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Fear My Bloody Fangs. Vice Captain
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 Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2005 7:08 pm
Yeah, I won't be posting in here much due to the fact that my fan fiction sucks. I will be popping in from time to time, If you are writing a continuing story tell me so in your first post, if I like it I will give you your own thread. Enjoy!Note: This is a thread for fiction that our members write.
If you have a favorite fanfiction you'd like to recommend, please post it in this thread of our FanFiction subforum:
Favorite Fan Fics.
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2005 9:24 pm
Eeh...I have fanfiction, but none of it's very good. It's all located here. I think there might be a small amount of non-HP stuff there... but yeah. That's my fanfiction. Except some that I haven't put there yet. I will though.
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2005 9:38 pm
Wow, I liked the one about Nadie, can't wait till the next chapter. :3
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 6:42 pm
I do write fanfiction....so how do I do this? just post my story?
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Fear My Bloody Fangs. Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 6:45 pm
darkangeloflight14 I do write fanfiction....so how do I do this? just post my story?
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 6:50 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 6:57 pm
Hmm, very well-written. I mean, I dislike all the pairings in it, but I still enjoyed it. The lyrics were very well-dispersed, and well-chosen, too. Very, very good!
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 7:01 pm
I like it too, dislike the pairings, but like the overall idea, 5 points to Ravenclaw.
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Fear My Bloody Fangs. Vice Captain
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 7:09 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 8:05 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 8:16 pm
Hey, slash! *celebrates* Not pairings that I usually read, but as far as slash goes, I'll try anything once. Anyways, I do have some constructive criticism, if you don't mind.
First, sometimes you have some problems with words, for instance, Fred and George told Molly they would 'own' her, I think (I hope!) you meant owl. There are also some comma issues, but I think it just needs to be proofread a little more carefully.
I'm a little bit curious as to what year this takes place in and why Fred and George don't seem to interact with any Weasleys other then their mother at the beginning, but I suppose it's just skipping past the boring, non-slashy bits.
There is also some slight problems with what my old English teacher called period placement, which is whether the period belongs inside or outside of the quotation marks.
Other than that, though, it was very enjoyable, a very good story. Loved the cliffie at the end, can't wait to see what happens next!
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 8:29 pm
Empress_Kat Hey, slash! *celebrates* Not pairings that I usually read, but as far as slash goes, I'll try anything once. Anyways, I do have some constructive criticism, if you don't mind. First, sometimes you have some problems with words, for instance, Fred and George told Molly they would 'own' her, I think (I hope!) you meant owl. There are also some comma issues, but I think it just needs to be proofread a little more carefully. I'm a little bit curious as to what year this takes place in and why Fred and George don't seem to interact with any Weasleys other then their mother at the beginning, but I suppose it's just skipping past the boring, non-slashy bits. There is also some slight problems with what my old English teacher called period placement, which is whether the period belongs inside or outside of the quotation marks. Other than that, though, it was very enjoyable, a very good story. Loved the cliffie at the end, can't wait to see what happens next! oh crap, thats waht i meant. owl not own. oops. and it takes place in their 7th year
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 8:33 pm
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 8:42 pm
Oh, I like this chapter too. There are still some comma issues, though. Anyways, I'm not really sure whether Draco would have accepted George that quickly, or at all, really. But hey, this is fanfiction, you can do whatever you please. Yes, I very much like it, and am curious to see what Harry's reaction is.
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2005 9:48 pm
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