█SKILLS & TALENTS █Primary Talent ▬ Speed, Accuracy █Other Talents ▬ Precision, Energy Binding █Faunus Skill ▬ Because Arctic Foxes are adapted to both high and low temperatures, Hizami isn't affect by extremities, but her senses of smell are heightened. █Strongest Skill ▬ Long and Close Range █Weakest Skill ▬ Physical Strength
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking, Playing Video Games █ ▬ People Who Aren't Pessimistic █ ▬ All Sorts of Food █ ▬ Shiny Objects! █ ▬ Bunnies █DISLIKES █ ▬ She really likes all people... █ ▬ Bitter Foods! █ ▬ Grimy Objects █ ▬ Falling Off A Cliff
█ █ ╫ P E R S O N L I T Y ╫
█Nature ▬ Optimistic, Organized, Outgoing, Clueless █Vernacular ▬ English █Positive Traits ▬ Creative, Quick-Minded, Hard Working, Silly █Negative Traits ▬ Sometimes Slow to Understand
Posted: Sat May 26, 2018 8:16 pm
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ When she was born into the city of Vale, Hizami was born as the first daughter of Shinsui, and she was probably the most happiest person on the planet at the time. Although her father went to the outsides to fight Grimms for work half of the time as a protector, she stayed with her mother and help her around the house. She was often smiled, but retained her innocence as a child. She wandered around as a child, but this doesn't reflect the amount of intelligence she has. Her father would come home everyday to play with her, teaching her new things about the world and about their own race. Her name was Hizami Kyōraku, but her mother argued with her father change her last name to Yachiru, her mother's maiden name. It wasn't uncommon within their family tree, but Hizami loved both of them no matter what history they both represented. As she grew older, she began to learn the way of weapons, often practicing with her father when she came home. Shinsui made sure to teach her well, for he wanted her to stay safe. Little did he know that she wanted to be just like him: a soldier whom fought the Grimms that plagued their world. She didn't mind if she died, if it was for a good cause.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ AquaStinger █ ▬ A large lance that is the same length as its wielder. The blade is comprised of normal metals, but is infused with mountain dust ( not the elemental dust ), which gives it its soft hue. The lance retracts and collapses into a pole half its size. The blade and tech seen in the provided picture is tucked away, making the ends of the pole look more like batons than anything. This is for roleplaying and logic purposes. Cant be carrying around a 5'5 long a** lance around. And she's clumsy? Heck no. █Melee Form ▬ Her Lance █Ranged Form ▬ Primary Form █Other Form(s) ▬ Scar. The lance is comprised of blades of metal that can fold on itself due to its flexibility. The reason why it doesnt break during battle is due to its resistance to blunt force. The lance head is bulky, and houses the required chambers to make up an assault rifle. The lance blade retracts! The Scar only has its more important components, which include: the barrel (handle), the shoulder bar, and air chamber. The lance has enough metal to construct these parts only, and as a result, the rifle itself is relatively lighter and may look like a skeleton, but still deals heavy damage as its intended to. █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ The Gentleman: The Scar is integrated with pieces of modern technology. The only thing unique is its ability to let Hizami know how many bullets she has left in her cartridge, which appears as a projectile atop of the aim. █ ▬ Out of Ammo: Once the Scar has completely run out of ammo, it will retract and expand back into its lanced state. █ ▬ Patience: Turning the lance into the Scar takes One Post, and vice versa. █ ▬ The Strategist: Hizami has already filled three bullets with dust, all of which are stored in a small box compartment attached to her thigh. She gotta load them in.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ These hands.
█ITEMS █ ▬ 3 Dust Vials ( All Water ) █ ▬ 2 Cartridges of 150 Bullets Each. █ ▬ Mochi Snacks
█*NAME ▬ Horudo (保つ, Cold Snap ) █*AURA COLOR ▬ Light Blue █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Hizami can freeze the moister in the air around her with a single snap of her fingers. The radius and severity of her frostbite increases as she grows stronger. If she fails to capture a target or land a hit with Cold Snap, the frozen particles resume their gaseous state, becoming readily available for usage again. Opponents who are hit will find that whatever part of their body was hit responds slower. This ability’s sole purpose is to weaken the state of opponents so allies have a better chance of defeating them. If someone defends against Cold Snap, the affliction does not occure. Instead, the blunt physical force goes through. So instead of being Frostbitten, the opponent will still the force of the kick or the slash ( depends on the level of severity ).
█*Level 0 ▬ Radius of 5 meters. Muscle fibers in the body become afflicted with frostbite, and movement is slowed. Reaction time is also delayed. For instance, a brisk walk slows to a normal one. Getting caught in a Cold Snap feels like a hard jab. Duration: 3 Posts Cooldown: 1 Post
█*Level 1 ▬ Radius of 10 meters. Frostbite afflicts the second layer of muscle. Running slows down to a normal walk. Getting caught in a Cold Snap feels like being kicked twice. Duration: 3 Posts Cooldown: 1 Post
█*Level 2 ▬ Radius of 15 meters. Frostbite afflicts third layer of muscle. Sprinting slows to a normal walk. Getting caught in a Cold Snap causes lacerations. Duration: 5 Posts Cooldown: 2 Posts
█*Level 3 ▬ Radius of 25 meters. Frostbite afflicts fourth layer of muscle ( i.e tendons ). Frostbite causes the same affliction as a Lvl 2, but getting caught in it causes gradual progression of frostbite. Over the course of 2 posts, an entire limb becomes immobile. It can be treated and healed, however. Duration: 7 Posts Cooldown: 3 Posts █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Elemental attacks such as fire or dust that can effect temperature will weaken Cold Snap. Places such as deserts or arid areas will limit the duration of Cold Snap ( -1 Post Duration, +1 Cooldown ). Using a water-based vial will return the conditions around her to normal for 1 post. In addition, places that promote moisture, such as tropical area or zones near water will allow for an increase in power ( +1 Post Duration, -1 Cooldown ).
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Posted: Sat May 26, 2018 11:46 pm
█ █ ╫ Q U E S T P O I N T S ╫
█*TOTAL ▬ 0 █*UNTIL NEXT GRADE ▬ 5 █*CURRENT GRADE ▬ Freshman █*LOG OF COMPLETION ▬
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Hello, my name is Youroka Kage, and I'll be judging your profile today!
❖Hi, I was looking at your Core section and noticed that your Role was Arctic Fox Fauna, and that your SPECIES was Human. I think you have that mixed up ^.^;. As for Markings, what part of you is Faunus?
❖ As for your Lance, I need to know how it turns into a sniper rifle. Also, your picture that links to pintrest is a 404 error, therefore I can not see how the lance turns into gauntlets. However, your weapon seems to possible fall until these rules:
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Three Forms - You cannot have more than 3 weapon forms unless your weapon is significantly weaker than a normal weapon. Usually you should have two major fighting forms and a storage form. We do allow exceptions depending on the power level of the weapon though. (2.) 20% Sizeshift - Please don't have your weapon or character size shifting more than 20%. It is just unrealistic. Your cellphone cannot shift into a battleaxe. Sorry.
The second one is in relationship to the gauntlets to the lance.
❖ First off, for your semblance, there is no timer in which you can start it, or even a cool down. Your tails seem to be from aura, therefore, you only have so much aura, as it's used to fuel your abilities and to protect you. It is also on all the time if you have aura. As for the the locking on bit, that is too much, also having them at a permanent 30ft would make them take up much more aura holding it up.
❖ For your first ability, I understand wanting a ranged attack, however, that ability is far too strong for a level 0. You are just starting out. destroying a 27x15 ft (Almost) with one ball, never mind two. The one post charge time is not enough as well.
❖ Seisei Suru (精製する, Purify)- No. I can not approve this ability.
❖ Seiten (晴天, Clear Sky)- This would negate most of the enemies abilities. Please keep in mind, we aren't a pvp guild, we are a PvE guild. If you want to see how PVP combat works in this guild, please click this link. Also, were talking about it, and we need to make sure that you aren't immune to things like Disease, old age, and death. How long does the healing last? (Even though everyone has increased healing)
❖ So we have banned everything that is black hole related, therefore you will need to come up with a new drawback.
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Hello, my name is Youroka Kage, and I'll be judging your profile today!
❖ Ok, I have looked at the top of your profile once more. Your Role tells what kind of character you have (ie, Student, Villain, loner, Student Villain.) Species is where you put the kind of Faunus that you are.
❖ I have read the description of your Semblance, Several crew and I agree, that taking energy from Atoms is a no. We can not allow for that to happen. It would make everything unstable around you. I also noticed that you didn't add a time limit like I asked. I will not approve this profile without a time limit on it.
❖ Ok, on your second ability, Aura already accelerates healing. Scratches are almost automatically healed. We had someone whom became paralyzed in the last RP day walking with a cane already. This ability becomes redundant, and the amount you heal is based on how much aura you have.
❖ On the last ability, I need you to list an actual number for how big the crater is. Saying that it's 1/6 of a Tennis field isn't fair in terms of everyone having to do math every time that they want to check your abilities.
❖ As for the drawback, it is the same thing as the black hole, except you have changed the name of it. Please make a new drawback.
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2018 7:20 am
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Hello, my name is Youroka Kage, and I'll be judging your profile today!
❖ Ok, the question I have is does this ability bypass aura?
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Hello, my name is Youroka Kage, and I'll be judging your profile today!
❖ So, I realized that you have not stated what you mean by "These hits accumulate." I need an explanation on that, as you have only stated what happens when you hit once.
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Yuu █OCCUPATION ▬
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5'5 █WEIGHT ▬ 120
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ White Kimono █ACCESSORIES ▬ None █EYES ▬ Gold █BUILD ▬ Toned █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None █MARKINGS ▬ White Fluffy Fox Ears
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█SKILLS & TALENTS █Primary Talent ▬ Speed, Accuracy █Other Talents ▬ Precision, Energy Binding █Faunus Skill ▬ Because Arctic Foxes are adapted to both high and low temperatures, Hizami isn't affect by extremities. █Strongest Skill ▬ Long and Close Range █Weakest Skill ▬ Physical Strength
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking, Playing Video Games █ ▬ People Who Aren't Pessimistic █ ▬ All Sorts of Food █ ▬ Shiny Objects! █ ▬ Bunnies █DISLIKES █ ▬ She really likes all people... █ ▬ Bitter Foods! █ ▬ Grimy Objects █ ▬ Falling Off A Cliff
█ █ ╫ P E R S O N L I T Y ╫
█Nature ▬ Optimistic, Organized, Outgoing, Clueless █Vernacular ▬ English █Positive Traits ▬ Creative, Quick-Minded, Hard Working, Silly █Negative Traits ▬ Sometimes Slow to Understand
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ When she was born into the city of Vale, Hizami was born as the first daughter of Shinsui, and she was probably the most happiest person on the planet at the time. Although her father went to the outsides to fight Grimms for work half of the time as a protector, she stayed with her mother and help her around the house. She was often smiled, but retained her innocence as a child. She wandered around as a child, but this doesn't reflect the amount of intelligence she has. Her father would come home everyday to play with her, teaching her new things about the world and about their own race. Her name was Hizami Kyōraku, but her mother argued with her father change her last name to Yachiru, her mother's maiden name. It wasn't uncommon within their family tree, but Hizami loved both of them no matter what history they both represented. As she grew older, she began to learn the way of weapons, often practicing with her father when she came home. Shinsui made sure to teach her well, for he wanted her to stay safe. Little did he know that she wanted to be just like him: a soldier whom fought the Grimms that plagued their world. She didn't mind if she died, if it was for a good cause.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ AquaStinger █ ▬ A large lance that is the same length as its wielder. The blade is comprised of normal metals, but is infused with mountain dust ( not the elemental dust ), which gives it its soft hue. █Melee Form ▬ Her Lance █Ranged Form ▬ Primary Form █Other Form(s) ▬ Sniper. The lance is comprised of blades of metal that can fold on itself due to its flexibility. The reason why it doesnt break during battle is due to its resistance to blunt force. The lance head is bulky, and houses the required chambers to make up a sniper rifle. The lance blade retracts! The sniper rifle only has its more important components, which include: the barrel (handle), the shoulder bar, scope, and air chamber. The lance has enough metal to construct these parts only, and as a result, the rifle itself is relatively lighter and may look like a skeleton. █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ If Hizami is attacked while having her sniper out, she must leave it and retrieve the weapon after a single post. This is because the sniper is implanted into the ground for optimal stability, so collapsing said weapon into its primary form takes time.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ None
█ITEMS █ ▬ 8 Dust Vials ( All Water ) █ ▬ Bullets █ ▬ Mochi Snacks
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Horudo (保つ, Cold Snap ) █*AURA COLOR ▬ Light Blue █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Hizami can freeze the moister in the air around her with a single snap of her fingers. The radius and severity of her frostbite increases as she grows stronger. If she fails to capture a target or land a hit with Cold Snap, the frozen particles resume their gaseous state, becoming readily available for usage again. Opponents who are hit will find that whatever part of their body was hit responds slower. This ability’s sole purpose is to weaken the state of opponents so allies have a better chance of defeating them. If someone defends against Cold Snap, the affliction does not occure. Instead, the blunt physical force goes through. So instead of being Frostbitten, the opponent will still the force of the kick or the slash ( depends on the level of severity ).
█*Level 0 ▬ Radius of 5 meters. Muscle fibers in the body become afflicted with frostbite, and movement is slowed. Reaction time is also delayed. For instance, a brisk walk slows to a normal one. Getting caught in a Cold Snap feels like a hard jab. Duration: 3 Posts Cooldown: 1 Post
█*Level 1 ▬ Radius of 10 meters. Frostbite afflicts the second layer of muscle. Running slows down to a normal walk. Getting caught in a Cold Snap feels like being kicked twice. Duration: 3 Posts Cooldown: 1 Post
█*Level 2 ▬ Radius of 15 meters. Frostbite afflicts third layer of muscle. Sprinting slows to a normal walk. Getting caught in a Cold Snap causes lacerations. Duration: 5 Posts Cooldown: 2 Posts
█*Level 3 ▬ Radius of 25 meters. Frostbite afflicts fourth layer of muscle ( i.e tendons ). Frostbite causes the same affliction as a Lvl 2, but getting caught in it causes gradual progression of frostbite. Over the course of 2 posts, an entire limb becomes immobile. It can be treated and healed, however. Duration: 7 Posts Cooldown: 3 Posts █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Elemental attacks such as fire or dust that can effect temperature will weaken Cold Snap. Places such as deserts or arid areas will limit the duration of Cold Snap ( -1 Post Duration, +1 Cooldown ). Using a water-based vial will return the conditions around her to normal for 1 post. In addition, places that promote moisture, such as tropical area or zones near water will allow for an increase in power ( +1 Post Duration, -1 Cooldown ).
❖❖❖Assessment❖❖❖ Hello, my name is Youroka Kage, and I'll be judging your profile today!
❖ Ok, my issue with the weapon is that you have featured an assault weapon, However the description still states that it's a sniper rifle. Everything about it makes me think that it's a sniper rifle with the ability to have a clip of 150. Which is a bit too much.
█*CURRENT TEAM ▬ █*PARTNER(S) ▬ █NICKNAME(S) ▬ Yuu █OCCUPATION ▬
█ █ ╫ A F F E C T A T I O N ╫
█HEIGHT ▬ 5'5 █WEIGHT ▬ 120
█HAIR ▬ White █CLOTHING ▬ White Kimono █ACCESSORIES ▬ None █EYES ▬ Blue █BUILD ▬ Toned █TATTOOS ▬ None █SCARS ▬ None █MARKINGS ▬ White Fluffy Fox Ears
█ █ ╫ A R C H E T Y P E ╫
█SKILLS & TALENTS █Primary Talent ▬ Speed, Accuracy █Other Talents ▬ Precision, Energy Binding █Faunus Skill ▬ Because Arctic Foxes are adapted to both high and low temperatures, Hizami isn't affect by extremities, but her senses of smell are heightened. █Strongest Skill ▬ Long and Close Range █Weakest Skill ▬ Physical Strength
█LIKES █ ▬ Cooking, Playing Video Games █ ▬ People Who Aren't Pessimistic █ ▬ All Sorts of Food █ ▬ Shiny Objects! █ ▬ Bunnies █DISLIKES █ ▬ She really likes all people... █ ▬ Bitter Foods! █ ▬ Grimy Objects █ ▬ Falling Off A Cliff
█ █ ╫ P E R S O N L I T Y ╫
█Nature ▬ Optimistic, Organized, Outgoing, Clueless █Vernacular ▬ English █Positive Traits ▬ Creative, Quick-Minded, Hard Working, Silly █Negative Traits ▬ Sometimes Slow to Understand
█ █ ╫ H I S T O R Y ╫
█BACKGROUND ▬ When she was born into the city of Vale, Hizami was born as the first daughter of Shinsui, and she was probably the most happiest person on the planet at the time. Although her father went to the outsides to fight Grimms for work half of the time as a protector, she stayed with her mother and help her around the house. She was often smiled, but retained her innocence as a child. She wandered around as a child, but this doesn't reflect the amount of intelligence she has. Her father would come home everyday to play with her, teaching her new things about the world and about their own race. Her name was Hizami Kyōraku, but her mother argued with her father change her last name to Yachiru, her mother's maiden name. It wasn't uncommon within their family tree, but Hizami loved both of them no matter what history they both represented. As she grew older, she began to learn the way of weapons, often practicing with her father when she came home. Shinsui made sure to teach her well, for he wanted her to stay safe. Little did he know that she wanted to be just like him: a soldier whom fought the Grimms that plagued their world. She didn't mind if she died, if it was for a good cause.
█ █ ╫ I N V E N T O R Y ╫
█PRIMARY WEAPON █ ▬ AquaStinger █ ▬ A large lance that is the same length as its wielder. The blade is comprised of normal metals, but is infused with mountain dust ( not the elemental dust ), which gives it its soft hue. The lance retracts and collapses into a pole half its size. The blade and tech seen in the provided picture is tucked away, making the ends of the pole look more like batons than anything. This is for roleplaying and logic purposes. Cant be carrying around a 5'5 long a** lance around. And she's clumsy? Heck no. █Melee Form ▬ Her Lance █Ranged Form ▬ Primary Form █Other Form(s) ▬ Scar. The lance is comprised of blades of metal that can fold on itself due to its flexibility. The reason why it doesnt break during battle is due to its resistance to blunt force. The lance head is bulky, and houses the required chambers to make up an assault rifle. The lance blade retracts! The Scar only has its more important components, which include: the barrel (handle), the shoulder bar, and air chamber. The lance has enough metal to construct these parts only, and as a result, the rifle itself is relatively lighter and may look like a skeleton, but still deals heavy damage as its intended to. █Ammo Type ▬ Physical █ ▬ The Gentleman: The Scar is integrated with pieces of modern technology. The only thing unique is its ability to let Hizami know how many bullets she has left in her cartridge, which appears as a projectile atop of the aim. █ ▬ Out of Ammo: Once the Scar has completely run out of ammo, it will retract and expand back into its lanced state. █ ▬ Patience: Turning the lance into the Scar takes One Post, and vice versa. █ ▬ The Strategist: Hizami has already filled three bullets with dust, all of which are stored in a small box compartment attached to her thigh. She gotta load them in.
█OTHER WEAPONS █ ▬ These hands.
█ITEMS █ ▬ 3 Dust Vials ( All Water ) █ ▬ 2 Cartridges of 150 Bullets Each. █ ▬ Mochi Snacks
█ █ ╫ S E M B L A N C E ╫
█*NAME ▬ Horudo (保つ, Cold Snap ) █*AURA COLOR ▬ Light Blue █*DESCRIPTION █ ▬ Hizami can freeze the moister in the air around her with a single snap of her fingers. The radius and severity of her frostbite increases as she grows stronger. If she fails to capture a target or land a hit with Cold Snap, the frozen particles resume their gaseous state, becoming readily available for usage again. Opponents who are hit will find that whatever part of their body was hit responds slower. This ability’s sole purpose is to weaken the state of opponents so allies have a better chance of defeating them. If someone defends against Cold Snap, the affliction does not occure. Instead, the blunt physical force goes through. So instead of being Frostbitten, the opponent will still the force of the kick or the slash ( depends on the level of severity ).
█*Level 0 ▬ Radius of 5 meters. Muscle fibers in the body become afflicted with frostbite, and movement is slowed. Reaction time is also delayed. For instance, a brisk walk slows to a normal one. Getting caught in a Cold Snap feels like a hard jab. Duration: 3 Posts Cooldown: 1 Post
█*Level 1 ▬ Radius of 10 meters. Frostbite afflicts the second layer of muscle. Running slows down to a normal walk. Getting caught in a Cold Snap feels like being kicked twice. Duration: 3 Posts Cooldown: 1 Post
█*Level 2 ▬ Radius of 15 meters. Frostbite afflicts third layer of muscle. Sprinting slows to a normal walk. Getting caught in a Cold Snap causes lacerations. Duration: 5 Posts Cooldown: 2 Posts
█*Level 3 ▬ Radius of 25 meters. Frostbite afflicts fourth layer of muscle ( i.e tendons ). Frostbite causes the same affliction as a Lvl 2, but getting caught in it causes gradual progression of frostbite. Over the course of 2 posts, an entire limb becomes immobile. It can be treated and healed, however. Duration: 7 Posts Cooldown: 3 Posts █*DRAWBACKS ▬ Elemental attacks such as fire or dust that can effect temperature will weaken Cold Snap. Places such as deserts or arid areas will limit the duration of Cold Snap ( -1 Post Duration, +1 Cooldown ). Using a water-based vial will return the conditions around her to normal for 1 post. In addition, places that promote moisture, such as tropical area or zones near water will allow for an increase in power ( +1 Post Duration, -1 Cooldown ).
