im not a poet
i try my best
to gain your love
is my true test
the words you choose [poem not done yet]
the things you say
could cheer me up
on the saddest day
i wish i was ther
with you right now
i'd just hold you close
without making a sound
i'd stroke your hair
i'd hold you tight
we'd forget all our worries
at leadst for one night
i'd tell you how preciouse
you are to me
a gift from above
is wat you must be
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go ahead and read it.
check out my poems
check out my poems
USMC)Jimi
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comment my poems in my journal.
it would really help to hear reactions and advice.
You get my axe of capitalism right in your face!!
Vivir Para Amar
it would really help to hear reactions and advice.
You get my axe of capitalism right in your face!!
Vivir Para Amar
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Seriously, that's an awesome poem. smile