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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 3:52 pm


I think it's pegasi

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 3:54 pm


Civilian portion was already approved for another quest, as found here. I just changed my mind on the powered side. However, instead she'll be wearing a uniform (Sovereign Heights I believe), so the only thing to take from her clothing section would be her accessories pls. Also, possibly, a change to her eye color to be gold?

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 3:55 pm


Senshi: Sailor Enif (Ee-nif), Senshi of Pegasi

Challenge: "Oh horse feathers."

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: White
Secondary Color: Rainbow? Nothing as pastel as Cosmos knights but.
Accent color is gold? Maybe?

I'm sorry pegasi usually make me think white and rainbows. *sobs*

Fuku:

Collar -- No collar
Bow -- Big back bow, rainbowy?
Bodice -- See inspiration image basically? I would like to keep the two colored aspect as well.
Sleeves -- Instead of sleeves she has thin metal arm cuffs that match her tiara and choker.
Brooch -- Round in design, positioned where the two colors of her fuku meet.
Bottoms -- None
Tiara -- A simple gold band, a gem hanging from the middle of it. And Pegasus wings coming off of them, towards the back of her head? With actual feathers. (Gem can be put on in a later stage if need be)
Choker -- Gold metal band, like her tiara. Maybe one gem hanging from the middle?
Shoes -- Something like these? Maybe gold?
Gloves -- Bracelets. Nice and bangle-y bracelets. Amount is artist discretion.
Accessories -- A thin gold band on her left leg in later stages. Would like her hoops to remain as a senshi.

Inspiration is basically Greek and Feathers/wings. If you can mix that I pretty much love you.

Also the mentioned aspects are only an idea? Idk. Like I said, Greek and feathers somehow. *sobs*

Attacks: These are your senshi's abilities, which will be used in battle. These abilities correspond to your senshi's element. Think of it as a "summary" of what your senshi can do in one word.

Sailor Scout Attack: Horse Feathers
Reaching as if to pluck a feather from the wings on her tiara, Enif pulls an ethereal feather and places it in the hair of her target. A boost to their agility in the form of very see-through wings at their shoulder blades is given once attached, thus making it easier to dodge attacks. After twenty-five seconds the feather will disappear.

Usable three times per battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Wings of White
Like the first attack, Enif moves as if to pluck two feathers from her tiara and places them in the hair of her targets. As long as this feather remains in the hair of her targets, said target gets a boost to their agility in the form of very see-through wings at their shoulder blades, thus making it easier to dodge attacks. After thirty-five seconds the feather will disappear.

Usable twice per battle.

Eternal Sailor Attack: Spring of Wisdom
In mythology, it's said that wherever Pegasus struck his foot to the Earth, an inspiring spring would burst forth. In something of the same vein, though perhaps less inspiring, this attack works in a similar manner.
Striking her foot to the ground, what appears to be a watery Pegasus flies forward and knocks back the enemy. Once it makes contact it vanishes, leaving the enemy feeling like they've been drenched in ice cold water.

Range is fifteen feet in front of her. If there is no target, the attack lasts for about twenty-five seconds and until it hits the end of it's range, or it manages to hit something. Can be used only once.
PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 6:28 pm


Hi Rabbit!

Her powered form is amazing, hello pretty senshi.

Her first two attacks are solid, and I think are neat and clever idea!

Her eternal attack though has a bit too much going on. She's summoning too many apparitions I think, to allow for a solid attack. If you were wanting to go for a straight head on attack, my suggestion is that she stomps her ground and from it comes a Watery appration of a pegasus, which then flies forward and knocks an enemy back. For added effect, the enemy feels that they have now drenched themselves in ice cold water.

You could still that her range is 15 feet in front of her, and once it makes contact, disappears. If there is no target, the attack last 25 seconds and runs until it meets the end of its range OR it hits something.

I think allowing her to summon a spring AND a pegasus kind of conflicts with her attack AND delves into the Senshi of Springs power? So with that, let me know if you make any edits or have any questions.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 6:36 pm


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Thank you so much for the crit, Pixie! I'll admit I struggled a bit with the eternal attack and how to word it. I went ahead and made the changes you suggest (which I liked a ton more then I had, for the record lol). Should I keep the reference to the Pegasus mythology about the spring creation, do you think?
PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 6:48 pm


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you had the right idea! And I'm glad I could give you an option that really melds the two together! I think adding in the description helps to understand, but its not really nesscary. Thats up to you though :'D

Here's a stamp for you, A Gm will be around to finish up! congrats on getting her and I look forward to seeing her in action <333


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PostPosted: Mon Jan 11, 2016 6:49 pm


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Thank you so much again! heart
PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2016 2:59 pm


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Hey, Trickster!

I love this concept! I have a few comments to make, but she's super close to a stamp!

The first thing is, Senshi magic is usually magically channeled and doesn’t rely on an item (like Knight magic does), so it might be more in line with senshi magic to say she reaches to pluck a feather from her tiara but instead pulls an ethereal feather which she can magically attach to her opponents. Because it is magic, there isn't a risk of it falling off or blowing away (unless you want there to be, but it isn't necessary!). At this stage, you could boost the magic to last for 25 seconds! I would like to ask how many uses it gets per battle, too (three should be fine if you are comfortable with that!)

For her Super magic, you could have this magic last for 35 seconds and have up to two durations, too!

The Eternal attack looks great!

Please quote me if you have any questions, comments or make any changes and I'll be back as soon as possible!


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PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2016 5:30 pm


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I changed everything, per your suggestions! I wasn't too sure on uses, tbh so as long as gms say it's fine I'm kosher~ Thank you so much for the help!
PostPosted: Tue Jan 12, 2016 7:11 pm


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It was my pleasure! Have fun playing!

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