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PostPosted: Mon May 04, 2015 5:35 pm


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PostPosted: Mon May 04, 2015 6:45 pm


Name: Amarantha Marie Canicus

Nickname: Amara, 'Rantha

Age: 19

Birthday: November 13th

Sign: Libra

Gemstone: Topaz

Blood Type: AB+

Fav. Food: Strawberries, most fruits, baked sweets.

Hated Food: Anything overly spicy, most veggies, most meats.

School: Destiny City University

Hobbies:
Singing: Amarantha loves to sing and has done so pretty much since she could talk. Be it a song she loves or one she just happens to know the words to, there is very little that will stop her from singing. She's been in chorus classes most of her life and would have it no other way. It is, perhaps, the one thing she prides herself in above all else.

Studying languages/ancient languages/cultures: Amarantha has a love of languages, probably stemming from her love of singing, and that extends to all languages. Especially if it's a dead language that might just help her learn more about ancient cultures. When it comes right down to it, her second passion is the study of ancient cultures and their languages. There's so much one could learn about the past and it's culture just by learning the language.
Dead and ancient languages aren't the only ones Amarantha loves to study. Any and all languages at her disposal are good enough for her and she's all ready on her way to becoming trilingual. As her mother spoke Venezuelan Spanish, so does Amarantha (though she has been learning other forms of Spanish as well). She's currently decent in the speaking of Cantonese Chinese, as it's the language of the other half of her genetics. One day she hopes to be able to speak most, if not all, the languages out there.

Reading Romance Novels: Not really good in the romance department, not that she's tried too hard, Amarantha spends a lot of time with her nose in a book. And more often then not it's a romance book. There's just something about the genre that appeals to the romantic in her and she can never seem to put them down. Her guilty pleasure is what she often calls them.
She has several series, many of them unfinished as she keeps picking up new ones, but her favourite is a paranormal-romance dealing with humans, changelings and a race called the Psy. When no other books catch her attention she always returns back to that series.

Virtues:
Forgiveness: Amarantha is a very forgiving soul and tends to not think twice about forgiving some one for any number of reasons. Have they hurt her in anyway? Managed to piss her off to no end in some way? Really, please don't worry about it. She's all ready forgiven you and would like it if you left her well enough alone now. She hates holding grudges or ill feelings towards others, it never sits well with her and she'd rather just forgive them then continue to dwell on the matter.

Self Relient: While her mother had done her best to raise Amarantha despite her busy job, during big projects and busy ordering months (usually about the time plays are starting to be put together) she didn't always manage. And having been a single mother meant that Amarantha had to learn to take care of herself. From making her own food, to packing her own lunches for school, she simply got used to having to do things for herself.
Even now she keeps that same mentality, of relying on herself to get things done, and doesn't often ask for help if she can help it. Bills are paid on time, home work is done and never slacked on, and chorus classes and concerts are always well prepared for. She doesn't need help, she can get this. That doesn't mean she won't accept help if given to her, but she doesn't really go and do the asking.

Curious: Curiosity killed the cat, but that hasn't stopped Amarantha from finding out the answers. If it sparks her interest she's all ready making plans to get to the library or search the web for all the information she can find about it. In her favourite classes at school she's chapters ahead, reading ahead at home when she finds the time. Or she's got her nose in the latest book of a series she's reading and she just can't seem to put it down.
This doesn't just relate to school work, or even the latest book in a series she's picked up, but also the world around her. Because she's quiet and tends to keep more to herself, she has a tendency to observe what goes on around her exactly and it's quite useful for gathering information. In fact, she's quite the resevour of information, if you can get her to open up to you.

Flaws:
Others First: Amarantha tends puts all others before herself, be it their health or happiness. All of her problems, her sadness or her health pale in comparison to when others need her. Why worry about her own problems when others need her more? She'd been known to make her own self sick trying to help out around the house/shop whenever Lan g0ts sick and still keep up with her homework.
All negative emotions are hidden deep inside and she's constantly checking (in private of course) for cracks in her flawless mask. And if some one should ask? Yea, she's totally fine. You didn't see a thing.

Closed Off: Never really a people person to begin with, she became less of one with her mother's death. She's closed herself off and refuses to open back up for most people. She doesn't talk about herself or her life, and she's happy to spend her time silent and away from others. If she doesn't have to deal with others she'd prefer not to and it's difficult to get her to answer if she doesn't know or like you. Over all she can be a rather difficult person to deal with if you don't know how to get her to open up.
How to get her to open up is different for each person, as in there's no real way to get her to do so you just have to keep at it, but once she's no longer closed off to a person it's almost like she's a different person. Almost. Really she's just showing you the person she truly is.

Inferiority Complex: To put it simply Amarantha has none of her mother's ego. Or her good looks... brains... talent... sparkling personality... Okay, so the younger Canicus held a high flame to her mother. So high a flame that she finds herself in her mother's shadow though she doesn't quite realize she's put herself there.
Amarantha doesn't think much of herself and can constantly be seen berating herself over the littlest thing. From lower test scores then she had hoped for, to even her failed attempts at romance, she is constantly degrading herself. And while this did spawn from the love and adoration she holds for her mother, it hasn't stopped at the image she has of her mom from when she was alive.
In fact Amarantha can often be found comparing herself to just about any one on the street. From the beauty of women to the confidence of men, the good will of those around her and the callousness of even the cold hearted person... If she can compare what she lacks she's never good enough.

PHYSICAL DESCRIPTION

Eyes: Ice blue in color, slightly narrowed and almond shaped. Tilted sligthly to show her Asian heritage.

Hair: Pale pink fading to an almost sunset color of orange, cut short and layered nicely.

Face: Heart shaped face, very baby faced. Skin color is a creamed coffee sort of tan. She shows more of her Chinese heritage then her Venezuelan heritage as her father is full Chinese and her mother is half Chinese and half Venezuelan.

Clothes: Short shorts, khaki, with black ankle length hiking boots and a black tank top. Over the tank top is a sleeveless hoodie always kept unzipped colored a soft neon blue. Several hoop piercings, all gold, in each ear (number is up to artist) and a thin chain with a phoenix curled around a dragon's breath opal.

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PostPosted: Mon May 04, 2015 7:23 pm


Senshi: Corrupted Senshi Sailor Baten Kaitos, Senshi of Thermal Vents

Challenge: Allow me to vent my frustrations~

Fuku Colour:
Main Color: Black
Secondary Color: Bright Blue

Fuku: ELEMENTS TO THINK ABOUT FOR SENSHI, FEMALE AND MALE -- YOU DON'T HAVE TO HAVE THESE, JUST THINK ABOUT THEM

Also colorist choice if they wish, I'm not picky. This is just what I had in mind originally.
Collar -- Plain color, no stripe. The back ends just below her shoulder blades, colored bright blue from the back that fades into the black towards the front.
Bow -- Big butt bow. Bright blue.
Bodice -- Dress like bodice, incorporating the skirt in it's design. The bottom of the dress is a bright blue color that slowly fades to the black bodice.
Sleeves -- Instead of sleeves she has thin metal arm cuffs that match her tiara and choker. These cuffs have a blue stone in the middle holding the two ends of the cuffs together.
Brooch -- Oval in design, inlaid with a blue gem in it's center.
Bottoms -- None.
Tiara -- Black metal band simple and clean design, with three blue gems hanging down from the center. The first is the biggest, followed by a medium and then smaller gem at the end. (don't know if this is really needed for corrupted senshi)
Choker -- Black metal band much like her tiara.
Shoes -- Something like these, but colored black.
Gloves -- Instead of gloves she has thick bracers, black metal as well, around her wrists.
Accessories -- On her left leg is a thin band of black metal with a blue gem in the center, much like the cuffs on her arms.

Your MAIN COLOUR should dominate. Your SECOND COLOUR should be used for trimming.

Attacks: These are your senshi's abilities, which will be used in battle. These abilities correspond to your senshi's element. Think of it as a "summary" of what your senshi can do in one word.

Sailor Scout Attack: White Smoker - Clapping her hands, Baten Kaitos immediately touches them to the ground and a thin line forms in the ground much like a crack. Up from the crack comes a wall of water, five feet in width, that separates Baten Kaitos and the target. From the middle of the wall comes a white cloud of liquid carbon dioxide, obscuring the vision of both Baten Kaitos and the target. If the target tries to make their way through they are met with super cold water.
Lasts for 15 seconds and can be used three times in battle.

Super Sailor Scout Attack: Black Smokers - Clapping her hands, Baten Kaitos immediately touches them to the ground and a thin line forms in the ground much like a crack. From the crack three chimney-like structures of super-heated black smokey water in a line seperating Baten Kaitos and the target and obscuring their vision. If the target, or another senshi, tries to go through the water they run the risk of being burned.
Lasts for 30 seconds, can be used three times in battle.


Eternal Sailor Attack: Loki's Castle - Clapping her hands, Baten Kaitos immediately touches them to the ground and a thin line forms in the ground much like a crack. The line moves and encircles any target in an area no bigger then 15 ft. From the line five chimney-like structures of super-heated black smokey water surround the target obscuring their vision of what's going on around them. The targe is effectively trapped until the attack ends, as the water is well over boiling point and trying to flee through it could result in burns.
Lasts for 45 seconds total, can be used a max of two turns in battle.
PostPosted: Mon May 04, 2015 7:30 pm


I'm not sure if I should come up with a reason for her to be corrupted or not? though i'll admit i just love the idea of my baby being corrupted.

in any case, open for looking over.

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PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2015 3:52 pm


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Hi, Bunni! Resident mod here to offer a little bit a crit! It's good to see you back in the shop! <3

There's really not much for me to comment on here! Amarantha's civilian profile is pretty solid and her basic and super attacks look great!

My only concern is her Eternal attack.

First of all, is this attack meant to surround a single target or any enemy who might be in the area of effect? Regardless, the range is just a little too large. I'd bump it down to 15 feet and that should be okay!

Second, is Baten Kaitos about to make her way through the super heated water, or would it result in burns for her as well?

And finally, a minute is an awfully long time for a single attack to last, especially since her Eternal attack essentially traps an opponent and interferes with their ability to escape. With attacks like that, we don't generally like to see them lasting quite that long, since it allows for a bit of an unfair advantage! I'd bump it down to 45 seconds max, which may still be a little generous, but as they're not entirely restrained and can escape at risk of being burned, it should be fine!
PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2015 5:49 pm


Thank you so much for looking her over, Sunny~ I'm glad to be back as well.

I believe I had in mind that her Eternal attack be an AoE attack? also i would imagine she runs the risk of being burned too, seems fairer this way.

Should I find a way to mention it's an AoE? I changed the range thou!

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PostPosted: Tue May 05, 2015 8:21 pm


Also added a challenge in = w = Quite pleased with myself for it.
PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2015 6:51 am


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Just to make it clear it's an AOE "The line moves and encircles any target" instead of "a target'!

Also, I loled at the challenge! Far more clever than I could ever be! XD

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PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2015 7:09 am


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Fixed!

I'm glad you liked it, I just about died of laughter when I thought it up.
PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2015 7:17 am


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Alright, everything looks great now! I'll be dropping a trial stamp and a GM should be around soon to give this a second look!

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PostPosted: Wed May 06, 2015 7:26 am


Thank you so much! heart
PostPosted: Sat May 23, 2015 6:08 pm


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Hey, White Trickster Rabbit!

This profile looks good to me, so have a stamp!

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