EvFaerAshlynn
Beautiful. Nice use of language and images. I admire your ability to use a consistent rhyme scheme, something I've never been able to do. Very thoughtful and reflective. I'm actually tempted to try and find a cemetary to walk through now; however, the time of year is holding me back. It is highly unlikely that you'd catch me anywhere near a graveyard this close to Halloween; I'd likely terrify myself and have to flee for my life, lest something try to cause me harm.
Keep writing. You have talent.
Thank you very much. This piece is actually very self-reflective. A good friend and I often go and sit in the town graveyard. It's tree-surrounded, and it's one of the cleanest, nicest kept places in Church Hill, and always devoid of people, so we like to go sit and chat, have a cig or two, then we usually walk to the park, which is just through a cornfield.
I'm glad you like it. I'm proud of this piece. If you like, I could link you to my DeviantART page. More of my work is there.
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