Last Login: 09/24/2011 2:58 pm
Registered: 04/12/2009
Gender: Female
Birthday: 01/17
"If i had wings
I'd fly
Fly straight past the Earthly life,
Where the angels reside.
But alas i've no wings
And no I can't fly,
So here I stay,
...Below Hell's burning sky..."
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"......being different is not a curse...but simply,....a burdensome, saddening gift to be lived with in one's life...............forever and ever and ever............."
in the minds of transcendentalists........"poetry is the highest form of expression"....... biggrin
...one of my more favortite poems that i have written is called "I'm Sorry"......here goes=>....I'm sorry that I hurt you, I'm sorry I acted like i didn't care, I hadn't known what I had done, Hurting you was like havin no air. I know you've forgiven me already, But my guilt still lingers there, And no one knows how much I love you, And I know that most don't care. I know your fresh wounds have been reburned, To the core; and most others stare, But I'll pick you up and dust you off, If even you don't want me there. And should you say that I'm not needed, I won't simpy stare, I'll hug you and say "no regrets, its just the way I am, I'm hollow as thin air."
.....why am I here in this place......to bring joy or sorrow?....to bring destruction in my wake...or peace for tomorrow?......
with a fiendish smile upon your face you say, "all will be well......nothing will go wrong".......this is what you tell.....but yet i see him linger behind you...with face that's all too haughty and an impugnent smell.......its the face of death behind you, for I see it everday...and as you draw the knife to me, I know I'm headin to hell....so with last words i plead...."just make my journey safe and take away this smell!!"
IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED IM BORED.....................................GUESS WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT? IM BORED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOL THIS IS RANDOM....... XD
i wrote this cuz of the writer's guild assignment...technically i wrote it....but i doesn't feel right for me to say its entirely mine....so i give partial credit to Inyuashi23... smile anys...this poem is called "Demonic War"... =>..Inspire the dark
And forget the ages
For upon this night
It begins
And changes
The beginning
Of the end of all
As they wage war above
And as those demons ravage
One by one, angels fall,
For on this night
The light did fly
Replaced by dark Heaven above
For the dark below
Hath let itself loose
Now all we see is a bloodred sky.
<=...THESE TWO ARE TWO OF MY VERY BEST FRIENDS...THE ONE ON THE LEFT IS WOLFDREAMER AND THE ONE ON THE RIGHT IS MY BFF KAZZ...if anyone hurts them...i punch u in the face biggrin sorry thats coming on a lil strong but hey i love my friends no one hurts them ^____^
this is another one of my bffs i would put her with the other two on my profile but this bff doesn't go to the same school anys....she is a year older than me but i look up to her...plus she helped me survive my first year of band last year smile
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heart ~Edward
Though I understand the whole depressed thing; when you feel you have nothing to confide in you make something to confide in, someyhing that understands you, whether it be art, writing or otherwise. I've done it before myself.
best of luck on your future writtings. ^^
Also, if you use the "..." thing, only put three dots, otherwise it looks a bit sloppy...
And I'd work with more themes than "being hurt/hurting others"; it is a widley overused theme these days, and when pulled of right can be amazing, though most of it sounds like and angsty teen bitching.
I do apologise for this, I am overly critical of people at times.
I am sorry.
v.v
Lovely! Simply beautiful!
What....I like poetry....
If anyone else reads this comment, get used to it....
I'm a writer....with too many stories and poems....almost........
Muahahahaha.....
CHI!!!!!!