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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2005 12:50 am
Ok, well, I'm going to be working on writing intros here. Also, there's going to have to be format editing done to some of the stories as they aren't formated well for actually reading.
Checklist Intro s-Aniese Tate -Jahoclave p-More or Less - alicemae s- Absolute Abolition - LittleMissRocketship p-Silya Elektrika - Kraeela s-Breeding Grounds - Fawkes *The Starving Artist* p-Spin - CA.ged s- Broken Toy - Scarlet Jile
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2005 12:52 am
[ Message temporarily off-line ]
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Posted: Sun Apr 03, 2005 10:51 am
Lookin' good. Now for some recruits! wink
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 9:21 am
More or less 169 words alicemae
Behind the darkened skies of these drifting city lights the heavens above seem to cry as raindrops hit the passerby,
And more or less a day goes by.
Behind the darkened schoolyards of these drifting city lights the students sit like stone as teachers drone in monotone,
And more or less a day goes by.
Behind the darkened towers of these drifting city lights the factories spill another tanker as shadows spread across the water,
And more or less a day goes by.
Behind the darkened homes of these drifting city lights the family sits around the table while staring blankly at the cable,
And more or less a day goes by.
Behind the darkened monitors of these drifting city lights the anchor reports another suicide while smiling a bit too wide,
And more or less a day goes by.
Behind the darkened lives of these drifting city lights the holy Sister kneels to pray while all her candles melt away,
And more or less a day goes by.
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 4:34 pm
Thanks much to Alicemae for her editing...
Title: Silya Elektrika Words: 322 Lines: 60 Author: Kraeela
Walking down the corridor The walls on either side of me Are bare. Peeling whitewash Rust stains on the cieling Dripping foul-smelling water Moths fly around the lightbulb Burnt They drop to the floor, Dead I brush them aside with a foot A heavy foot. A foot with a metal cuff I shuffle. Down the long hallway Clang! Clang! Steel bracelets around my wrists Weigh down my arms Clang! Clang! I come closer With each step A dull light A sterile formaldehyde-yellow bathes the room A man meets me at the door Dressed in gray Devil? Angel? It's too dark to tell Or is it too late to care I walk across the floor Passing bench upon bench of people A judge, the jury A woman stands. Crying, cursing at me Her husband takes her by the arm. Sits her down. The family stares at me. Chilling eyes Cold. Hurt. Angry eyes. The Gray Man makes me walk faster He seats me upon a chair A throne He sets a crown upon my head A perfect fit A crown of black sackcloth that shuts out the world I smile For so long I've waited to go home Soon, I will "We have gathered here today, to witness..." He murmurs on and on And I await patiently "Any last words?" he asks I shake my head, "No" I have no more words for this earth "Ready..." My body shakes As the jolt sears through my flesh Yet, I have left it behind I feel no pain The weight of the cuffs no longer drag me down And as a Man in White greets me I know for sure whose side he stands. Yet before I leave The Earth which was my prison For once, it is not too late I say my Last Words to the family that weeps Before the charred body: "I am sorry for the crime I did not commit."
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 6:07 pm
Oh goodie, some entries. 3nodding And good ones at that.
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 6:12 pm
OH! Kraeela's poem is so perfect for this, lol. Why didn't I make that connection while reading it in the other thread? *bonks self* Hehehe, The Perfect One strikes again! Woot. xp
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 6:14 pm
alicemae OH! Kraeela's poem is so perfect for this, lol. Why didn't I make that connection while reading it in the other thread? *bonks self* Hehehe, The Perfect One strikes again! Woot. xp Speaking of which, I need to finish my literary criticism of See Spot Run for my next column.
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Fashionable Conversationalist
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Posted: Sun Apr 10, 2005 10:17 pm
Breeding Grounds 1,153 Words Fawkes *The Starving Artist*
At the ripe old age of seventeen you haven't got much experience with warfare or hatred. I hated that girl who wore the same dress as I did to homecoming but it was nothing compared to what would come to light in my life. Still, I remember the beginning, I had just had my seventeenth birthday and as all young kids think, I was invincible. At least I was, until I got the call that changed my life.
My old red mustang banged down the city streets as I made my way to visit him. He had just returned form a place so far from home that it seemed as though it didn't even exist. The war there was fierce and my few friends that had come back from it didn't like to talk on the subject much. Being a girl was a relief when the draft started; I always knew breasts would come in handy some day. I had a heap of older friends and I was always more comfortable with the males of the species anyway.
He was sitting cross legged in front of the television when I got to his apartment. His mom and dad had just left, leaving a couple bags of groceries and a carton of cigarettes in their wake. He was watching The Simpsons and laughing hysterically. He said he'd missed that show a great deal. I sat next to him and pretended to find it as funny as he did, it was a repeat. When the evening news came on he turned the television off abruptly and sighed heavily with a grimace on his face.
"No one has asked me about the war," he said in a soft whisper. I stood there, not knowing what to say. It was an awkward moment and I wasn't sure I wanted to hear any stories he had but a macabre piece of me was curious. "I suppose they think that talking about it will upset me." He sat on the couch and beckoned me to join him.
I sat and looked over at him, one of my closest friends, and he seemed so far away from me at the moment. "It doesn’t seem real you know," I said in response. "It's all in a different country, far from home. Like it isn't even real." I felt rather abashed and pretended to be very interested in the chipping nail polish on my fingers.
"Oh it's real," he said brandishing his bare shoulder to me. "I think this would prove just how real it is." I looked at a circular scar, no bigger than my thumb. It was his bullet wound, the reason he was allowed to go home so early, and the one thing that brought him back. I nodded; it was all I could do.
He began to tell me about the gunfire and the children and the bullets flying around him. I couldn't handle it and I was forced to throw up a hand in desperation. It became real as he spoke, I could imagine the children wielding the guns and the adults running around commanding them to shoot. My heart ached as I saw his face contort from story to story. He would laugh at a comment one of his buddies had made and then frown as he told me of that same mans death. Once my hand had lifted he stopped, nodding in understanding. "I don’t want to hear anymore, I'm sorry but it's..." I couldn't finish my sentence. He just nodded.
After laughing about the old days for a few hours I left. My heart still sunk into the depths of sadness as I left his apartment. He was sent back a year later and this time he didn't return. I didn't even find out until three months after his funeral. My first taste of war, something I wouldn't have considered a few years prior, had been a sour and fruitless experience and I wasn't even there. I had heard it second hand and it still affected me so horribly. It wouldn't get any better.
Years past and the war went on. There were protests and there were many different stances on the situation. I tended to stay somewhere in the middle instead of choosing a side. I shared the ideals of the peace makers at times but I was fearful of what would happen if we didn't finish and win. So I didn't speak of it, I didn't consider it; it was happening far away and didn't affect my daily life. Not until everyone I knew was over there fighting or would be soon enough. The day my father left was the day I cried the most, I had just turned twenty.
Mother and I pretended he was on holiday, like he'd be returning soon. Four months later my boyfriend Jason was sent off as well, I was petrified. Suddenly it was close to home; suddenly we were in the middle of something we couldn't handle. It was getting too far; it was too much when it affected my daily life and not just the evening news.
It wouldn't be until nearly a year later when I started receiving the phone calls. A friend here, an ex there, all dead due to someone else’s war. I tried to stay calm, tried to remember that Daddy and Jason were much smarter and they'd come home.
We received the letter from the Department of Defense on a dreary September day. Daddy had lost his life for the glory of his country. Jason's letter came to his mother two months later. My second taste of war was just as sour in my mouth but it breeds something worse than just heartache. I cried for days and those tears became hatred and that hatred turned into something so disgusting I could barely breathe through it.
I hated them, everyone single one of their kind. In my mind, the enemy was all around me, he was a different color and there was an accent in his voice and he smelled funny and he wore odd clothes. If I'd had a gun I would have shot him for his sins, he'd killed my father and he'd ruined my mothers life and he'd killed my Jason. He should die. Hatred took me and I folded myself within it.
"This," I said to my mother, "Is what makes prejudice." She looked at me oddly, her face cocked to the side. "I have lost my father and my boyfriend to a man with no face yet I know his color and his creed and even his culture. I hate him and all of his kind, even the ones that fight for our side and live on our land." She came toward me and went to embrace me, nodding her head in an understanding way. "This mother, this is what makes a man hate."
(I dont know if this works for the theme but I wrote it a while ago and thought it might. ^_^
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Posted: Mon Apr 11, 2005 4:07 pm
Actually, that's a pretty good peice. And, even though not directly, it presents a nice well rounded arguement that presents a little bit of a lot of things.
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Posted: Tue Apr 12, 2005 4:34 pm
Spin 297 words CA.ged
Sit speed-surfing channels on mode one-twenty-eight Blur of colours never fading always too late Present's inconstant and the future is too far Got to run away from the past in a brand-new fancy car.
100 years from now, will it really matter? Let democracy disintegrate as the parties chatter Let the hungry wither, let AIDS and cancer kill Defer to your President as he passes bill after useless bill
Follow in your father's footsteps, wage guerrilla wars Silence the protestors before they get too far It's voting day tomorrow, it's too hard to think Succumb to glitz and glitter, McDonald's, dreams and drink
Cut taxes for the capitalists; throw a millionaires ball Cry death to all the faggots who dare defy the law Scorn the poor and homeless, let them starve in the streets Sell your pets to slaughter, they're better off as meat
Invade Brazil and Africa for your exotic treasures Then declare endangered species and demand dramatic measures Dump your tons of plastic and your nuclear wastes Earth deserves to be looted, trashed, raped, defaced
Slow down the world! The police demand The air is too unhealthy, society already damned Shut up your politicians and turn off your TVs Keep the garbage out of airwaves; let the people see:
What a deceived state of mind they live in How easy the illusions break Not a thought to hypocrite's morals; Stop! for earth's sake.
Let go of preconceptions And take a lesson from the past Don your flowers and your peace signs Let's start this over from scratch.
We are the generation that will think for ourselves We're the generation that leaves history on the shelf Words can go on into the emptiness of space; We are the generation where our actions will earn. Our. Place.
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Posted: Wed Apr 13, 2005 1:58 pm
Thank you for your rather good poem.
Now I could use a few good stories as well and another poem or two.
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 4:22 pm
Jahoclave This project is to promote the use of writing as a medium to express political opinions and ideology. It is not a forum to express opinions of current politicians and/or situations. This means stories about President Bush, Terri Schivo, John Kerry, and/or anything to this affect will not be accepted. Please understand that we want you to express your ideology through your writing, not your views on people. Examples of such works that would fit in this project would be 1984, The Da Vinci Code, and Invisible Man, along with many others that I'm sure you can think of. If you wish to contribute to this project, post your story in this thread. Try to check back every so often incase somebody has decided to offer advice on your story. If your story is accepted, you will receive 100g and will be notified by pm of your selection for publishing. Oh, and since I haven't made this clear yet, poetry is also accepted, though, is less likely to get chosen simply because I am not to favorable to poetry, just letting you know ahead of time, though, our esteemed editor in chief will most likely make sure some good poetry gets in. We're aiming for release with the July issue. That is all. WF Contest Forum ThreadOn posting entriesPlease include a header for every entry you submit as exampled below. Title Approx Word Count Name of Author (as you would like it to appear) Story EntriesAniese Tate -Jahoclave Poetry EntriesAyn Rand's a good one xd I had to mention her, she's one of my favs. I think I'm going to enter, so sit tight for a minute~ *runs to crank out literary ideology!*
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 5:13 pm
Title: Absolute Abolition Word Count: 756 Author: LittleMissRocketShip
Dennis Michaelov toyed with his radio. He squinted his tiny, button eyes, as if willing the damn thing to pick up a frequency, any frequency. Man, the trucking industry's equipment had sure gone to s**t. Well, they couldn't blame him for his inability to communicate, right? He sure as hell wouldn't have them taking any of this out of his paycheck for, what was it, negligence on the job. This wasn't even his normal job. Not that he wasn't grateful. He had been up and out of his chair every time the phone rang and, finally, his unconscious reflexes had paid off. One or another of the trucker unions (he didn't know which) had finally come upon his name in whatever listing they kept and, Golly Moses, he could kick unemployment in its sweet a** and kiss his sofa goodbye. He was in debt, and the regular drivers were on strike, so he and the Man had managed to come across a compromise. With an irritated curse, Michaelov tossed his radio aside and began fumbling for his cigarettes. He had been driving for eight hours straight, he needed a little wake up right about now, something to numb his already feverish caffeine headache. With his other hand, he wiped the cold sweat collecting at his brow. He wondered if he was addicted. Well, it wouldn't be the first substance to strike his insatiable fancy. The doctors said it was his personality. The massive, hulking steel vehicle jolted. Michaelov swore as the cigarettes, those little mean cylinders, spilled onto the floor in a shower of nicotine flakes. He ducked his head recklessly and, while his left hand drove blindly, he groped around for one, anyone. He pulled back with a throaty noise of triumph, the bent cigarette pinched between his fingers. He took a moment to congratulate himself. The truck jolted again. "The ********?" he almost screamed. The impact caused his head to snap forward as he almost brained himself on the dashboard. He strained his thick neck from side to side, dumbly, before turning to his mirrors. An SUV. What the bloody hell did they think they were doing? Michaelov stuck his head out the window, bracing himself on one meaty elbow, and swore. He quickly retracted, eyes switching back and forth, sweeping the road nervously. Two more. Where had they come from? Now there was another SUV to his left, herding him toward the all-too-thin guardrail, and the other was trying to cut him off. Angry now, blood boiling in a rage that his tiny brain had conjured to hide his growing anxiety, the man sped up. The car in front of him swerved. Michaelov braked violently and wrenched the wheel right, right GODDAMN YOU! throwing his massive bulk into the aversion. The propane truck skidded and there was a horrible rasping noise, as if the steel titan had just released a great deal of flatulence, and Michaelov felt his stomach drop. His eyes bulged. The railing caved like tin foil beneath the monstrous, spinning front wheels. Despite his best efforts the truck did not slow, but fell off the road with horrifying ease, as if it had long awaited this moment and had been pacing itself. Dread. Dread like a great, black tear in his stomach as the compartment lost all sense of time, all aversion to gravity, and with his massive body it did what it pleased. The polyester seatbelt strained as he was pressed against it, the weight of the truck bed at his back, branding the steering wheel into his abdomen as he felt his eternal organs coagulate in a rush unlike any he had experience since he'd gained that fifty pounds. I'll take it off, I swear. His seatbelt, his seat, this ******** job, was now his prison, and as Michaelov plunged headlong into the ravine he thought. Actually thought. There was no longer that constant nag the chemicals iun his brain incurred when he craved nicotine. Quite the opposite, he was overcome by an overwhelming clarity. They had done it. The workers. They had killed him. They had planned this to the last detail. Would their union protect them from this? Did they hold such loathing for men such as he, men that were willing to step over them and their petty bids for attention to make personal ends meet? They were all too alike, couldn't they see? He was human, they were human, he had needed this job to make ends meet. It had never been anything personal.
(based on true events)
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Posted: Thu Apr 14, 2005 7:11 pm
Thank you... I rather like you ending.
Though, don't be too alarmed if we send you some suggestions for editing.
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