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I have some poem thingys and I'd like to know if they're any good

False Smile
It's a phase thats all it is
you'll get over it they say
what they can't feel however
is my pain and sorrow

you came in my life
so unexpectedly and tricked me
with your gentle smile. I knew at once
that I loved you

But...one day you just...
disapeared...I cried...a lot
If I stood out in the rain
screaming your name
you still wouldn't come back

Now I protect myself
from being hurt
Never again to trust
Never again to love

Time flies by
where did it go?
There are two who
truly love me at
least one for sure

Their smiles are
true this time
No hidden lies
No disapearing

They're the best friends I ever had

This is for you Gloria Elric Happy birthday Hope this poem thing was accurate Love you, Alisha heart



Maiden


Little dancing girl
playing in the rain
Little hymns of music
composed by the wind

A song for you
A song for me
A dance for two
A dance for three

Why little maiden
is there tears
So much happiness
yet so much fears

A little boy hides and watches
While the little maiden dances
a dance so graceful, and sings
a song so sweet

A blissful kiss
An embrace so gentle
A forest marriage
A long life together

Oh wise maiden
still dancing with grace
how do you stay so great
tell us of your life as a maiden



Finding the Light

In this time of my life
love is feebleminded
but my drifting moments
are just me thinking about you

With you standing by me
I can rule the world
With your words guilding me
I can find the light

I'm thinking about you
I've said this once before
Though I have high hopes and dreams
I won't be able to achive them

With my foolish pride in my grasp
I'll walk away from your life
The burden on you is gone
I've lost reason to fight

As I issolate myself holding my knees
thoughts start rushing in my head
Its not like you ever loved me anyways
But even so,even so...

With you standing by me
I can find the light
With your voice guilding me
I can find the light

Our paths cross once more
This time for the last
I see you and oh how I want you
but my pride is still in tack
So my sincerly sorry smile
Is the last thing you see of me

The rain is falling hard
Everyone is crying
They show such pity and anger
Even though because of you I'll find the light