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Prompt(s): Image 8
Title: The Puppeteer
Word Count: 2158
Short Summary: A man's love (a better word, perhaps, would be obsession) for his art brings his creation to life. Unfortunately, the creature's obsession with the man's love is just as strong, and more deadly.
Art is obsession.
For the lucky, that obsession gives way to love. Love purifies the obsession from the obsessed. But what of those who are the object of that obsession?
David Owens had never thought of himself as a true puppeteer, much less an artist of any sort, but he loved puppets. The way their little bodies tossed and turned in the air. The way their feet clattered on the small stage like music. The way, when handily crafted, they appeared to be little people, whose eyes were just as soulful as any living thing’s.
That was what David truly loved. The creation of the puppet. Breathing imitated life into pieces of wood.
David was one of the lucky few to turn their love into a job. Lately, he'd been working on a rather large set of puppets for a children's television show. They were not the most life-like puppets, nor were they any stretch to his creative ability, but they were putting food on the table and leaving him time for his current passion.
David sometimes wondered if he'd watched Pinocchio too many times as a child. It was not Pinocchio's journey to humanity that captivated David, but rather Geppetto's ability to create life. What a gift that would be. To look into these porcelain eyes and see life, true life, peering back at you.
David often wondered what God felt like, watching His children run and play.
He walked past his littered table, past the children's puppets, towards his locked closet. Fumbling with his ring of keys, he opened the door to the dark room.
"Hello, Jonothon. How are you today?"
Porcelain green eyes stared back.
"Good. I am sorry to be keeping you in the dark, but I don't want anyone to see you yet." David flicked on the closet light and the naked bulb swung back and forth as David brushed past it. Picking up the alder marionette, he brought it out on to his worn couch. After closing the many shutters to his windows and pushing the litter off of his work desk, he pulled the marionette affectionately dubbed 'Jonothon' onto it. Lovingly, David rubbed the sleeve of his shirt around the puppet's face, wiping off the thin layer of dust that it had accumulated.
"I shouldn’t leave you in there. Would you like to see the sun?”
A grunt like sound came from the corner of the room.
David looked over and smiled to a brown rabbit, sitting on its haunches, "Do you not like that? Would you like the windows closed?"
The rabbit settled back down and made something of a clicking noise with its teeth.
David smiled at his pet, "You are the living one Peter, and you win this round." He turned back up to the marionette and stroked its hair, "When you can argue back I'll be more than happy to open the windows and you can have your run of the house."
“Tomorrow…” David stroked the puppet’s thick hair, “Tomorrow I’ll open the windows for you.” He stepped back to see the marionette's head turned slightly towards the rabbit.
He laughed and turned the marionette's head back towards him, "Did I push you? I'm sorry, Jono."
David worked on the marionette long into the night. Longer than was usual for him, but the beauty of the puppet was penetrating and David found he could not let go of those green eyes. As sleep began to fall over his mind, his carving knife slipped along his hand. The wound had barely skinned the side of his palm, but he dropped the knife and cursed none-the-less. He brought the cut up to his mouth and began to suck on it. David didn't much care for that metallic taste that was bound to linger on his tongue, but better that than letting the blood spill freely onto his wooden child.
As David took his lips off of his wound he looked to his marionette sadly, "That's all for tonight. Goodnight Jono, Peter.”
Jono's green eyes briefly glistened with red as drops of blood fell from David to his puppet.
In the corner the rabbit made a grinding sound with its teeth. David ignored it.
The puppet did not.
David went against his promise the following day and kept the windows’ shutters closed in his first story workshop. Though later he would rationalize this to himself as being from sheer forgetfulness than any promises to the marionette. It all seemed so ludicrous in the morning light; promising a doll anything instead of a living breathing creature like Peter.
David threw on his clothing as he brushed his teeth, hastily rushing from here to there trying to gather up his puppets for the television company by noon. He hurried down into his workshop, squinting into the darkness. The silhouette of a body was strewn over the rabbit’s cage. The toothbrush fell out of David’s mouth as he groped around quietly for one of his carving knives.
“Who’s there!” He demanded of the body.
No reply but the whimpering of Peter inside his cage.
“Who’s there! I have a knife, you b*****d!”
No reply.
David stood entirely still, wishing that the pounding in his chest would quiet long enough to convince his legs to move forward. The pounding in his chest only began to hurt as he reached out a hand to look for the light switch to the dark room.
His fingers found the switch and fluorescent light filled the room. David sighed heavily and tossed the knife back on to his working counter.
The marionette lay face down over the rabbit’s cage.
“How did you get there?” David walked over to the marionette and righted it on top of the cage, “Fall over, did you Jono?”
He smiled at the puppet, loving how child-like it looked. Sitting on the rabbit’s large cage it came up David’s chest, arms dangling over the side of the metal bars. David frowned then, noticing a dark spot along Jono’s chin.
“What’s that?”
David put his hand up to smear it away.
Blood.
“Did I get that on you last night? Sorry, Jono. I didn’t mean to. I’ll clean you up tonight.” He picked up the puppet, “Let’s get you put away.”
As he carried the marionette into the closet a clock struck noon in his house loudly. David swore, propped the puppet up against the closet door, swiftly grabbed his commissions and ran out of the workshop.
“Father?”
David stopped at the workshop door. Immediately, David was sure it was his wooden child. The wooden boy’s voice echoed off the walls of its hollow body.
But no. David laughed. No, that was impossible. He was imagining things. David had wanted to create life like Geppetto and now he was convincing himself that he had.
David rubbed his eyes with the back of his wrists. He was tired, that was certain. He was tired and hearing things.
David continued out of the workshop.
“Come back, please.”
David hesitated, his foot hovering over the threshold. No. No, don’t turn around David. Don’t turn around. You’re being stupid David. You have to get to the television company David.
Don’t turn around.
“Please.”
Someone was playing a joke on him. That had to be it. One of the fellows from work had thrown Jono down on to the cage and now he was pretending to be Jono…
No. No, not Jono. The marionette. It wasn’t alive, no matter how much David had ever wished otherwise. The marionette was not alive. It didn’t have any Christian name. It wasn’t alive.
“Why won’t you come back?” The voice was pleading with him now.
David turned around, against every logical thought screaming to do otherwise. Jono sat propped up against the door perfectly still. Someone was playing a joke. They had to be. And when David found out who he planned on doing some particularly brutal things to them. Jono’s mouth levered open.
“Thank you.”
David could feel his bowels waver in their conviction. Every piece of him knotted and contorted in fear. He dropped the children’s puppets on to the floor carelessly.
“You never dropped me.” The voice said behind him.
No. No he hadn’t. He had loved that marionette. His Jono. He had never dropped him.
When David’s throat unstuck itself long enough to make a sound, all that came out was a vulgarity.
Jono had no expression, not yet, David had never quite finished that. But the marionette’s voice changed as surely as the glint in its eyes wavered.
“Are you angry?”
David couldn’t bring himself to do anything but stare at the thing before him. He didn’t want to be Geppetto anymore. Slowly, his tense neck turned his head to say ‘no’.
No, of course he wasn’t angry. He was far too scared to be angry.
“Good.” Jono tilted its head happily, “Thank you for staying.”
“How.” David was able to whine out from his frozen throat.
Jono put his wooden hand up to the spot of blood on his chin. He wiped some of it and held it out towards David.
“It’s life. You have it. I don’t. You gave it to me.”
David Owens had the ability to create life. And he did not want it.
David looked down to his rabbit Peter, who had pulled himself as far away from the puppet as possible. Its body was pressed up against the bars, great tufts of hair escaping from the cage. Peter saw the false life as well. David was not going insane. Peter saw it too.
Peter. Peter was the living one.
David felt blood run down into his limbs again. Adrenaline had kicked and was spurring his body to action, even if his mind was somewhat behind. David ran to the cage and flung the thing open. His hands dove in and dragged the rabbit free of the cage.
“What are you doing, father?” Jono asked.
David didn’t answer; his mind did not have the words to do it. His legs acted on their own, taking him straight to the workshop door with Peter in his arms.
“Father!” Jono cried out, lunging over furniture and tools alike. Its wooden body had no sense of pain so when its beautiful face cracked as it hit the side of the workbench it did not stop. Jono reached the door before David did and slammed it violently.
“You love me, father.”
David stumbled backwards, only barely keeping his footing.
Jono looked at the rabbit in David’s arms, “Why do you love it, father?”
“It’s alive.” David croaked, still walking backwards towards a window.
Jono looked at the rabbit carefully before lunging at it far quicker than David could react. The marionette snatched the animal and flung it away carelessly. There was a crack as it hit the floor.
“Peter!” David roared turning towards the rabbit on the ground.
“You love me, father.” Jono said, “You said I could have the house. You said we could open the windows.”
David turned back to the marionette walking towards him, with something akin to heartbreak in its voice. He picked up the carving knife on the table.
“You love me, father.”
David ran at the thing. It was just wood, after all, and what was he but a glorified wood cutter?
Jono did not see it that way.
The puppet’s hand shot out at David’ wrist, breaking it as it grabbed the knife. It ran the knife into David’s stomach.
David stumbled backwards, now falling to the ground. He couldn’t feel much, considering the amount of blood that was spilling from him. Though whether that was thanks to his shock or adrenaline, he could not say. Spots were appearing in his vision. Everything moved, shifted and blurred.
Except the beautiful face looking down at him with the carving knife in its hand. Its living, piercing green eyes staring deep in to his own.
“You love me, father.”
David was thankful when the spots turned into nothingness.
Jono looked down at the puppeteer with a smile. He was silent now, and still. The man was silent now, and still. His father wouldn’t run anymore and would stay here with him.
Jono saw the deep, bleeding gash in his father’s stomach. The wooden boy was jealous of the blood, but the gash was ugly. It made his father look incomplete. He turned back to the workbench and saw a cabinet with a mirror on it. He could make his father beautiful.
The marionette’s porcelain green eyes stared back at him from the reflection of the looking glass. He gingerly touched the deep lines that ran down from his forehead to his chin. The statuesque structure of his face cracked down to its empty core.
What a beautiful face it had been.
Jono reached into the cabinet and pulled out the plaster.
What a beautiful face it would be.
Jono opened the windows.
Prompt(s): Image 8
Title: The Puppeteer
Word Count: 2158
Short Summary: A man's love (a better word, perhaps, would be obsession) for his art brings his creation to life. Unfortunately, the creature's obsession with the man's love is just as strong, and more deadly.
The Puppeteer
Quote:
Art is obsession.
For the lucky, that obsession gives way to love. Love purifies the obsession from the obsessed. But what of those who are the object of that obsession?
David Owens had never thought of himself as a true puppeteer, much less an artist of any sort, but he loved puppets. The way their little bodies tossed and turned in the air. The way their feet clattered on the small stage like music. The way, when handily crafted, they appeared to be little people, whose eyes were just as soulful as any living thing’s.
That was what David truly loved. The creation of the puppet. Breathing imitated life into pieces of wood.
David was one of the lucky few to turn their love into a job. Lately, he'd been working on a rather large set of puppets for a children's television show. They were not the most life-like puppets, nor were they any stretch to his creative ability, but they were putting food on the table and leaving him time for his current passion.
David sometimes wondered if he'd watched Pinocchio too many times as a child. It was not Pinocchio's journey to humanity that captivated David, but rather Geppetto's ability to create life. What a gift that would be. To look into these porcelain eyes and see life, true life, peering back at you.
David often wondered what God felt like, watching His children run and play.
He walked past his littered table, past the children's puppets, towards his locked closet. Fumbling with his ring of keys, he opened the door to the dark room.
"Hello, Jonothon. How are you today?"
Porcelain green eyes stared back.
"Good. I am sorry to be keeping you in the dark, but I don't want anyone to see you yet." David flicked on the closet light and the naked bulb swung back and forth as David brushed past it. Picking up the alder marionette, he brought it out on to his worn couch. After closing the many shutters to his windows and pushing the litter off of his work desk, he pulled the marionette affectionately dubbed 'Jonothon' onto it. Lovingly, David rubbed the sleeve of his shirt around the puppet's face, wiping off the thin layer of dust that it had accumulated.
"I shouldn’t leave you in there. Would you like to see the sun?”
A grunt like sound came from the corner of the room.
David looked over and smiled to a brown rabbit, sitting on its haunches, "Do you not like that? Would you like the windows closed?"
The rabbit settled back down and made something of a clicking noise with its teeth.
David smiled at his pet, "You are the living one Peter, and you win this round." He turned back up to the marionette and stroked its hair, "When you can argue back I'll be more than happy to open the windows and you can have your run of the house."
“Tomorrow…” David stroked the puppet’s thick hair, “Tomorrow I’ll open the windows for you.” He stepped back to see the marionette's head turned slightly towards the rabbit.
He laughed and turned the marionette's head back towards him, "Did I push you? I'm sorry, Jono."
David worked on the marionette long into the night. Longer than was usual for him, but the beauty of the puppet was penetrating and David found he could not let go of those green eyes. As sleep began to fall over his mind, his carving knife slipped along his hand. The wound had barely skinned the side of his palm, but he dropped the knife and cursed none-the-less. He brought the cut up to his mouth and began to suck on it. David didn't much care for that metallic taste that was bound to linger on his tongue, but better that than letting the blood spill freely onto his wooden child.
As David took his lips off of his wound he looked to his marionette sadly, "That's all for tonight. Goodnight Jono, Peter.”
Jono's green eyes briefly glistened with red as drops of blood fell from David to his puppet.
In the corner the rabbit made a grinding sound with its teeth. David ignored it.
The puppet did not.
David went against his promise the following day and kept the windows’ shutters closed in his first story workshop. Though later he would rationalize this to himself as being from sheer forgetfulness than any promises to the marionette. It all seemed so ludicrous in the morning light; promising a doll anything instead of a living breathing creature like Peter.
David threw on his clothing as he brushed his teeth, hastily rushing from here to there trying to gather up his puppets for the television company by noon. He hurried down into his workshop, squinting into the darkness. The silhouette of a body was strewn over the rabbit’s cage. The toothbrush fell out of David’s mouth as he groped around quietly for one of his carving knives.
“Who’s there!” He demanded of the body.
No reply but the whimpering of Peter inside his cage.
“Who’s there! I have a knife, you b*****d!”
No reply.
David stood entirely still, wishing that the pounding in his chest would quiet long enough to convince his legs to move forward. The pounding in his chest only began to hurt as he reached out a hand to look for the light switch to the dark room.
His fingers found the switch and fluorescent light filled the room. David sighed heavily and tossed the knife back on to his working counter.
The marionette lay face down over the rabbit’s cage.
“How did you get there?” David walked over to the marionette and righted it on top of the cage, “Fall over, did you Jono?”
He smiled at the puppet, loving how child-like it looked. Sitting on the rabbit’s large cage it came up David’s chest, arms dangling over the side of the metal bars. David frowned then, noticing a dark spot along Jono’s chin.
“What’s that?”
David put his hand up to smear it away.
Blood.
“Did I get that on you last night? Sorry, Jono. I didn’t mean to. I’ll clean you up tonight.” He picked up the puppet, “Let’s get you put away.”
As he carried the marionette into the closet a clock struck noon in his house loudly. David swore, propped the puppet up against the closet door, swiftly grabbed his commissions and ran out of the workshop.
“Father?”
David stopped at the workshop door. Immediately, David was sure it was his wooden child. The wooden boy’s voice echoed off the walls of its hollow body.
But no. David laughed. No, that was impossible. He was imagining things. David had wanted to create life like Geppetto and now he was convincing himself that he had.
David rubbed his eyes with the back of his wrists. He was tired, that was certain. He was tired and hearing things.
David continued out of the workshop.
“Come back, please.”
David hesitated, his foot hovering over the threshold. No. No, don’t turn around David. Don’t turn around. You’re being stupid David. You have to get to the television company David.
Don’t turn around.
“Please.”
Someone was playing a joke on him. That had to be it. One of the fellows from work had thrown Jono down on to the cage and now he was pretending to be Jono…
No. No, not Jono. The marionette. It wasn’t alive, no matter how much David had ever wished otherwise. The marionette was not alive. It didn’t have any Christian name. It wasn’t alive.
“Why won’t you come back?” The voice was pleading with him now.
David turned around, against every logical thought screaming to do otherwise. Jono sat propped up against the door perfectly still. Someone was playing a joke. They had to be. And when David found out who he planned on doing some particularly brutal things to them. Jono’s mouth levered open.
“Thank you.”
David could feel his bowels waver in their conviction. Every piece of him knotted and contorted in fear. He dropped the children’s puppets on to the floor carelessly.
“You never dropped me.” The voice said behind him.
No. No he hadn’t. He had loved that marionette. His Jono. He had never dropped him.
When David’s throat unstuck itself long enough to make a sound, all that came out was a vulgarity.
Jono had no expression, not yet, David had never quite finished that. But the marionette’s voice changed as surely as the glint in its eyes wavered.
“Are you angry?”
David couldn’t bring himself to do anything but stare at the thing before him. He didn’t want to be Geppetto anymore. Slowly, his tense neck turned his head to say ‘no’.
No, of course he wasn’t angry. He was far too scared to be angry.
“Good.” Jono tilted its head happily, “Thank you for staying.”
“How.” David was able to whine out from his frozen throat.
Jono put his wooden hand up to the spot of blood on his chin. He wiped some of it and held it out towards David.
“It’s life. You have it. I don’t. You gave it to me.”
David Owens had the ability to create life. And he did not want it.
David looked down to his rabbit Peter, who had pulled himself as far away from the puppet as possible. Its body was pressed up against the bars, great tufts of hair escaping from the cage. Peter saw the false life as well. David was not going insane. Peter saw it too.
Peter. Peter was the living one.
David felt blood run down into his limbs again. Adrenaline had kicked and was spurring his body to action, even if his mind was somewhat behind. David ran to the cage and flung the thing open. His hands dove in and dragged the rabbit free of the cage.
“What are you doing, father?” Jono asked.
David didn’t answer; his mind did not have the words to do it. His legs acted on their own, taking him straight to the workshop door with Peter in his arms.
“Father!” Jono cried out, lunging over furniture and tools alike. Its wooden body had no sense of pain so when its beautiful face cracked as it hit the side of the workbench it did not stop. Jono reached the door before David did and slammed it violently.
“You love me, father.”
David stumbled backwards, only barely keeping his footing.
Jono looked at the rabbit in David’s arms, “Why do you love it, father?”
“It’s alive.” David croaked, still walking backwards towards a window.
Jono looked at the rabbit carefully before lunging at it far quicker than David could react. The marionette snatched the animal and flung it away carelessly. There was a crack as it hit the floor.
“Peter!” David roared turning towards the rabbit on the ground.
“You love me, father.” Jono said, “You said I could have the house. You said we could open the windows.”
David turned back to the marionette walking towards him, with something akin to heartbreak in its voice. He picked up the carving knife on the table.
“You love me, father.”
David ran at the thing. It was just wood, after all, and what was he but a glorified wood cutter?
Jono did not see it that way.
The puppet’s hand shot out at David’ wrist, breaking it as it grabbed the knife. It ran the knife into David’s stomach.
David stumbled backwards, now falling to the ground. He couldn’t feel much, considering the amount of blood that was spilling from him. Though whether that was thanks to his shock or adrenaline, he could not say. Spots were appearing in his vision. Everything moved, shifted and blurred.
Except the beautiful face looking down at him with the carving knife in its hand. Its living, piercing green eyes staring deep in to his own.
“You love me, father.”
David was thankful when the spots turned into nothingness.
Jono looked down at the puppeteer with a smile. He was silent now, and still. The man was silent now, and still. His father wouldn’t run anymore and would stay here with him.
Jono saw the deep, bleeding gash in his father’s stomach. The wooden boy was jealous of the blood, but the gash was ugly. It made his father look incomplete. He turned back to the workbench and saw a cabinet with a mirror on it. He could make his father beautiful.
The marionette’s porcelain green eyes stared back at him from the reflection of the looking glass. He gingerly touched the deep lines that ran down from his forehead to his chin. The statuesque structure of his face cracked down to its empty core.
What a beautiful face it had been.
Jono reached into the cabinet and pulled out the plaster.
What a beautiful face it would be.
Jono opened the windows.