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Ok so I just thought I'd ask this. I'm not sure if this should be under the CB or what so I'm gonna try it here. But I'm just trying to find out if this doesn't sound too....stupid? I guess? I just need to hear some opions on it. Because....I mentioned the story once to a twitard friend that knows about the main idea of the story and....she mentioned how its a "taboo" child like Bella and Edwards. It made me think "Is it really like that?" So lets begin.

So my friend and myself are working on a story of our own. Reason we're both working on it is because I draw and she writes. I have creative ideas as does she. But I'm not good putting it into a written form and she isn't good a drawing providing the characters with a true all over identity ( thats why we say shes the "Dad" and I'm the "Mom" because I give "birth" to them....anyway).

But to generally sum it up the world the characters live in, vampires and werewolves are viewed like a completely different species like race...things. There are humans, elves ect as well. So as you know species cannot mix and make babehs. So in our story we made it where Vampires because they still do have those "dead" like cells can only breed with other vampires. But werewolves can breed with humans, elves ect because of the fact they all have living cells. Also you can't forget the fact werewolves are still in a sense humans. But we also break our own rule in the end but with a logical explaination as to how it could even happen. So I'll just sum up this piece of the story.

Vampire boy and werewolf girl raised with one another their whole lifes because their father's were good friends. A long complicated story happens here. So the two are finally together. Acknowledge they can't ever have children and are content with it. A few years pass and the country is over run by this new race. The race is extremely intelligent and capture many to run test to make soilders to fight for them. The girl and boy were captured together. Tested on day in and day out for years. Pretty much forced breeding was done between the two. They would constantly pump the werewolf girl full of drugs to get her body to accept the vampire gene. There were many miscarriages. Until finally they managed to get one to survive. The thing is the child was premature and sickly because of it. So the race finally got their hybrid werewolf vampire.

Skip some more story time cause theres too much to explain.

Family happy again have their baby. But sadly baby might not live til after her 18th birthday because of her conditions because she is a hybrid which isn't to exist.

ALL IN ALL (I'm sorry theres so much)

Does this sound like the demon child?

It's not the girl's problem, vampires are dead, and their sperm dies, too. They are sterile and probably shooting dust.

Besides, how can you be half-dead body?

I think the fact that it took a lot of work and testing excuses the fact that it's not normally possible. You definitely executed the ideas right; it isn't supposed to be possible but it is with a lot of sacrifice.

Just sence -> sense... and Bella should be "Mary Sue" and Edward should be "Sparklefairy."

Even in folklore their was rumored a vampire that could somehow reproduce, called a Nosferatu I think. So in all honesty I'm not against vampires having kids. A well thought out story...

...W-Would that mean the vampires a furry in a sense then too?

I really like the idea. It's very well thought out. Nothing at all like Twifail where S.Meyer states that her vampires can't have children but then, by magic, Bella and Gayward have a child. One thing I have to ask, how is the hybrid child going to age in your story? I know in most folktales, vampires don't age after their transformation. But since the child will be a half and half, will their aging process be sped up, remain the same (as a human), or will she not have one? I ask because I'm trying to figure out S.Meyer's whole aging process. According to her books, vampires can not age but Reneesme can age at more rapid rate than humans, so in that sense, she will look 18 when she is only 7. But Meyer never goes farther to explain whether Reneesme will continue her rapid aging or will she stop aging when she looks 18? Which in my opinion, that's probably how she has it set up, though by that logic, it makes no sense and Reneesme should not be able to age at all.

I had an idea for a vampire story once. I had planned for a human family, to have already have young children around the time the parents are bitten and then for the parents to raise their children as normally as possible while maintaining their alternative life as the undead. While this goes on, the parents eventually tell their children of the secret and when the children come of age (18yo) they would be given the choice of being changed themselves. By doing this, it allowed the characters to have children but also kept to the whole "vampires don't age" thing.