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hey there who ever is reading check out my frist song that i have ever writen!!! (based off a poem my friend wrote)

"I'm falling
Falling faster now
down deeper than before
falling deeper in love with you
on top of the world with you

Corus:
then the world goes crashing down
with me on the ground
cut wide open (open)
my hearts wide open (open)
the only thing i feel now
is the pain you gave me
wide open(open)

I thought you were the love for me
truns out im wrong
i want to be free
free from my misery
cause it hurts to much

Corus:
The world goes crashing down
with me on the ground
cut wide open (open)
my hearts wide open (open)
my only feeling now
is the pain you gave me
wide open (open)

repeat
The world goes crashing down
with me on the ground
cut wide open (open)
my hearts wide open (open)
my only feeling now
is the pain you gave me
wide open (open)

i thought i'd never be put back together
but i was wrong
he smiles and laughs with me
but he doesnt see
he's putting me together
and i can't help but fall
fall for him
no i can't help but fall
fall for him

I lay here un broken
my hearts not wide open (open)
im not wide open (open)
im finally unbroken
yea im finally unbroken"

what do you think????