Ⅲ. ＰｅｒｓｏｎａｌｉｔｙXXXXX ╯Ｓexuality: Straight ╯Ａlignment ---Ａllegiance: Lawfully good --- Sabertooth ╯Ｏccupation: Mage ; Captain of the guards to Fiore ╯Ｓecrets: Horror theme is a big fat no for her, total nope fest. ╯Ｐersonality: Evie is a kind and helpful young girl who cannot abandon another in trouble. She is also somewhat proud and despite her kind personality, she will not hesitate to get physical with those that challenge her authority or make fun of her abilities, such as cooking. She is not afraid to act out on her own and will take matters in her own hands from time to time. She wishes to bring down every dark guild, baring her own sword into slaying them all one by one until no more guilds as such exist. Evie is extremely protective, she takes care of civilians and will jump in front of major attacks just to protect them, she would do anything for the people of the town of Fiore. Being a guard, she has a big duty to apprehend, that is always being on high alerts and keeping careful watch on surroundings, the people remaining in her own protection. Despite that all, she is a kind young lady who takes her job quite seriously. She speaks her mind when one must be said, be it to yell at another for being stupid, things along those lines. Evie takes her job extremely seriously, and is almost never seen taking breaks or taking it easy.
╯Ｓkills: » Blade smith » Dual Blade Wielding » Controlling her magic ╯Ｌikes: » Sparring » Weapons » Her friends » Her job » Sight seeing » The beach » Spring » Cooking ╯Ｄislikes: » Dark Guilds » Her father sometimes » People who hurt a hair on her sisters head; as well as her own dear friends. » Summer ╯Ｆears: » Losing her elder sister & father » Her friends dying - Not being able to save them » Her kingdom falling apart
Ⅳ. Ｂａｔｔｌｅ ＳｔａｔｉｓｔｉｃｓXXXXX ╯Ｓtrengths: » Expert swordsmanship » Professional hand to hand combat » Swift in speed and endurance ╯Ｗeaknesses: » Doesn't think; just reacts » Wreck-less as hell when a friend is in danger » Her weapons being destroyed
╯Ｍagic Ｔypes : Weapon Magic ╯Ｗeapon(s):Lambent Light [One-Handed Sword][When proven the feelings of protection towards her allies; her sword grows larger to take the appearance of a large fang of a monstrous Dragon. The sword becomes longer and easier to reach the enemies; and even deals far greater damage while being able to take a ton of damage on its own. The sword literally has a mind of its own, guiding Evie and shakes uncontrollably when it wishes to be drawn as well as giving advice in certain situations. It can steal away magical powers from those that Evie kills using the sword; allowing her to gain more power from the sword.] Tetsuya [One-Handed Sword][The Tetsuya could restore the life of the recently deceased by destroying the pall-bearers who took the souls of the dead. However, it required a relatively-intact body to work and only worked once as not to grant eternal life. If done to a dismembered body part, it will restore the body part to how it was when alive, but it will die again shortly afterwards. It also has the ability to erect a protective barrier around its master if his life was in danger and transported him across vast distances to safety.] ╯Ｆighting Ｓtyle: Evie uses her swords to fight mainly; relying on her side magic if all else appears to not be working.
Ⅴ. ＬｉｆｅｓｔｙｌｅXXXXX ╯Ｂio: Evie was born inside the walls of the Kingdom known as Fiore; however at the time she was due there was a large scaled battle happening. Her mother Kiana was being guarded by the strongest guards of the castle and was kept safe and hidden so it would allow her to buy some time to have her baby girl unharmed. One of the guards was a part time doctor as well; thankfully he was able to help and the baby was soon enough born. Though her crying would give away there position, as the rest of the guards would rush off to defend the queen and the kingdoms people. Kiana and the doctor would hurry outside the walls of the castle; crawling into a well hidden underground attic and would help take care of the baby. They would be forced to wait until the battle was decided; and for any news to come find them. After four hours had passed; eventually some royal guards would arrive down the stairs and allow them the okay to go back up the stairs and back into the castle. The battle was won in the end; however not without some casualties and losing much of there guards as well as a few innocent people. Raising there walls and hiring more guards, they took the defensive action and hoped to stop anymore attacks. Soon enough; everything had returned back to peace and safety among the Kingdom. They took great care of Evie, raising her to one years old. There was however a slight problem with her health, she was always falling unconscious and feeling far too weak to even crawl let alone walk. None of the doctors could figure out why; though they did do everything they possibly could to help out.
She would of liked to take proper care of Chloe more and give better attention; but Evie was always requiring immediate attention with her terrible sickness; she was left with no choice than to take care of her mainly. A doctor had come up with an idea to help with the little girl feeling better; handing Kiana two halves of a powerful invisible necklace. It was called the Necklace of Oahu; and was a very rare piece to come across. Rumors said it was believed to triple the power of anyone who held both pieces together and wore it around there neck at once. However, the power is immense inside when pieced side by side to make whole; that many have said it can put far too much stress on a human body and paralyze one from head to toe, even rare occurrences causes death. This is why it was said to never be worn together, not unless said person you handle the sudden build up in power of magical energy. Separately, each piece would double the magic power in a person. Not only that; but it held the power to heal sicknesses and allow the person wearing it a strong and healthy body; which is why the doctors had chosen to give it to Evie to wear. Hidden under her clothes as well as very invisible; as well as any magics would not pick it up; it'd remain safely over her neck. Just like the rumors were said to be true, Evie immediately felt much better wearing it and would turn into this much more joyful kid.
That didn't last very long; as soon tragedy had struck in the gardens, an army of dark mages killing Kiana who was only attempting in protecting her daughter and disagreeing to hand them the girl as well as all of there wealth. She was stabbed through her heart, moments later revealed as dead. Evie was only twelve at the time; as news had come that Kiana had passed away while Chloe fell into a state of shock and her body had passed out, not awaking for days. The girl was so torn what had happened to her sister and mother; she had shut out everyone from her and spent much of the days falling into a depression state and crying in her room; wondering why she couldn't have been there to rescue them. Kiana was laid to rest outside the Kingdom's graveyard, while Chloe was left sleeping in the bed field of flowers she was born near and was surrounded with many beautiful flowers that the people of the Kingdom had sent to her. A few days after; Kibou started acting much more different than his usual sweet and helpful ways. He lost his loyal attitude, turned into someone he never was. He began dating many different girls, never going out with the same one. The king had become a player, and couldn't bare his responsibilities to the castle much more; yet he was the only one left so he tried whatever he could.
Evie decided to leave her family behind; once she properly gave a mournful goodbye to her passed away mother and told her father to not let the Kingdom down now that he was moving on to find some happiness somewhere. She had not felt at peace within the castle's walls; only felt like it was ever her fault for the death of his family and not being there when they would need her most. Evie set out to find herself; training in every peaceful part of the woods; and eventually starting a business to wield swords. She became such a professional at it; that many were buying from her. She now carried around her own well earned money; and would not accept even a dime from her father. While selling blades; she began to practice in the art of Weapon Magic; learning a great deal all on her own; and continued her training days even to twelve. Eventually, once she turned thirteen and became an A-Rank; she would set off to join a guild. Evie had come across a member of Sabertooth; agreeing to join there guild and would set out on missions every now and than. News started spreading about Chloe being awoken within those sixteen years, and Evie had hoped she would be able to see her again. They really hadn't a chance to see each other much; wanting to forever be there for her after what happened to her in the gardens. She vowed to never let that happen again; and would search through the deepest oceans and cross the highest mountain tops to find her again. ╯Ｇoals --- Ｍotives: Evie's goal is to find Chloe and keep her protected. She also wishes to become as strong as possible so she is able to protect those she cares about from serious harm. ╯Ｇuild Ｍark: Blue on top of left hand
╯Ｔheme:Every Heart & Fukai Mori {Main Theme}; My Immortal {Emotional Theme} Still Alive ╯Ｅxtra: Necklace would make her S rank. If the necklace were complete, that's 2 whole ranks up. Just a side note. Current jewel: Fifty million
Ⅱ. Ｍａｇｉｃ ＳｐｅｌｌｓXXXXX ╯Main Magic Type » Wave of Destruction:Pulling forth one or two swords into the air; the user can cut the wind behind them before sending the sword(s) thrusting forward and creating a barrage of wind energy at there target in the form of a large tornado swirling sideways; it's not an actual tornado but a mini one.[A rank]
» Reflection Wave:Using this spell, any attacks sent will be able to reflect the spell back. For example; if fire is shot towards the user, they sword will shield and reflect, sending it right back at the target.[A rank]
» Crystal Barrage:When swung, the sword fires a barrage of diamond shrapnel that could servery harm the targets body or even any items they carried such as chipping even other swords. [A rank]
» Flaming Blade:After absorbing fire from the heat of battle and own magical power; the user is capable of controlling flames of fire however they see fit.[B rank]
» Lightning Fall:A heavy ranged attack that involves kicking off the ground with full force and then stabbing the sword into the ground, shooting out blue sparks in all directions. [C rank]
» Flashing Explosion:A high powered charge skill that produces a sonic boom and looks like a comet as it bursts into the opponents.[C rank]
» Windmill Shield:A defensive skill that involves spinning one's sword like a windmill, forming a half-transparent shield with the sword.[A rank]
» Prison Dragon Twister:The sword unleashes a large, violent, and powerful purple/black tornado that annihilates everything caught in its path. It is rumored as being the attack of a dragon from Hell. It has great strength and power, like that of a real tornado but instead a black one, leaving a path of destruction in its wake.[S rank]
» Art of a hundred swords:Depending on how much magic the user places forth; they can produce up to 10 swords to surround an enemy, before sending it to pierce through there body with tremendous speed and accuracy.[A rank]
» One Thousand Blades Fallen Cut:A powerful close range Sword Magic spell that requires fast hands, deadly sword skills and impressive Eternano manipulation. It's a spell that easily clear a small room of enemies or shatter defenses through sheer persistence and deals a number of impacts. [A rank]
╯Requip » Magical ReserveA sword which is green and has images of a plus usually on first aid kits, it's very slender looking in appearance. It's purpose is meant for healing properties, it can heal a fully wounded person, mostly sevier. It also heals magical ailments, like poison or parylization.[C rank]
» Steel King:A sword made of highly designed defense that looks like a thick silver sword resembling that of a large monstrous tooth, it's defense is so high that any high power spells lack the effort to break it. So far, it is known that it is not currently possible to break, or even so far as chip. However, this only is appropriate for an A rank and under. Any above ranks can very well destroy it.[A rank]
» Power of Flame:Creating a flame like sword orange sword, the sword becomes ablaze, which than causes the magic used with the weapon all to engulf in fire and burning heat waves, making all magic fire based, even the sword itself.[A rank]
» Power of Ice:Forming a solid frozen blue sword with ice prickling out, it freezes the sword into a frozen popsicle, any spell used will become very bitterly cold and change the air around to freezing temperatures. [A rank]
» Winged Blades:Releasing a sword with red colors on the edges and with wings on the edges, The sword hovers around the user, following at command where they place there magic to have it go. It can float and attack multiple foes simultaneously, capable of landing hits without making direct contact which allows it to bypass defense quite easily. [B rank]
» Stone sword:Releasing a steel stoned sword, it has the ability to transform into a very powerful sword, it grants capability to cut steel swords, brick walls, anything super strong that normally wouldn't break from a sword.[A rank]
» Windsore:Summoning some wind, a sword with a tornado forming around it appears, a blue outerface appearence. It creates high winds capable of pushing objects or foes backwards, even sending magic right back at the target. These winds can get as powerful as hurricane winds, when enough magic power is put to use.[A rank]
» Bunnied:Appearing into one's hands, a blade releases resembling the image of a rabbit on the point, the tail being on the bottom. A blade to look similar to a rabbit, grants the user speed to move around any field in a quick way, running super fast but only as quick as a rabbit. [C rank]
╯Sub Magic Type » Advanced Transformation:The user is able to change appearance and voice to that of another person, while they can also acquire all additional physical features such as wings or gills, and can even change size.[A rank] » Spell Name:Description » Spell Name:Description » Spell Name:Description » Spell Name:Description » Spell Name:Description » Spell Name:Description » Spell Name:Description
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◢A P P R O V A LXXP R O C E S S WANNA CAUSE SOME HELL?!
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Hello!
There are few issues I came across while looking at your profile; generally, for an A Rank, Evie has some of powerful spells that need some work. I will go though the spells that need to be fixed.
» Wave of Destruction: This spell is more of an ultimate spell than anything else. Make the spell cause a wave of air/fire/whatever element you want that causes destruction. It creating a barrier and a tornado is to much for one spell and actually could be broken down into two other spells.
» Reflection Wave: Having this spell be able to copy the same spell and send it at the target it to much. Either have her sword be able to reflect the spell or have it copy the spell but don't do both.
» Crystal Barrage: This spell does a LOT. Either have the sword create hard crystals that bombard the target, or have it so that the crystals created by the sword nutralize barriers.
» Flaming Blade: For a C Rank spell cut the ability down to just absorbing fire. All the other abilities can be broken down into other spells.
» Art of a hundred swords: For the number of swords made this is not an A rank Spell. It is an ultimate. For it to be an A rank, you would have to cut down the number of blades for her rank to 10 swords.
» Steel King: For a C rank spell that can stop A rank spells, it's way over powered. Either change it to an A rank spell or make it so it can stop only C rank spells.
» Winged Blades: This more of a B Rank than a C Rank. There are to mnay things the spell is doing for a C rank.
» Bunnied: For a C rank spell she should not be able to move so fast that it looks liek she disapears. Increased speed is fine but for movement that fast would be S rank.
So sorry about all that! I wasn't sure what to edit for the Wave, I probably understanding wrong, but I couldn't find a barrier anywhere in there. xD I see barrage though. Sorry, I'm so confused. xd It's really just an attack that creates a tornado out from the sides to send out, I tried to describe it as that. For the flaming, I just had it absorb, not to sure if I did it correctly. I made those changes though, so hope all is good now. ^-^ Sorry for my messy spells. xd
Posted: Mon Mar 26, 2018 4:35 pm
◢A P P R O V A LXXP R O C E S S WANNA CAUSE SOME HELL?!
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Hello!
Apologies about Wave of Destruction I must have read barrage as barrier. There is still one spell you have yet to fix.
» Flaming Blade: For a C Rank spell cut the ability down to just absorbing fire. It's over powered for her to be able to absorb and control flames with it just being a C Rank. If you want to keep it to control and absorb then it must be a B rank.
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