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 Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 5:42 pm
Mkay,
well I was bored the other day and just messing around with charcoal pencils. What a mess they can make I swear lol. Anyways, This came out on the paper, using pencil,pen, then charcoal of course wink The way I do it, shoot me. So, yes there may be mistakes that I see, but I always see mistakes in my drawings, feel free to tell me what you think, doesn't matter. Just don't be all harsh for no reason. razz Though I know most of you aren't like that.
Anywho, enjoy. heart 
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 5:54 pm
i like it, except i'm bothered by the messiness of the pic... and i mean the hair... yea..
but nice overall!!(especially the face)
the style reminds me of inuyasha.. for some reason..
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 5:57 pm
ogum536 i like it, except i'm bothered by the messiness of the pic... and i mean the hair... yea.. but nice overall!!(especially the face) the style reminds me of inuyasha.. for some reason.. Yeah I know, but doing the hair was fun XD And actually, now that I look at it, it reminds me of Kagome. eek But thank you though. whee Btw, for the shading I used those torllion things or whatever, the paper rolled together tightly, it really comes in handy. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 6:37 pm
Man, I love the shading you did on the face, it came out GREAT!
and i have issues with charcoals crying gonk
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Posted: Wed Feb 21, 2007 7:36 pm
[ Blackrose ] Man, I love the shading you did on the face, it came out GREAT! and i have issues with charcoals crying gonk Thank you. heart Could have been cleaner though sweatdrop charcoal gets everywhere.
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 5:25 am
Yeah, it's messy.
Not even really in an artistic sort of way...
Specifically, I'm talking about the feathers (or flower petals?) that are floating around.
...I don't know, maybe it's okay.
Well anyway, the first thing that bothers me about this is that
her mascara is smearing in a straight line from her eyes.
There are two problems with this:
1.) Her head is held forward at an angle, so it should be dripping toward her nose.
2.) Human faces are not flat just below the eye... there is a cheekbone there, which the tears should be rolling over.
That's my two cents.
It's all I have.
And now I'm broke.
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Posted: Thu Feb 22, 2007 6:35 am
Magical Girl Yossy
Yeah, it's messy.
Not even really in an artistic sort of way...
Specifically, I'm talking about the feathers (or flower petals?) that are floating around.
...I don't know, maybe it's okay.
Well anyway, the first thing that bothers me about this is that
her mascara is smearing in a straight line from her eyes.
There are two problems with this:
1.) Her head is held forward at an angle, so it should be dripping toward her nose.
2.) Human faces are not flat just below the eye... there is a cheekbone there, which the tears should be rolling over.
That's my two cents.
It's all I have.
And now I'm broke.
Thank you, but these are some problems I already noticed. wink
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 7:21 am
I have to agree with Miss Ogum.. It is very awesome, execpt I'm not bothered by the messiness of the hair. In my opinion, I think that it gives off a little extra flair, and to boot, it makes the hair look more like... well.. hair. ^^" For some reason, I seem to have fallen in love with your pictures. ^^" I know it may sound creepy, but by all means, that is the deepest way that I can tell someone that their art work is beyond excellent. n.n Keep up the fantastic work, and I can't wait to see what you have instore for us next!
~Richy
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xXx_Onii-san_xXx Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 1:52 pm
richy-kun I have to agree with Miss Ogum.. It is very awesome, execpt I'm not bothered by the messiness of the hair. In my opinion, I think that it gives off a little extra flair, and to boot, it makes the hair look more like... well.. hair. ^^" For some reason, I seem to have fallen in love with your pictures. ^^" I know it may sound creepy, but by all means, that is the deepest way that I can tell someone that their art work is beyond excellent. n.n Keep up the fantastic work, and I can't wait to see what you have instore for us next! ~Richy Oh wow XD Ummm well not sure what to say. I mean I really don't truly like any of my drawings, and I don't consider them 'art' in some ways. I still have time to develop and many people may not feel the same as you but I'm glad someone finds my drawings that great. biggrin Thank you. By the way, just as a hint, I have been working with my wolf craze yet again. wink
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Posted: Fri Feb 23, 2007 6:56 pm
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2007 6:55 am
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Posted: Thu Mar 01, 2007 3:06 pm
I like the face expression though the hair could have more shading.
Lol, I never use those charcoal sticks. My hand turns all black afterwards... not to mention that it's hard to be precise with them. gonk
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Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2007 1:39 am
Wow >.> People are strict here. I took one look at it and went "Holy jesus" and then there was all this "Well this could be improved, this is messy..." Haha, that could be because I'm an absolute amateaur and cannot draw for peanuts. Poetrys more my thing.
It's awesome though!
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