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 Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 5:28 pm
Name: aj leibman
newbie: yes
Animal: Red-Tail boa constrictor
Backup animals: Seal, Otto/weasal combo, Spider
Quest for: Exotic Markings serum
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Posted: Wed Jan 24, 2007 5:37 pm
Name: Alex Jones Cooper
Nickname: AJ Cooper
Age: 12
Birthdate: September 4th
Height: 4'8"
Weight: 81 lbs.
Eyes: green
Hair: black
Occupation: Teenager
Ethnicity: Portuguese-american
Likes: puzzles, pizza, tv, video games, Homestar Runner, cats, and dogs
Dislikes: broccoli, asparagus, spinach and mean people
Fears: The dark, high places, scary monsters, spiders
Personality: friendly
Home state: rhode island
History: Alex Jones Cooper was born in Rhode Island in 1995. Alex was like any 12-year old boy, which means he likes to skateboard. He wants to be an secret agent when he grows up, in court that his parnets lets him watch spy films on the weekends. He always hangs out in an airfield that is near his home, and act like an secret agent. Too bad his next trip to the air field will put him in the frying pan soon.
Why have is he on the island? One day, when he playing in the airfield, Alex noticed men in sunglasses loading crates into an helicopter. Still pertending like an agent, he sneaks the copter, not knowing he is making a very big mistake in his part.
Serum to be used : red-tail boa constrictor.
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Posted: Fri Jan 26, 2007 5:47 pm
The Red-Tail Constrictor
Will be added soon
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 6:08 pm
Lets the review of my quest begin.
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Posted: Fri Feb 16, 2007 8:54 pm
Ok, his form of getting to the island. Um... What 12 year old, apart from a severley mentally retarded one, would just randomly get on a suspicious looking helicopter that's surrounded by suspisious looking people. Also, wouldn't they have seen him? Also, I can understand if the airfield is closed down and he went out on it but a still active airfield would have guards and if he went on it there would be hell to pay. What I'm trying to say is, up the realisim considerable. Just because IoDM is fiction (as far as we know ninja ) doesn't mean it's completly non-realisitc.
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 3:53 pm
I'm working on it. The quest is done doesn't mean its prefect. I still have to fix alot of things in it.
I could change his method of getting on to the island, but that has to do until I think of something else.
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Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2007 4:44 pm
Woah...AJ...you need ALLOT more stuff here...try looking at other quests and seeing what all they have. Yo need to make a turlly unique charecter, and have allot of reasons for picking your animal.
If you need help please contact me via PM, hope I can help you with this.
ALso...12 is defientlly too young...unless you can get a great backstory.
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Posted: Sun May 13, 2007 7:55 am
Alright, you wanted reviews right?
First, kudos on the fact you want a reptile as a serum seeing as they arn't exactly in high supply. Although we do already have two snakes on the island, it's still a pretty interesting transformation and still under-done enough to have another one on. Spider is a good second choice too, seeing as we have very little insects on the island. But why do you want a seal/otter/weasel combo? What does that make? We have a good deal of mythicals already if that's what you were planning on.
Also, think about changing his name. If you scroll down the owners list there are a LOT of islanders who have an A-name. And why is he 12? Seems pretty young to drag a boy on the island and despite how Cody is on, he's a special case since it was a life-or-death situation. Why not have an older character? We don't have many of those.
And you REALLY have to expand on his personality and history. Not to mention his reason for getting on the island is pretty unbelievable. Why would they tear a boy away from his family and direct unwanted attention? They'd sooner yell at him and usher him home. No one would believe a little 12-year old anyway.
Hope that helped.
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