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Chapter 1 is finally up!
-"If everybody minded their own business, the world would go around a great deal faster than it does". The words floated into my mind. I remember the Duchess telling me that when I was in Wonderland.

-Hi I bet you all know who I am, but I'll introduce myself anyway. My name is Alice Pleasance Liddell. I was born on May 4, 1994, so I'm 13 years old. I have long blonde hair thats ussualy in a headband. As you may know that when I was 7 I had my first trip to a magical place called 'Wonderland'. Where I wore that ever adorable blue lolita dress. Ever since that day I've wished to go back. I tried to tell everyone that what I saw was real, but noone belived me. My older sister was worried that I was going insane. They locked me up The Rutledge Asylum for 2 years.

-Rutledge Asylum was a horrid place. They used machines to try to erase my memory. That didn't work. Hyponosis did nothing. They would say "Alice stop resisting. This world of yours isn't real. It was just a dream." "Wonderland is real. I know it." I would calmly return the same phrase each time. They grew tired of listening to me drabble on about the White Rabbit, the Cheshire Cat and all of my wonderland friends. They decided to give me a part of my real life back to see if it would have any affect. They brought me my kitten. Her name is Dinah. She was my best friend. I told her everything about Wonderland because I know she couldn't tell me I was wrong. She listen to everything I said. Well at least I think she did because she looked at me the entire time with her ears perked up. After more therapy and machines, I let them think that I forgot about Wonderland and all the people there.

-They kept me there another year just to make sure I was cured. Finally they let me out. My sister was relived to find that I was sane. For the next few years I lived a quiet life. I didn't speak to people for fear that I might say something that might land me back at Rutledge. Keeping my thoughts of Wonderland to myself and Dinah who alway's seemed intrested in hearing it. One day I came home form school and found out that my dear friend Dinah had died while I was gone. I just looked at my sister in utter disbeilf. She said Dinah was attacked by a dog. I just walked slowly up to my room. As soon as I was up there I broke down and cryed so hard. I soon forgot about Wonderland.

-About a year later my sister bought me another kitten. It was white with a black spot around it's eye. I instantly loved it and named it Dinah in memory of my deceased cat. Dinah and I went everywhere together. I found myself in a field everyday. Wether it way if I lost my way or I slept walked to it. I searched the field for answers on why I came there everyday. I crawled along the tall grass with Dinah laying happily on my back. My hand suddenly slips. As I fell the memories of Wonderland swarmed back to my head. "KICKASS" I yelled as I saw the colors of the rabbit hole surround me. "Alice? Where are we?" A small voice asked


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Okay tell me what you think.
Quick note on a few detail I threw in there.
Rutledge Asylum is the Asylum that Alice was put in in 'American McGee's ALICE'.
Alice Pleasance Liddell is the name of the girl who was the origanal insparation for the character Alice.

DISCLAIMER: I don't own Alice in Wonderland. The credit for that goes to Lewis Carroll, the origanl author of Alice in Wonderland.






User Comments: [6]
ShadowSex777
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Thu Mar 06, 2008 @ 03:20am


Hi Alex i love the story you wrote sounds something like Maximum Ride. Very creative and well thought so far if you haven't read Maximum Ride you should good book and I almost never read rofl ninja


Ms Saku
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Sun Mar 09, 2008 @ 02:23am


I love the story so far!! ^-^ It's very creative and seems like a great continuation to Alice's saga. Keep writing! =3


Kyden Sarita
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Mon Mar 17, 2008 @ 11:25pm


i absolutely loved it! you simply MUST continue! i'm sending you a friend request A.S.A.P!!!! Don't let me hold you up! Continue, continue! heart heart


Xxx Megami Tenshi xxX
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Tue Mar 18, 2008 @ 01:33am


xp LOVE IT *clap clap*


Desdemona of the Sound
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 @ 01:09am


Wow 4 comments. Thanks guys! I'm working on chapter 2 and it should be up by the end of March.


Yami Akuma
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Sun May 11, 2008 @ 03:11pm


OMG!!!!! RENO THAT IS AWESOME!!!!

WRITE MORE!!!!


User Comments: [6]
 
 
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