6235river
Arrow Slingzen
6235river
Blood-Tipped Thorn
6235river
Dude, chill out. Its just a story.
If you didn't want criticism, then either a) make it perfect or b) don't ask people to read it.
It's as simple as that.
Puh-lease. CONSTRUCTIVE critisizm is nice, yah know? Besides, whats not perfect to you, could be perfect to someone else. So I don't need you trying to change anything. Just leave you comment and move on with life.
That WAS constructive criticism. You said in the topic that you were thinking about publishing, so I would assume you'd want as much help as you can get.
Since I don't feel like saying the same thing over again, read the last part of my last post.
Get over it, critique makes you better. Can't take the heat? Get out of the kitchen.
Now, you say you're thinking about publishing? Well, I have a few questions.
- Do you have a synopsis written?
- Do you have a query letter? Do you know what goes into one?
- Do you have any agencies/publishing houses in mind and know what to look for?
- Do you have the tolerance it takes? You seemed impatient and immature when responding to the constructive critiques in your earlier posts. That is unprofessional and will get you no where in the publishing world. Someone has just spent
their time on
your work. Please, do take that into consideration.
Now, for the actual story itself.
- More cohesive. That'll make the flow tons better.
- Better description, less pointing out facts.
- A more original plot would be nice.
- I must say though, even though she has some composition quirks I'm not to fond of, I'm quite liking this character Violet.
You have potential, it just needs some work like every other piece of writing ever created.