which could very well be forever. If there’s an altercation of any sort with Jett, it’s best to explain what happened so you don’t find yourself the victim of harassment.

Prideful -- Jett thinks incredibly highly of himself and holds himself to very high standards. Just the same, he holds those that represent him to those same standards. He expects perfection in everything he does, and wants to see the same effort from those around him. He carries himself in high regard and puts a lot of effort into his presentation. He is arrogant enough to think he’s better than most people, and he takes great offense when someone challenges him to that. He doesn’t like to be wrong and will double down and fight about it long before admitting he might be wrong.


Old Version:

Hobbies:

Boxing - Jett is stressed a lot; he’s delivered a persona that is high maintenance and the easiest way for him to work out his stress is by pulverizing something. For particularly stressful days, he’ll hammer out an hours worth of a beating on the punching bag he keeps at home, but Jett is a competitive person by nature and enjoys a good match in the ring. He doesn’t like to be bested, so he’s always sure to do at least half an hour of training a day.

Stocks - An aspiring business man, Jett keeps his eye on the money. He invests his funds wisely and trusts his gut instinct—which he claims rarely lets him down. All in all, he’s made more money than he’s lost, so he can’t complain. Watching numbers rise and fall isn’t as fun as driving a speedy sports car around, but it has its quirks and Jett is determined to master the system, even if he doesn’t strike it big.

Appraising – His mother was a collector of the strange and unusual, so Jett grew up with her ramblings of anything antique. It was his mother’s passion that got him interested, and being around aged things brings him a sense of nostalgia. While his mother liked clocks, Jett has a pension for weapons—not that many really fall into his hand. Like stocks, prices can change overnight and investing time, energy and money is always a thrill. He likes to keep informed and know the value of what he’s around, so he keeps up to date with his research so that he’s as accurate and educated as possible.

Virtues:

Clever -- Crafty and quick witted, Jett will always keep you on your toes. He’s a quick thinker and, while not necessarily book smart, he knows what he needs to know and can work well under pressure. He’s got a quick tongue and a quicker mind; if you’re in an argument, you want Jett on your team. He’s got quick recall and can assess a situation quickly. It doesn’t take him long to come to a decision since he’s almost always plotting something. His attentiveness to situations and typically crafty ways mixed with his charisma drives him to manipulate both people and situations if need it suits him.

Confident -- You can’t bring Jett down. He’s confident in himself and his skills—and of the company he keeps. He knows what he can do and doesn’t really consider what he can’t do; if he tries hard enough, he’s sure that he can get anything done. He exudes an aura of confidence and never seems to doubt himself. He’s critical of his faults, but never verbalizes them; if he finds something wrong with himself, he’d never let anyone else know, would just work to fix it without drawing attention to it. Not that he thinks there’s anything wrong with himself; in his opinion, he’s practically flawless. On the downside to his belief and trust in himself and his skills, overconfidence and arrogance plague Jett, but so far, so good; he’s yet to make a complete a** of himself..

Charismatic -- He’s handsome, charming and flirty. He’s a professional at sweet talking and loves to woo the ladies. He’s relatively good at reading people and uses this to his advantage both for his own gain and to establish connections. He knows when to praise and flatter and when to hold his tongue and often uses this skill to win favors or friends. He makes a conscious effort to remember names and faces so he doesn’t insult anyone or embarrass himself. His charisma extends to everyone, though the manner in which he uses it is vital: to those he wishes to impress, he uses his skills to please and praise, but to those he wishes to mock or degrade, his charm makes it all the more painful. It is rare for him to lose his cool, so regardless of the situation, he delivers his charm in a smooth, silky, seductive manner.

Ambitious -- He is aware of his skills and will push himself to achieve all that he can—and more. He’ll do what he has to in order to get what he wants, and will never stop fighting for what he believes in. Jett is determined and knows what he wants, and has the willpower and drive to achieve whatever he sets his goals for. He never gives up, no matter how desperate the situation. Though on the surface he is loyal to those in his group, he keeps it to himself that he will step over almost anyone to get what he wants.

Flaws:

Selfish -- Jett comes first and foremost in any situation. It’s about him first, other’s later. He won’t go out of his way for anyone if he has a choice [and if he doesn’t have a choice, he’ll fight about it] unless he can find some use for them. If he can get someone in his debt, he will. No action is altruistic with Jett; he intends to get what he wants through whoever he can.

Aggressive -- Belligerence is a fault of Jett; he takes offense easily and responds first with insults and then with fists. He rarely thinks about the consequences of fights, but is usually smart enough to hold back and wait until he encounters his victim in a dark alley as opposed to confront them in broad daylight. It’s not a coward’s act, just one of self preservation. Jail isn’t exactly in Jett’s plans for the future. Conscious enough of his actions, Jett isn’t likely to maul someone for some snide insult, though it is likely he’ll head home and work out his frustrations on his punching bag; not so conscious of his words, he’s willing to belittle and degrade anyone at the flip of a dime.

Unforgiving -- Jett is a resentful being and will not easily forgive. He doesn’t believe in apologies and the only time he’s ever given one is when he’s lying to his teeth. Actions speak louder than words, and you can’t just say you’re sorry to Jett. Chances are, if you’ve pissed him off, you’re staying on his s**t list—which could very well be forever. If there’s an altercation of any sort with Jett, it’s best to explain what happened so you don’t find yourself the victim of harassment.

Bully -- This world wasn’t made for weaklings, and Jett is a firm believer that only the strong should survive—and what doesn’t kill you only makes you stronger, so what’s the harm in a little friendly bullying? If Jett respects you, he leaves you alone—maybe even considers you a friend. If Jett doesn’t respect you, you’re in for a world of trouble. He has no delusions that his bullying will actually make you into a stronger person, but he doesn’t need to sugar coat it to feel good about himself. Bullying gives him a sense of power, and Jett loves power.
PostPosted: Fri May 26, 2023 5:04 pm


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Amaryllis Babbage
Reason for Revision: Want to use this old unplayed chibi civ for some new plots, so doing some swapping around!
Revisions Requested: Changing name/gender to Xiao Qian/he/him, and also age him down to 6 for plots/extended Chibi Time


Noir Songbird

Crew

Dramatic Senshi

18,325 Points
  • OTP 200
  • Hero 100
  • Magical Girl 50


Meighei


Bishoujo-senshi Mahou-shoujo

PostPosted: Mon May 29, 2023 1:00 pm


The Space Cauldron
APPROVED

MINOR REVISION
Character Name: Guardian Cat Hoshi-no-Tama
Reason for Revision: Make it more applicable to the Negaverse.
Revisions Requested: It is Written in the Stars. Tama studies astronomy. He often star gazes on rooftops at night. Sometimes he likes to howl at the moon too, but won't likely admit to it. He also follows astrology and is willing to test his theories. Tama is a good resource for information on star systems and is constantly researching them.
All in a Name. Tama studies astrological and mineral names. He has an interest in the meanings behind the names given to senshi and agents alike. He can easily quote star locations and mineral compositions.
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