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A pathetic Life
.
I bled for you,
I cried for you...
Inside, I died for you,
I guess it just wasn't enough.

To make you happy,
I went through hell,
I let myself love you...
Though you couldn't tell

All you did was hurt me,
Abuse me, and hate me.
Mentally tore me apart...
And physically raped me.

Now I'm alone,
Left with nothing but scars,
Contsant reminders...
of how you broke my heart.

The flow is off...as usual. Eh...is sucks.
Ant tips and/or HONEST opinions would be appreciated...Thanks

---VB






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Sacrificing Love With War
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commentCommented on: Mon Apr 30, 2007 @ 04:12am
Honest opinions? Aww do I have to? Fine I'll be honest... hehe I loved it ^_^ I thought it was really great. <3 Your flow became better when you changed it. <3 *Huggles your poem* Yay!!! <333


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