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MY FANFIC DAMNIT!!!

Hey! It’s me Thefullygirlalchemist yeah well you can call me crack bunny if you want… well this is my first fic please be patient I haven’t never in my life writed something so… I don’t know if you will like it… ah yeah I was going to post this like 4 days ago and I dint because I didn’t writed this due to my laziness… so… yeah this sucks….

This fic sucks. Well when you read something like this I could be either a flashback or… someone is mocking by putting emphasis to a word.

‘this fic sucks’ when you read this it means that someone is thinking.

“this fic sucks” this mean that someone is talking

So… you want to know why I writed that well I dunno so… read the fic and enjoy.

Disclaimer: now that im thinking I don’t own naruto and really thinking I don’t even own myself ‘cause my parents and my not-yet-found lover own me… well I own this word and this poem: i would never own naruto and neither would you.

So now I will shut up and go with the fic…

I think we should get to know each other:

Chap 1: I think we should get to know each other.

Hinata is still the same girl from 2 ½ years ago, the only difference is her body that is now filled with curves, she have long dark indigo hair and the same beautiful lavender eyes.

She was at the training grounds training with her team.

“Hey Hinata-chan is time to go” Kiba said.

“ummm, I-I will g-go la-later k-Kiba-kun” Hinata stuttered.

“Ok but be careful” Kiba said leaving with Shino.

---------------------------------------- WITH SASUKE--------------------------------------------

“¡hey Sasuke-kun do you want to go somewhere with me?!” Sakura said excited.

“NO” Sasuke said with a little anger in his voice.

“Sakura-chan I can go with you if you want” Naruto said with hope in his eyes.

“No” Sakura said a little pissed off.

“awww, but Sakura-chaaaaaan” Naruto said sadly.

“NO” Sakura said really angry.

“Hn, I’m going” Sasuke said with a monotonous voice.

“oh... ok Sasuke-kun” Sakura said a little sad.

“Bye Sasuke-teme” Naruto said loudly.

“Dobe…” that was the last he said before he left.

“Bye Sakura-chan” said Naruto loudly.

“Naruto baka stop talking so loudly” said the slut er… Sakura.

“I'm sorry Sakura-chan” Naruto said feeling like he had done something horrible.

“Yeah whatever” Sakura said not even caring about it.

Then they left to their houses.

Sigh ‘why Sakura-chan doesn’t care about me’ ‘well I gotta go home’ Naruto thinked.

--------------------- WITH HINATA AT THE TRAINING GROUNDS----------------------

Hinata was panting of tiredness.

“Ah… I need… to… get… stronger” Hinata said panting.

“I feel…” Hinata didn’t end her sentence and passed out.

--------------------- ---------------------WITH SASUKE-------------------------------------------

´Hn I really needed a walk alone´ ´why this girls are so annoying they just keep chasing me trying to get my attention and they don’t know that the only thing that they get is more hate towards me… especially Sakura´ Sasuke stopped walking when he saw a body lying on the ground in the distance. ´Hn who would it be? ´ Sasuke said not even caring to get there fast.

When he got closer he identified the body. ´Oh, so is that weak hyuuga girl… what was he name? ´ he got closer to the passed out Hinata and watched her (A/N: he was without the jacket) he contemplated her beautiful body ´Hn, this girl isn’t that bad… why does she hide herself in that oversized jacket´ he kneeled in front of the girl to wake her. With a few shakes she started mumbling something and slowly opened her eyes.

“Umm, sa-Sasuke san” she said startled and shoot open her eyes.

“Sa-Sasuke-san what are you doing here?!” Hinata said

“I was walking and saw you lying there on the ground, would you rather being left there the whole night” Sasuke said in a monotonous voice.

“umm… w-well… n-no” she said almost like a whisper.

Then she noticed that Sasuke was still holding her she then got like tomato red ‘umm Sasuke san is still holding me´

‘Hn, why is she so red is she sick or something’ he then noticed that he still had her in his arms ‘oh so that’s why… interesting’ he then moved to make her stand in her feet ‘Hn, let me see if she’s like the other girls’ he then moved one of his hands to her butt

“ ahh” she screamed and in a impulse she slapped him.

‘Hn, I guess not’ he though.

When she came to her senses she looked at the ground and started poking her fingers ‘oh what did I did I must apologize’ “umm, Sasuke-san I-I’m so-sorry” Hinata said trying not to see him direct in his eyes.

“Hn” he said “you must go to your house is very late, I will walk you home.” He said.

“Eh?... Sasuke-san y-you d-don’t h-have t-to” she said startled and amused of what he said.

“Would you rather being raped here in the forest… it isn’t very difficult at this late hour and darkness” he said.

“oh… ok…” Hinata said.

“hn, let’s go” he said.

They walcked all the way to the hyuuga compound in silence. Hinata was all the way blushing and Sasuke was staring at her indifferently.

When they got to the hyuuga compound neji ran to the hyuuga gates. He was furious and… worried?. “Hinata-sama, where were you?!” Neji said fury and worry in his voice.

“ummm… neji-niisan I-I—“ Hinata was cut of her sentence when neji interrupted her.

“What are you doing with the Uchiha?!, where you with him all that time? Hinata-sama answer me!!”

“I-I…” that was all Hinata could say before she where interrupted again.

“she passed out, I saw her lying on the ground and I picked her up and walked her here2 he said not even caring.

Neji sighed “I’m sorry Hinata-sama… I was just worried, I’m your protector I needed to know where you were” neji said apologizing.

“I-I’m sorry n-neji-niisa" hinata said softly.

“It’s ok, now enter the compound before your father gets angrier” neji said as he entered past the gates.

“ummm… Sa-Sasuke-san… t-thank y-you and… sorry for the t-trouble I c-caused” she said poking her fingers.

“Hn, it was nothing” he said walking away… “hey hyuuga! What’s your name?” he said as he stopped walking.

“eh?... er… hi-hinata” Hinata said shyly.

“ok Hinata-chan” he said and the smirked. “ I think we should get to know each other” that was the last he said as he disappeared in the darkness.

Well… that was the first chap… er…. Review if you want me to continue… all reviews are accepted… even flames!!!!... if you have suggestions im open to them…. So please be patient and if people encourages me I would update very soon well school days may make me have problems with the fic and not because loans of homework its because I feel more like writing in school… and hell if you read something that sounds a little weird don’t flame me its my computer’s fault ‘cause when I was writing a stupid green line appeared under what I was writing and the stupid Microsoft word wouldn’t let me alone until I did whatever it told me to do so… flames go to my computer XD…. Well see ya…

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