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Overlord Makairo

PostPosted: Sat May 05, 2007 9:14 am


6 bars.
2 line bars.
1 round.
No Feeding.
PostPosted: Tue May 08, 2007 11:34 am


Aye, if they don't accept then I will. Ya dig?

+.Reasonable~Doubt.+


+.Reasonable~Doubt.+

PostPosted: Wed May 09, 2007 1:26 pm


This shoulda been made to be longer than 6 - 2 lined bars, cuz i'm used to doin' 4 lines/ bar... couldn't really say all I wanted to, ya know? But anyways...

I'm bout to ~Maka~ fool easily outta ya kid, you shoulda jus decline this waga (wager) dude cuz i'll devour ya s**t!!/ have ya showered in clips like why even call ya self a ~God~ when you lack the major proof N can't empower ya spits!!/

this herb'll die, so needless to say you far from superior cuz removin' yo ribs'll be the only way to purge ya prime!!/ i'm goin' beyond text damage so forget words N lines, i'll jus' mix yo body wit water to literally sub-merge ya life!!/

here you's a dead guy as i'm sick wit the lead shots, it's like small pox the way i'll leave ya face covered wit red dots/ 1 usin' yo mouth for input's the only means of this homo cuz he wants to be a sniper N give nothin' but head shots!!/

you beat me? HA! at least ya view 's strong, but the action's impossible N is makin' my tendency to abuse stawm (storm)/ bash ya head in N have ya left as a bruised con, cuz yo weak a** couldn't blow, like dynamites wit the fuse gone!!/

you not gettin' any where in rap so use little words, that way you can make other aspects of ya flimsy skill look bigger/ his fragile existence got me askin' why pull triggers? cuz he'll still die when he get pistol whipped wit full vigor!!/

who gave this queer a broken compass N had him ~Maka~ wrong turn, to challenge vets, knowin' I handle pests?!/ but if you want? we could rematch on an audio battle yet, you'd still lose ya life as i'll make yo a** sample death!!/ 2

1. Lead shots = bullets + bars/verbal punches

2. Sampling = Audio - For those who don't know, a sample is a chopped portion of one song added to another, as used in makin' beats. Lose ya life + audio battle= sample death, Get it?
PostPosted: Fri May 11, 2007 8:41 am


~Has dropped~

+.Reasonable~Doubt.+


Overlord Makairo

PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 5:40 am


Evidently your flow's limited, your intelligence? Ruined,
'cuz what you produce is unwanted like only oozing pre-seminal fluid

Disgraceful's the bed where your thoughts have often slept,
Desires confused, so dude would only do a mule ride if the Mattress hosted a sausage fest

An attempt to attack Mak back fires results in a lack of facts being retracted,
A voiceless noise, therefore while I'm doing audio, your text-based whispers aren't even a distraction

Subliminals hilarious! Serving me and urging death?
Tecs to defend my Queens' streets, react of pure violence: Learn you a Virginia Tech

With a curve in your lips and a grin on your face, excitedly typing against your Lord,
Spending your adolescence and adulthood suffering the carpal tunnel's with no pens behind the 'board (keyboard)

Illmatic to Hip-Hop is Dead, I speak Anti-Nas out the mouth,
Humorously observing a Jay-Z fighting Dislexia after a Reasonable Doubt

Edit: On a side note, I'd be willing to do an audio battle. I'd want to hear any available audio you may already have though. I'll happily give you a link to my SoundClick as well.
PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 8:22 am


haha, nice battle. I'm gonna have to say Fatal though. More creativity in the punchlines, more personals, plus some added vocab. Makairo had you on flow, and Makairo you fell of BIG TIME with the finisher homie. I like the attepmt at nameplay, but that didn't hit hard at all.

Highlights:

Fatal
Quote:
I'm bout to ~Maka~ fool easily outta ya kid, you shoulda jus decline this waga (wager) dude cuz i'll devour ya s**t!!/ have ya showered in clips like why even call ya self a ~God~ when you lack the major proof N can't empower ya spits!!/


Quote:
this herb'll die, so needless to say you far from superior cuz removin' yo ribs'll be the only way to purge ya prime!!/ i'm goin' beyond text damage so forget words N lines, i'll jus' mix yo body wit water to literally sub-merge ya life!!/


Quote:
who gave this queer a broken compass N had him ~Maka~ wrong turn, to challenge vets, knowin' I handle pests?!/ but if you want? we could rematch on an audio battle yet, you'd still lose ya life as i'll make yo a** sample death!!/


Makairo:
Quote:
Disgraceful's the bed where your thoughts have often slept,
Desires confused, so dude would only do a mule ride if the Mattress hosted a sausage fest


Quote:
With a curve in your lips and a grin on your face, excitedly typing against your Lord,
Spending your adolescence and adulthood suffering the carpal tunnel's with no pens behind the 'board


vote: Reasonable Doubt

Terrence Urameshi


Overlord Makairo

PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 8:51 am


xd I don't mind your vote, but personals? I didn't see any at all..plus I doubt he knows anything about me. I'm much more concentrated in LG than here.
PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 9:00 am


lol, people are still making that misconception. A personal doesn't have to be a personal fact about you homie. A personal is a bar that designed specifically for one mc and that mc only. Simply mentioning your name is almost enough to make a personal. A lot of cats don't do that nowadays, which means the battle material can be easily recycled. Let's take bar 1 for example. See how he used "Maka" and "God" in the bar? That distinguishes you as the target of the bar and no one else. He also used a reference to audio, which even you know is something you do alot. You're right he didn't have that many, but you gotta admit he had more than you. The only time you mentioned Fatal's name at all was your finisher. So hopefully now you understand what i meant by that.

Terrence Urameshi


Overlord Makairo

PostPosted: Sat May 12, 2007 10:20 am


Terrence Urameshi
lol, people are still making that misconception. A personal doesn't have to be a personal fact about you homie. A personal is a bar that designed specifically for one mc and that mc only. Simply mentioning your name is almost enough to make a personal. A lot of cats don't do that nowadays, which means the battle material can be easily recycled. Let's take bar 1 for example. See how he used "Maka" and "God" in the bar? That distinguishes you as the target of the bar and no one else. He also used a reference to audio, which even you know is something you do alot. You're right he didn't have that many, but you gotta admit he had more than you. The only time you mentioned Fatal's name at all was your finisher. So hopefully now you understand what i meant by that.
Oh, is that what you meant? I didn't seem them as strong as you may have being that the whole "Maka" thing, though clever, could easily have been put clearly as "make a" and apply to another opponent. But that's just my opinion here.

Mentioning someone's name isn't something I find too big..well..aside from when I'm destroying Ceaz. But this battle seemed like a lighter one, I made it brief and all with 6, 2-lined bars. It was stil a good one. Consider having some of these keystylers join LG because there is plenty of activity there as opposed to here. Plus the tournaments for large gold prizes are appealing.
PostPosted: Sun May 13, 2007 7:50 pm


lol, I feel you on that one. As for LG, I'll have to look through those cats and see who's actually got talent that can be worked with. Last time I was there a lot of those cats were pretty garbage. xd

Terrence Urameshi


+.Reasonable~Doubt.+

PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2007 7:39 am


Vote people neutral
PostPosted: Thu May 17, 2007 8:21 pm


Fatal Silence......... neutral

I really expected more...I saw your battle with Tec awile back. So...

Makairo..................... Learn how to make a ******** punchline.

Aight, First off, Fatal, I wasn't a fan of the whole "Maka" thing, that s**t was pretty lame. Plus the length of the lines was like...A ******** loophole to make the most out of 6 bars.

Makairo....LOL, For some reason you think you can beat me?
Sausagefest? ******** WEAK. And that little Pure/Virgin connection...Had no relevance to anything

But all in all, both lacked creativity IMO, Fatals ribs line was the most memorable and thus became the Tie Breaker

Vote: Reasonable Silence

jceaz


Overlord Makairo

PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2007 5:10 pm


jceaz
Fatal Silence......... neutral

I really expected more...I saw your battle with Tec awile back. So...

Makairo..................... Learn how to make a ******** punchline.

Aight, First off, Fatal, I wasn't a fan of the whole "Maka" thing, that s**t was pretty lame. Plus the length of the lines was like...A ******** loophole to make the most out of 6 bars.

Makairo....LOL, For some reason you think you can beat me?
Sausagefest? ******** WEAK. And that little Pure/Virgin connection...Had no relevance to anything

But all in all, both lacked creativity IMO, Fatals ribs line was the most memorable and thus became the Tie Breaker

Vote: Reasonable Silence
This vote doesn't count because this individual is insane. He has a problem with me and would vote against me if I typed an Ether verse. ******** him.
PostPosted: Fri May 18, 2007 7:35 pm


Makairo The God
jceaz
Fatal Silence......... neutral

I really expected more...I saw your battle with Tec awile back. So...

Makairo..................... Learn how to make a ******** punchline.

Aight, First off, Fatal, I wasn't a fan of the whole "Maka" thing, that s**t was pretty lame. Plus the length of the lines was like...A ******** loophole to make the most out of 6 bars.

Makairo....LOL, For some reason you think you can beat me?
Sausagefest? ******** WEAK. And that little Pure/Virgin connection...Had no relevance to anything

But all in all, both lacked creativity IMO, Fatals ribs line was the most memorable and thus became the Tie Breaker

Vote: Reasonable Silence
This vote doesn't count because this individual is insane. He has a problem with me and would vote against me if I typed an Ether verse. ******** him.



LoL, No, you just lacked creativity.

BTW, Is this Vote the reason you just banned me from Los Gangstas

jceaz

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