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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jun 30, 2007 7:47 pm
Been a while since I randomly wrote something.
Explosive! Like the Human Torch at Hank Hill's job. With spontaneous combustion, I let my skills rob the average emcee of their relevance. They get no reverence, cuz they claim to be the s**t, but we see no evidence. Big mouths, big words, but they ******** up the meaning with warped view points that's self-demeaning to the art they claim. Bringing shame to the game. Say they're scorching, but they must have an invisible flame. I only spit from the heart, so my s**t's more authentic than the next cat, who's spittin' like he's autistic. Mumbo jumbo left and right, random rhymes mixed like gumbo. So when it's time to deliver, the message gets blocked like Mutombo. But me, my s**t's clear and fires straight in ya ear, whether you like it or not, like Anna Nicole's career.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 11:34 am
Not bad im a bit s**t tho
I may not be the human torch, but im still explosive. combustion, not me cos im corrosive i can see ure a emcee thats all i eva wanted be to just see if i can mc i wrote this down for all to see i may not be as good as you, i may only be numba 2 but i still wanna try this through. i may be s**t but i dont care, ure criticism i can bear just let me know wat u all think, maybe its true i stink. there int not more to say, so have a nice day!
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:31 pm
Just have fun with it, man. You'll progress naturally the more you do it.
Lyrical political, but still rap's literal pinnacle. Doubt my writtens, you must be the illiteral cynical. Got the fundamentals down pat, now expressin' my skill with excessive force to hold you captive against thy will. I still hold the game in my clutches like I caught-a-lateral, to flaunt in the faces of you congruent quadrilaterals. (Squares) I'm not Ricky Williams, but I'm here to burn ya green til it's spent. Down to the lint, just to turn ya fiend.
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:41 pm
i like to rub Oil of Olay all over my cojones(ca-hone-ays), before i peirce ya with my wood like my name's Kagome. rofl
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Jaiden Stryker Vice Captain
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:46 pm
Phoenix Fist i like to rub Oil of Olay all over my cojones(ca-hone-ays), before i peirce ya with my wood like my name's Kagome. rofl stare
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Posted: Thu Aug 02, 2007 12:53 pm
Phoenix Fist i like to rub Oil of Olay all over my cojones(ca-hone-ays), before i peirce ya with my wood like my name's Kagome. rofl Pause
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