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Silver! Here is my first judgement. When you add in a change please respond and copy and paste the text you changed/added in for clarity.
QUESTIONS/CLARIFICATIONS:
1 ▬ Your primary talent is "Naturally Strong." I interpret that to simple mean "Strength." If you disagree let me know. No need to change this, just want to clarify what that you didn't intend it to mean anything else.
2 ▬ "*LEVEL 1 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 30 meters from her melded location." Just to clarify, this isn't teleportation? When she melds into another element, it must be connected to via earth elements already correct?
3 ▬ The above also makes it sound like she cannot switch elements at level 0. Is this true? If so, please state that in the semblance.
4 ▬ In drawbacks: "Anything she melds with cannot be smaller than herself." So she cannot meld her fist with a rock and then punch someone with it? Just curious. I wouldn't mind her being able to do this if you wanted it too.
5 ▬ In drawbacks there is what appears to be a contradicton: "takes 1 post to meld with desired earth subject." In level one you state: " She is able to move from one earth element to another and unmeld in the same post." These might not be contradictory, but they sort of sound like it. Let me get this straight. She can meld, move between elements of earth, then unmeld in same post, BUT she cannot meld, unmeld, and then remeld again in the same post?
6 ▬ "She must rest every other post. (i.e. 3 Jump posts, 2 rest posts)." This is in the drawbacks of the semblance, so I assume this means strictly for actions inside the melded state? So if she is jumping while melded she must rest every other post?
SUGGESTIONS:
1 ▬ In your weaknesses you state a second weakness of: "Reckless: She will trade blows without a second thought, or if she feels insulted in the least." I believe this is best placed in the negative traits section of personality. Otherwise, you will likely be forced by crew to accept any and all battles where an enemy punches you if placing this in the weakness section. Whereas in negative traits, its a little less serious.
2 ▬ In drawbacks: "If it is covered then she is stuck." Please elaborate on this one more.
MUST CHANGES:
1 ▬ "Faunus traits Small portion of scales on all, Horns For Horned Lizards, Sharp Teeth for Komodo Dragon, Legs for Monitor Lizard." I did not see any scales listed on your profile, please make sure to add some to match the mythical faunus description. I think this just slipped past you.
2 ▬ You state that "Her weapon is a battle axe that she can infuse with dust crystals for a ranged attack or elemental boost." But, I don't see any mentions of how she can use her primary weapon with range. Please specify how she can do ranged attacks when utilizing dust with her primary weapon. That is all the things I want to say! No rush, reply when you feel like it! Mostly just a bunch of clarifications.
Posted: Tue Jun 02, 2020 7:19 pm
narxfang
ANSWERS//CLARIFICATIONS:
1 ▬ Your primary talent is "Naturally Strong." I interpret that to simple mean "Strength." If you disagree let me know. No need to change this, just want to clarify what that you didn't intend it to mean anything else. Yes.
2 ▬ "*LEVEL 1 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 30 meters from her melded location." Just to clarify, this isn't teleportation? It's a form of movement through Earth elements. When she melds into another element, it must be connected to via earth elements already correct? That is correct.
3 ▬ The above also makes it sound like she cannot switch elements at level 0. Is this true? If so, please state that in the semblance. Done. "At this level, she cannot move through Earth elements.".
4 ▬ In drawbacks: "Anything she melds with cannot be smaller than herself." So she cannot meld her fist with a rock and then punch someone with it? Just curious. I wouldn't mind her being able to do this if you wanted it too. Thank you for the suggestion, but no, she would not be able to do such a thing.
5 ▬ In drawbacks there is what appears to be a contradiction: "takes 1 post to meld with desired earth subject." In level one you state: " She is able to move from one earth element to another and unmeld in the same post." These might not be contradictory, but they sort of sound like it. Let me get this straight. She can meld, move between elements of earth, then unmeld in same post, BUT she cannot meld, unmeld, and then re-meld again in the same post? I have already removed the ability to unmeld in the same post she melds as stated in drawback: "█ ▬ Anything she melds with cannot be smaller than herself. And she cannot cannot unmeld in the same post she's melded." And to clarify movement: It takes one post to meld with the earth element and move in the same post but that counts as her first move post. the next post would be a rest before she can move her next post. That goes on until she reaches her designated distance. She cannot unmeld the same post she melds.
6 ▬ "She must rest every other post. (i.e. 3 Jump posts, 2 rest posts)." This is in the drawbacks of the semblance, so I assume this means strictly for actions inside the melded state? Yes. So if she is jumping while melded she must rest every other post? Correct
SUGGESTIONS:
1 ▬ In your weaknesses you state a second weakness of: "Reckless: She will trade blows without a second thought, or if she feels insulted in the least." I believe this is best placed in the negative traits section of personality. Otherwise, you will likely be forced by crew to accept any and all battles where an enemy punches you if placing this in the weakness section. Whereas in negative traits, its a little less serious. Done.
2 ▬ In drawbacks: "If it is covered then she is stuck." Please elaborate on this one more. If the earth element that she's currently melded with (say, a boulder) is covered (say, with a tarp or some other form of cover, she cannot move until it's uncovered or until her time/post limit is reached. Does that make sense?
MUST CHANGES:
1 ▬ "Faunus traits Small portion of scales on all, Horns For Horned Lizards, Sharp Teeth for Komodo Dragon, Legs for Monitor Lizard." I did not see any scales listed on your profile, please make sure to add some to match the mythical faunus description. I think this just slipped past you. Done: "...Another birthmark under her left eye. Since birth, she has had a small patch of red reptilian scales on either side of her left and right thighs..."
2 ▬ You state that "Her weapon is a battle axe that she can infuse with dust crystals for a ranged attack or elemental boost." But, I don't see any mentions of how she can use her primary weapon with range. Please specify how she can do ranged attacks when utilizing dust with her primary weapon. Fixed/Added: I have removed "a ranged attack" from the description and mended it as so: "...infuse with dust crystals for an elemental boost..." and added: "...When the dust is activated, it's activated immediately and covers the axe-head for 2 posts...". I mainly placed it in Ammo as there is no real place to explain how dust acts/activates with weapons.
█HAIR ▬ Long, straight with layered bangs, faint purple (Lavender); though it looks paler in certain lighting. █CLOTHING ▬ Simple and comfortable clothing when not in uniform (sometimes hardly anything at all if she's around people that are alright with it). █ACCESSORIES ▬ A tan-colored satchel that she uses to carry items; Her pottery tools; Her Yellow beaded Mate Bond bracelet around the right wrist. █EYES ▬ Crimson █BUILD ▬ Slender, with lean-muscles █TATTOOS ▬ Left arm: Spiral dragon birthmark/tattoo █SCARS ▬ Faint scar (about 3 inches long) just under the right jawbone from when she was hit by Grimm on her hunt; She also has twin scars on her left and right shoulder from that same hunt that are a light pink. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Besides the dragon marking/tattoo, she also has a birthmark in the shape of a crescent moon on the back of her right knee. Another birthmark under her left eye. Since birth, she has had a small patch of red reptilian scales on either side of her left and right thighs. When she is of age as a Dragon Faunus, she will develop a monitor lizard long, prehensile tail (3 feet long), reptilian eyes, and horns (1 foot long) in the shade of desert red sand.
██ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
"Their blade defends the helpless,"
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Naturally Strong. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Unarmed Combat █Other Talents ▬ Athletic; Flexible █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Grappling █Weakest Skill ▬ Cold-blooded: When the temperature of where she is drops below 40 degrees Fahrenheit (4.44 Celsius), her thoughts and movement start to become sluggish and desire to hibernate/sleep. Adaptation to cold is near impossible. █Other Skills ▬ Melee Weapon Combat; Climbing; Pottery
█LIKES █ ▬ Pottery/Outdoor activities and Exploring/Sparring █ ▬ Loyalty/Honorable people/Kindness █ ▬ Any food with Honey/Custard Apple/Spicy █ ▬ Clay-works/Art/Starry nights █ ▬ Lizards/Snakes/Bats █DISLIKES █ ▬ Arrogance/Dishonorable People/Greed █ ▬ Exotic green stuff (Wasabi)/Olives/Cactus Pad (kinda sour). █ ▬ Cages/Her sister being messed with/Her Nightmares █ ▬ Flies/Nats/Fire Ants (though she understand their purpose). █ ▬ Falling into a deep slumber (Due to cold weather); Losing her sister; Breaking her word/oath. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Upon first meeting, Peni appears to be a bit of an aggressive and physical person. Some might say she is a bit of a tomboy but, also athletic. ▬ She has an exploratory and adventurous spirit, mated with a somewhat impulsive nature that can sometimes get her in trouble (more often than not); with a tendency to speak/act before thinking sometimes. She is not hindered and/or uneased with the thoughts of modesty and personal-space. ▬ Peni will make a cursory assessment by the actions of a person she first meets, making decisions about that person as time goes on. ▬ Most prominent is her protectiveness of those she cares for, and those that are weaker than herself. She also tends to have a motherly nature to those she's close to. The closer she is to someone the more patience she has for that person but, she does not tolerate disrespect well. ▬ She is not one to back down easily from a challenge either and rather persistent. Peni is fiercely loyal to those she trusts and feels deserves it. She is always one to take responsibility for her actions and any wrong she does she will do her best to right it. ▬ Due to her loyal nature, she takes oaths and promises extremely seriously; even the thought of breaking one of her own oaths causes panic to stir in her. █Vernacular ▬ She has no particular or audible accent when she speaks. Contrary to her aggressive and and tough speaking tone, her voice is a sweet soprano. She tends to talk fast sometimes when excited, compared to her usually understandable and normal speed of talking. █Positive Traits ▬ Fiercely Loyal, Honors her word, Takes responsibility for her actions, Persistent. █Negative Traits ▬ Impulsive, Acts before she thinks a lot of the time, Aggressive, Reckless: She will trade blows without a second thought, or if she feels insulted in the least.
██ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
"Their might upholds the weak,"
█BACKGROUND
▬ She doesn't remember much before the age of two, other than loud sounds, screams, and bright light. (When Sinn had destroyed and slaughtered the Dragon Clan, leaving only the young children alive). ▬ It was also when she was 3 years old, wandering the desert with her sister alone, (Due to the terror and confusion, she doesn't remember the woman and older son that helped the toddler and baby survive) that they were found and taken in by the Yowlumne tribe. Being adopted in to the Sandford Clan, while their fellow tribesman was taken in by the Nuntis Clan. She was not oblivious as she would notice one or two tribespeople would be wary of the the trio. But even that would fade over time. ▬ She was about 4 years old, she remembered a farewell celebration/saying goodbye to a couple from the Rosenburg Clan (Ylva's aunt Agnes Tove Rosenburg and uncle Henry Inge Rosenburg). Who left the for their own explorations (which was not too common, she would learn as she got older as they were a nomadic peoples). ▬ While growing up, she'd always been a protective older sister to Rosa, keeping her safe since they were little. Even though they were treated as one of the tribespeople, she realized that Rosa was always more of a Gentle nature than herself. With Rosa being weaker/less likely to engage in the fighting aspect, Cyn helped her in training while Rosa helped her with the more mental fighting and educations of the Tribe. ▬ Due to her overprotective nature of her sister, as they got older, she would spend much time with Rosa and Svafnir, whom she had grown to like. As they would begin training, she would gain a friendly rivalry with the boy. But if and when push came to shove, she would stand alongside her fellow warrior. ▬ As a Sandford clanswoman, she was taught at a young age that she would not just be a warrior but, also guard to the alphas someday. Her heroes were not just Agmundr and her tribe mother but also the one that was dubbed their greatest huntress, Groa Audhild Rosenburg (then 19 summers old) and the tales she brought back from her hunts when not at home with her pup/child that was but 1 spring-old (1 year-old) when her and Rosa became part of the tribe. ▬ Like many of the tribespeople, when she was 6 years old, she had begun designing a weapon of her own; she did not always like fancy ones, so instead she opted for a simple yet functional design; the Axe. This idea, she then gave to their Tribal blacksmith to create. And as she got older, she focused her skills with different melee weapons, but would always be more fond of weaponless combat. ▬ As the young woman grew up, she showed potential among the Sandford children to go up and try for the Coming of Age trial at the age of 16. As one might imagine, she was bolstered with confidence and pride, but she would not succeed her first time, discovering her semblance in a panic and almost losing her arm in the process. ▬ In order to heal completely and be ready, Peni would have to wait for another year to try again. She did not succeed her second time with those she went with. ▬ Half a year before she turned 19, she fondly remembers venturing to an oasis with her rival/friend and her younger sister as well as a few others. As usual, the Nuntis boy got under her skin, making her jump to the challenge presented. Unbeknownst at the time that her sister's excitement would form her semblance. Before she could be blown away, Cyn had taken cover behind a palm tree while her Svafnir had been blasted back. It was a flashy and amusing discovery indeed. ▬ When she turned 19, despite not passing her Coming of Age trial, she pleaded and reasoned with the Elders to allow her to accompany their greatest huntress and her mate on their hunt (along with Nanna Sandford, Einar Sandford, and Sigrun Maylis) as part of their trials. That night of the new moon when the desert was plunged into darkness, grave tragedy would strike them as they were ambushed by a cyclone (group) of Death Stalkers. In protecting them, the Rosenburgs were lost, forcing Maylis to get the young ones (after much protests from the young ones) away and back to the caves. ▬ Despite the chaos, Sigrun was able to use his "glass wall" semblance while Nanna carried the bodies of their fallen with her levitation semblance to the sand cart/sleigh they came in to escape. The shame of such events would never leave her, and she was glad she convinced her sister to stay behind. ▬ The return that night was a bitter loss for the Yowlumne, and a guilt she took personally upon herself, even if others tried to tell her this was not her fault; she would always feel it was. To make amends, she would appeal to the Alphas to give her a task she must complete. While the Alphas made their decision, Ylva would be taken to the harbor city to start her journey to Vale. ▬ After a week with Ylva being gone, the Alphas had made their decision, that she was to follow and keep an eye on (and occasionally protect) the Rosenburg youth that would someday be one of their Elders (it appeared with Svafnir would be going as well for reasons not known to her). As was predictable, Rosa would follow Peninnah on her journey, which would lead to them going and enrolling in Vale's Beacon Academy.
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Dragens Vrede (The Wrath of the Dragon) █ ▬ Her weapon is a battle axe that she can infuse with dust crystals for an elemental boost. She wears an armor that matches her weapon in color and metal. The axe in its stationary melee form has a handle that is about 0.6 meters in length (2 feet), but can extend its handle for reach at about 1.5 meters in length (5 feet). █Melee Form ▬ Battle Axe in its stationary melee form has a handle that is about 0.6 meters in length (2 feet). █Ranged Form ▬ N/A █Other Form(s) ▬ War axe can extend its handle for reach at about 1.5 meters in length (5 feet). (Example) █Ammo Type ▬ There are two facets for dust crystals that she can place along the shaft between the axe heads and atop it. When the dust is activated, it's activated immediately and covers the axe-head for 2 posts. █ ▬ Too top-heavy to be thrown.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Halberd █ ▬ Haladie █ ▬ arming sword █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ A bag of Spiced Chocolate-covered almonds █ ▬ Yellow beaded bracelet █ ▬ Satchel with items from Home
██ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
"Their wrath undoes the wicked."
█*NAME ▬ Jorden Sandtur (Earth Walk) █*AURA COLOR ▬ tan █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ "When you become one with an element, you almost lose yourself completely because you are not yourself, but that said element. It's oddly peaceful in its simplicity." █ Anyways, Earth Walker (simply put) allows Cyn to meld with any Earth element (Stone, Tree, etc.) within touching distance to avoid attack. In order to even do such a thing and come out safely, she needs to concentrate. █ Eventually able to move through the Earthly element to certain distances at higher levels. Now, if where she was melded with before she could move was destroyed, she would be forced out. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ At level 0, She is only able to meld with something made of earth that is of her size or larger for up to 5 posts. At this level, she cannot move through Earth elements. █*LEVEL 1 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 30 meters from her melded location. She is able to move from one earth element to another and but, cannot unmeld in the same post. When she unmelds from her location, she is able to attack or escape. Melding post does not detract from time melded and/or moving. (This applies to this level and every level following.) █*LEVEL 2 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 60 meters from her melded location. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 90 meters from her melded location. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ She must be concentrating so as not to lose a limb or something. If it is covered then she is stuck. █ ▬ She must touch it before, to meld with it and she must fit to be part of what she desires to meld with (i.e. if the boulder is at her hip-height, she must crouch to fit to a stone). █ ▬ Anything she melds with cannot be smaller than herself. And she cannot cannot unmeld in the same post she's melded. █ ▬ If the Earth element she is melded with gets smashed to bits/destroyed, she is forced out of said earth element. █ ▬ Cannot meld anyone but herself. Takes a 5 post cool-down, and takes 1 post to meld with desired earth subject. █ ▬ While she knows/can sense the tree or other Earthly object from said travel distance, she cannot sense what is around it; so she might be heading into a worse situation for all she knows. █ ▬ She must rest every other post. (i.e. 3 Jump posts, 2 rest posts).
narxfang
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Aeval_Silvertongue
Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2020 12:49 pm
Aeval_Silvertongue
narxfang
ANSWERS//CLARIFICATIONS:
1 ▬ Your primary talent is "Naturally Strong." I interpret that to simple mean "Strength." If you disagree let me know. No need to change this, just want to clarify what that you didn't intend it to mean anything else. Yes.
2 ▬ "*LEVEL 1 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 30 meters from her melded location." Just to clarify, this isn't teleportation? It's a form of movement through Earth elements. When she melds into another element, it must be connected to via earth elements already correct? That is correct.
3 ▬ The above also makes it sound like she cannot switch elements at level 0. Is this true? If so, please state that in the semblance. Done. "At this level, she cannot move through Earth elements.".
4 ▬ In drawbacks: "Anything she melds with cannot be smaller than herself." So she cannot meld her fist with a rock and then punch someone with it? Just curious. I wouldn't mind her being able to do this if you wanted it too. Thank you for the suggestion, but no, she would not be able to do such a thing.
5 ▬ In drawbacks there is what appears to be a contradiction: "takes 1 post to meld with desired earth subject." In level one you state: " She is able to move from one earth element to another and unmeld in the same post." These might not be contradictory, but they sort of sound like it. Let me get this straight. She can meld, move between elements of earth, then unmeld in same post, BUT she cannot meld, unmeld, and then re-meld again in the same post? I have already removed the ability to unmeld in the same post she melds as stated in drawback: "█ ▬ Anything she melds with cannot be smaller than herself. And she cannot cannot unmeld in the same post she's melded." And to clarify movement: It takes one post to meld with the earth element and move in the same post but that counts as her first move post. the next post would be a rest before she can move her next post. That goes on until she reaches her designated distance. She cannot unmeld the same post she melds.
6 ▬ "She must rest every other post. (i.e. 3 Jump posts, 2 rest posts)." This is in the drawbacks of the semblance, so I assume this means strictly for actions inside the melded state? Yes. So if she is jumping while melded she must rest every other post? Correct
SUGGESTIONS:
1 ▬ In your weaknesses you state a second weakness of: "Reckless: She will trade blows without a second thought, or if she feels insulted in the least." I believe this is best placed in the negative traits section of personality. Otherwise, you will likely be forced by crew to accept any and all battles where an enemy punches you if placing this in the weakness section. Whereas in negative traits, its a little less serious. Done.
2 ▬ In drawbacks: "If it is covered then she is stuck." Please elaborate on this one more. If the earth element that she's currently melded with (say, a boulder) is covered (say, with a tarp or some other form of cover, she cannot move until it's uncovered or until her time/post limit is reached. Does that make sense?
MUST CHANGES:
1 ▬ "Faunus traits Small portion of scales on all, Horns For Horned Lizards, Sharp Teeth for Komodo Dragon, Legs for Monitor Lizard." I did not see any scales listed on your profile, please make sure to add some to match the mythical faunus description. I think this just slipped past you. Done: "...Another birthmark under her left eye. Since birth, she has had a small patch of red reptilian scales on either side of her left and right thighs..."
2 ▬ You state that "Her weapon is a battle axe that she can infuse with dust crystals for a ranged attack or elemental boost." But, I don't see any mentions of how she can use her primary weapon with range. Please specify how she can do ranged attacks when utilizing dust with her primary weapon. Fixed/Added: I have removed "a ranged attack" from the description and mended it as so: "...infuse with dust crystals for an elemental boost..." and added: "...When the dust is activated, it's activated immediately and covers the axe-head for 2 posts...". I mainly placed it in Ammo as there is no real place to explain how dust acts/activates with weapons.
I see nothing else needing changed! Looks WONDERFUL!
█HAIR ▬ Long, straight with layered bangs, faint purple (Lavender); though it looks paler in certain lighting. █CLOTHING ▬ Simple and comfortable clothing when not in uniform (sometimes hardly anything at all if she's around people that are alright with it). █ACCESSORIES ▬ A tan-colored satchel that she uses to carry items; Her pottery tools; Her Yellow beaded Mate Bond bracelet around the right wrist. █EYES ▬ Crimson █BUILD ▬ Slender, with lean-muscles █TATTOOS ▬ Left arm: Spiral dragon birthmark/tattoo █SCARS ▬ Faint scar (about 3 inches long) just under the right jawbone from when she was hit by Grimm on her hunt; She also has twin scars on her left and right shoulder from that same hunt that are a light pink. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Besides the dragon marking/tattoo, she also has a birthmark in the shape of a crescent moon on the back of her right knee. Another birthmark under her left eye. She has had a small patch of red reptilian scales on either side of her left and right thighs that appeared four months before her 20th birthday. When she is of age as a Dragon Faunus, she will develop a monitor lizard's long, prehensile tail (3 feet long), reptilian eyes, and horns (1 foot long) in the shade of desert red sand.
██ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
"Their blade defends the helpless,"
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Naturally Strong. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Unarmed Combat █Other Talents ▬ Athletic; Flexible █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Grappling █Weakest Skill ▬ Cold-blooded: When the temperature of where she is drops below 40 degrees Fahrenheit (4.44 Celsius), her thoughts and movement start to become sluggish and desire to hibernate/sleep. Adaptation to cold is near impossible. █Other Skills ▬ Melee Weapon Combat; Climbing; Pottery
█LIKES █ ▬ Pottery/Outdoor activities and Exploring/Sparring █ ▬ Loyalty/Honorable people/Kindness █ ▬ Any food with Honey/Custard Apple/Spicy █ ▬ Clay-works/Art/Starry nights █ ▬ Lizards/Snakes/Bats █DISLIKES █ ▬ Arrogance/Dishonorable People/Greed █ ▬ Exotic green stuff (Wasabi)/Olives/Cactus Pad (kinda sour). █ ▬ Cages/Her sister being messed with/Her Nightmares █ ▬ Flies/Nats/Fire Ants (though she understand their purpose). █ ▬ Falling into a deep slumber (Due to cold weather); Losing her sister; Breaking her word/oath. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Upon first meeting, Peni appears to be a bit of an aggressive and physical person. Some might say she is a bit of a tomboy but, also athletic. ▬ She has an exploratory and adventurous spirit, mated with a somewhat impulsive nature that can sometimes get her in trouble (more often than not); with a tendency to speak/act before thinking sometimes. She is not hindered and/or uneased with the thoughts of modesty and personal-space. ▬ Peni will make a cursory assessment by the actions of a person she first meets, making decisions about that person as time goes on. ▬ Most prominent is her protectiveness of those she cares for, and those that are weaker than herself. She also tends to have a motherly nature to those she's close to. The closer she is to someone the more patience she has for that person but, she does not tolerate disrespect well. ▬ She is not one to back down easily from a challenge either and rather persistent. Peni is fiercely loyal to those she trusts and feels deserves it. She is always one to take responsibility for her actions and any wrong she does she will do her best to right it. ▬ Due to her loyal nature, she takes oaths and promises extremely seriously; even the thought of breaking one of her own oaths causes panic to stir in her. █Vernacular ▬ She has no particular or audible accent when she speaks. Contrary to her aggressive and and tough speaking tone, her voice is a sweet soprano. She tends to talk fast sometimes when excited, compared to her usually understandable and normal speed of talking. █Positive Traits ▬ Fiercely Loyal, Honors her word, Takes responsibility for her actions, Persistent. █Negative Traits ▬ Impulsive, Acts before she thinks a lot of the time, Aggressive, Reckless: She will trade blows without a second thought, or if she feels insulted in the least.
██ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
"Their might upholds the weak,"
█BACKGROUND
▬ She doesn't remember much before the age of two, other than loud sounds, screams, and bright light. (When Sinn had destroyed and slaughtered the Dragon Clan, leaving only the young children alive). ▬ It was also when she was 3 years old, wandering the desert with her sister alone, (Due to the terror and confusion, she doesn't remember the woman and older son that helped the toddler and baby survive) that they were found and taken in by the Yowlumne tribe. Being adopted in to the Sandford Clan, while their fellow tribesman was taken in by the Nuntis Clan. She was not oblivious as she would notice one or two tribespeople would be wary of the the trio. But even that would fade over time. ▬ She was about 4 years old, she remembered a farewell celebration/saying goodbye to a couple from the Rosenburg Clan (Ylva's aunt Agnes Tove Rosenburg and uncle Henry Inge Rosenburg). Who left the for their own explorations (which was not too common, she would learn as she got older as they were a nomadic peoples). ▬ While growing up, she'd always been a protective older sister to Rosa, keeping her safe since they were little. Even though they were treated as one of the tribespeople, she realized that Rosa was always more of a Gentle nature than herself. With Rosa being weaker/less likely to engage in the fighting aspect, Cyn helped her in training while Rosa helped her with the more mental fighting and educations of the Tribe. ▬ Due to her overprotective nature of her sister, as they got older, she would spend much time with Rosa and Svafnir, whom she had grown to like. As they would begin training, she would gain a friendly rivalry with the boy. But if and when push came to shove, she would stand alongside her fellow warrior. ▬ As a Sandford clanswoman, she was taught at a young age that she would not just be a warrior but, also guard to the alphas someday. Her heroes were not just Agmundr and her tribe mother but also the one that was dubbed their greatest huntress, Groa Audhild Rosenburg (then 19 summers old) and the tales she brought back from her hunts when not at home with her pup/child that was but 1 spring-old (1 year-old) when her and Rosa became part of the tribe. ▬ Like many of the tribespeople, when she was 6 years old, she had begun designing a weapon of her own; she did not always like fancy ones, so instead she opted for a simple yet functional design; the Axe. This idea, she then gave to their Tribal blacksmith to create. And as she got older, she focused her skills with different melee weapons, but would always be more fond of weaponless combat. ▬ As the young woman grew up, she showed potential among the Sandford children to go up and try for the Coming of Age trial at the age of 16. As one might imagine, she was bolstered with confidence and pride, but she would not succeed her first time, discovering her semblance in a panic and almost losing her arm in the process. ▬ In order to heal completely and be ready, Peni would have to wait for another year to try again. She did not succeed her second time with those she went with. ▬ Half a year before she turned 19, she fondly remembers venturing to an oasis with her rival/friend and her younger sister as well as a few others. As usual, the Nuntis boy got under her skin, making her jump to the challenge presented. Unbeknownst at the time that her sister's excitement would form her semblance. Before she could be blown away, Cyn had taken cover behind a palm tree while her Svafnir had been blasted back. It was a flashy and amusing discovery indeed. ▬ When she turned 19, despite not passing her Coming of Age trial, she pleaded and reasoned with the Elders to allow her to accompany their greatest huntress and her mate on their hunt (along with Nanna Sandford, Einar Sandford, and Sigrun Maylis) as part of their trials. That night of the new moon when the desert was plunged into darkness, grave tragedy would strike them as they were ambushed by a cyclone (group) of Death Stalkers. In protecting them, the Rosenburgs were lost, forcing Maylis to get the young ones (after much protests from the young ones) away and back to the caves. ▬ Despite the chaos, Sigrun was able to use his "glass wall" semblance while Nanna carried the bodies of their fallen with her levitation semblance to the sand cart/sleigh they came in to escape. The shame of such events would never leave her, and she was glad she convinced her sister to stay behind. ▬ The return that night was a bitter loss for the Yowlumne, and a guilt she took personally upon herself, even if others tried to tell her this was not her fault; she would always feel it was. To make amends, she would appeal to the Alphas to give her a task she must complete. While the Alphas made their decision, Ylva would be taken to the harbor city to start her journey to Vale. ▬ After a week with Ylva being gone, the Alphas had made their decision, that she was to follow and keep an eye on (and occasionally protect) the Rosenburg youth that would someday be one of their Elders (it appeared with Svafnir would be going as well for reasons not known to her). As was predictable, Rosa would follow Peninnah on her journey, which would lead to them going and enrolling in Vale's Beacon Academy. Having her sister go to the school before her. ▬ A few months before she would arrive at Beacon, one night at the Rosenburg farm in Vale, she awoke to a horrible and painful itching until the next morning, finding scales on her thighs. She would then move on to the academy.
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Dragens Vrede (The Wrath of the Dragon) █ ▬ Her weapon is a battle axe that she can infuse with dust crystals for an elemental boost. She wears an armor that matches her weapon in color and metal. The axe in its stationary melee form has a handle that is about 0.6 meters in length (2 feet), but can extend its handle for reach at about 1.5 meters in length (5 feet). █Melee Form ▬ Battle Axe in its stationary melee form has a handle that is about 0.6 meters in length (2 feet). █Ranged Form ▬ N/A █Other Form(s) ▬ War axe can extend its handle for reach at about 1.5 meters in length (5 feet). (Example) █Ammo Type ▬ There are two facets for dust crystals that she can place along the shaft between the axe heads and atop it. When the dust is activated, it's activated immediately and covers the axe-head for 2 posts. █ ▬ Too top-heavy to be thrown.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Halberd █ ▬ Haladie █ ▬ arming sword █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ A bag of Spiced Chocolate-covered almonds █ ▬ Yellow beaded bracelet █ ▬ Satchel with items from Home
██ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
"Their wrath undoes the wicked."
█*NAME ▬ Jorden Sandtur (Earth Walk) █*AURA COLOR ▬ tan █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ "When you become one with an element, you almost lose yourself completely because you are not yourself, but that said element. It's oddly peaceful in its simplicity." █ Anyways, Earth Walker (simply put) allows Cyn to meld with any Earth element (Stone, Tree, etc.) within touching distance to avoid attack. In order to even do such a thing and come out safely, she needs to concentrate. █ Eventually able to move through the Earthly element to certain distances at higher levels. Now, if where she was melded with before she could move was destroyed, she would be forced out. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ At level 0, She is only able to meld with something made of earth that is of her size or larger for up to 5 posts. At this level, she cannot move through Earth elements. █*LEVEL 1 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 30 meters from her melded location. She is able to move from one earth element to another and but, cannot unmeld in the same post. When she unmelds from her location, she is able to attack or escape. Melding post does not detract from time melded and/or moving. (This applies to this level and every level following.) █*LEVEL 2 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 60 meters from her melded location. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 90 meters from her melded location. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ She must be concentrating so as not to lose a limb or something. If it is covered then she is stuck. █ ▬ She must touch it before, to meld with it and she must fit to be part of what she desires to meld with (i.e. if the boulder is at her hip-height, she must crouch to fit to a stone). █ ▬ Anything she melds with cannot be smaller than herself. And she cannot cannot unmeld in the same post she's melded. █ ▬ If the Earth element she is melded with gets smashed to bits/destroyed, she is forced out of said earth element. █ ▬ Cannot meld anyone but herself. Takes a 5 post cool-down, and takes 1 post to meld with desired earth subject. █ ▬ While she knows/can sense the tree or other Earthly object from said travel distance, she cannot sense what is around it; so she might be heading into a worse situation for all she knows. █ ▬ She must rest every other post. (i.e. 3 Jump posts, 2 rest posts).
█HAIR ▬ Long, straight with layered bangs, faint purple (Lavender) █CLOTHING ▬ Simple and comfortable clothing when not in uniform (sometimes hardly anything at all if she's around people that are alright with it). █ACCESSORIES ▬ A tan-colored satchel that she uses to carry items; Her pottery tools; Her Yellow beaded Mate Bond bracelet around the right wrist. █EYES ▬ Crimson █BUILD ▬ Slender, with lean-muscles █TATTOOS ▬ Left arm: Spiral dragon birthmark/tattoo █SCARS ▬ Faint scar (about 3 inches long) just under the right jawbone from when she was hit by Grimm on her hunt; She also has twin scars on her left and right shoulder from that same hunt that are a light pink. █MARKINGS/FAUNUS FEATURES ▬ Besides the dragon marking/tattoo, she also has a birthmark in the shape of a crescent moon on the back of her right knee. Another birthmark under her left eye. When she is of age as a Dragon Faunus, she will develop a monitor lizard long, prehensile tail (3 feet long), reptilian eyes, and horns (1 foot long) in the shade of desert red sand.
██ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
"Their blade defends the helpless,"
█NATURAL ABILITIES █Primary Talent ▬ Naturally Strong. █Faunus Trait/Bonus Talent ▬ Unarmed Combat █Other Talents ▬ Athletic █ ▬ Flexible █LEARNT ABILITIES █Strongest Skill ▬ Grappling █Weakest Skill ▬ Cold-blooded: When the temperature of where she is drops below 40 degrees Fahrenheit (4.44 Celsius), her thoughts and movement start to become sluggish and desire to hibernate/sleep. Adaptation to cold is near impossible. █ ▬ Reckless: She will trade blows without a second thought, or if she feels insulted in the least. █Other Skills ▬ Melee Weapon Combat █ ▬ Climbing █ ▬ Pottery
█LIKES █ ▬ Pottery/Outdoor activities and Exploring/Sparring █ ▬ Loyalty/Honorable people/Kindness █ ▬ Any food with Honey/Custard Apple/Spicy █ ▬ Clay-works/Art/Starry nights █ ▬ Lizards/Snakes/Bats █DISLIKES █ ▬ Arrogance/Dishonorable People/Greed █ ▬ Exotic green stuff (Wasabi)/Olives/Cactus Pad (kinda sour). █ ▬ Cages/Her sister being messed with/Her Nightmares █ ▬ Flies/Nats/Fire Ants (though she understand their purpose). █ ▬ Falling into a deep slumber (Due to cold weather); Losing her sister; Breaking her word/oath. █PERSONALITY TRAITS █Nature ▬ Upon first meeting, Peni appears to be a bit of an aggressive and physical person. Some might say she is a bit of a tomboy but, also athletic. ▬ She has an exploratory and adventurous spirit, mated with a somewhat impulsive nature that can sometimes get her in trouble (more often than not); with a tendency to speak/act before thinking sometimes. She is not hindered and/or uneased with the thoughts of modesty and personal-space. ▬ Peni will make a cursory assessment by the actions of a person she first meets, making decisions about that person as time goes on. ▬ Most prominent is her protectiveness of those she cares for, and those that are weaker than herself. She also tends to have a motherly nature to those she's close to. The closer she is to someone the more patience she has for that person but, she does not tolerate disrespect well. ▬ She is not one to back down easily from a challenge either and rather persistent. Peni is fiercely loyal to those she trusts and feels deserves it. She is always one to take responsibility for her actions and any wrong she does she will do her best to right it. ▬ Due to her loyal nature, she takes oaths and promises extremely seriously; even the thought of breaking one of her own oaths causes panic to stir in her. █Vernacular ▬ American █Positive Traits ▬ Fiercely Loyal, Honors her word, Takes responsibility for her actions, Persistent. █Negative Traits ▬ Impulsive, Acts before she thinks a lot of the time, Aggressive.
██ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
"Their might upholds the weak,"
█BACKGROUND ▬ She doesn't remember much before the age of two, other than loud sounds, screams, and bright light. (When Sinn had destroyed and slaughtered the Dragon Clan, leaving only the young children alive). ▬ It was also when she was 3 years old, wandering the desert with her sister alone, (Due to the terror and confusion, she doesn't remember the woman and older son that helped the toddler and baby survive) that they were found and taken in by the Yowlumne tribe. Being adopted in to the Sandford Clan, while their fellow tribesman was taken in by the Nuntis Clan. She was not oblivious as she would notice one or two tribespeople would be wary of the the trio. But even that would fade over time. ▬ She was about 4 years old, she remembered a farewell celebration/saying goodbye to a couple from the Rosenburg Clan (Ylva's aunt Agnes Tove Rosenburg and uncle Henry Inge Rosenburg). Who left the for their own explorations (which was not too common, she would learn as she got older as they were a nomadic peoples). ▬ While growing up, she'd always been a protective older sister to Rosa, keeping her safe since they were little. Even though they were treated as one of the tribespeople, she realized that Rosa was always more of a Gentle nature than herself. With Rosa being weaker/less likely to engage in the fighting aspect, Cyn helped her in training while Rosa helped her with the more mental fighting and educations of the Tribe. ▬ Due to her overprotective nature of her sister, as they got older, she would spend much time with Rosa and Svafnir, whom she had grown to like. As they would begin training, she would gain a friendly rivalry with the boy. But if and when push came to shove, she would stand alongside her fellow warrior. ▬ As a Sandford clanswoman, she was taught at a young age that she would not just be a warrior but, also guard to the alphas someday. Her heroes were not just Agmundr and her tribe mother but also the one that was dubbed their greatest huntress, Groa Audhild Rosenburg (then 19 summers old) and the tales she brought back from her hunts when not at home with her pup/child that was but 1 spring-old (1 year-old) when her and Rosa became part of the tribe. ▬ Like many of the tribespeople, when she was 6 years old, she had begun designing a weapon of her own; she did not always like fancy ones, so instead she opted for a simple yet functional design; the Axe. This idea, she then gave to their Tribal blacksmith to create. And as she got older, she focused her skills with different melee weapons, but would always be more fond of weaponless combat. ▬ As the young woman grew up, she showed potential among the Sandford children to go up and try for the Coming of Age trial at the age of 16. As one might imagine, she was bolstered with confidence and pride, but she would not succeed her first time, discovering her semblance in a panic and almost losing her arm in the process. ▬ In order to heal completely and be ready, Peni would have to wait for another year to try again. She did not succeed her second time with those she went with. ▬ Half a year before she turned 19, she fondly remembers venturing to an oasis with her rival/friend and her younger sister as well as a few others. As usual, the Nuntis boy got under her skin, making her jump to the challenge presented. Unbeknownst at the time that her sister's excitement would form her semblance. Before she could be blown away, Cyn had taken cover behind a palm tree while her Svafnir had been blasted back. It was a flashy and amusing discovery indeed. ▬ When she turned 19, despite not passing her Coming of Age trial, she pleaded and reasoned with the Elders to allow her to accompany their greatest huntress and her mate on their hunt (along with Nanna Sandford, Einar Sandford, and Sigrun Maylis) as part of their trials. That night of the new moon when the desert was plunged into darkness, grave tragedy would strike them as they were ambushed by a cyclone (group) of Death Stalkers. In protecting them, the Rosenburgs were lost, forcing Maylis to get the young ones (after much protests from the young ones) away and back to the caves. ▬ Despite the chaos, Sigrun was able to use his "glass wall" semblance while Nanna carried the bodies of their fallen with her levitation semblance to the sand cart/sleigh they came in to escape. The shame of such events would never leave her, and she was glad she convinced her sister to stay behind. ▬ The return that night was a bitter loss for the Yowlumne, and a guilt she took personally upon herself, even if others tried to tell her this was not her fault; she would always feel it was. To make amends, she would appeal to the Alphas to give her a task she must complete. While the Alphas made their decision, Ylva would be taken to the harbor city to start her journey to Vale. ▬ After a week with Ylva being gone, the Alphas had made their decision, that she was to follow and keep an eye on (and occasionally protect) the Rosenburg youth that would someday be one of their Elders (it appeared with Svafnir would be going as well for reasons not known to her). As was predictable, Rosa would follow Peninnah on her journey, which would lead to them going and enrolling in Vale's Beacon Academy. ▬ Their journey to Beacon was smooth and having met with the Rosenburgs that took home in Vale for a bit, Peninnah had had Rosa go ahead of her. Staying behind just a while longer to help them. It would be the first time the sisters had every really separated and it was hard on Peninnah most to be without her little sister. During one of her nights at the farm, she would awaken to almost unbearable burning and itching as it felt like her skin at her thighs had been shredding...scales had formed. In shock, she had a desire to tell her sister...Instead keeping it to herself until next they met. She would get her first inkling that she and her sister were in fact...not human at all. ▬ Upon arriving at the school during what they called a Festival, Peninnah found fate in signing up for a little "water battle". Suffice to say, she would meet a very influential and knightly young man who would turn out to be one of her future teammates (and someone to be respected), as well as a couple other students. Though she also had the displeasure of meeting a teacher or two (though she was not impressed with them). ▬ The next couple days during the festival, she would meet up with her little sister, enjoyed the local food and the beach (a rare sight compared to their desert home). It was then she got the idea to have her sister research, but with not much success on lizards/reptilian peoples of Vacuo. ▬ Becoming a part of Team Hurricane, she's felt a bond and kinship, despite (or maybe because) of the wrestling. If school had taught her anything so far...it's that despite their differences, they could work together (herself, Alois, Thyra, and Pyrrhus) as a team. Being separated from her sister and her cousins is still uncomfortable, and she's still learning...but, she's determined to continue with her promise (to Groa and to Ylva). And whether she's aware of it or not...there are still greater changes to yet to come.
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ Dragens Vrede (The Wrath of the Dragon) █ ▬ Her weapon is a battle axe that she can infuse with dust crystals for a ranged attack or elemental boost. She wears an armor that matches her weapon in color and metal. The axe in its stationary melee form has a handle that is about 0.6 meters in length (2 feet), but can extend its handle for reach at about 1.5 meters in length (5 feet). █Melee Form ▬ Battle Axe in its stationary melee form has a handle that is about 0.6 meters in length (2 feet). █Ranged Form ▬ N/A █Other Form(s) ▬ War axe can extend its handle for reach at about 1.5 meters in length (5 feet). (Example) █Ammo Type ▬ Dust crystals that she places along the axe heads and at the top. █ ▬ Too top-heavy to be thrown.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ Halberd █ ▬ Haladie █ ▬ arming sword █ITEMS █ ▬ Scroll █ ▬ Yellow beaded bracelet (Clan)/Pottery tools █ ▬ Jar of Vacuo Honey █ ▬ Bag with stuff in it
██ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
"Their wrath undoes the wicked."
█*NAME ▬ Jorden Sandtur (Earth Walk) █*AURA COLOR ▬ tan █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ "When you become one with an element, you almost lose yourself completely because you are not yourself, but that said element. It's oddly peaceful in its simplicity." █ Anyways, Earth Walker (simply put) allows Cyn to meld with any Earth element (Stone, Tree, etc.) within touching distance to avoid attack. In order to even do such a thing and come out safely, she needs to concentrate. █ Eventually able to move through the Earthly element to certain distances at higher levels and unmeld instantly to attack her enemy or escape. Now, if where she was melded with before she could move was destroyed, she would be forced out. █*LEVEL 0 ▬ At level 0, She is only able to meld with something made of earth that is of her size or larger for up to 5 posts. █*LEVEL 1 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 30 meters from her melded location. She is able to move from one earth element to another and unmeld in the same post. When she unmelds from her location, she is able to attack or escape. Melding post does not detract from time melded and/or moving. (This applies to this level and every level following.) █*LEVEL 2 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 60 meters from her melded location. █*LEVEL 3 ▬ Can be melded up to 5 posts, and move from one Earth element to another that is up to 90 meters from her melded location. █*DRAWBACKS ▬ She must be concentrating so as not to lose a limb or something. If it is covered then she is stuck. █ ▬ She must touch it before, to meld with it and she must fit to be part of what she desires to meld with (i.e. if the boulder is at her hip-height, she must crouch to fit to a stone). █ ▬ Anything she melds with cannot be smaller than herself. █ ▬ If the Earth element she is melded with gets smashed to bits/destroyed, she is forced out of said earth element. █ ▬ Cannot meld anyone but herself. Takes a 5 post cool-down, and takes 1 post to meld with desired earth subject. █ ▬ While she knows/can sense the tree or other Earthly object from said travel distance, she cannot sense what is around it; so she might be heading into a worse situation for all she knows. █ ▬ She must rest every other post. (i.e. 3 Jump posts, 2 rest posts).
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