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 Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 7:51 pm
7 bars, no flipping or recycling, 3-0=KO, 4-1=TKO, anything else it's first to five
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Posted: Sat Apr 14, 2007 9:59 pm
Hiei/C00l Aid Vs Stryker Battle Battle verses: Quote: StrykerLooks like Cool-Aid is another lame cat lookin' for defeat. With a future that only contains you gettin' burnt like mesquite. It's deceit if you think you can survive without a retreat. Thought you were elite, but you're getting beat worse than your meat. You already battle-damaged with a crack in your Kool-Aid pitcherfrom this lyrical onslaught, anybody want a picture? How you gonna expect respect when you put a "C" in Kool-Aid? All you CAN expect to "C" is Deez nuts and slurp 'em up like Minute Maid. You got two accounts to battle on, Cool-Aid and Hiei. Even if you add ANOTHER, you couldn't even win with Action Replay. For real, I'm feeling guilty in this battle, want specifics? It's because I'm feeling like Superman partaking in the special olympics. I'm going real light, but you'll need an even bigger handicap, when I jack your wheelchair before you even finish this lap. C00l Aid/HieiI've betrayed this whiner, stick blades behind ya The Only place they feel jaid's (jade's) In china! Got my weapons ready, kid, I'm planning to kill... and you better hope I miss you, cause if I don't? Then your family will First attacked? You'll see this kid in 4-casts, like a weather report Come to finish the job, you'll see me send his head to the morgue He'll drop dead to the floor, I come with a shotgun goddammit Murder? Not that I planned it, but I'll tear up his hood like an auto mechanic You ain't the coolest, getting your hopes up to spank the new kid... But you couldn't get the crowd to "Yell-Oh" if you used paints to do it! Better split the scene, grab a bike, peddle with quickened speed I'll have ya chain smokin... like you're addicted to nicotine! We all know that I'll win this, your chances? Diminished... Cause this battles like Durant's college career... IT'S FINISHED! --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Final Round --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- Quote: StrykerLet's be realistic, I'm sadistic and I'll beat you 'til you're autistic. Matter fact, I'm ending your chronicles right here, so call me Riddick. You gave your all only to fall, so don't stall your curtain call. Because yo sub-par antics just remind me of Lucille Ball.* "You got some splainin' to do," like how come your punchlinesare more retarded than the special kids in your lunchline? You should get a fine for the crime of wasting my time. The penalty? My d**k in your mouth to silence you like a mime. On top of that, you aint hard, so let's take into accountthat the hardest dude from your hood is named "The Count."** Sesame Street a** busta, under the false pretense that your flow's decent, but game recognize game, and yours is lookin' translucent. Lucille Ball is the main character from "I Love Lucy."* The Count is the vampire from "Sesame Street."** C00l Aid/HieiThis kids homo... testicals stretchin his mouth, plus Cause his women stay invisible like Jessica Alba and this kids a rookie... he, holds no advantage, so I'll have this p***y folding... like the oldest Camel Toe Inflictin damage yo, they say I'm fat? the sames true for you Cause I "can still lose weight"... and "wait- you can still lose!" My verses? The sound flows, I rip apart these ******** scoundrels... Jaid's like Ninja Turtles the way he's always sliding into man holes! Gotta hurry, tomorrow? I've got school, Jaid's not cool, f*****t, come watch, I leave you rocked fool ................................................... see? I could type nothing, and I'd still drop you! Personally, I never liked rules. I prefer anything (but dickriding) to go so the battlers can choose their own fate and be judged on what they did. But if rules make you feel more comfortable, that's cool too homie. I accept. Looks like Cool-Aid is another lame cat lookin' for defeat. With a future that only contains you gettin' burnt like mesquite. It's deceit if you think you can survive without a retreat. Thought you were elite, but you're getting beat worse than your meat. You already battle-damaged with a crack in your Kool-Aid pitcherfrom this lyrical onslaught, anybody want a picture? How you gonna expect respect when you put a "C" in Kool-Aid? All you CAN expect to "C" is Deez nuts and slurp 'em up like Minute Maid. You got two accounts to battle on, Cool-Aid and Hiei. Even if you add ANOTHER, you couldn't even win with Action Replay. For real, I'm feeling guilty in this battle, want specifics? It's because I'm feeling like Superman partaking in the special olympics. I'm going real light, but you'll need an even bigger handicap, when I jack your wheelchair before you even finish this lap.
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Posted: Sun Apr 15, 2007 11:23 pm
I've betrayed this whiner, stick blades behind ya
The Only place they feel jaid's (jade's) In china!
Got my weapons ready, kid, I'm planning to kill...
and you better hope I miss you, cause if I don't? Then your family will
First attacked? You'll see this kid in 4-casts, like a weather report
Come to finish the job, you'll see me send his head to the morgue
He'll drop dead to the floor, I come with a shotgun goddammit
Murder? Not that I planned it, but I'll tear up his hood like an auto mechanic
You ain't the coolest, getting your hopes up to spank the new kid...
But you couldn't get the crowd to "Yell-Oh" if you used paints to do it!
Better split the scene, grab a bike, peddle with quickened speed
I'll have ya chain smokin... like you're addicted to nicotine!
We all know that I'll win this, your chances? Diminished...
Cause this battles like Durant's college career... IT'S FINISHED!
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:55 am
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 1:14 pm
Just one, you're a waste of punchlines. :-/
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:19 pm
Just one? How gay. I always go easy on my opponent in the first, just like I already pointed out in the first verse. But if you're not up to me taking it up a notch, then that's just how it is. I don't blame you.
Time for voting.
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 10:02 pm
Alright, 2 rounds. Second is 5 bars though. You're garbage though, as far as text rapping goes.
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Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2007 10:58 pm
Garbage? Please. At least my s**t is interesting. I was just taking it easy and being playful with you at first, but you know what? ******** it.
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Let's be realistic, I'm sadistic and I'll beat you 'til you're autistic.
Matter fact, I'm ending your chronicles right here, so call me Riddick.
You gave your all only to fall, so don't stall your curtain call.
Because yo sub-par antics just remind me of Lucille Ball.*
"You got some splainin' to do," like how come your punchlines
are more retarded than the special kids in your lunchline?
You should get a fine for the crime of wasting my time.
The penalty? My d**k in your mouth to silence you like a mime.
On top of that, you aint hard, so let's take into account
that the hardest dude from your hood is named "The Count."**
Sesame Street a** busta, under the false pretense that your flow's decent,
but game recognize game, and yours is lookin' translucent.
Lucille Ball is the main character from "I Love Lucy."*
The Count is the vampire from "Sesame Street."**
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 12:09 am
Kid... it's over. I'll make a burial ground for you
This kids homo... testicals stretchin his mouth, plus
his women stay invisible like Jessica Alba
and this kids a rookie... he, holds no advantage, so
I'll have this p***y folding... like the oldest Camel Toe
Inflictin damage yo, they say I'm fat? the sames true for you
Cause I "can still lose weight"... and "wait- you can still lose!"
My verses? The sound flows, I rip apart these ******** scoundrels...
Jaid's like Ninja Turtles the way he's always sliding into man holes!
Gotta hurry, tomorrow? I've got school, Jaid's not cool, f*****t, come watch, I leave you rocked fool
................................................... see? I could type nothing, and I'd still drop you!
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 12:53 pm
Wow. Cool Aid ripped you. Like seriously, you just sat there and took his punchlines. Jaiden, I think your main problem is you don't use multis. Like Autistic, Riddick. Decent, Translucent. Come on son. But the worst was the Kool Aid, Minute Maid bar, it was real wack, and real corny. And on a side note, the way, using two extremely similar punchlines in the same battle is a no-no. The whole retarded concept got really wack by the second time. And also the whole translucent concept, you can still recognize something thats translucent, it's transparent things you can't recognize.
Cool Aid had a few good lines, my favorite out of all of them was this one.
Inflicting damage yo, they say I'm fat? the sames true for you
Cause I "can still lose weight"... and "wait- you can still lose!" The bar was just fresh in general. The rest of your verses were fire too, so good job overall, there's not much I can say. You had good punches, above average flow, good concepts and everything so nice job.
Vote: Cool Aid / Hiei_666
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 1:42 pm
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 6:38 pm
No contest at all. Cool-Aid dominated this in every aspect of a battle verse. Wordplay, punchlines, you name it. Doesn't even deserve a breakdown. Jaiden's lines didn't do any damage at all, like it wasn't even a battle verse. You were better off writing Cool Aid a ******** poem. He easily takes this.
vote: Cool Aid
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Posted: Tue Apr 17, 2007 7:33 pm
As Price so profoundly stated, Damn..he ripped you. Cool-Aid's punches combined with his wordplay and multis were more than enough to overwhelm your obviously weaker punchlines. And I don't know why you bolded all those words. Less than half of them were even multis. The majority of them were just string words or 2 syllable rhymes, which is not impressive(s**t like "all", "fall" and "call" aren't multis, they're string words. More than 1 syllable of the s**t has to rhyme, hence the name "multi"). When you can bust 3's, 4's, and 5's on the regular, then you're actually working with something. Matter of fact you rhymed the -istic suffx 4 times IN THE SAME BAR, which is beyond a no- no. But beyond that, all your punches were was saying something about Cool Aid then making the s**t rhyme. That's as basic as it gets, and you don't want that. You saw how Cool Aid used things like nameplay and clever puns to add complexity to his punchlines. That's what he had over you.
vote=Cool Aid
It's understanding these things that makes you a good battler, better yet, it's understanding these things that makes you elevate. Hopefully you'll see this as advice and not a diss, and learn how to progressively step your game up.
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