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 Posted: Wed Jul 05, 2006 5:29 pm
Oblivious
the reality is setting in
like the scars along her skin
her past will never go away
it will haunt her to the very last day
she thought that it had come to an end
but a message it will always send
that she is not worth the time
not even for this little rime
she just wanted to be good enough for you
but i guess thats something she just couldnt do
all you did was brake her down
you loved to see her cry and frown
you pointed out every mistake
and it was all that she could take
cant you see shes sick of this
chances our your oblivious
but the scars along her skin
tell the battle that goes on within
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 1:18 pm
guess no one wants to read it ...
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 3:49 pm
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Posted: Sun Jul 09, 2006 6:22 pm
thank you mrgreen i have others if in my journal
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:29 am
It's good but you need to check you grammer.
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 1:45 pm
WitchHazal0713 It's good, but you need to check you grammar.
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Posted: Tue Jul 11, 2006 9:49 pm
thank you all and i shall work on the grammer sorry bout that
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Posted: Wed Jul 12, 2006 11:41 am
it is very good i like it
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Posted: Wed Jul 19, 2006 3:56 pm
It would be great if the grammar was better... But other than that, two thumbs up...
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