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Report | 05/13/2012 1:17 am

H4RDCR34Ti0N

Babe, you're so great.
;o

Report | 05/05/2012 10:30 am

Dunyazade

REN <3 Incidentally, you look fabulous today~

Report | 04/30/2012 9:54 am

Dizziesed

And you are looking soldierlyish!

Report | 04/30/2012 9:23 am

Dizziesed

you changeded! OMAI

Report | 04/30/2012 9:16 am

Dizziesed

hayu

Report | 04/20/2012 2:19 pm

Dyloxic

You look amazing. @.@

Report | 04/18/2012 1:11 pm

Dizziesed

I wouldn't worry about your first post too much, but if you'd like to make editions and additions to it later on, you can always just send me a PM about it. Maybe you have. I haven't checked my PMs yet.

Report | 04/18/2012 10:38 am

Santasaurus

XD ty ty

Report | 04/17/2012 7:50 pm

Santasaurus

HEY HEY HEY,
YOU BE JACKIN' MA STYLE >U

I used eyeblack before it was cool.

Report | 04/16/2012 4:21 pm

Dizziesed

Okay. I have two suggestions.
First of all, use the darker color for your post color if you want your entire post to be in a color, although you could choose to only color stuff in quotation marks or whatnot as well. The bright teal is pretty but difficult to read in large chunks.
Secondly, time is going to move slowly for the story, so to help you flesh out your posts, think about details of the moment. Initially, these may be details to introduce a reader to Kefir himself - what he looks like, how he thinks and acts, etc. Later, you'll have to dig into his primary senses. Similes and metaphors are your friends.

Report | 04/16/2012 3:57 pm

Dizziesed

But if you want him to be in the story later, I'd O.K. that. You don't write out a whole profile for secondary characters. Just a brief paragraph about who he is and why he's important, which I can add to the list of secondary characters. And don't bother unless/until right before you want to use him.

Report | 04/16/2012 3:53 pm

Dizziesed

potentially. My rule is they don't have to be in the story, but one of them has to be alive somewhere...

Report | 04/16/2012 3:51 pm

Dizziesed

okies

Report | 04/16/2012 3:44 pm

Dizziesed

I didn't know that she died. Is his father still alive? (It's generally not a good idea to kill off both parents before the story even starts.) Maybe she was killed in some simple accident? Crushed by something heavy from a height? The forests are isolated by mountains, so something could have happened along a mountain path.

Report | 04/16/2012 3:41 pm

Dizziesed

Just keep the total (profile + post) under 1200 words, not including code. But if you need help trimming you can send it to me and I'll send it back edited and you can accept or decline my changes.

Report | 04/16/2012 3:28 pm

Dizziesed

okies

Report | 04/16/2012 3:23 pm

Dizziesed

XD

Report | 04/16/2012 3:21 pm

Dizziesed

I LOVE YOU! WHAT A KOWINKIDINK!

Report | 04/16/2012 3:19 pm

Dizziesed

Teeheeeheehehehehehehe

Report | 04/16/2012 2:04 pm

Dizziesed

HEY LOOK IT IS YOU

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