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*~*Ashley's Life*~*


x--Harry Mason--x
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Ok...so I've finished my vampire story...it sucks...I think I dunno...comment on it...??

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Tiffany felt her face heat up as she blushed. Angelus just smiled at her sweetly. He looked at the dress and then to her. "Put it on..." He whispered. She looked to him and smiled. She was going to put it on, he just needed to leave.

Angelus slowly made his way out of the room to give her the privacy she needed. "I'll be waiting just outside the door for you....please take your time." With those words escaping his mouth, Angelus left the room.

Tiffany sat there for a few moment debating whether of not she should do it. A few minutes later she decided she couldn't pass up such a gorgeous dress, so naturally she put it on. It was as if it was meant for her.

Once she had changed, she slowly opened the door, revealing herself to Angelus. He smiled at her. "Tiffany...you look absolutely radiant..." Tiffany blushed bright pink in color. Angelus caressed her face softly and kissed her gently.

Tiffany's eyes closed and she relaxed a bit. Her mind was telling her that this was wrong, but her mouth was telling her otherwise as she kissed him back.

Angelus smiled and took Tiffany around the waist and lead her down stairs. "Close your eyes..." Tiffany smiled and nodded as she let her eyes slide shut. Angelus checked to make sure she couldn't see anything. Once he was sure she couldn't, he lead her down a dark hall and into the most grand ballroom.

Once they reached the center of the room he let go of her. "Open your eyes..." He said softly as he slowly backed away from her. Tiffany's eyes opened and she almost stopped breathing. "Oh my..." She looked around, slowly taking small steps in every direction.

She looked back to Angelus and tried her best to run to him. He opened his arms and held her there for a few moments. "This is amazing..." Tiffany whispered quietly. Angelus traced his finger along her collar bone and up to her chin.

He angled her face so she was looking directly into his eyes. Angelus smiled his most trance enducing smiled as he began to speak. "Dance with me..." Tiffany, entranced by Angelus, nodded and placed her hands upon each of his shoulders.

His hands slid down to her waist and they started to move with the beat of the music that seemed to be playing in their heads. The first few dances were calm and slow, but that seemed to change. In time the songs grew faster and the dances grew more intricate in step.

Tiffany didn't seem to notice how the dances changed. Nor did she know that she could dance with such skill, such angelic grace. Ange with Angelus leading, she couldn't go wrong. The hours flew by in what seemed in what seemed like minutes. And when the music stopped neither of them did.

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Yeah there's more...I just didn't feel like typing it...





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Missy Wish
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comment Commented on: Tue Jan 29, 2008 @ 06:41pm
Hey Darling!
Oh My god that is beautiful!
It is mega sweet and just beautiful!
Made a tear go down my cheek!
I can't believe how beautiful it is!
I'd totally pay £10 for that if it was a book!
Love Ya x
Missy xx


comment Commented on: Thu Jan 31, 2008 @ 07:56pm
It's good, if you like that sorta thing. I'm not into that sorta romancey stuff but it was well written 3nodding



Clise
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