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 Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 4:29 pm
human Username: jay Name: jay zemna Age: 18 Picture of Charater:  Wepon: Single katana as seen in picture
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 6:50 pm
Don't you think that has too much potential to god-mod?
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Posted: Sat Jul 21, 2007 7:47 pm
Shotgun? It seems like he's in an age before shotguns. You should put a lot more information. And like Mahajarah said, WAY too god-modish.
Lex
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 1:56 pm
Another very old but somehow doesn't look it?
Ugh.
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Posted: Sun Jul 22, 2007 1:58 pm
I've seen this picture on almost anything that has to do with vampires. From books to video games. Also I agree that he does seem to have a bit too much power.
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Posted: Mon Jul 23, 2007 8:35 am
I'd have to say it's pretty weak, not too god-mod, accept for the fact that he can take other peoples abilities.
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Posted: Tue Jul 24, 2007 11:54 pm
Che, to mine eyes, the problem seems to be, not what is there, but what isn't there. There's so much info that isn't included in the bio. His swords for example, you state there name, but not what they do. In the middle of battle, they could turn into two uber-powerful angels and we wouldn't know till it happened.
And what about his weaknesses, does he have the normal weaknesses of a vampire- is he even a vampire as the picture leads us to believe.
All I'm saying is to include more detail...
For example describe what "Two Crusade Blades" look like, and what they're capable of.
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Posted: Fri Jul 27, 2007 6:28 am
Yesh it would need more detail like personality would be good, and a bio.
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