Please view and comment on all 20+ of them!! I'm trying to get feedback on my poems, so I can see if they are any good and try to eventually publish them all.
Melantha007
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Posted: Fri Sep 30, 2011 @ 08:28pm
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Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2011 @ 09:12am
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Melantha007
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Melantha007
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 @ 07:57pm
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Posted: Tue Dec 20, 2005 @ 02:12am
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Melantha007
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Melantha007
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Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2005 @ 08:31pm
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Posted: Tue Jun 07, 2005 @ 09:43pm
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Melantha007
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Posted: Mon May 09, 2005 @ 07:28pm
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How?
How?
How do you love someone
When they don't even know your name?
How can you tell them,
And take away your pain?
Who do you turn to,
When you're in love with your friend?
What can you say to them,
Who think you're "friends" to the end?
What is love,
And what is death?
How do you live,
When your life feels like "Macbeth?"
I'm trying to holler,
But no one is here.
Have I lost my voice,
That no one can hear?
I lay down my heart,
I give you my life.
Each day you reject me,
It cuts like a knife.
How many times
Can one heart be broken?
When may I give you
Affection's first token?
Cupid and Aphrodite,
Thou ficklest of gods,
I was struck with feathers,
But his arrows were iron rods.
Artemis, Lady Moon,
Wilt thou aid me?
Send with thy swiftest hound
To his ear my loving plea.
Lastly, O Hera,
Goddess and Queen,
Is there not something
To make me less green?
I wrote this in November of 2004, and gave it to two guys I've had crushes on for some time... the first is engaged EDIT-and has been married since July-EDIT; the second has disappeared and is avoiding me.
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Posted: Mon May 02, 2005 @ 10:58pm
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To John, with Sorrow.
To John, with Sorrow
Forgive the one who wronged you;
Forgive me, please, please please.
Forgive the one who angered you;
Forgive me, give me peace.
John, I am sorry for my queries;
The questions that turned you away.
I wish I could destroy them,
Erase them from that day.
Remember the photo of me that I sent you?
Remember the photo, of the fairy in the rain?
Remember the good times we laughed and shared together?
Please don't make me become that Gray Fairy again!
My brother, my heart is breaking;
I truly miss you so.
Li'l bro, forgive me please?
I do not wish to go!!!
I wish you would forgive me, John.
I do in deepest shame abide.
I think the world of you, bro;
My place, li'l bro, is at your side.
I'm sorry, I'm sorry,
What more can I say?
I'm sorry, I'm sorry,
Forgive me I pray.
I wrote this in March of 2004 for a boy I consider my brother, whom I wronged deeply. I penned this in apology.
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Melantha007
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Melantha007
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Posted: Thu Apr 28, 2005 @ 09:01pm
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Once the Magic is Gone.
Once the Magic is Gone.
Chapter 1. For Matt.
The way is paved with broken memories
Once the magic is gone.
Our hearts are like those of strangers'
Once the magic is gone
When we see each other we feel nothing
Once the magic is gone.
We will never feel anything again
Once the magic is gone.
All we feel is hatred for each other
Once the magic is gone.
We will never love each other again
Once the magic is gone.
I miss your loving face looking at me
Once the magic is gone.
I will never feel your arms around me
Once the magic is gone.
You miss my hand caressing your face
Once the magic is gone.
You will never feel my touch again
Once the magic is gone.
Our special place is special no more
Once the magic is gone.
We will never again have that place
Once the magic is gone.
We will never again wait by the phone
One the magic is gone.
We will not even talk anymore
Once the magic is gone.
Chapter 2. For Adam.
When you cast your eyes upon her,
I told myself I did not care.
But later, I found out that
In reality, I did not at all.
I gave you my heart and soul,
But you destroyed me with a word.
You gave me nothing but friendship,
But I cherished the time we had.
I am now lost among those with whom
The magic light of love has gone.
You continue on without a backwards
Glance at the one whose heart you took.
I will always be searching
For our magic to come back,
Even though I know that
It is all just a dream.
I will never be able to love another
Since you took my magic away.
I will only be able to love you
Until you give back my heart.
Please give me back my magic,
I wish to use it again.
Someone, please help me to find it in
My heart to forgive him who took it.
Chapter 3. For Adam, again.
If I travelled the world over,
I would not be able to recover my magic.
Only he who took it in the first place
Would be able to replace it.
When I was lost in the seas of despair,
The one who could help me wouldn't.
When I am now trying to find my self,
It is in the hands of one I once called "Love."
I will need my self to gain the love
I once thought would never find me.
I wish that you would give me back my magic
So that I can go on with my life.
Where is the magic that I once gave
To him who spurned my love?
It is still with him, until the time
He see fit to give it back to me.
The way is paved with broken memories
Once the magic is gone.
Our hearts are those of strangers'
Now that the magic is gone.
This is for my best friend, when I told him I loved him and he said "let's just be friends." Also for my ex-boyfriend, who dumped me as a birthday present... two weeks after my birthday.
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