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 Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 7:31 am
1 Round.
5 bars. No less. More is fine, try to keep it under 10 if you go above that.
No Feeding.
Accept and post your verse.
If you'd prefer for me to post first, say so upon accepting.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:01 am
Please, respect the Cypher...'cuz the Cypher is so unkind.
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Posted: Sat Jun 16, 2007 9:17 am
alrigh, alright. im coming, but im taking care of something with bizzy right now. if you wanna drop first thats coo.
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Posted: Sun Jun 17, 2007 4:40 pm
Ok, looks like I'm dropping first. I'll get it down either later this evening or sometime tomorrow.
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 12:31 pm
Aaaight check it out.
I change up my Hoes/
like i change up my clothes/
My rhymes will put you in a hole/
and make sho' yo casket stays closed./
From the grave, he arose/
just to keep you on yo toes/
and he shall smite you like the rest of his foes,/
two shots in the head, no witnesses, case closed./
See, i am a thorn with no rose/
and that is how i pose./
You're supposed to be a god, but your just a man/
it will be evident when i bust a cap or two in yo head,/
burying you and any dreams you might have possibly had./
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 12:53 pm
Homo, slow your roll, I know you hope for sluts,
But niggas bust more white juices on your face than splittin' Coconuts
You are hopeless, but I trust that you've only penetrated through male's butts,
Their tails' whats drives you insane to crave a male to ******** hush, baby, don't you make a fuss"
Whispering to your little brother when forced to embrace your lust
Your rhymes? Wack. Flow? Mediocre.
So it doesn't take a battle with me to see weak for you is kosher.
You know I'm so nice, you'd do anything to taste it.
You'd even eat fudge brownies that I made with my waste: s**t.
domokun Wack On Both Sides
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 1:27 pm
That's it? Gay jokes? Im a little disappointed. nice flow though. smooth. got my respect.
Liste, I know Mak has developed a reputaion around here, but im gonna have to ask you to actually read the verses and not dickride based on personal preference.
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 2:24 pm
Actually, no offense, but I think you and everyone else who is and was a member of this guild can honestly say I would have raped you and that verse worse than 8 year old slaves by white men.
Anyway, I was just ********' around and that's about all I need to win in my opinion. You've made your statement and here is my response, now let the votes fall as they may.
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 2:51 pm
i wasnt emplying anything, ive just noticed that people seem to vote for the emcees they like the best rather then the best lyrics. im just tryin to sepeare the art from the artist, so to speak.
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 3:52 pm
coconut.man92 i wasnt emplying anything, ive just noticed that people seem to vote for the emcees they like the best rather then the best lyrics. im just tryin to sepeare the art from the artist, so to speak. That's not true at all. In my own votes, I've found myself forced into admitting defeat to a friend simply to provide a victory to a foe. Many a time I've voted for someone whose attitude or presence I simply detest. It has been clear here that people provide logical reason, especially when the battles are significant, to support their claims. You think I cannot gain a victory over you without pity votes or biased judgement? Then you're sadly mistaken. I've beaten the best. In my opinion I am one of, or the best completely.
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 4:01 pm
look, im not tryin to attack, ive seen your stuff, and i know youre good. what i was poiting out was not pity at all. but is some of your battle ive notice people seemed to vote for you because they simply did not want to vote against you. im not gonna name anybody.
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Posted: Thu Jun 28, 2007 4:05 pm
coconut.man92 look, im not tryin to attack, ive seen your stuff, and i know youre good. what i was poiting out was not pity at all. but is some of your battle ive notice people seemed to vote for you because they simply did not want to vote against you. im not gonna name anybody. Do so. I need these names to continue responding. I need to see proof for myself.
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Lucky Lucifer Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 10:43 am
Ok I'm assuming votings open.
Vote: Mak
Mak won this because he actually had punches. You can't win a battle without punches. It's like...
You're supposed to be a god, but your just a man
...was your best punch. And that's no where near good enough to win a battle, let alone against someone as skilled as Mak.
And you said 'Gay jokes is that it' but your verse centered around shooting Mak and some zombie s**t. Your not gonna win a battle like that.
I didn't actually think Mak's verse was that bad. It made me giggle lol.
"Hush hush, baby, don't you make a fuss"
I don't know why but that just made me laugh a little. But like all of Maks bars were punches and that was more than enough to win this battle.
Oh and Coconut man, I'm not voting for Mak cos I like him more but because his verse was just better, no dickriding, he was just better.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 11:33 am
Lucky Lucifer Ok I'm assuming votings open. Vote: Mak Mak won this because he actually had punches. You can't win a battle without punches. It's like... You're supposed to be a god, but your just a man ...was your best punch. And that's no where near good enough to win a battle, let alone against someone as skilled as Mak. And you said 'Gay jokes is that it' but your verse centered around shooting Mak and some zombie s**t. Your not gonna win a battle like that. I didn't actually think Mak's verse was that bad. It made me giggle lol. "Hush hush, baby, don't you make a fuss" I don't know why but that just made me laugh a little. But like all of Maks bars were punches and that was more than enough to win this battle. Oh and Coconut man, I'm not voting for Mak cos I like him more but because his verse was just better, no dickriding, he was just better. Quoted lines, specification as to a reason within the verses to vote or not vote for an individual. I see no biased voting here. This vote clearly states that what I posted in response was superior.
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Posted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 12:05 pm
lmao, whether either one of you tried, coconut was owned. Coconut man had two lines that could actually be considered punches. That alone hands it to Makairo, but to be more specific; Quote: Homo, slow your roll, I know you hope for sluts, But niggas bust more white juices on your face than splittin' Coconuts merked you. nameplay almost seemed unintentional. Quote: You know I'm so nice, you'd do anything to taste it. You'd even eat fudge brownies that I made with my waste: s**t. not hard hitting, but you can see where the concepts connected in the first and second line. Coconut's whole verse seemed like some kinda story or he was just gloating about himself or what he'd do to Makairo, which in a battle=WACK. vote: Makairo
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