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kab00dl3z

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Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 10:55 am

i drew this pic and i meant it to be avi art but i thought that adding all the stuff from my avi would ruin it. Anybody have any advice? And also plz tell me what is bad about the picture, be as harsh as you can ^^

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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 2:45 pm

The mouth is bad.

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Chiru013

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Posted: Fri Aug 10, 2007 4:58 pm

Honestly, It's a good start, but the eye's way too big and, as previously (and callously) stated, the mouth needs work. But with practice, you'll get better.

Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 7:57 am

i always have problems with making the eyes too big sweatdrop

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kab00dl3z

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Posted: Sat Aug 18, 2007 7:58 am

should i just start over , and not even do anything to this one?

Posted: Sat Oct 20, 2007 10:02 am

kab00dl3z

should i just start over , and not even do anything to this one?

Sometimes it's nice to start fresh, but those little things are easily fixed. I think the hair looks wonderful, so I'd personally want to fix this one, but it's all up to you.

*sorry for taking so long to reply... I don't visit this forum much*

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Posted: Wed Nov 07, 2007 1:14 pm

The main problem i can see is you're basing almost all of the drawing on "line-drawing" and not enough on tone... hope i was helpful!! other than that i like it!!

Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 6:01 pm

bubblegums500

The mouth is bad.

there is no mouth

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