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 Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 1:28 pm
I wrote this one a mounth ago. what do you guys think? CODY IS MINE!!! NO COPYING!!! And yes, she is younger here then she is when I R.P here!!!
A new friend
By: Ritz the freak
"YUKI!" Yuki rolled his eyes. Shuichi was home and calling for him. Yuki got to know this as his mating call. He closed his laptop and went to the living room where Shuichi waited on the couch for him with a smile on his face. "Hey I went shopping and picked up your faviote. Dim Sum!" Shuichi said. Yuki rolled his eyes but tried not to say anything. Shuichi was about to give him a soft kiss when a loud banging came from the kiciten.
"What the hell was that? Don't tell me you got a cat or something?" Yuki said, getting up. He heard loud cursing and the patter of feet. In Yuki's exprience, there was a slight limp in the footsteps. He went in. There was a figure about to jump out the window. The trench coat hid who it was. Yuki ran over and grabbed the coat. The figure gave a slight yelp and fell onto the floor.
Shuichi ran in and turned on the light. There in the middle of the floor was a young girl with a bag of food that Shuichi must have bought earlier.She couldn't have been older than 13 or 14. She looked up at them, trying to act innocent.
"Hey, Brat, thats breaking and entry you know?" Yuki said, kneeing to her level. Her red hair hid her face. "Well kid? I could have you arrested, and you could go to jail. Would you like that?" Yuki asked, rising her chin to meet his eyes. Her green eyes looked back at him with hate. Before he knew it, She bit his hand and pulled away. He recovered and grabbed her before she could leave. Shuichi helped Yuki and closed the window.
The young girl fought with both Yuki and Shuichi as they forced her on the couch. Yuki had to tie her up.
"Hey, what are you guys? Some kind of rapists?" She said, after scearming for help for so long. "Rapists? You broke into our place." Shuichi said, hitting the kid upside the head. She groweled at him. "Fricken idiot. I just needed something to eat. You guys have plenty." she said. Yuki lit up a ciggette and inhaled. "So, you can't get a job or get your parents to buy you something?" Yuki said, blowing smoke in her thin face. She coughed.
"I've got nobody and do you really think I can get a job? In that case, you're stupider than you think." She said. Yuki snorted. "Good one, did you come up that yourself or did you read that off a ceral box?" He said. She spat in his face and put out his cigrette. Shuichi and Yuki didn't move. For a long mintue there was a moment of pure silence.
A low chukle came out of Yuki. He put his cigrette in the ashtray nearby as he laughed at the young girl. "Nice one. I haven't been spit on in years." he said, sitting down next to her. She and Shuichi looked confused. She looked at Shuichi for her to explain it. Shuichi shrugged. The young girl sat up as best she could. "Can I please leave now?" she asked. Shuichi shook his head. "If course not! you can live here!" He said.
"WHAT?" Yuki said. "Shuichi, we are not keeping her!" He said. Shuichi pretended not to hear Yuki. "what is your name?" He asked. She sighed. "I'm Cody. Not like you care." she said. Shuichi shook his head. "Nope, cause your staying with us now." He said. Cody looked at Yuki for help. "Shes not a dog or something Shuichi. we can't feed her then leave her alone." Yuki said, untying her. She rubbed her wrists when she was finally free. Shuichi eyes teared up. "Yuki! Please." He said.
Yuki sighed. Those eyes, they called to him. "Okay, but for one week. Until we know what to do with her." He said. Shuichi srceamed his happiness. "Hear that? Your staying with us!" He said to Cody, who looked quite annoyed and tired. He took her hand and pulled her from the couch. "Now you stink. You need a bath." He said, leading her to the bathroom. Yuki groaned. "Shuichi, what did I say about the dog thing? I think she has feelings." He said. Cody sighed and said the first thing they heard from her in a while.
"It always starts like this. The wife wants a kid and decides to be a foster parent. They get me. They expect a baby and take me back like a dress that doesn't fit right. In always starts like this." She said. She pulled away from Shuichi. "I'll make it easier for al of us and leave." Shuichi's eyes teared up. He loved a good sob story. He grabbed Cody. "No, you're staying forever. I love you." He said. Cody rolled her eyes as he dragged her in the bathroom. Cody pushed him away. "If you really want me to have a bath, can I please do it alone?" She asked.
Shuichi left the bathroom with a smile on his face. "Yuki, shes so cute. Can we keep her?" He asked, landing in his lover's lap. Yuki lit up a cigette and sighed. "Shuichi, your an idiot. Adopting a kid is not like getting a dog. Its taking care of a human life. And shes a teenager. I don't want to babysit some cocky teen." He said, blowing a smoke circle. Shuichi burst into tears. "PLEASE! WHERE ELSE WILL SHE GO?" Shuichi cried into Yuki's shirt, ruining the smooth silk. Yuki sighed. "Okay, okay, fine. Lets see how in goes after a week."
Shuichi ran into the bathroom where Cody was taking a bath. She was leaning back in the tub with her head back. He could see the scars on her arms and shoulders. He stopped and stared. She looked up and srceamed. "What the hell are you doing here!" She said, hitting him with some soap. He dodged. "What happened to you?" He said. She shook her head and sunk deeper in the water. "Get out." She said simply. Shuichi went over to her.
"Yuki said you can stay here, but you have to be extra good okay?" He said, patting her on the head. She groweled and he left. "Don't forget to wash behind your ears!" He said, taking her clothes. He left. "Hey! Wait! What about my clothes?" She asked. He came back with some of his clothes. "I'm gonna put yours in the wash." He said, leaving. Cody sighed and tried to finish her bath. She tried not to think about her past. All those stupid poster parents...the moving...the bullies. No. That part of life was over. She'd give them a week and then if they sent her back, she'd run away.
A/N: So? Want to hear more of Cody and the Gravitation crew? I know ya do!
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Posted: Tue May 09, 2006 1:30 pm
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Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 5:50 pm
that was awesome! some grammatical mistakes but I liked it
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Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 5:52 pm
ResurrectedWound that was awesome! some grammatical mistakes but I liked it Oh, really? Where?
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Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 5:56 pm
no big deal. just some spelling mistakes
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Posted: Wed May 10, 2006 5:56 pm
ResurrectedWound no big deal. just some spelling mistakes Okay, thanks!
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 5:27 am
That's good writing.... and you keeped the cherictors, so far. It's good.
here's a good story you might like...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2194601/1/
it involves the two baka's and having kids...
just printed off the rest, i'll get back on what i think.
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Posted: Thu May 11, 2006 2:02 pm
silent_stars That's good writing.... and you keeped the cherictors, so far. It's good.
here's a good story you might like...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2194601/1/
it involves the two baka's and having kids...
just printed off the rest, i'll get back on what i think.I will. Thanks!!!
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Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 8:48 am
Ritz_Freak silent_stars That's good writing.... and you keeped the cherictors, so far. It's good.
here's a good story you might like...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2194601/1/
it involves the two baka's and having kids...
just printed off the rest, i'll get back on what i think.I will. Thanks!!! i like it.... well done. it's on my favs at fanfiction. i'm waiting for the next chapter.
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Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 1:35 pm
silent_stars Ritz_Freak silent_stars That's good writing.... and you keeped the cherictors, so far. It's good.
here's a good story you might like...
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/2194601/1/
it involves the two baka's and having kids...
just printed off the rest, i'll get back on what i think.I will. Thanks!!! i like it.... well done. it's on my favs at fanfiction. i'm waiting for the next chapter. It shall be done.
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Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 2:46 pm
heart 3nodding heart ello blaugh heart 3nodding heart
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Posted: Fri May 12, 2006 5:09 pm
nemori heart 3nodding heart ello blaugh heart 3nodding heart Hello there.
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Posted: Wed Jun 14, 2006 3:34 pm
okay.umm sure cody cute sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jun 15, 2006 9:26 am
kairi seguchi okay.umm sure cody cute sweatdrop Cute for a 12 year old, I guess
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Posted: Tue Aug 01, 2006 5:00 am
 ♥Hold me in your arms, Look deep into my eyes (.::[ - R |A| W [R] Z- ]::. ) OMG! xDDDDD
I've never ever read a FanFic like tat before! it was awesome!
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So funny xDD But really good^^
I wish tat I could write FanFics... But the way tat I'd write it would seem like an little kid's! xDD
Whisper to me slowly, "Our love will never die"♥
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