Ok, so last night I had this dream....this dream inspired me to write a story...
About 4 friends, who learn of the legend of the Thieves Bones. Whosoever finds a trail of bones leading down a cavern's floor, shall find the treasure of a 1000 thieves.
Please tell me if this is a good idea so far. because im going to be writing it in my journal and looking for feedback. Ok, so here we go!
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PRELUDE
The final Thief
"Riena ran swiftly through the town, as a horde of villagers chased behind. She knew that she might not be able to escape this situation, but she had to try. Reina as a thief, one of the most notorious thieves to ever be involved in that profession. She has been a thief ever since the age of 5, and it was all she knew. As Reina ran into the thickets of the forest, she began reflecting on her past life..." Grandpa Damien said.
The four children sat in awe as they listened to Grandpa Damien's story. These children enjoyed stories such as this, because they were true...supposedly. But the part that excites them the most, would be the fact that thieves like Reina, all hid their stolen loot in the same place as any other thief in the town. They hid it in an underground cavern, in a location that no one knows, outside of the town thieves. The last Eagle Eye thief was killed off 400 years ago. You see, back then, thieves had gangs, and the most notorious gang was the one Reina was in. This gang was known as the Eagle Eyes. The Eagle eyes were the most elusive gang of thieves for their time...until one day, a mole got into the group...and one by one, the members were killed. The mole was eventually found and killed by Reina before the Mole could disclose the location of their Loot...but by then, it was too late. Everyone knew who the Eagle Eye thieves were, and everyone knew what they wanted to do when they found one.
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Ok, so Im probably gonna write more later.Leave a comment and tell me what you think
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