Emihaumut
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- Posted: Thu, 17 Mar 2011 02:30:28 +0000
Read the comic here: http://emihaumut.com/comic.php?c=uploaded_images&v=wild&p=0
Thanks. smile
Hello CC. I feel like it's been a while since I've made a thread here for a comic. I'm still in the somewhat early stages, but I do have a script. This is a short comic (looking to be about 8 pages right now). I was hoping to get some feedback before I start storyboarding so that I won't have to make too drastic of changes. (That also means that some of the pacing and panelling is bound to change in the storyboards; so if there are panels with like 10 lines of dialogue, I'll probably break it up later.)
Here's the script: Go go google docs.
It's kind of a dark story with some weird messed up themes. I won't give anything away, but there's pretty much one overarching theme that connects everything. I'd like to know what you think the story is about at the end of each part (so I can tell if I'm too obvious of not). This was basically an exercise for myself to try to write a subtle story, but I don't think I've got the hang of it yet.
That said, I'm not the best of writers. I'm usually the illustrator in the group. Here, have some rough rough rough concept work for the characters. I'm finally learning how to draw white people in comics. And fat people.
http://emihaumut.com/uploaded_images/wild-concept-full1.png
I have no excuse to why the drawings are pretty mediocre (for now) other than I suck (and I should really be studying for finals instead of gaia'ing). I'll make empty promises later.
Please be gentle. I come from a place where asspats are handed out freely. I know that's pretty foreign in CC. And I know that's a good thing.
(And for anyone who might be looking at this from Catalytic Productions (cough cough chanted cough cough), yes I stole DD's name, but it works too well here in a way that probably only I will get.)
Edit: Storyboards are down here.