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Rini Kawashi

PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 2:13 pm


I dont care if you say get over it or if you say hes already dead go mourn on your own time just rate it please

"Steven Irwin the Legendary Crocodile Hunter"

Who westles crocodiles or anyother dangerous or deadly animals, but yet lived in Air of Immortalilty
Who was an Austrilian with exciting accent to keep us excited
Who had fought and traveled over many parts of the world for just us and his own family
Who did show us a huge different side about animals that we always thinking about
Who proved us that animals are much alike us, but only looks and phsycialy are different than us
Who lived and died as a Legendary Person, which will never be forgetten...
His name is Steven Irwin
Once We heard the name or nickname as, "Crocodile Hunter", we immediately remember him....
Because his impression of Courage and sense of thrilling had stuck in our hearts for no more than forever
Now we can be glad that he did show us another world of animals
Who no one can imagine, if Steven Irwin never exists, or never did that then Animals are doomed for good
Now we all can is let Steven Irwin pray that his family will surivie and grow without their hero

---i
-----can
----------say

Steven Irwin was our hero. No, Our Animal Hero...The Legendary Crocodile Hunter.

R.I.P Steve
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PostPosted: Sat Sep 09, 2006 5:21 pm


Rini Kawashi
I dont care if you say get over it or if you say hes already dead go mourn on your own time just rate it please

"Steven Irwin the Legendary Crocodile Hunter"

Who westles crocodiles or anyother dangerous or deadly animals, but yet lived in Air of Immortalilty
Who was an Austrilian with exciting accent to keep us excited
Who had fought and traveled over many parts of the world for just us and his own family
Who did show us a huge different side about animals that we always thinking about
Who proved us that animals are much alike us, but only looks and phsycialy are different than us
Who lived and died as a Legendary Person, which will never be forgetten...
His name is Steven Irwin
Once We heard the name or nickname as, "Crocodile Hunter", we immediately remember him....
Because his impression of Courage and sense of thrilling had stuck in our hearts for no more than forever
Now we can be glad that he did show us another world of animals
Who no one can imagine, if Steven Irwin never exists, or never did that then Animals are doomed for good
Now we all can is let Steven Irwin pray that his family will surivie and grow without their hero

---i
-----can
----------say

Steven Irwin was our hero. No, Our Animal Hero...The Legendary Crocodile Hunter.

R.I.P Steve
heart


Hmm...
If this was out of five stars...
I'd give it a four...
The big problem is that you've had some trouble with the grammar..
And it makes the poem a little sloppy sad
But it's a very sweet poem..
And has many truths to it.
Very good poem,
I like it a lot.

*Liked the Croc Hunter*
So I understand....
Quite depressing...
I think Animal Planet did like a whole day
Of Croc Hunter episodes, a marathon...
So yeah...
Good poem, very sweet too ^_^.


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