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Ghost
I Try to write songs...but i know that they suck ....but ******** what i think...i'm just negative...let me know what you think!
Something i wrote...
" Troublesome Pain "

Holding me head up to that sound
Holding back for the troublesome years

Everything seems worse when the pain is here
without you standing there taking the beatings
Of every falling tear that causes me to feel this bad
When i hear you breathing next to me

Took the scars and saw the pain
It just seems like another game
Holding back for the years to come
Try holding that single beat
Try holding things alittle to closely

Holding back back for all these year
Taking the beating for every single tear
The pain is just alittle sincere
This song could be the death of me
Holding too tight to the pain i see

Everything seems worse when the pain is here
Without you standing there taking the beatings
Of every falling tear that could blow my head open wide
Let you see the pain inside dwelling abit to hard

To the sound of every beating heart
That steals my breath away
I wish i could tell you this solo was meant for you
To get back up from the pain
To get over it and see the better in life
Could it work i doubt it
Falling away trying to take the pain
Alittle slip could cause more then just a tear
To cause more than pain to these people
Standing around you...standing there to show
They give a damn about you

Every bit of pain shows in my eyes
I don't think i could take another try
I just want to help you through this
I just want to help stay alive

Took the scars and saw the pain
It just seems like another game
Holding back for the years to come
Try holding that single beat






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Rocky Ward
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commentCommented on: Sat Sep 27, 2008 @ 09:25pm
the pain can never leave
but its the past it cant desieve
the shadow lingers behind
and can never leave your side

but the sun puts puts it behind you
thats nothing you can do
a true friend helps you forget
maybe thats why the two of you met

each heart says something to the other
something you cant hide or cover
believe in one believe in all
thats the only way one cant fall

((couldnt help but write a poem here...it sux but o well :3))


commentCommented on: Thu Jul 30, 2009 @ 04:15am
It's good! I like it! ^__^ I write songs, too, though I have yet to post them up on Gaia...maybe I should...



Nyxira
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The Villainess Wildcard
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commentCommented on: Sat Oct 17, 2009 @ 12:35pm
you don't suck at this. your pretty good. a lot of songs could actualy use a bit of adjustments that are on the radio.


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