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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 6:39 pm
Username: Leonis Mule SN's: Not made yet IoDM Newbie? (Y/N): Y Serum: My first thought is that of a Griffen (Needed would be extra limbs for the wings). My second thought is that of a Jackelope (needed extra syrum for the antlers) and my third thought is that of a mouse.
CODE for your quest banner(s):(none ATM)
I KNOW this character needs work. but currently RL is... gonk sweatdrop gonk So this is a fairly low priority. I will get to it eventually. >.<
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Posted: Sat Sep 23, 2006 7:02 pm
First of basic sketch of a the Human Pre-island. He would be a college student without too many friends who is a rather big gamer, both table top and online. He is also a bit of a furry fiend and a cos-player.
He finds out about the island while looking for a new Con. Somehow gets a little bit confused about what it is exactly just understanding that it is a "Tropical Island Vacation" with a bit of a Furry Themed convention there as well. So he signs up, gets his costume and his gamer supplies and heads off.
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 2:19 pm
Age: 21 Likes: Pocky (Strawberry especailly), Orange Ramane Dislikes: Fish, Mushrooms and Peppers Interests: Anime (especailly BishÅjo and Seinen type), Gaming(Table top and online), Cosplay, and Foam Fighting Appearance:
*working on more* >.>
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Posted: Mon Sep 25, 2006 4:51 pm
Ok, first off...
Please flesh out the character. There's no meat to him at all. We just have a very rough idea of who he even is. Give us his age, his appearance, his likes/dislikes, interests, personality, backstory, etc. All this is needed to truly make a solid and realisitic character. All I know is he likes to play tabletop RPGs and is into furries.
Second, I don't think the island would advertise it so openly to the public, even if at a convention. You need to make a bit more personal and isolated. Plus, there needs to be some particular reason why they would select him out of everyone else as Moreau monitors and screens every possible subject with care. There needs to be a certain flare or reason why Moreau would want him.
That's all I can offer to you as of now. But please take a look over all the other Quest Threads and notice how extensive their info goes with the characters. Don't let this discourage you either. But if you want to make it to the island, you need to make a very fleshed out character. Also, look over all the info listed throughout the Questing Guild so you get a more solidified idea as to what to do.
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 6:44 am
*alright* Know.. That it wasn't advertised at a convention. He was online looking FOR a new convention and stummbled across a very basic webpage of Moreau's and mistook it for a new convention. *nods and goes back to work on the character a bit more*
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Posted: Wed Sep 27, 2006 9:24 am
I -severely- doubt Moreau has a webpage explaining what he's doing at -all- -anywhere- on the internet. He does -not- want to be found out and shut down, and having a webpage about it that some average joe can find would be ridiculous.
Mixture serums, such as those you would need for either a Griffin or a Jackalope are rarely given out, and incredibly expensive even if they are. I hope you have a lot of spare cash lying about if you're serious about that.
There should also be -reason- behind your character. You know, motivations. Why did Moreau pick him? Why did he want to turn him into whatever creature? Who -is- your character anyhow?
There are characters on the island already who are gamers, so I wouldn't focus on that as a selling point. The furry thing is a slightly interesting idea, but we need -more- in order for it to be interesting at all.
As mentioned, you give no indication of who your character is at all. You just listed off a couple of interests of his and a very badly thought-out plan for him to get on the island.
I'd suggest reading all the informative files in the Quest forum, and looking through other quest threads as well as the journals of the characters already there for ideas.
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 7:27 pm
I think there was someone questing for a Griffon somewhere...and I myself m going for the common house mouse...but there's no rule that says two people can't quest for the same thing. Just a head's up. What sort of mouse are you after? I do like the jackalope idea, though. But anyways, flesh out your ideas! it's tough work, but having well-rounded and developed character is immensely important!
The getting to the island part is always tough, trust me. But so far, you have a decent base that you could really build off. Good luck!
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Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2006 8:36 pm
Perhaps its a invite to a 'Rsvp furry convention' that arrives through the mail? Perhaps the said character signed up for some anime news magazine of which feral labs scanned the subscriptors for potential subjects?
My best advice to to flesh out the character and give it as much detail, information and life as you can.
If needed, I have a basic application template I can let you use.
Give your character a personality and a history. If your serious about getting to the island, then show us by putting your heart and soul into the character.
*Wow... that sounded sappy. xD*
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Posted: Mon Oct 02, 2006 12:49 pm
*does some thinking and some re-reading* hurm... Thoughts/QUestions to be answered.
#1 Why did he have no friends as a child? (Because he was sick) #2 How did he get better? (Some basic experimental syrums from Dr. Moreau's legal outlets) #3 Why did Dr. Moreau invite him to the island. (lost track of him but then found his name again while scanning subscriptions to a new Furry -zine.)
*kicks back and goes to writing the story abit more thinking on the updates some*
As far as the TYPE of mouse... >.> I dun know... the common field mouse? A cute one! LOL
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Posted: Tue Oct 03, 2006 8:16 pm
Haha, field mice are cute. Doormice too!
But see, that's the direction you need to take- forming ideas and working them out!
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Posted: Mon Dec 18, 2006 9:39 am
*ponders* Well... more history... And stuff... I had some time.. and have gotten a bit further with thinking about fleshing things out but... Oooh now that's an interesting idea. *ponders*
Interaction between the old syrum given by Feral Industries, (Lion) and the new one that causes the mix to be more of a griffen.
Or elk being the one for when he was younger to strengthen his metabolism. Then when Moreau sees his personality, seeing that it matchs a rabbit decides to add that to what was left. Producing a Jackelope!
Mouse... fieldmouse. *nods* Not sure why... perhaps be cause he is quiet so this seems to complement his personality. *nods*
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